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New Techs For Salas; [Flagged]
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Topic Started: Jan 24 2017, 11:44 PM (80 Views)
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♦ Togamau
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Jan 24 2017, 11:44 PM
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Character:Salasais Racto Request: Technique Review and Approval Changes: Regular Technique Points: 132 Used Regular Technique Points: 90
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Devouring Mist (22) Type: Offensive Range: AOE (short, self at center) Power: 0 Stats: N/A
| Description: Salasais drinks a stinging, metallic-tasting concoction which alters the properties of his spores to become corrosive. Metal gradually deteriorates with sustained contact. (+8 Short AOE, +14 Starter Breaking)
| Berserker Bone (24) Type: Supportive Range: Melee Power: N/A Stats: N/A
| Description: Salasais pierces the target using a sharp, hollowed bone as a syringe to administer a potent neurotoxin which temporarily disables the body's ability to register and react to pain. All pain ignored by this effect is felt immediately as the effect concludes.(+4 doping, +20 Doping Duration) |
Notes: Did I do doping right? Also, for the offensive technique, is it an acceptable application of his mad scientist trait? I worded it as allowing buffs and debuffs, not knowing doctor buffs could only be single target. It makes thematic sense as the attack is poisonous in nature, but I would like to be sure. I mean, a doctor could make a "smash a vial containing acidic gas cloud" technique, right? Mine's that but spore flavor.
My Mad Scientist Trait -Salasais has become the host to a symbiotic fungus which causes his body to naturally produce spores as well as being in partial control of his actions. His skin is somewhat spongy to the touch and spores are shaken off of him by most movements. The spores are highly adaptive, taking on different properties according to various stimuli, causing buffs or debuffs in others. Over time, mushrooms, moss, and other fungi will grow off of his body. A disadvantage of this change is that his skin is extremely flammable. (The spores have no status effect of their own and serve as a dispersal method for AOE "poison" status techniques, debuff/buff permitted by Doctor Primary profession)
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Shizuochan
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Jan 29 2017, 03:43 PM
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First tech is fine for me, actually.
Did you do doping right? If the 4,10 on the cost on the table refers to an initial cost of 4 for Doctor primaries, then yeah, I s'pose.
so if that's the case, next mod can just consider this a flag
Topic is flagged for approval.
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Okay, fine, I actually have characters.
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♥ Tengu
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Jan 30 2017, 06:33 PM
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I'd prefer the doping tech to state it's duration, but as long as you don't pull any punches abusing that, then you're fine.
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