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Keiji Abarai; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 7 2016, 04:38 PM (985 Views)
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General Character Information
"Wassup? I can't associate myself with you,..might ruin my image."

Full Name: Keiji Abarai
Nicknames: Kid.
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Race: Human

Affiliation: Marine
Rank: Petty Officer (0)
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Character Theme
Professions:

Martial Artist - Primary
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.

Carpenter - Secondary
A Carpenter is someone who makes a living crafting things such as ships, submarines, buildings and other physical structures with expertise and materials not privy to non-carpenters. Carpenters are the only ones capable of creating ships with techniques.





Physical Appearance
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 140 lbs
Hair:
Big round blue puffs that look like he gives it alot of attention when waking up in the morning.
Eyes: Pitch black and bland.

General Appearance:At first glance he appears to be a skinny kid with an upset face every time you see him. But it's a natural look.Nice brown skin, he's rarely spent any time outside until joining the marines. Normally his arms are either crossed, hands in his pocket, or behind his head. Above his left eye and around the eyebrow. Is a tiny scar due to a frantic childhood accident that doesn't need an explanation. Other than that there are no apparent injuries anywhere on his skin. Taking good care of his body, hygiene is a big importance to him as he feel should be to most people.

His other physical features are similar to that of a young teen, not having much of any bulk in muscles that could be seen just at a first glance. The rest of him isn't that much impressive either, other than his height and his overall tenacity, the only thing really bringing him out from the other marines is his blue hair in the shape of puff balls. One things for certain, you don't want to get on his bad side.

Clothing/Accessories: Like most people in the marines Keiji sports two outfits. His first being his standard marine uniform. Comprised of a white button up shirt with dark blue jeans, but hating the way the hate messes with his well cared for hair he refuses to wear one. Even goes out of the way to unbutton a portion at the top. Exposing a bit of his chest and the chain that hands underneath. The chain holds an anchor at the bottom, symbolizing his love for the sea and his will to stay strong. He always has his collar is flipped up to cover a large portion of his neck, and sleeves folded up on his arms. Sticking with his own beliefs on how the uniforms should really be worn.


However,outside of duty he sports a black flat jacket with blue lining and a high flipped collar. With a blue paw print branded on the spot above the left side of his chest. A family symbol. He has a very peculiar fashion sense, but it works for him. Long pants with black triangles in an unpredictable array, scattered at completely separate angles and areas. Held up with a orange roped belt. A sports brown shoes.

However through both outfits he always has the same jeweled wristband.
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The Character
"What is it you want? I'll give you a few seconds."
Personality
Keiji's mostly labeled for being an arrogant one. However that doesn't stop him from rising up at times and doing what he sees right. Most situations he can be found standing in the back, watching and observing waiting for the moment for him to strike and make a entrance to further boost his own ego. Cool, calm, and collected manner is how he holds himself. One thing he is known for is being perceptive, his past actions showed that he's not afraid to tell people what they need to hear rather than what they want to here. His moto is. "It is what it is." Keiji does however have an optimistic and idealistic side. Dreaming to one day become one of the most powerful marine admiral that ever lived, recognized by all, and feared by many.

His cool demeanor is only there to hide his short fuse, being quick to anger at times and never shy's away from having to send a boot to someone's teeth. However his hardened demeanor helps him get a hold of most situations and the ability to realize how things truly are. Allowing him to usually be one step ahead of the game.

Having a strong sense of generosity and compassion, he believes that all life is sacred, and that those who have great power should protect those who don't. His sense of justice, is what led him to choose the road of a Marine.



Famous Sayings:
  • Don't do that, you'll only ruin your image.
  • ...Are you done?
  • How uncool..
  • Uh....
  • Guess i'll have to put in actual effort.


Likes:
  • Training
  • His hair
  • Teamwork
  • Combat


Dislikes:
  • People making fun of his hair
  • Alcohol
  • Snakes
  • Those who pick on the weak



D.O.B.: 1st January
Hometown: Maple Village ,Gecko Island, East Blue
History:[Will update as I go]
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Abilities and Possessions
" I wonder how bad of an imprint my shoe will leave on your face."
Combat: Not shying away from combat in any situation. His specialty is a mixed martial artist, being able to freely using his hands or feet in combat without much of a second thought or it throwing off his combat. Quick and agile he knows his size gives him a disadvantage when going against most opponents. However that also gives him an advantage, using his size to loop around his opponent and strike at openings he figures out by fighting over time. Being an opportunist he never really saw himself as a powerhouse, so in order to accomplish his tasks he usually releases strikes in quick furry aiming to overpower his opponent that way and throw them off guard. In addition rarely would he ever use his staff in a fight in fear of breaking it.


