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| KileyBarker | Sep 26 2017, 08:57 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||
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A True Hero
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: KileyBarker Basic Character Information Name: Jacoby Kreig Nickname: N/A Age: 16 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Marine Rank (Commendations): Seaman (0) Achievements:
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Position: N/A Physical Appearance Height: 5' 8'' Weight: 148 lbs Hair: Brown buzzcut Eyes: Blue Clothing/Accessories: When on duty, Jacoby wears his marine uniform. The marine uniform consists of dark-blue slacks that get tucked into long socks, black leather shoes shined well, a white collared short-sleeve button-down shirt with the buttons offset to the right side and the sleeves rolled up, a blue ascot, and the signature 'Marine' hat. When off duty, he prefers simple pants (beige or black) and blue t-shirts. He wears off-white sneakers and leather belts. General Appearance: Jacoby is a young lanky marine with a thin frame. He looks more like a flower stalk than a tree, and his skin is very pale. He wears his sheltered upbringing on his sleeve and is very expressionate around others, leaving little to hide in regards to his emotional state. He entered puberty late and has little-to-no body hair, and his muscles are just beginning to show through his skin despite his 10 years of training under his father. He stands straight, moves a bit robotically, and he usually looks stressed out. His 'relaxed' state is difficult to see ever in a public venue and he typically can only 'be himself' when he's around people he trusts explicitly. His nose is a bit crooked, but it fits his face well and he has a small scar going across his left eyebrow. He occasionally gets acne and has two moles (one on his left cheek and another below his right eye). Whenever he doesn't shave his facial hair comes in patchy and looks awful, like someone tried to make 5-o'clock shadow into a jigsaw puzzle and gave up putting it back together. Overall he exuberates the vibe of an 'awkward' youth. Picture The Character Personality: Jacoby is young and a bit naive. He tends to view the world with high expectations, thinking anything must be better than the endless training and physical abuse he faced at home. He tends to view experiences as more valuable than physical goods, and he has a general strong sense of morality. He understands right from wrong and wants to uphold true Justice in the world. Jacoby suffers from depression and anxiety. He often wonders about his worth in the world. Due to his sheltered upbringing, often his high expectations about the world at large end up getting dashed, leaving him to cope with the smouldering remains. He has a strong drive to compete. He views competitions as ways to prove his worth, and always tries to win. Perhaps Jacoby's one true love is cooking. One of his only memories of his mother is of her cooking, and so he holds on to that memory with both arms. It grounds him and lets him step back and get a bigger perspective at times. It shows him that the world isn't all about Justice, fighting, and marines. There are things that go beyond physical experiences, that can connect you to the past and lost loved ones. One of Jacoby's greatest regrets is never finding out the truth behind his mother's death. He often searches old marine records in hopes of finding the truth to no avail. Thus he is avowed to one day visit marine headquarters, the only place he is certain his father couldn't reach to alter the records. Hometown: Victoria, West Blue History: Jacoby's first memory is of his mother holding him beside a stove, stirring a small pot. He can't remember what the dish was, but he can remember his mother's smile. Even to this day he swears he can hear her soft humming. Eleanor Kreig died on her son's sixth birthday. While in the town market, she caught the eye of a fishman pirate, and was stolen away. When the marines finally caught said pirate, they found Eleanor in the brig; she had taken her own life. Her own husband was the one to find her. He retired from the marines that day. The truth was hidden away from young Jacoby. He was told his mother died from a heart attack, but children aren't stupid. They can see lies almost as well as adults. Jacoby's father was never the same. From that day forth, Jacoby was forced to live under harsh conditions. His father trained him, fearful that one day his son too would be taken away, unable to protect his life. Day in and day out Jacoby was mentored in the arts of the spear. He was taught stances, poses, thrusts, sweeps, etc... Every night Jacoby cried. A great sadness swelled inside him; a terrible loneliness filled his heart. Such harsh training combined with the grief from losing his mother damaged something intrinsic to the child. Snapping out of his own grief, Jacoby's father realized that what he was doing was akin to abuse. So he lowered the amount of training and hired personal tutors for his son to teach him reading, writing, mathematics, and cooking. The last one was more an homage to his deceased wife. She had always claimed she wanted to teach young Jacoby to cook when he got older... Time passed and Jacoby grew, the injury to his young heart healed over time, but scar tissue remained. In his most vulnerable moment, the person he trusted the most turned on him. Jacoby would never forget his father's viciousness. Perhaps one day he could forgive him, too. When he turned 16, ten years after his mother died, Jacoby left his home and enlisted in the marines. His father didn't stop him. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Jacoby fights with a spear. He stays nimble on his feet and tries to use his weapon to its best advantage, keeping his opponents at a distance. Weaponry: Nana Sen Kaminari: Iron spear, 7 feet long Items: Provisions, rope, flask, small butterfly knife (non combat use only) Ships: N/A Beli: 500,000 SD Earned: 0 SP: 32 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:
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Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 4 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
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| ♥ Bright | Sep 28 2017, 09:36 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||
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Wannabe Writer
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Yeah, looks fine far as I can tell. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| ♠ Shamma | Sep 29 2017, 01:54 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||
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no fun
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