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Topic Started: Jan 27 2017, 01:52 PM (1,441 Views)
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doisenpai
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May 20 2017, 12:39 AM
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Guess he didn't need to worry about those pesky grunts anymore. Whatever Dandy got up his sleeve it ought to be something good for him to arrogantly order his grunts to escape, having the fight three against one. It was a move to which Maki considered as borderline from arrogance and confidence. Whatever the pirate's plan was, it didn't bode well.
Maki would heed Dimitri's request, tossing his comrade's knapsack. He would then toss the rifle he was holding, it was out of ammo and besides holding a weapon didn't feel right to him. He preferred using his bare hands. He joined Ms. Starburst to back her up, sizing their lone prey...or was it? Or this could be on those situation wherein hunters became hunted. They'd soon find out.
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"This was the result of a Quirk of Fate.. Hate your own Destinies, Who set me upon your Ship like an Angel of Death." ~ Roronoa, Zoro ~
Characters TRUTH IS THE MOSIAC OF ALL LIESBronz | PIC | STATS | INFO
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| Strength: 100 (72+28)
Speed: 65
Stamina: 90
Accuracy: 63
Fortune: 71
Focus: 5
| Name: Bronz Arcmelpatz
Position: None
Profession: Carpenter/Smith/Inventor/Merchant
Crew: Hero Squad
Bounty: 45,000,000
SD Earned: 328
Beli: 80,750,000
Location: Route 2, Plantenal Island
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Leon PIC
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| Strength: 28
Speed: 43 (34+9)
Stamina: 28
Accuracy: 50
Fortune: 35
| Name:Leon
Profession: Marksman/Thief
Affiliation To no one but himself
SD Earned: 108
Beli: 34,400,000
Location: Grand Line, Route 1 |
Maki PIC
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| Strength: 25
Speed: 35 (29+6)
Stamina: 19
Accuracy: 19
Fortune: 23
| Name: Maquisig Kajil
Profession: Martial Artist/Spy
Affiliation: Marine
Rank (Commendation): Petty Officer (3)
SD Earned: 60
Beli: 23,700,000
Location: Grand Line, Gesso Island |
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Supermaou
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Jun 12 2017, 03:54 AM
Post #47
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Cracking her knuckles, she readied her self for an attack "okay guys, lets all hit him with all we got!!" Starburst got into a pose that looked like she was winding up a punch, Tensing her muscles she got her self ready to punch as hard as she could, You think you three can defeat me! you have no idea who your dealing with!" he yelled out as he lunched forward to punch them with all his might.
"here we go!!!" she yelled back as she threw her punch towards the wanting pirate "Twenty percent Punch!" she would yell out as her punch connects to the pirate, hopefully along with the other marines attack, if they choose to attack that is, regardless with the force of the Marines attacks the pirate was send flying towards the cave walls, knocking him out unconsciously, blood drooling from his mouth.
Techs used | Hero Fist Techniques |
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20% Punch (8) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 8 Stats: N/A TP Spent: 8R
| Description: Juviette Lunchs a punch at the foe, the force of the punch knocks the foe back. Effects: Displacement [8] |
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"This is it!" (8) Type: Support Range: Self Power: 0 Stats: +4 Str, -4 Sta TP Spent: 8R
| Description: Juviette places one hand on her arm as she starts to wind up her arm, prepareing her self to punch her foe. |
OOC Note Going to wrap this SL up if you guys don't mind, dosent seem to be going anywhere, sorry : /
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Characters Last updated on 22/6/18| Cynthia Valentine |
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| Cynthia Valentine • Golden Star Family • Ws/Smith • Swordswoman • Bounty: 120,000,000 • SD Earned: 434• Beli: 102,600,000• Location: GrandLine, Long Ring Long Land Island. Strength: 102 Speed: 72 Stamina: 141 Accuracy: 73 Fortune: 80
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| Lucy Grey • The Jack of all Trades •Inventor/Mob Boss• Beli Hunter • Threat: 61.5• SD Earned: 207• Beli: 19,100,000• Location: Some where. Strength: 47 Speed: 61 Stamina: 46 Accuracy: 61 Fortune: 48
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| Kiztoria Mew |
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| Kiztoria Mew • None •Assassin/MA •Smiling Snake•Bounty: 2,000,000• SD Earned: 114• Beli: 44,800,000• Location: N/A. Strength: 40 Speed: 44 Stamina: 30 Accuracy: 32 Fortune: 36
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| Miss starBurst |
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| Miss Star Burst • None •MA/Inventor •Shining Star •Commendation: 0 (Apprentice)• SD Earned: 95• Beli: 23,500,000• Location: Route Five, Rust Pit Island. Strength: 43 Speed: 32 Stamina: 32 Accuracy: 32 Fortune: 32
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| Ashlyn V Morgen |
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[img]N/A[/img]
| Ashlyn V Morgen • None •Marksmen/Inventor •Bird of Prey• Threat: 0• SD Earned: 0• Beli: 500,000• Location: South Blue, Awestralia. Strength: 8 Speed: 8 Stamina: 6 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 8
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doisenpai
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Jun 18 2017, 03:34 PM
Post #48
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Maki watched as Ms. Starburst landed a punch, which consecutively sent Dazzle sailing toward the nearest wall, knocked out. A punch that was just using 20% of her strength, he wondered what could 100% do? He could only imagine. On the other thought, This mission could've been done right from the get go. "Oh well, we're done here then."
