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Basic Character Information
Name: Frankfurt J. Bartholomew II
Nickname: Wild Ape Bart
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Marines
Rank (Commendations): Master Chief Petty Officer (0)
Achievements: Nothing special yet.
Profession:
Smith: Primary
A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy which allows them to make custom materials or mix new ones together. A smith is proficient in any melee weapon they make, and have no maximum rank limit for martial techniques involving these weapons. They have access to certain additional traits as well.
Carpenter: Secondary
A Carpenter is someone who makes a living crafting things such as ships, submarines, buildings and other physical structures with expertise and materials not privy to non-carpenters. Carpenters are the only ones capable of creating ships with techniques.

Goals:
[*] Attain the rank of at least Rear Admiral
[*] Capture a 50,000,000 Beli Bounty
[*] Capture a 100,000,000 Beli bounty
[*] Capture a 250,000,000 Beli bounty
[*] Get assign to a ship to travel the blues
[*] Get assigned to the Grand Line
[*] Get an assignment in Paradise
[*] Send 10 prisoners to Impel Down
[*] Send 25 prisoners to Impel Down
[*] Send 50 Prisoners to Impel Down

Physical Appearance
Height: 8’8”
Weight: 445 lbs.
Hair: When in human form his hair is roughly shoulder length and black in color, when he is in his hybrid and full gorilla forms his whole body is covered in in thick black fur.
Eyes: Crimson
Clothing/Accessories: Bart’s normal attire consists of his standard marines uniform when he is on duty, under his marines hat he sometimes wears a headband to hold his hair back. When he is smithing he wears a brown leather blacksmith's apron over a plain shirt and pair of pants, hanging from the apron is some of his normal smithing tools. When he is doing carpentry work he wears a similar outfit as when he is smithing, the man difference is he wears a tool belt holding his carpentry tools and no apron as well as a pair of leather gloves. When he is not working he likes to wear loose fitting pants to allow for freedom of movement, he also wears long sleeve silk shirts as they are quite comfortable he covers his feet with plain black boots. He wears a couple pieces of jewelry as well, one is a silver necklace with a pendant in the shape of a pair of plain looking Smith hammers crossing each, the other is a plain gold ring with justice engraved on the inside of the band.

General Appearance: Bartholomew is a large well built man standing just under nine feet tall and weighing a brisk 445 pounds, his body is quite muscular due largely to his work as a blacksmith and the physical requirements of his job as a marine. When he changes to his hybrid form he grows to ten feet tall and gains an additional hundred and fifty pounds of mass. His body is covered with many small scars most of which are from being nicked or burned while forging weapons and armor, aside from the small scars he doesn’t have any large identifiable marks on his body. Most of the time he wears his hair in a single braid. When transformed into full gorilla his clothes disappear, when in hybrid form the cloths in his lower body remain but the rest disappear. He can most always been seen with a cigar in his mouth even when in gorilla form.

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The Character
Personality:
Bartholomew enjoys smithing and doing carpentry work as a way of relaxing, he often will spend his free time making a new weapon or carving a wooden sculpture. He enjoys smoking his cigars so he almost always can be found with one in his mouth, he doesn’t like places that tell him he can’t smoke and will often try to get away with doing it anyway. Though he doesn’t always agree with the world government or the celestial dragons orders he will follow them, though he doesn’t blindly do so and he has his limits that he will not cross even if he will get in trouble. He believes in his own form of justice and will try his best to uphold it and enforce the law across the lawless seas, his brand of justice include things like defense of innocents and their belongings, fair punishment for the crime. He believes that if he takes care of thirds under him they will take care of him, he believes that without them doing there part he wouldn’t be able to do his part. Unlike a lot of high ranking marines he doesn’t think of Los ranking members as expendable pieces of a board game. He works each day to try and advance himself through the ranks so that he can make it better for those under him while weeding out those more shady people in the ranks. As a rule of thumb Bart tries to get along with most everyone he crosses paths with, he tries to be easy going whenever possible and time permits it. He enjoys eating barbecue and drinking beer in his off time, in fact when he is not smoking his cigar he probably is chewing in a hunk of jerky.
Hometown: Shell Town, East Blue
History:
Bart was born on Shell Town Island as the second child or parents, Bartholomew J. Frankfurt Sr. and Iris Rose. Bart’s father and grandfather were both marines working for the world government, this gave him an idea of what military life was like early on. Bart spent most of his childhood hanging around Shell Town with his father at the base when he was aloud, when he was not aloud to be at the base with his father he would often build things using carpentry. As he got older he would go spend short amounts of time with his grandparents on Karate Island in South Blue, while there he picked up another hobby beside wood working, he started learning to be a blacksmith. As time went on he found he like being a blacksmith quite a bit So he decided to focus primarily on blacksmithing, while he still did woodwork it so and as more of a hobby that he did at home to make things to sell in his spare time. During his trips to visit his grandparents while not practicing his smithing he would train at the dojos around the island learning to fight. Bart was still pretty young when he decided that he would follow in his father's footsteps when he came of age.