Weaponry
WeaponryItems
Bamboo Staff Blow Gun
Special(Bamboo of the sacred)

Items
ItemDescription
  • A pair of sparky sunglasses
  • Silver Bracelet
  • Air tight goggles

  • A pair of extra sparkly sunglasses fashioned in the shape of the number 8. This attention demanding eye-wear can be used once to boost the fame reward earned in a future SL by 8%! Afterwards they lose their appeal.
  • An ancient dusty silver bracelet with the words Raftel inscribed on it several times. Characters in possession of this item have an 8% better chance of uncovering clues in the New World to find the lost island
  • A pair of air sealed goggles, when pressed on his face to keep the wind out of his eyes. Usually they leave a goggle shaped marking on his face when he removes em and have a blue rim with a black covering. The blue matches the color of his hair, stylish and functional.


Beli: ::beli:: 8,500,000
SD Earned:40
Stat Points:72
Advancement Points:0

SD Remaining: 0
Used for Stats: 72
Used for Fortune: 0.

  • Strength: 12
  • Speed: 22
  • Stamina: 18
  • Accuracy: 20
  • Fortune:18


Traits
NameDescriptionGeneral Traits SpentProfessional Traits Spent
Hardened FighterThrough excessive training in breaking planks, punching rocks, and all those durability-building exercises, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained flesh that is as hard as iron, making them much more resistant to physical damage.01
Signature Technique (1 Trait) This trait makes one particular technique special, a trademark move of the character. This signature technique is always of the natural maximum rank that the character is allowed, but does not cost any Technique Points. In addition, these techniques are allowed to have weaker variations, though these variations must follow the same path set by the main technique, and cannot be used to branch to techniques that do not branch into the main technique.10
Fate of the Whimsical (2 General Traits) By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. Unlike the other Fate traits, these place-holder traits may be cashed-in and replaced with other traits without having to reach the next trait mark20



Devil's Fruit
NameTypeAbility
N/AN/AN/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 36
Used Regular Tech Points: 12
Special Tech Points: 0
Used Special Tech Points: 0


Techniques
Name/Type/Range/Power/Stats/TP
Description/Notes
Ryu no Kagizume(Dragon Claw) (9)
Type: Offensive
Range: Meele
Power: 9
Stats: N/A
Signature Technique:
Description:Keiji attacks the enemy with a three-fingered claw hand strike (very similar to the ones used in Chinese martial arts).
Akuma no take(Demon Bamboo) (8)
Type: Defensive
Range: Self
Power: 0
Stats: N/A
Description:Gripping his bamboo he spins it in a rapid motion, aiming to use it to deflect oncoming attacks. Can result in a rapid spin, or a simple swing to deflect.(+8 Deflection.)
Doragon no bōei(Dragon's Defense) (4)
Type: Defensive
Range: self
Power: 4
Stats: N/A
Description: Using his hardened limbs Keiji would use them to block an oncoming attack.


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Edited by Kdubose, Dec 27 2016, 06:46 PM.
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Sorry for the delay, Kdubose. Welcome to the site too. If your app is delayed for more than 3 days like this, feel free to PM me.

  1. Put the Eighth Year Anniversary into Gains/Losses as you gained 40SD after all.

  2. Make sure it's "Hardened Fighter".
Otherwise, I don't see much problems.

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Thanks so much I'll edit it right away. Also, before the whole thing get approved etc. I wanted to know if it would be possible for me to obtain the bane bane(boing boing df) as it's the one I really want and the current owner hasn't been on since October.

Just wanted a heads up to see if I could get the df or not so I can add it into the profile asap.
Edited by Kdubose, Dec 12 2016, 10:43 AM.
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I'm overdue on an official audit for Devil Fruit. I'll have a Devil Fruit check done by Wednesday. You seem to be correct, but we have to go through an official process on it first before you can claim it.

For now, hold onto your Fated Traits. If you want the fruit before gaining 50SD, I would recommend taking Fate of the Whimsical instead.
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Alright thanks so much :D I will update it immediately with whimsical.
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Jesus, I'm surprised this hasn't been looked at. Sorry for the delay. You got the Bane Bane no Mi, so feel free to put it into your profile right now and make a Free R4 DF Technique for the Fruit.
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I'm doing this right now and trust me no worries lol. Been using the time to plan stuff out and get used to the forums and all.
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Fully fixed and updated and ready for review.
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my god, so sorry for the delay.

The Piercing effect on one of your techniques requires the technique to be at minimum rank 14, unfortunately.
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Lol no no you're fine trust me I know everyone's busy especially during the holidays. No rush. Also, sorry about that I saw that piercing traded 8 and didn't have a required rank on the side so i assumed for any attack. Fixing it as we speak andd....updated.
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