ooc Skipping Hive coz he is still recovering from surgery.
Yup, I had my fair share, my bad grader... :(
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"This was the result of a Quirk of Fate.. Hate your own Destinies, Who set me upon your Ship like an Angel of Death." ~ Roronoa, Zoro ~
Characters TRUTH IS THE MOSIAC OF ALL LIESBronz | PIC | STATS | INFO
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| Strength: 100 (72+28)
Speed: 65
Stamina: 90
Accuracy: 63
Fortune: 71
Focus: 5
| Name: Bronz Arcmelpatz
Position: None
Profession: Carpenter/Smith/Inventor/Merchant
Crew: Hero Squad
Bounty: 45,000,000
SD Earned: 328
Beli: 80,750,000
Location: Route 2, Plantenal Island
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Leon PIC
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| Strength: 28
Speed: 43 (34+9)
Stamina: 28
Accuracy: 50
Fortune: 35
| Name:Leon
Profession: Marksman/Thief
Affiliation To no one but himself
SD Earned: 108
Beli: 34,400,000
Location: Grand Line, Route 1 |
Maki PIC
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| Strength: 25
Speed: 35 (29+6)
Stamina: 19
Accuracy: 19
Fortune: 23
| Name: Maquisig Kajil
Profession: Martial Artist/Spy
Affiliation: Marine
Rank (Commendation): Petty Officer (3)
SD Earned: 60
Beli: 23,700,000
Location: Grand Line, Gesso Island |
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Supermaou
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Jun 19 2017, 02:56 AM
Post #49
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After landing the punch, Starburst stood there, blinking to her self whiles thinking, was that it? after all that, that was it? she could hardly believe it. Scratching the top of her helmet she looked back at the others and shrugged "umm...I guess so" she then took a pair of cuffs and hand cuffed the criminals hands to gether as she flinged the knocked out body over her shoulders, "I suppose ill take him back to HQ" Nodding towards the others she walked out of the gave, it was a clear walk as the other henchmen ran away after seeing their boss being knocked out.
She turned to the others "what are you guys plan to do now then?" she asked in a curious manner, she knew now that the mission was over, but still couldn't help feeling a bit disappointed, I guess she really wanted a good fight but ended up knocking the guy out, oh well, she though to her self as she turned to look out at the desert, sighing to her self she knew that it was a bit of a walk to the Navi boat but at least she managed to capture the guy.
OOC Note Shame how this SL ended but it is how it is, Real life and such, anyways I'm wrapping this up, you guys are free to post up a last post, ill then post it up for grading.
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Characters Last updated on 22/6/18| Cynthia Valentine |
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| Cynthia Valentine • Golden Star Family • Ws/Smith • Swordswoman • Bounty: 120,000,000 • SD Earned: 434• Beli: 102,600,000• Location: GrandLine, Long Ring Long Land Island. Strength: 102 Speed: 72 Stamina: 141 Accuracy: 73 Fortune: 80
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| Lucy Grey |
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| Lucy Grey • The Jack of all Trades •Inventor/Mob Boss• Beli Hunter • Threat: 61.5• SD Earned: 207• Beli: 19,100,000• Location: Some where. Strength: 47 Speed: 61 Stamina: 46 Accuracy: 61 Fortune: 48
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| Kiztoria Mew |
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| Kiztoria Mew • None •Assassin/MA •Smiling Snake•Bounty: 2,000,000• SD Earned: 114• Beli: 44,800,000• Location: N/A. Strength: 40 Speed: 44 Stamina: 30 Accuracy: 32 Fortune: 36
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| Miss starBurst |
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| Miss Star Burst • None •MA/Inventor •Shining Star •Commendation: 0 (Apprentice)• SD Earned: 95• Beli: 23,500,000• Location: Route Five, Rust Pit Island. Strength: 43 Speed: 32 Stamina: 32 Accuracy: 32 Fortune: 32
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| Ashlyn V Morgen |
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[img]N/A[/img]
| Ashlyn V Morgen • None •Marksmen/Inventor •Bird of Prey• Threat: 0• SD Earned: 0• Beli: 500,000• Location: South Blue, Awestralia. Strength: 8 Speed: 8 Stamina: 6 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 8
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doisenpai
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Jun 19 2017, 04:37 AM
Post #50
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Maki followed Ms. Starburst out of the cave, following close behind was Dimitri.