By the time Bart was 16 years old he was pretty proficient at being a blacksmith, and was able to use most any weapon he crafted to fight to some degree. He was just starting up with the marines as a chore boy at the base in Shell Town, though by the time he started there his father was on another duty assignment on a ship traveling the Blues. Bart lived at home with his mother and worked at the base doing the chores, he was also assigned to help out at the bases forge working under the blacksmith there. His time was mostly spent cleaning the firearms and sharpening the bladed weapons, he was also the handyman for the base since he was also skilled at woodworking. This helped Bart get out of the more tedious chores such as cleaning the heads and things like that. When he had some free time he would practice his martial skills, his focus was on melee weapons such as swords and spears of different types and sizes. During his time working there as a chore boy he meet several young people who like him were trying to get there foot in the door, most of these people didn’t stick around long though for one reason or another.

After just one short year Bart was welcomed into the ranks as an actual marine he was now responsible for taking his shift on the watch and thing like that. Not long after the base received word that a new commander was transferring into the unit to take charge, little did Bart know that he would have a meeting to change his life. As the base prepared to switch command Bart was in the forge working on crafting a few things, while he was working a young blond women walked into the shop and starts to look around. This caught Bart’s attention since the women was wearing plain cloths, “can I help you with something miss” he asked as he walked up the young lady. Bart couldn’t help but be drawn in by her beauty as she stood there looking back at him, “nope just looking around the new post” he was surprised by her word the young couldn’t be much older than he was and was already moving to a different post. “Your a marine” he inquired of the young lady who was turning to walk out of the room, “not yet” the girl replied with a smile as she left the room with the young marine going to the doorway behind her to catch a peek. As he poked his head out the door a voice came from behind him “like what you see” the voice asked, without turning to look Bart replied “yeah it’s not to bad” he turned after speaking to see a average size man standing there that he didn’t recognize. The man was wearing a marines uniform and had some rank obviously though Bart couldn’t know just who he was yet, “my apologies sir I didn’t” the young man was cut off before he could finish his sentence. “Yes you did” the man spoke with a stern tone, “if I were you I’d probably get changed” he gave the suggestion as he walked away.

Before Bart could return to the forge word had spread through the base that the new commander was there and the changeover ceremony would soon be underway, the ceremony would also double as a welcome for several new members just joining. As the ceremony got underway Bart quickly realized the new commander was the man he had talked to just outside the forge, once the new marines were introduced he found out that the woman from before not only was a new marine but also the new commanders daughter. “Well shit this ain’t going to go well for me” he grown as he walked away from the ceremony, over the next year Bart was given the shit end of the stick whenever possible. The only good thing to come out of it was that as time went on he somehow managed to grow closer to the commander's daughter, this didn’t sit well with the boss man as he didn’t like the young man based primarily off that first meeting outside the forge. So naturally he wanted to do whatever he could to keep Bart away from his daughter, having trouble keeping them apart and his daughter getting close to him as each day passes the commander had but one option left.

A few week after Bart turned eighteen he was informed that he would be assigned to a boat for the next two years to patrol the blues, while he was happy to be on a boat he was sad that he would be leaving behind some he had developed feelings for. There was nothing it he could do though as he had orders and so he packed his bags, he boarded the boat he would be on for the next two years and bid the island he called home for so long a farewell until his return. The commander's daughter was quite upset that he had gone this far just to get rid of Bart, though no amount or her being angry would change anything the orders had already come down so all she could do is bid him farewell as he sailed away. Bart was on the boat about half a year when he made a find that would change him for life, they landed on an island looking for some pirates and what Bart ended up finding was the pirates as well as a devil fruit. The devil fruit was mixed in the food store of the pirates den and ended up on the ship, as they were pulling out of the port Bart went to the gally to grab something to eat he figured he would have a piece of fruit. As he was picking through the fruit looking for one that looked good he happened upon the devil fruit, never having seen a devil fruit he didn’t know any better and so he took it. As he was walking out onto the deck of the ship he took a bite, the bite tasted awful but he took another and by the time he reached his room he had eaten half the fruit.

He wasn’t sure why but he felt tired so he hop in his rack and crashed for the night, when he woke up the next day he still didn’t feel right but it wasn’t till he passed by a mirror that he noticed his reflection was that of a large gorilla. In a panic be ran out onto the deck which caught everyone off guard, but one they realized who it was they asked if he had eaten any weird fruit to which he went and showed them the remains of the fruit. That is when the ship captain explained what happened and made arrangements to rendezvous with another ship, this other ship had a captain who had eaten a zoan devil fruit and would be able to help. And so he spent the remaining duty assignment on the ship training under the captain who was also a zoan fruit user, soon he was able to control his change and use it properly and effectively though this made the already large marine even bigger. The two years in a boat seemed to have flew by and before he knew it he was back at the port of Shell Town, when he disembarked he less than happy to find that the same commander who had sent him away was there when he returned. The commander didn’t seem upset to see the young marine however which Bart found kinda strange, it would be until a few weeks after he returned that he ran into the commander's daughter and who was with a man and seemed quite close. After talking to a few people he found out that she had married about a year after he left, with this information Bart decided he would focus on his training and so he once again took up his job in the forge working as the head blacksmith he also would help out with the carpentry crew when they were short handed, he now also had training in the use of his devil fruit to work into his schedule though he didn’t get as much time as it probably should have.

