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Regen Rain; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jun 10 2017, 04:06 PM (175 Views)
ShadowBlade
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Character: Rain plz see sig
Request: using 84 TP ty

Death Paradox Genesis

Genesis (28)
Type: First Aid
Range: Self
Power: 0
Stats: -
Description: Using their hair appendage the user will coat their hair in a pre prepared container. This salve (ointment) appears as blue tinted soap bubbles when applied. Upon application the salve will near instantly treat the most severe burns, deeply frostbite, and the likes of extremely high currents, etc. The salve is treated as a specific block for elemental damage applied retroactively. Additionally, the shampoo emits a vapor which dissipates the damage by turning it into a harmless gaseous form (flavor). This ointment can be applied to Rain or melee distance allies utilizing his hair strands instead of his hands. [:: Specific Block (Elemental) -28 ::] [::flavor -0::]


Rebirth (28)
Type: First Aid
Range: Melee
Power: 0
Stats: -
Description: After a penetrating or cutting injury, the user’s body will readily react with but a thought from the user. A multitude of red strands appear near the wound and readily suture the users cut appendages or organs. Wounds which are seemingly life threatening or un-sewable are able to be sutured - stopping the bleeding and allowing their continued function. This retroactive block will severely reduce the power of cutting attacks despite the power behind them and suture the users wounds. These stitches can be applied to Rain or melee distance allies utilizing his hair strands instead of his hands. [:: Specific Block (Cutting)- 28 ::]


Regeneration (28)
Type: First Aid
Range: Melee
Power: 0
Stats: -
Description: After a severe blunted injury, the users body will readily react with a thought. A multitude of red strands appear near the wound cleaning it and applying splints to the wound. Injuries which seem severely life threatening such as internal hemorrhage, multiple fractures, intense bruising, etc can be mended. This retroactive block severely reduce the damage inflicted by blunt damage. These splits can be applied to Rain or melee distance allies utilizing his hair strands instead of his hands. Additionally, the wraps have printed Rain “Chibi” pictures on them. [:: Specific Block (Blunt) - 28 ::] [Flavor -0]

Edited by ShadowBlade, Jun 12 2017, 01:51 PM.

Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! ::beli:: 310,000,000

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IZUMI - 泉


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If you mention flavor in a tech you should put it with the effects just for consistency (for example genesis has flavor in parenthesis in the description but not with specific block at the end)

Should also mention that bandages have "with excessive exertion running the risk of wounds reopening."

Just a few minor things I am nitpicking at and sorry for that.
Haru M. Glorious • Crew Position • Marksman/Martial Artist • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 18 • Beli: 5,000,000 • L: Pharsalus island, West Blue.

Camilla M. Cutherfield • Entertainer • Entertainer/Thief • Gold Shark PiratesBounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: East Blue

Jeremiah X Cornelius • Surgeon/Firstmate • Doctor/Martial Artist • Chain Breaker PiratesBounty: 2,500,000 • SD Earned: 31 • Beli: 8,250,000 • Location: East Blue
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Edited and removed bandaid tech

Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! ::beli:: 310,000,000

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only using 84 tp gonna go ahead and flag this

Topic is flagged for approval.
Haru M. Glorious • Crew Position • Marksman/Martial Artist • Crewless • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 18 • Beli: 5,000,000 • L: Pharsalus island, West Blue.

Camilla M. Cutherfield • Entertainer • Entertainer/Thief • Gold Shark PiratesBounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: East Blue

Jeremiah X Cornelius • Surgeon/Firstmate • Doctor/Martial Artist • Chain Breaker PiratesBounty: 2,500,000 • SD Earned: 31 • Beli: 8,250,000 • Location: East Blue
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Sorry im making more work for staff but im scraping this idea. Will come back with something else soon enough ty.

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Your topic had been denied!
I'm going to be less active as of 9/25/17. Kinda hitting a point where I'm contemplating why I'm here while having a full-time job.

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