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Topic Started: Dec 22 2016, 07:29 PM (189 Views)
Darkhunter
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Character:Colin
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Changes:
62 tp used
techs
Sage of Destruction (44)(28+16)(branched from Sage of Chaos)
Type: Supplementary
Range: long
Stats:
Power: 18
Description: Colin extends his hair out creating several limb like extensions of his hair which are fully functional. Most effective with hardening haki or while transformed. Lasts 6 posts. (Gattling +8)(construct+10)(long Range +16)
Whirlwind Destruction (20)
Type: Supplementary
Range: melee
Stats:
Power: 20
Description: Colin spins around rapidly knocking back all around him with a spiraling shockwave, it expands outward in distance if he extends his arms. ( Shockwave +10) (omnidirectional +10)
Premonition (28)
Type: Supportive
Range: self
Stats: +28 Accuracy
Power:
Description: Colin focuses with his haki on a single target, gathering their state of mind to determine what they will do as a premonition within his mind. The greater the emotion someone has the easier it is to determine before they act.


Not sure what tags to use for the last one other than shockwave. I feel it probably needs more though hence I bumped the rank slightly just to prepare.
Edited by Darkhunter, Dec 31 2016, 05:16 PM.
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Mind including your tp used, just the make sure that you know how much will change and all (linking "Sage of Chaos" would also be helpful in the future).

Sage of Destruction would have 28 Power I think.

Whirlwind Destruction would need at least rank 44 for Long range, plus that costs 16 of your power, which would be put in as another tag.
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Ah meant for it to be melee range only extending as far as my arms go.

And yes it would seem you are correct about the power. For the sage tech though I'm unsure what you mean about linking to the tech
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As in, in the future if you're branching from something, it makes it easier if you also include the original tech.

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If its going all around him then Whirlwind Destruction would also require omni-directional.
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Alright fixed that. It's kinda like nejis spin move if you get the reference
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Just noticed the power is off on Sage of Destruction. Gotta pay for both construct and long range. 44 - 26 = 18
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Fixed. Lol so I was right the first time. I question my own math skills too much

Edit: Added in one more tech. i currently don't have enough for it by 4 tp, I should get that when my sl is graded. Hopefully ya'll can wait that long since I doubt it will take longer than a week or two for that :)
Edited by Darkhunter, Dec 31 2016, 05:20 PM.
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Good now to be approved :)
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Pretty sure this is 64 tp used, not 62. Not going to hold back an approval, just make sure to add them correctly.

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