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New Techs For Salas; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jan 24 2017, 11:44 PM (80 Views)
Togamau
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Character:Salasais Racto
Request: Technique Review and Approval
Changes:
Regular Technique Points: 132
Used Regular Technique Points: 90
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Devouring Mist (22)
Type: Offensive
Range: AOE (short, self at center)
Power: 0
Stats: N/A
Description: Salasais drinks a stinging, metallic-tasting concoction which alters the properties of his spores to become corrosive. Metal gradually deteriorates with sustained contact. (+8 Short AOE, +14 Starter Breaking)
Berserker Bone (24)
Type: Supportive
Range: Melee
Power: N/A
Stats: N/A
Description: Salasais pierces the target using a sharp, hollowed bone as a syringe to administer a potent neurotoxin which temporarily disables the body's ability to register and react to pain. All pain ignored by this effect is felt immediately as the effect concludes.(+4 doping, +20 Doping Duration)


Notes: Did I do doping right? Also, for the offensive technique, is it an acceptable application of his mad scientist trait? I worded it as allowing buffs and debuffs, not knowing doctor buffs could only be single target. It makes thematic sense as the attack is poisonous in nature, but I would like to be sure. I mean, a doctor could make a "smash a vial containing acidic gas cloud" technique, right? Mine's that but spore flavor.
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Shizuochan
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First tech is fine for me, actually.

Did you do doping right? If the 4,10 on the cost on the table refers to an initial cost of 4 for Doctor primaries, then yeah, I s'pose.

so if that's the case, next mod can just consider this a flag

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Tengu
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I'd prefer the doping tech to state it's duration, but as long as you don't pull any punches abusing that, then you're fine.

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