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Morose's Techs; [Flagged][Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 30 2016, 08:41 AM (181 Views)
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Character: Morose
Request: Check and approve techs please
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Cleaver Chop
(Rank 28*)
Branched from Scissor Cleave
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 4
Description: Morose rakes one knife's edge along another like a scissor's blades. Anything up to Mid Tier is cut when caught between the blades as they cut. (Mid Tier Break 28)

TP use to branch: 14

Pessimist's End
(Rank 24*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 0
Description: Morose channels all his negative and hateful thoughts and feelings into his knives. On contact with an opponent's weapon/armor/bare body, the Morose's dark feelings are passed through the block, striking opponents as though they were entirely unarmed, and made of ordinary flesh and blood.(Defense Bypassing 28, Flavor 0)

TP used: 24

Soru
(Rank 28)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Power: 0
Description: Once per post, an individual can use this technique to put on momentary bursts of speed that make them invisible to the untrained naked eye. The user may move to any location that they could normally move to in a single post, but they do so near-instantaneously. During this movement, they cannot be seen by anybody who's accuracy is less than double this technique's rank, appearing as a blurred streak to anybody who's accuracy is above that point. If attacked while moving by a foe who's speed is less than this technique's rank, the attack can be passively dodged without any expenditure of Focus. Attacks cannot be made while moving with Soru. (Super-Speed, Perception Formula)

TP used: 28
Edited by Novama, Jan 18 2017, 05:25 PM.
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I feel you've misinterpreted mastery a little. It does not raise actually raise a techniques rank, only effectively for the purpose of benchmarks, power, etc. Branching scissor cleave into cleaver chop will cost you 10 tp, not 6. Otherwise its fine, however.

Pessimist's End is sticking its toes over the godmodding border. No to transferring his feelings or whatever. I'm also veeery tempted to say this sort of thing with the black smoke and all would require spirit-generated illusions effect, but maybe tone it down a bit and it should be fine.
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When branching techniques, the branch must not go below that statistics and abilities of the last branch.

So for Cleaver Chop, it should have at least 4 in power, to correspond with Scissor Cleave. This can be done by boosting the tech by 4 ranks, whcih is an option available to you with your 56 in fortune.

Everything else appears to be fine!
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Increased Tech rank and power for cleave so branch did not dip below the ability of the trunk technique.
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