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| CAyuga | Jan 20 2017, 08:24 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Cayuga Info Basic Character Information Name: Jacob R Rollins Nickname: The Ugly Angel Age: 20 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Marine Rank (Commendations): Chief Petty Officer(0) Achievements: Profession:Doctor A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. Doctors have the ability to create drugs and toxins that can buff allies or debuff enemies. Weapon Specialist A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. Position: Physical Appearance Height: 5’11” Weight:180 Hair: Blonde Eyes: Blue Clothing/Accessories: There is nothing of importance to note when it comes to Jacob’s clothing accessories except for the golden necklace he had won from the tournament. He likes to keep a low key with his attire as to not attract too much attention. He wears a white long sleeve shirt that fits tightly to his upper body. His attire is finished off with a pair of pure white combat boots. Wrapped tightly to his leg they are incredibly comfortable. A pair of blue sweatpants hug closely to his legs. This is a homage to the Marine attire General Appearance: Generally, Jacob is well kept and clean shaven. He likes to keep a steady appearance of control. Standing at an average height he keeps his weight well distributed. Due to the nature of his sword training he has a well defined body and magnificent core. He is also considerably handsome and the "silent" personality sways well with the ladies. He has a rigid facial structure that is complimented with hollow cheeks and a pointy chin.. He has a firm set of arms and legs that are a little thicker than normal from the hours of kicking and punching. A lot of scars can be seen on the elbows,knuckles, and shins due to constant bouts of training. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Jacob is a very outgoing and charismatic character. He loves to take care of the sick and old and will always be willing to teach a child a thing or two about treating others. He is overall a happy and dedicated person. He loves what he does and will always enjoy the company of his fellow Marines. People tend to respect him and understand his position and rank. Dedicated to move up into the ranks Jacob is no stranger to danger; always willing to put his life out on the line. When he is on his off time he tends to just relax and train with his discipline. When it comes to fighting off pirates or other vagabonds he is very serious and deadly. Not only taking advantage of his swordsmanship he likes to employ poisons to slow down and defeat his enemy. He shows no mercy when it comes to pirates and as soon as the opportunity presents itself he will cut their neck. He has great respect for many people but pirates will never get a second of his time. So much so that he has been given the name Jacob “The Ugly Angel” Rollins. Hometown: Shelll Island(East Blue) History: Shell Island, the home of a well-known Marine Headquarter in the East Blue is where Jacob was born. Though the island in itself was quite poor and didn’t have a lot of supplies, it provided for the blueprints that would turn Jacob into the well-known doctor he is. The son of a merchant and a maid there was not a lot of time for Jacob to continue his skills in what he truly loved. As long as he could remember he was always taking care of small animals and his friends. He felt that there should never be an animal or a person that was in pain and it really gave pride to his heart. Even though there was not a lot of animals in general within the island he would find a few that were on the markets for sale. They seemed so sad and upset being caged up that he would attempt day in and day out to rescue them. Failure filled his life and he was never able to save many. However, for the lucky few he had he would take care of them with no care for his own health. He was a selfless kind of child and that brought him into his teenage years. Soon enough, his father wanted him to start learning the business of trading. Lack luster performances and idle boredom at work made it obvious that Jacob was not the type of person that could do the work that his father did. Instead of selling supplies, Jacob would read a medical book that he had found in the library on the island. The father was a nice man and saw the lack of motivation that filled the boy. So, the man asked Jacob if he wanted to become a Marine and in doing so learn to become a doctor. Ecstatic with happiness and anxiety of the unknown he jumped at the opportunity to do such. As he began to his rigorous journey to become a Marine began he soon realized he was very strong willed and determined. Despite his lack of muscle and horrible endurance he soon began to grow and become fit. Jacob would spend most of his day doing the routine work of the Marine Bootcamp and on his off time study his medical books and journals. Though he had only entered the Marines to get an opportunity to learn his medical dream it also became apparent to his superiors that he was a natural talent for combat. Though lacking in any fist power, he drew great dexterity with handling blades. So much so he began to wield two. Throughout his time in boot camp he began to get his bearing and great respect. Once he had graduated from the first test of Marine-hood he set his sights for the other islands. He knew that Shell Island was on the first step on his journey and with his medic books and journals in hand he set off to become a crewman. His goal in mind was to develop and create new drugs. Whether beneficial or harmful was still to be decided. The East Blue is said to be the weakest of the Blue Seas but it held no weight on the determination