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| ♣ Zen | Mar 26 2017, 05:47 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: ♣ Zen Basic Character Information Name: Momoka Sasaki Nickname: "Fixer" Age: 20 Gender: Female Race: Human Affiliation: Marine Rank (Commendations): Petty Officer (0) Achievements: Profession: Primary: Martial Artist Secondary: Doctor Position: N/APhysical Appearance Height: 181cm Weight: 71kg Hair: Momoka's hair is fairly short, hanging down a little past her chin at its lowest. This is only at the bangs that hang down at her temples. The rest of her hair is cut at about ear-height, where it fans out slightly at the bottom. Momoka takes great care of her hair, making sure it's always freshly washed and regularly cut. Eyes: Deep blue eyes. Often a bit heavy-lidded, giving the impression of calm. Clothing/Accessories: Momoka's most common outfit is her custom Marine uniform, consisting of a knee-length, frilly summer dress without sleeves, revealing a fair amount of cleavage and sideboob. Over it she wears the standard white uniform coat. Rather than boots, she wears soft but functional white slippers, and occasionally high socks or stockings. General Appearance: Of particular note are her eyebrows, being thicker than a finger at their thickest, and standing at a very odd, almost v-shaped angle from the middle of her face. Other than that, Momoka is simply a fair-skinned, pretty girl with enough chest and booty to make any freebooter take a second look. A faint smile is often all the expression to be found on her. Image The Character Personality: Momoka is, as one might describe it, waifish. Demure. The picture of a stereotypical Japanese housewife. She's soft-spoken, all smiles, and happy to obey her superiors. Not the type one would imagine could make it far with the Marines. Momoka does have the skills necessary of an officer, such as the ability to make decisions and then pass them on to her subordinates in a short time. Momoka has a reputation for being a quiet, sweet girl among her fellow Marines, adhering to rules and commands coming from her superiors without complaint. He reputation extends to her skillset: being focused almost entirely on restoration rather than destruction. This earned her the moniker of Fixer. Her smiles calm the distraught and hurt, and her hands fix what was broken. However, there is one part of Momoka's personality that her fellow marines prefer to overlook. It's the fact that, when in contact with pirates, Momoka's personality makes a 180. She becomes a cruel, vicious, aggressive person. Her hatred for pirates is universal and harsh, but its intensity varies depending on what she knows about the pirate: minor offenders might get a beating before getting dragged to the local jail, whereas famously deprived pirates are lucky if they get away with their lives. She treats her fruit's compulsive knock knock jokes like a proper lady would treat a hiccup: an embarrassing but amusing little moment. Hometown: Loguetown, East Blue History: Born in the bustling town of Loguetown, Momoka witnessed the strife between Marines and Pirates from a young age. Her parents were simple folk, and for the first 8 years of her life, Momoka lived fairly calmly. Loguetown was hardly the most welcoming place for a child, but most pirates kept to themselves so as not to attract any Marine attention while they were stocking up. Beyond the occasional encounter with a fleeing pirate, Momoka never had trouble with them. At the age of eight, her parents decided to take a trip to Candy Island with their daughter, a trip the young Momoka was quite excited for. The day they left was wonderfully sunny, and the girl was looking forward to spending time with her parents. Alas, it was not to be, as the ship was also carrying a large payment from a rich Loguetown merchant to a company on Candy Island. Pirates ambushed the small, unassuming transport ship out at sea, looted it, then shot it to splinters as they fled. The only survivor of the incident was Momoka, who was picked up by a Marine ship that had run across the fleeing Pirates and gone to check what they were in such a hurry for after a short skirmish. Floating among the corpses of her beloved family and the rest of the ship's crew for hours had irrevocably damaged the young girl's mind, however. She was temporarily put into a foster family, but soon it became clear she wanted to dedicate her life to the Marines. She came to love her foster parents, a Shell Town couple in their middle years, over the next years. However, she never quite got over the sudden and violent deaths of her parents. Rather than letting it eat her up from the inside, however, Momoka tried to let herself grow as a person. This eventually made her the sweet, soft-spoken girl she is now. This would not last forever, sadly. During her time as crewman, her crew often captured pirates. Occasionally, Momoka tried asking them about whether they knew the Jolly Roger she had seen flying above the ship that killed her parents: A skull and crossbones, but the skull was wearing a bandanna, and one of the crossbones had been replaced with a vicious skinning knife. For a long time, she got no results. What she did find, however, was one of the legendary Devil Fruits. Unaware of whether there were any protocols relating to Devil Fruits being found by Marines, Momoka took the leap, and sacrificed her ability to swim for unknown power. This is was the Nokku Nokku no Mi, and it made her a "treewoman". At the age of 17, Momoka was promoted to Petty Officer. Not long after this, a pirate was captured that she was asked to interrogate. The man was already quite beat up, though not near death, and Momoka was told she could trade her healing services for answers. When she asked her private question, however, the prisoner laughed. He claimed to have been part of that crew, the crew of a vicious pirate captain only known as Knife. He never showed the bottom half of his face, and took cruel glee in skinning marines alive. Upon asking whether the man remembered robbing and destroying her ship, the pirate's grin grew. She had thrown out bait, and he had taken it. He saw how his answers were hurting him, and taunted her with how easy it had been and how many whores and bottles of booze Knife had bought for himself and his crew with the stolen money. It was then that something inside of Momoka snapped. She did not come out of the interrogation room until her knuckles were bloody and the pirate was dead. Her commanding officer was alarmed at the violent outburst, but promised that since the pirate was scheduled for execution anyway, he wouldn't punish her. After that day, Momoka was never quite the same, showing an uncharacteristically violent reaction upon encountering pirates. Since then, she has heard rumors that Knife entered the Grand Line. Momoka has near-nonstop requested transfer to crews leaving for the Grand Line, but never got it. The only way she could see now was to either find a captain willing to vouch for her, or to start a crew herself. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Momoka, for such a refined girl, has a surprisingly brutish fighting style, consisting of heavy swings with her wooden fists. She has a tendency to rely on the toughness granted by her Nokku Nokku no Mi to avoid interruption of her attacks, preferring to overwhelm with raw force over fighting with real thought put into it. Weaponry: N/A Items:
SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 32
General Traits (3/3): Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types. This trait gives Momoka the Nokku Nokku no Mi Professional Traits (1/1): In-Training (1 Traits) – This is the equivalent of Fated for the character’s Professional Skills, but no paths exist for this. General traits may not be spent to purchase In-Training.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 12 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Zen, Mar 30 2017, 06:29 AM.
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| ♥ Tengu | Mar 30 2017, 06:14 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||
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First and foremost, you forgot a somewhat important thing- the entire stat and trait sections. Those tend to come in handy. Tone down the history a bit, killing a pirate hyped up to be such a bad dude is too much for a starter, especially when it was on the radar of her superiors. Chorus is classified as a major buff, so you'll have to split it 50/50 between two stats. Castrato is terrible and you're terrible for making it, but I can't deny it. Presto is supposed to be a stat I assume, but isn't really written as one. Literally make it a stance, a certain way she holds herself while it is active. |
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| ♣ Zen | Mar 30 2017, 06:29 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||
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For some reason the coding was messed up and the entire stat section was hidden by it. She didn't kill the bad dude, she killed a guy who claimed to be part of the bad dude's crew. Finding the bad dude is going to be her main personal motivation. Chorus changed. Presto changed. |
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| ♥ Tengu | Mar 30 2017, 08:50 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||
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I swear, all the pronouns fucked me up. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| ♥ treize | Mar 31 2017, 10:50 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||
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