"I have to get going, still gonna report to my superior as to what happened here. Nice meeting you guys, see ya!" Maki replied.
With that, the marine spy walked away, treading the seemingly endless meadows, sea of grasses, white they were, drifting where the wind blew.
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"This was the result of a Quirk of Fate.. Hate your own Destinies, Who set me upon your Ship like an Angel of Death." ~ Roronoa, Zoro ~
Characters TRUTH IS THE MOSIAC OF ALL LIESBronz | PIC | STATS | INFO
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| Strength: 100 (72+28)
Speed: 65
Stamina: 90
Accuracy: 63
Fortune: 71
Focus: 5
| Name: Bronz Arcmelpatz
Position: None
Profession: Carpenter/Smith/Inventor/Merchant
Crew: Hero Squad
Bounty: 45,000,000
SD Earned: 328
Beli: 80,750,000
Location: Route 2, Plantenal Island
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Leon PIC
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| Strength: 28
Speed: 43 (34+9)
Stamina: 28
Accuracy: 50
Fortune: 35
| Name:Leon
Profession: Marksman/Thief
Affiliation To no one but himself
SD Earned: 108
Beli: 34,400,000
Location: Grand Line, Route 1 |
Maki PIC
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| Strength: 25
Speed: 35 (29+6)
Stamina: 19
Accuracy: 19
Fortune: 23
| Name: Maquisig Kajil
Profession: Martial Artist/Spy
Affiliation: Marine
Rank (Commendation): Petty Officer (3)
SD Earned: 60
Beli: 23,700,000
Location: Grand Line, Gesso Island |
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♦ InvadingAlex
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Jul 8 2017, 06:22 AM
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Thank you for your patience. Your storyline has been reviewed.
| Dereshishi Starburst | 16 SD | 8,000,000  | Bonuses:: narration, also +3 commendations Deductions:: | Jacob | 6 SD | 3,000,000  | Bonuses:: Deductions:: Incomplete | Titania | 1 SD | 500,000  | Bonuses:: Deductions:: Incomplete | Maki | 15 SD | 7,500,000  | Bonuses:: dialogue also +3 commendations Deductions:: | Lost child Dmitri | 11 SD | 5,500,000  | Bonuses:: dialogue and +3 commendations Deductions:: |
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For any cool things that the characters find
SL Notes I like this island. Colours signify value. Very interesting fantasy concept! I like how you all incorporate the worldbuilding into your writing.
These marines have really lax disciplinary standards if Titania can just lounge about and ignore her duties like that!
Annabel... just doesn't care. This base really needs a visit from a special marine overseer!
Russian platypus? Good job, I smiled.
Huh, that was an abrupt way to leave a thread.
Under that warrior schtick, Starburst is really the archetypical justice-and-peace-for-all-marine.
The Franky pose really doesn't suit Starburst xD
Oh so he's just hiding in the catacombs then. If Dandy's hiding place was that obvious, why hasn't anyone else gone to get him? Oh, well.
No way Starburst seriously fought any giants (and survived) with her puny amount of 43 SD xD
Nice, Maki thinks the boy is a beggar.
Dialogue is good between maki and dmitri
Overall, it's a shame that so many people had to leave but this was a decent SL regardless. The moment I enjoyed the most was the short dialogue about justice between Maki and Dmitri, and their interaction overall. Also props to maou for the narration
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RIO Rio[Pirate] • Crew Position • Weapon Specialist Primary / Thief Secondary • No Crew • Bounty: 42,000,000 • SD Earned: 204 • Beli: 49,000,000 • Location: Saline City, Grand Line
BORLIN Borlin Holdt[Marine] • Rank • Marksman Primary / Martial Artist Secondary • No Division • Commendations: 5 • SD Earned: 16 • Beli: 4,750,000 • Location: Out at Sea - North Blue
ARSTEEL Arsteel van Renesse • Ensign • Weapon Specialist / Chef • N/A • Commendations: 5 • SD Earned: 50 • Beli: 2,100,000 • Location: East Blue - Shell Town
TALLARN Tallarn Sorel • Citizen • Carpenter / Inventor / Marksman / Smith • No Crew • SD Earned: 18 • Beli: 550,000 • Location: South Blue - Briss Kingdom
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