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Paradise Poltergeist; The Bat(Woman) Rises[Flagged]
Topic Started: Jan 2 2017, 10:55 PM (133 Views)
Incandescence
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Character:Keiko Kuro Ookami
Request: Approval of batty techniques
Changes: All of these moves!!!!

Signature Technique
Piercing Earth(16+4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Power: 20
Description: Having trained extensively with her Nodatchi, Keiko has created a technique capable of attacking everything around her. She performs a rapid series of strikes, creating a perfect sphere, capable of dicing most things that are within her melee range. She performs a few dozen strikes to create this perfects sphere. (gatling +8, Omni-directional +10)
Piercing Mountains 34(30+4)
Piecing Earth
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Power: 34
Description: Having trained extensively with her Nodatchi, Keiko has created a technique capable of attacking everything around her. She performs a rapid series of strikes, creating a perfect sphere, capable of dicing most things that are within her melee range. At this level Keiko's amount of strikes have increased, to about double of the original technique when creasting the perfect sphere. (gatling +8, Omni-directional +10)
Piercing Air(40+4)
Piercing Mountains
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Power: 44
Description: Having trained extensively with her Nodatchi, Keiko has created a technique capable of attacking everything around her. She performs a rapid series of strikes, creating a perfect sphere, capable of dicing most things that are within her melee range. At this level Keiko's amount of strikes have increased, to about quadruple of the original technique when creating the perfect sphere. (gatling +8, Omni-directional +10)
Piercing Heaven 50(46+4)
Piercing Air
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Power: 50
Description: Having trained extensively with her Nodatchi, Keiko has created a technique capable of attacking everything around her. She performs a rapid series of strikes, creating a perfect sphere, capable of dicing most things that are within her melee range. At this level Keiko's amount of strikes have increased, to about quintuple of the original technique when creatign a perfect sphere. (gatling +8, Omni-directional +10)


Life Return Forms
Slaughter Sprite(30)
Type: Transformation
Range: Self
Stats: +25 Speed -12 Stamina
Description: The Pseudo-Vampire takes on a form that’s draws forth latent energy within her body. Rapidly shedding useless weight, Keiko takes on an emaciated, almost ghost like appearance. Shedding all useless body fat, and water weight, Keiko condenses herself down to mostly bone and lean muscle. In this form, Keiko somehow manages to become an almost bone white. Her eyes pulse a vibrant hot pink as well. Changing to nearly the same color, the bat zoans hair glows pink as well. This form rapidly increases her speed without sacrificing her strength.

Her hair also becomes rather pointed; appearing almost like she is covered in horns.
Grave Ghost(40)
Slaughter Sprite
Type: Transformation
Range: Self
Stats: +35 Speed -17 Stamina
Description: The Pseudo-Vampire takes on a form that’s draws forth latent energy within her body. Rapidly shedding useless weight, Keiko takes on an emaciated, almost ghost like appearance. Shedding all useless body fat, and water weight, Keiko condenses herself down to mostly bone and lean muscle. In this form, Keiko somehow manages to become an almost bone white. Her eyes pulse a vibrant hot pink as well. Changing to nearly the same color, the bat zoans hair glows pink as well. This form rapidly increases her speed without sacrificing her strength.

Her hair also becomes rather pointed; appearing almost like she is covered in horns. These horns float ominously against gravity. She also produces a false set of wings made of hair(not functional as wings). Lastly her skin radiates lightly, almost ghost like.

Paradise Poltergeist(46)
Grave Ghost
Type: Transformation
Range: Self
Stats: +46 Speed -23 Stamina
Description: The Pseudo-Vampire takes on a form that’s draws forth latent energy within her body. Rapidly shedding useless weight, Keiko takes on an emaciated, almost ghost like appearance. Shedding all useless body fat, and water weight, Keiko condenses herself down to mostly bone and lean muscle. In this form, Keiko somehow manages to become an almost bone white. Her eyes pulse a vibrant hot pink as well. Changing to nearly the same color, the bat zoans hair glows pink as well. This form rapidly increases her speed without sacrificing her strength.

Her hair also becomes rather pointed; appearing almost like she is covered in horns. These horns float ominously against gravity. She also produces a false set of wings made of hair(not functional as wings). Lastly her skin radiates lightly, almost ghost like.

Edited by Incandescence, Jan 15 2017, 06:20 PM.
Keiko Kuro Ookami + Kuro Usagi • Slayer • Knightness/Vampire • Pirate CrewBounty: 122,000,000 • SD Earned: 520 • Beli: 50,780,000 • Location: Alabasta
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You haven't named the first technique of your life return series.

I presume each of these techniques branch from one another, please note this somewhere within the techniques themselves.

The techniques themselves are perfect!
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Edited :3
Keiko Kuro Ookami + Kuro Usagi • Slayer • Knightness/Vampire • Pirate CrewBounty: 122,000,000 • SD Earned: 520 • Beli: 50,780,000 • Location: Alabasta
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