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Back Branching Shockwaves; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 29 2016, 07:10 AM (175 Views)
Fudo Saiken
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Saiken Silver - Certain Kill: Kitora - Rupture Earth 20(16+4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Power: 20
Description: Fūdo swings his sword to either side of his body. Doing so forcefully, his motion creates a small shockwave around him that is Melee ranged. He can perform this feat with either a full swing or shorter more conservative swing. The shockwave is a dark whispy color, nearly black; like a hazy void. (+10 Shockwave, +10 Omni-Directional)
Saiken Silver - Certain Kill: Kitora - Rupture Air 34(30+4)
Rupture Earth
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Power: 26
Description: Fūdo swings his sword to either side of his body. Doing so forcefully, his motion creates a short shockwave around him that is A few meters in diameter. He can perform this feat with either a full swing or shorter more conservative swing. The shockwave is a dark whispy color, nearly black; like a hazy void. (+10 Shockwave, +10 Omni-Directional, +8 AOE)
Edited by Fudo Saiken, Jan 22 2017, 01:13 AM.
FUDO & SONS FIGHTING CO.
Fudo "Saikyō" Saiken • Captain • Saiken Silver Grand Master/Smith •
Beast Blood Pirates Bounty: 390,000,000 • SD Earned: 1032 • Beli: - • Location: Sky IslandsStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -
Fujin Saiken • Pirate • Thief/Martial Artist •
Bounty: 40,000,000• SD Earned: 210 • Beli: - • Location: Sky IslandsStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -
Gran Kin Umino-Kimono Saiken • Other • Smith/Martial Artist •
Threat: 0• SD Earned: 45 • Beli: - • Location: GLStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -
Cero Saiken • Other • Inventor/Marksman •
Threat: 0• SD Earned: 95 • Beli: - • Location: Cactus IslandStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -


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Can't say I like the description of range here. Omnidirectional without added aoe is just melee range, not really a few feet.

Likewise, no where is short range defined as a quarter of a football field which if my google fu is accurate, tends to be roughly 25 meters. Change that to the actual description of "a few meters" please.
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FUDO & SONS FIGHTING CO.
Fudo "Saikyō" Saiken • Captain • Saiken Silver Grand Master/Smith •
Beast Blood Pirates Bounty: 390,000,000 • SD Earned: 1032 • Beli: - • Location: Sky IslandsStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -
Fujin Saiken • Pirate • Thief/Martial Artist •
Bounty: 40,000,000• SD Earned: 210 • Beli: - • Location: Sky IslandsStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -
Gran Kin Umino-Kimono Saiken • Other • Smith/Martial Artist •
Threat: 0• SD Earned: 45 • Beli: - • Location: GLStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -
Cero Saiken • Other • Inventor/Marksman •
Threat: 0• SD Earned: 95 • Beli: - • Location: Cactus IslandStrength:- Speed: - Stamina: - Accuracy: - Fortune: -


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