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| CAyuga | Feb 23 2017, 08:20 PM Post #31 |
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It was amazing how Shugo was able to command the underlings of Anti-Color and in fact it was quite impressive in the eyes of Joseph the way the whole situation was handled. Joseph pondered on the day as he watched the newly formed crew repair and ready the ship for sailing the Grand Line. There was no doubt that they were in for quite a trip and Joseph was more than ready for what was about to happen. Whether it be life or death Joseph would embrace it. What intrigued him the most was the fact that the Shugo guy had a captain and someone that was stronger than him as well. As the remnants of Anti-Colors crew finished their preparation and repairs the ship began to sail into the sea. The ocean was beautiful and for the first time in his life Joseph was leaving the island that he had called his home for his whole life. It was up until this moment that all Joseph knew was the plain white color of the island, the people, the items, and the personalities. There was no doubt there would be new colors, new people, and a new journey waiting for him out on the Grand Line. With one last look at Gesso Island he put his middle finger up and laughed about the idea that not only had he escaped but he had killed. There was no turning back and he would follow Shugo to wherever he wanted to go. Get going! We need to make sure we can get to our destination. No slacking! If you thought Shugo was bad, just think I was the one that killed Anti and gave him the final blow so don’t mess anything up or you will be writing your will in your own blood! Joseph screamed as he headed towards the corner of the ship where a small chair was conveniently put. Kicking back Joseph relaxed starting at the sun. |
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JAcob "The Ugly Angel" Rollins • Chief Petty Officer • Doctor• Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location:Gesso Island Grand Line Jospeh B.Roy • Crew Position • Martial Artist • Monkhat Pirates• Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Gesso Island Grand Line | |
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| ♥ Dusk | Apr 14 2017, 11:21 AM Post #32 |
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CAguya - 16 SD, 8,000,000 Beli. Chibi - 20 SD, 10,000,000 Beli. The start of the SL seemed interesting, but then went off track after Anti-Color was defeated. I'm not sure if you were typing off of a phone Chibi, but there are a fair few posts that seriously required a re-read; they especially gave the hint that you were looking to pad out your posts. This seriously took away from Shugo's fight with Greyhound, as half the time I was reading flowery 'epic' descriptions of what was happening for the characters, rather than to the characters. Not trying to poke at your writing style, but from a narrative point of view, it took away from what was important in the fight, which is reflective in your new bounty. In all honesty, better written posts should prioritise over higher word counts. CAguya, your work was fun to read, yourself and Chibi stayed in-character throughout the SL, so I can't wait to read more on what you two do in the future! For crimes against the Marines, Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki has now risen to a Bounty of 20,000,000. For crimes against the Marines, Joseph "White Ghost" Roy has now risen to a Bounty of 10,000,000. |
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