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Topic Started: Dec 4 2016, 10:45 PM (245 Views)
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Dec 4 2016, 10:45 PM
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Character: Sylvia Vermillion Request: Adding Trait, and Techniques. Changes: Adding Trait, and Techniques.
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Life Return (2 traits) - "At the sea for a thousand years, and at the mountains for a thousand years, breathing the wind and drinking pure water, he passed the training of a Sennin. Enduring it all, he gained the Life Return." - Character must be in the Grand Line to obtain this trait.
The character has the ability to use the mystic ability known as Life Return. They gain control over their bodily functions through their thoughts. Growing and controlling their hair, changing their body fat, body muscles and at higher levels even their bloodflow, these characters are truly masters of their own body. |
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| That Extra Special Ingredient (1 Trait) - This is a chef who has traveled around the world searching for only the finest of ingredients to add their foods. These ingredients are capable of giving profound supernatural effects to the consumer (for example, jalapenos that bestow fire breath). |
New Techniques | Techniques |
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Hybrid Life Return Of Speed x14 Type: Transformation Range: Self Power: 0 Stats: +14 Speed
| Description: This is her wild form using the power of the beast that hides inside. In this form her hair becomes wavy. Having cat like ears also a tail. Having yellow and white fur. In this form her claws are much sharper and looking like someone else becoming more of a humanoid cat. Her ears and tail do not change like a leopard as she uses her life return to make sure it stays silver like her hair, but inside this form Sylvia has the true speed of a leopard. Hybrid Life Return Of Speed |
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Destroying Aura, Claws Of Destruction x14 Type: Offensive Range: Short Power: 10 Stats: N/A
| Description: Sylvia will stand, as she puts her hands up into the air, coming down as her finger nails start to glow blue, createing a shockwave in the air. That will be sent towards her target. This will cut them, causing damage. [Shocking Wave] Destroying Aura, Claws Of Destruction |
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Alexis Crimson Name: Alexis CrimsonProfession: Assassin/Scholar Affiliation: Pirate Location: North Blue  Strength: 45 Speed: 67 Stamina: 49 Accuracy: 45 Fortune: 51 SD: 183
Anna Kranjcar Name: Anna KranjcarProfession: Weapon Specialish/Chef Affiliation: Marine Location: Grandline  Strength: 30 Speed: 50 Stamina: 30 Accuracy: 27 Fortune: 33 SD: 115
Sylvia Vermillion Name: Sylvia VermillionProfession: Chef/Martial Artist Affiliation: Other Location: N/A :origin()/pre14/8029/th/pre/f/2015/018/3/b/nakiri_alice_by_ichijo_raku-d8ed7je.jpg) Strength: 31 Speed: 40 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 30 Fortune: 34 SD: 135
Liliana Araya Name: Liliana Araya
Profession: Gambler/Con-Artist Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Location: N/A  Strength: 22 Speed: 27 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 40 Fortune: 30 SD: 99
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Dec 5 2016, 10:44 AM
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You gain a general and professional trait to spend upon hitting 50SD.
I feel like that tech is doing too much for a rank 8. I may be mistaken but I thought that TESI enabled otherwise rank 28's, to be rank 14's instead when it came to elemental damage, and a little bit extra. I'm not sure though, feel free to question another mod about it.
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The Characters Samson Hale Samson Hale • Herb Doctor • Martial Artist/Doctor • Beast Blood Pirates • Bounty: 100,000,000 • SD Earned: 531 • Beli: 7,500,000 • Location: Birka, Sky Islands • Colour: #41A317 Cynthia Ciou Cynthia Ciou • Forensic Pathologist • Bounty: 10,000,000 • Colour: #ff6699 Scarlett Scarlett • Investigator • Marksman/Inventor • N/A • Commendations: 50 • SD Earned: 211 • Beli: 45,750,000 • Location: Cactus Island, Route Three • Colour: #ff6a80 Kid Nathaniel Tennante Kid Nathaniel Tennante • First Mate • Inventor/Chef/Marksman/Weapons Specialist/Thief/Smith • The Eclipse Pirates • Bounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 270 • Beli: 13,300,000 • Location: Boin Archipelago, Route One • Colour: #d2691e Yumi Mirai Raine Nimia Raine Nimia • Rage Machine • Entertainer/Martial Artist/Weapons Specialist/Carpenter • The Constellar Pirates • Bounty: 13,500,000 • SD Earned: 135 • Beli: 30,750,000 • Location: Cretakari Island, Route Three • Colour: #808080 Mae Nimia Wynter Feria Brycen Watts Brycen Watts • Doctor • Merchant/Doctor/Weapons Specialist/Martial Artist/Carpenter • The Cream Pirates • Bounty: 21,000,000 • SD Earned: 338 • Beli: 12,150,000 • Location: Iron Knife Island, Route One • Colour: #4B0082
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♥ Bright
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Dec 6 2016, 09:27 AM
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Since you asked me to look at this:
Yeah, that tech is doing way too much. This sounds like a elemental damage plus disable deal going on. And Giga is right in thinking that TESI would bring elemental damage down to 14, but not any less than that. If you tone the description down then you could maybe have this tech as just a flavorful type deal, but at only rank 8 it can't do the things you're after.
