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Dead Girl's First Techs; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jan 1 2017, 11:34 PM (196 Views)
Manco
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Character: Marigold de los Santos
Request: New Techniques
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Revivify 8 (4+4)(Free Rank 4)
Type: Devil Fruit
Range: Self
Stats: -
Description: The Yomi Yomi no Mi's primary ability is the power to bring the soul of someone who has died back from the underworld and allow them to live again a second time. The fruit's powers maintain the soul's vitality meaning that it does not matter the condition of the user's remains upon the soul's return. This ability works only once. After the death, the user is able to take part in astral projection, and summon the Chill of the Underworld.
  • Rank 8: Further practice has enabled Marigold to extend the range of her ethereal freezing ability beyond mere touch and all of her techniques that utilize her Chill of the Underworld also now project the freezing winds at a short range.
Reventón Muerte - Dance of Blades: Cortar
16*
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: -
Power: 20
Description: Marigold swings her sword(s) about her with lethal intent in a flurry of dizzying slashes. The sheer number of strikes coming from every possible angle of attack is meant to overwhelm the opponent and hinder active defense.

During this technique, Marigold imbues her assault with the Chill of the Underworld. (+8 Disorient, +8 Gatling, Free Elemental Damage)
Melody: Vida 16
Type: Support
Range: Short
Stats: +8 Stamina
Description: Marigold can invoke the feeling of stronger vitality in herself or close allies with a simple melody due to her skills as a songstress. (+8 Short AoE, Buff, Affects 1-5 Individuals)
Edited by Manco, Jan 18 2017, 12:50 PM.
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The passive freezing ability of Yomi would be something granted through rank investment into the base Devil fruit tech, rather than being able to utilise it from the get-go. The basis behind this being that Brook didn't possess the ability from his first appearance, requiring a certain mastery over his own power to perform it.

That said, for now, you should remove the chilling effect of Reventón Muerte - Dance of Blades: Cortar.

Remove Power of Melody: Vida. Add that it only affects 1-5 individuals.
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Edited the techs.

Could I get an idea of benchmarks for Yomi Yomi abilities? Such as how much needs to be invested for the freezing, leaving my own body, or reassembling myself? I know Brook's fruit is mostly a mystery to it's full capabilities and we will probably see more in the current arc, but I would like to know the sites current definition.
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Generally, staff aren't suppose to closely define the benchmarks but rather deny and approve them based on your own suggestions. Ultimately, you decide what direction you want to pursue with the fruit - as long as they include only Non-General Effects. From my perspective you could pursue a few different variations alone, depending on preference.

First, would be paying for Range/AoE effects for 'soul-searching' techniques to put more emphasis on Yomi's quasi-Observervation Haki abilities. Basically following the current minimum rank for different AoE as benchmarks.

Second, free Elemental Damage effects in the form of minor frostbites are a given and don't need to be added as benchmarks. So you could instead go for Range on abilities that use your frost to get that 'streak of ice' effect that Brook has shown throughout his fights.

Maybe a Specific Type Block against slashing damage at rank 44, seeing as how Yomi doesn't care about being cut apart but seems more affected by blunt damage. It would be mimicking the 'Stitches' effect from the Doctor profession but with the soul doing the re-assembling.

Alternatively, some form of disable or sensory overload effects on the frost if you want to go with that. Duration increases with each benchmark.

Honestly, these are just suggestions, make of them what you will.
Edited by mockday, Jan 18 2017, 06:12 AM.
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Edited my techniques once again to add in base DF technique upgrade. Hopefully I understood what Mock meant about the range boost for Chill of the Underworld.
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This actually seems fine now.

As long as you specify in the technique the level of the "Chill of the Underworld" - minor frostbite (as it is now)? Straight-up freezing? Etc. for clarity, I think this is more or less done. I'm giving this the first flag.

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It goes slightly against my established mindset on how these things work, but I'll defer to mock on this and be nice. Enjoy~

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