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Techniques
Topic Started: May 23 2017, 08:44 AM (171 Views)
Kaizoku Grande
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Character: Koga
Request: Grading
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TP 144/155

Original
Swamp Swamp 4 (4 Free)
Type: Logia
Range: NA
Stats: NA
Description: The user becomes a swamp man, able to create, control, and transform their body into muddy swamp. The swamp is bottomless and anything engulfed in it will be drawn inside; able to be expelled at will, stored safely, or drowned.(Absorb for free)


Revised Tech
Swamp Swamp 28 (24 + 4 Free)
Type: Logia
Range: NA
Stats: NA
Description: The user becomes a swamp man, able to create, control, and transform their body into muddy swamp. The swamp is bottomless and anything engulfed in it will be drawn inside; able to be expelled at will, stored safely, or drowned.(Absorb for free).

Rank 4: Koga is capable of changing the color of his swamp to the various natural colors of soil(Blacks, greens, reds, Browns, ect).

Rank 14: Koga is able to control the density of the swamp to the point where he can make it incredibly dense or incredibly thin. Enough to maintain dense shapessimistic or slip through cracks.

Rank 28 - Reflexively turn into his element when attacked, and reflexively absorb things, in addition, he now has greater control at shifting his body into different shapes and forms.


Swamp Techs
Swamp Mirage 30
Type: Supportive
Range:Self (Medium)
Power: 12
Stats: NA
Description: Koga produces a large humanoid figure with his swamp powers that is a few meters in width and height. This figure is a mix of swampy colors that provide it with a appearance that is strikingly similarly almost identical. Koga can freely control this figure, so long as he keeps it connected to his body through the swamp or a trail of swamp. Although it is made out of swamp, it is about as hard to damage as a regular human body. While the clone is attached to Koga, it can absorb things as well.

Swamp Mirage lasts a maximum of 5 rounds. (+10 Construct, +8 Medium, Absorb(free)).

Chaotic Wetlands 30
Type: Supportive
Range: AOE (Medium)
Power: 4
Stats: N/A

Description: With his body, Koga creates a massive swamp that covers an area of up to half a football field. The large area is very difficult to traverse and is constantly trying to absorb any and everything that steps foot upon it. The nature of this technique and the highly unstable swamp makes it so enemies are sucked in and may find it hard to walk through and escape the logias grasp.

(+16 Medium A0E, Construct +10, Absorb (free))


Gun Techniques
ICU 2
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 2
Stats: NA
Decription: Koga fires an extremely accurate shot at a desired target or point in space. This shot travels up to a few meters.
No Defense 30
Branched from ICU
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 2
Stats: NA
Decription: Koga fires an extremely accurate shot at a desired target or point in space. This shot can transfer kinetic force from the gun into a desired target as though they were completely unarmored. This shot travels up to a few meters. (Defense bypass 28)
Gatling Storm 16
Branched from ICU
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 16
Stats: NA
Decription: Koga fires an extremely accurate barrage of bullets at a desired target or point in space. Using a combination of weapons stored within his body, Koga fires a barrage of dozens of bullets. These bullets are shot with enough precision to actually ricochet off of objects they cannot pierce through. These shots travel a short distance before completely losing all power and stopping. (Gatling 8, ricochet 8)
Long Shot 16
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Power: 8
Stats: NA
Decription: Koga fires a series of extremely accurate shots at desired targets or points in space. With this amount of percision, Koga is capable of firing across a long distance. (Long range 8, gatling 8)
Edited by Kaizoku Grande, Jun 14 2017, 12:18 AM.
Koga "The Blue Beast"Beast Blood PiratesLocation: Alabasta ● SD: 161 ● Devil Fruit: Numa Numa no MI ● Bounty: 18,000,000


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Chaotic Wetlands won't fly, since the total cost of its effects equals 34, not 30.

Rest seems okay though.
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Koga "The Blue Beast"Beast Blood PiratesLocation: Alabasta ● SD: 161 ● Devil Fruit: Numa Numa no MI ● Bounty: 18,000,000


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Wetlands still mentions disorientating people, so please remove that.
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Koga "The Blue Beast"Beast Blood PiratesLocation: Alabasta ● SD: 161 ● Devil Fruit: Numa Numa no MI ● Bounty: 18,000,000


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shapessimistic - no idea what this word is

Swamp mirage - gonna have to remove the bit about being as hard to damage as a regular human body, it's just mud. Also you're gonna have to take out the bit about it looking almost identical, the range of mud colors isn't really diverse enough for that, still gonna be mostly colorful human shaped mud.

other than that you seem pretty fine
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