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Take a Look, its in a Book!; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jan 31 2017, 12:12 PM (189 Views)
geomease
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Character: Fapple Jack
Request: Technique approval
Also for my book throwing techniques do I need to buy books seperately or like ammo can I assume she just has books on hand to throw and use?

Changes: Available TP: 22
Used TP: 20

Twi Techniques
BOOK! (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: short
Power: 4
Description: Twi hurls a book at a foe with all her strength, those marksmanship classes from Fapple really paid off!

Long Distance Throwing for Dummies (8) Branched from BOOK!, +4
Type: Offensive
Range: medium
Power: 4
Description: Twi hurls a book at a foe with all her strength, those marksmanship classes from Fapple really paid off! (Medium Range 4)

Vellum Valley's Verbose Volumes (12) Branched from Long Distance Throwing for Dummies, +4
Type: Offensive
Range: medium
Power: 8
Description: Twi hurls a barrage of books at a foe with all her strength, those marksmanship classes from Fapple really paid off! (Medium Range 4, Gattling 8)

Archie Artillery's Amazing Assault (20) Branched from Vellum Valley's Verbose Volumes, +8
Type: Offensive
Range: medium/Short AoE
Power: 8
Description: Twi hurls a mighty barrage of books at a foe with all her strength, raining down knowledge in an area at range. those marksmanship classes from Fapple really paid off! (Medium Range 4, Gattling 8, Short AoE 8)


Edited by geomease, Feb 2 2017, 10:21 AM.
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Gigasheep
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Mhmm... Seems alright to be honest.

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geomease
Jan 31 2017, 12:12 PM
Twi Techniques

Archie Artillery's Amazing Assault (16) Branched from Vellum Valley's Verbose Volumes, +8
Type: Offensive
Range: medium/Short AoE
Power: 8
Description: Twi hurls a mighty barrage of books at a foe with all her strength, raining down knowledge in an area at range. those marksmanship classes from Fapple really paid off! (Medium Range 4, Gattling 8, Short AoE 8)

Hate to be the bearer of bad news, but as it was explained to me; Effect total must be equal too or under the technique rank. Meaning this tech needs to be fixed up. Effects are adding up to 20, and rank is 16.

As for your books, I suppose you don't have to buy them, but if you don't treat them as untiered.
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geomease
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don't know how I missed that, due to public outcry Ditzy Doo has been shelved for the more politically correct rank 20 Archie Artillery. May you always live on in out hearts Derp Horse.

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Looks good Geo.

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