He didn’t really do much once back in the island just makennes weapons for the marines and maintained what they already had though he managed to get a few choice materials for himself to use in making himself a couple of personal weapons. By the time he was celebrating his twenty fifth birthday he had achieved the rank of Master Chief Petty Officer and was once again being considered to set out on a ship to patrol the blues.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Bart’s combat style focuses mostly on the use of the weapons he creates to combat others, he also uses the strength of his gorilla hybrid form to increase his attacking power. When in his gorilla hybrid form or his full gorilla form he will sometime use the added dexterity, as well as the extra hands to use more then one weapon to fight. He will when he feels the need try and surprise his opponents by using his feet which in gorilla and hybrid gorilla form are extra hands.
Weaponry:
Falcon Blade - T2 composite steel

Bīsutobēn - T2 Seaking Bone

Items:

  • Smiths tools set
  • Carpentry tools set
  • Cigar box and accessories
  • Extra marines uniforms

Anniversary Can

Beli: 4,350,000
SD Earned: 45/50
Stat Points: 77 (32+45)
Advancement Points: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stats: 77
  • Used for Stats: 77/77
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 25
    • Speed: 20
    • Stamina: 16
    • Accuracy: 16
    • Fortune:19
Traits:
Forging Master (1 Trait- Professional) – All the experience the character has gained in making weapons allows them to produce them more cheaply. These smiths get a 20% discount for any weapons and armor they make for their own personal use.

Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits- General) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Saru Saru no Mi: Model Gorilla
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: The eater of this devil fruit is granted the ability to turn into a gorilla as well as a gorilla hybrid.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 38
Used Regular Technique Points: 16/38
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Devil Fruit Transformation
Full Form (Rank 4)(free)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: +2 Strength, +2 Stamina
Description: Bart turns into a large muscular gorilla who can run around on knuckles and feet or upright. He also has feet that can be used as hand to help him climb and hang as well as use items with both his hands and feet.

Hybrid Form (Rank 9)(Signature Form)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: +4 Stamina, +5 Strength
Description: Bart’s turns into a hybrid version of his gorilla form and his human form, when in this form Bart grows to ten foot tall and his muscles become larger and more defined. His entire body becomes covered in hair and his feet turn into an extra set of hands, when in his hybrid form his shirt disappears but his pants remain. His face also takes a more gorilla like appearance though not completely like a gorilla.


Sword Techniques
Power Slash (Rank 8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 8
Description: Bart can use this technique when his sword is already drawn or while still in the sheath. If the sword is already drawn he swings the blade from any direction or angle as long as he has enough room, he rears the blade back before swinging the sword at its target with enough force to send them flying. When the sword is not drawn Bart will use the force and momentum of the draw to strike with more force sending the target flying (8 Displacement)



Spear Techniques
Rapid Thrust (Rank 8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 8
Description: Bart places one hand at the base of the spears shaft, with his other hand he places a loose grip on the shaft of the spear. He uses the hand on the base of the shaft as the driving force and the loose hand is used to control and guide the spear during the attack. Once both hands are in position Bart starts thrusting the spear over and over again in quick succession, with a brief pause this attack can change direction but only when the spear is not be thrusted. (8 Gatling)


Development History
Gains/Losses:

GAINS:
9th Anniversary- 45 SD, 11,500,000 Beli, Anniversary Can

LOSSES:
Falcon Blade- -1.8mil
Bīsutobēn- -5.6 mil
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Edited by BigBear, Jan 22 2018, 04:44 AM.
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Deduct for weapons

Falcon Blade - 2m
Bīsutobēn - 7m

2nd transformation needs a name. If you make it the Signature technique, those 9 ranks are free. Then your Full Form can be the technique that gets 4 free ranks.

That would save you 9 tp (bringing used down to 16).

Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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I made the deduction from funds as well as added to gains and losses for each weapon, just asking to make sure but is this the price including the 20% discount for forging master trait.

Fixed the missing name in techs as well as made hybrid form my signature form and adjusted the TP accordingly.

I believe everything should be in order now as long as nothing else is wrong.
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Can't see anything wrong with this tbh so...

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Zoan transformations are major buffs, meaning that no one stat can have more than 50% of the buff or just over. Since it's an uneven number for your hybrid form that's fine, but your full form will need to split the buff.

You can apply Forging Master to those two items you're starting with since you're essentially buying them on creation, meaning that the Falcon Blade will only cost you 1.8 million and the Bīsutobēn will cost you 5.6 million.
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Fixed the full form stat boost so that is split as well as adjusted the Beli to account for the discounted cost of the weapons. As long as nothing else is wrong should be good to go.
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I get the feeling he's very heavy. Also I don't feel Zen's edits broke your flag so...

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