of the young boy. He knew there was more worlds out there and he would learn from them all. Though his first passion was becoming a well renowned doctor, Jacob knew he needed to defend himself. With that in mind he traveled with the permission of his superiors to Shimotsuki Island to hone his swordsmanship. Upon the arrival to the island Jacob was blown away with the amount of fighters and the disciplines that were shown off. Arriving within the Grand Dojo he witnessed the mass of bodies that coordinated motions unfamiliar to him. He was amazed by the sight and before he could even realize it a loud booming voice echoed throughout the chamber. ”You there, what is it that you seek?” An older man stated towards the front of the class. ”I am here to hone my skills with my sword” Jacob responded as he moved forward. However, as he moved closer and closer to the master the slick floor got the best of his rubber boot. Swiftly and quite ungracefully Jacob slipped in almost cartoon fashion. The dojo had grown completely silent except something that at first was unrecognizable began to grow in sound. All the sudden a large bellowing laughter created a deafening sound throughout the dojo. The origin was that of the master. ”I am not so sure who you are but you are funny and I like that. I will train you.” The cheerful old man stated. Despite what seemed like an accident Jacob had done his research on the man he now called his master and his weakness for laughter is what he was banking on to join the fold of swordsmen. He had planned the slip up the whole time and now for his leave of absence he would train. Only months had passed but a different teenager exited that dojo and you could tell that the strength in the boy had grown. Even more surprising was the fact he had still kept on his medical studying and the honing of his dexterity had provided a benefit towards his handling of a scalpel in the future endeavor of becoming a doctor for the Marines. As the years continued for the young Marine he began to realize the cruelty of the world. He had picked up an internship at the Marine Headquarters where he continued for a few years. Each new Marine that came in injured by a scummy pirate had made him more and more upset. He had lost touch with his family and was itching for a return back to Shell island. Finally, able to take off he headed back to his roots. As the island came into his vision he noticed the large Marine base and the bustling market that encompassed the island. He felt like a completely different person as his feet touched the ground and the smell of the familiar island filled his lungs. However, he had found it weird that his fathers shop was not where it was supposed to be and as he travelled to his childhood home he noticed the stares. It was uncomfortable at first but he relished in the ignorant idea that they were jealous of his status. Sadly, reality was about to sink in as he entered his home. There instead of a lively woman was a frail and old widow. Her grey and weak hair barely covered her face and the black undertone of the whole house made quite a depressing sight. Jacob would soon learn that on one of his trade trips he was ambushed by pirates that not only took his fathers supplies but his life. Now with a desire to rid the world of pirates he set off to find the ones that did this to his father. Investigating led him to a small uncharted island no more than a mile from Shell Island. It was known by the locals to be haunted but nothing more and most of the time it was overlooked. There is where Jacob found a man, he looked disheveled and weak. Treating him was his first thought and it came to him only naturally. Days had passed and the man that he found was still in a deep sleep. He was a very sick man but Jacob was going to make sure he would recover. It was on the third day that the unknown man woke up to the sight of Jacob. They began to talk and soon enough the man gave Jacob something that really surprised him. He was told not to open the present till he had left. Finally, when the mans ship was out of sight Jacob began to open the wrapped present. It was an heirloom that his father had always carried around. The feeling he got in his stomach was so strong that something completely came over him.However, by that time it was too late. Jacob was heartbroken and the only thought that remained would be for him to find the man that killed his dad. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Jacob is a calculated and smooth individual in combat. He wouldn’t be considered the most adept in his discipline but nonetheless h knows how to take care of himself. He isn’t afraid to fight dirty with pirates and will go to great lengths to make them suffer. With his vast knowledge of medicine and anatomy he incorporates sedatives into his fighting as well as calculated strikes to his opponents to leave them rendered useless. Weaponry:Two Katana *Iron Items: Beli: 500,000 SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 Advancement Points:0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:32
(3) Fate of the Swift (# Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your speed stat (1)Professional: Medical Malpractice (1 Trait) – Part of knowing what is required to keep somebody healthy is knowing what will cause others to become unhealthy. Doctors who put this knowledge to practical use may make especially potent poisons. They gain special Technique Points which can only be used on toxins that harm or debuff, of the amount of half their fortune
Techniques Regular Technique Points:16 Used Regular Technique Points:8 Special Technique Points:4 Used Special Technique Points:4
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle Edited by CAyuga, Jan 25 2017, 08:59 AM.
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JAcob "The Ugly Angel" Rollins • Chief Petty Officer • Doctor• Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location:Gesso Island Grand Line Jospeh B.Roy • Crew Position • Martial Artist • Monkhat Pirates• Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Gesso Island Grand Line | |||||||||||
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| ♦ InvadingAlex | Jan 21 2017, 01:39 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||
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Hi there! I'll be looking over your application today. remove "Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques" does he wear any boots, sandals, any kind of footwear? Sedative Slice cannot remove pain, but it can lessen the pain to a small extent. Remember that this is just a Rank 4 technique; it's not supposed to be very powerful. Your maximum technique rank is your Fortune divided by 2. So, no Whirlwind. Not only that, but if you wanted to have Whirlwind, you would also have to pay for the Gatling and Unpredictable general effects (the latter of which has a minimum requirement of Rank 14). Edited by InvadingAlex, Jan 21 2017, 01:40 AM.
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| CAyuga | Jan 21 2017, 06:12 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||
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Alright, I think I did what you needed. Also is there a place specifically that helps you gauge the powers of each rank? | ||||||||||
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JAcob "The Ugly Angel" Rollins • Chief Petty Officer • Doctor• Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location:Gesso Island Grand Line Jospeh B.Roy • Crew Position • Martial Artist • Monkhat Pirates• Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Gesso Island Grand Line | |||||||||||
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| ♦ InvadingAlex | Jan 21 2017, 06:58 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||
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I recommend the Rules section for you, in that case. The Techniques thread, found here, for example, tells you everything you need to know about how techniques work. In this case, a Rank 4 technique is stronger than a basic move, but cannot achieve anything superhuman - unless they are Devil Fruit techniques. I see you've got Fate of the Swift. You need to mark that into your stats; make it something like Speed: 17 (8+9) . You always need to mark where you get the boosts from. For clarity, I would also suggest formatting your techniques that use Special TP into a different table than your "normal" techniques. |
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| CAyuga | Jan 21 2017, 07:29 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||
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Alright, how does this look now? did said edits. Also added a couple of attacks that I hope constitute 4
Edited by CAyuga, Jan 21 2017, 09:07 AM.
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JAcob "The Ugly Angel" Rollins • Chief Petty Officer • Doctor• Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location:Gesso Island Grand Line Jospeh B.Roy • Crew Position • Martial Artist • Monkhat Pirates• Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Gesso Island Grand Line | |||||||||||
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| ♦ InvadingAlex | Jan 21 2017, 05:21 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||
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Looks fine. First flag. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| ♥ Bright | Jan 22 2017, 02:25 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||
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Hate to be a party pooper, but there's a few things that need fixed still. First, going to have to ask that you tone the last bit of his history down a little. We don't allow anything that might grant fame rewards in a starter character's history. That includes killing a known and wanted pirate. Instead, why not make that his first SL or something? Second, something like Sedative Slice has a minimum rank of 14, as it'd use the Doping effect, and thus you won't be able to use it yet. Third, none of your techs have any power, which they should. I'd recomend going through the Technique section again so you're on the same page as to how techs work. |
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| CAyuga | Jan 22 2017, 04:10 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||
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Alright, I think I did what you asked. I even looked at approved special moves from other Doctor characters. And I switched the ending to bio | ||||||||||
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JAcob "The Ugly Angel" Rollins • Chief Petty Officer • Doctor• Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location:Gesso Island Grand Line Jospeh B.Roy • Crew Position • Martial Artist • Monkhat Pirates• Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Gesso Island Grand Line | |||||||||||
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| ♥ Bright | Jan 25 2017, 04:09 PM Post #9 | ||||||||||
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Right, looks good! Approved App Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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