As a side note, I'd also ask that you make it something more fanciful than just an "ice cube." Extra Special Ingredient is supposed to be about, you know, Special Ingredients.
Giga also right, you get both a general and professional trait at 50SD
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Characters! Eve Senba 
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- Name: Eve Senba
- Rank: Rear Admiral
- Profession: Markswoman
- Marine Division: N/A
- Commendations: 220
- SD Earned: 495
- Beli: 80,500,000 / 235,500,000
- Location: Water 7, Grandline
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Langsam Spinne 
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- Name: Langsam Spinne
- Profession: Private Detective, Merchant, Entertainer, Martial Artist
- Crew: The Jacks of all Trades
- Threat: 145
- SD Earned: 280
- Beli: 63,400,000
- Location: Neptunia, Grandline
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Kazan Tetsukana
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- Name: Kazan Tetsukana
- Profession: Doctor, Inventor
- Crew: N/A
- Bounty: N/A
- SD Earned: 171
- Beli: 58,500,000
- Location: Rust Pit, Grandline
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Jan 7 2017, 07:34 AM
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Still working on this? I'm gonna give this another 24 hours before archiving it.
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I'm going to be less active as of 9/25/17. Kinda hitting a point where I'm contemplating why I'm here while having a full-time job.
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| Eileen Falkner Commendation: 65 (Captain) Assassin/MW/MA/Doctor No Assigned Marine Division SD Earned: 177 Beli: 69,900,000 Location: Romulin Island, Route 1 [color=lightseagreen]
| Strength | 45 | | Speed | 80 | | Stamina | 45 | | Accuracy | 45 | | Fortune | 41 |
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Jan 15 2017, 03:05 PM
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I have 100 sd now. I would like this looked at please.
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Alexis Crimson Name: Alexis CrimsonProfession: Assassin/Scholar Affiliation: Pirate Location: North Blue  Strength: 45 Speed: 67 Stamina: 49 Accuracy: 45 Fortune: 51 SD: 183
Anna Kranjcar Name: Anna KranjcarProfession: Weapon Specialish/Chef Affiliation: Marine Location: Grandline  Strength: 30 Speed: 50 Stamina: 30 Accuracy: 27 Fortune: 33 SD: 115
Sylvia Vermillion Name: Sylvia VermillionProfession: Chef/Martial Artist Affiliation: Other Location: N/A :origin()/pre14/8029/th/pre/f/2015/018/3/b/nakiri_alice_by_ichijo_raku-d8ed7je.jpg) Strength: 31 Speed: 40 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 30 Fortune: 34 SD: 135
Liliana Araya Name: Liliana Araya
Profession: Gambler/Con-Artist Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Location: N/A  Strength: 22 Speed: 27 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 40 Fortune: 30 SD: 99
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Jan 16 2017, 11:09 AM
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Not to leak too much, but there are some planned changes coming to Life Return that will effect its trait cost, so you may want to hold off on getting it that for now to avoid complications in the future.
Hybrid Life Return Of Speed is +14 speed, but otherwise seems harmless enough.
Destroying Aura, Claws Of Destruction: If it "send them backwards" then it would need displacement, which you wouldn't be able to afford alongside shockwave. Speaking of shockwave, there is no range added to it so it would be only melee range and thus... just a regular hit. The blue glue, so long as it isn't too dramatic, is fine as flavor.
Fang Bite I am going to no in its current form. Life Return/Zoans let you control aspects of your own body, as well as ratios when using other zoan forms, but there's never been anything to suggest you can alter the fundamental structure and placement of parts; that's straying into mad scientist/bio mod, or even Hana fruit territory.
So for now please keep claws on fingers and fangs in mouths. Firing nails from her fingers and then regrowing them, although still quite bio mod-y, is at least feasible with life return I feel.
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Characters! Eve Senba 
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- Name: Eve Senba
- Rank: Rear Admiral
- Profession: Markswoman
- Marine Division: N/A
- Commendations: 220
- SD Earned: 495
- Beli: 80,500,000 / 235,500,000
- Location: Water 7, Grandline
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Langsam Spinne 
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- Name: Langsam Spinne
- Profession: Private Detective, Merchant, Entertainer, Martial Artist
- Crew: The Jacks of all Trades
- Threat: 145
- SD Earned: 280
- Beli: 63,400,000
- Location: Neptunia, Grandline
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Kazan Tetsukana
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- Name: Kazan Tetsukana
- Profession: Doctor, Inventor
- Crew: N/A
- Bounty: N/A
- SD Earned: 171
- Beli: 58,500,000
- Location: Rust Pit, Grandline
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Kaguya Light1
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Jan 16 2017, 12:57 PM
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Okay, I removed that one and fix all the rest, and yes the blue glow is only for flavo.
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Alexis Crimson Name: Alexis CrimsonProfession: Assassin/Scholar Affiliation: Pirate Location: North Blue  Strength: 45 Speed: 67 Stamina: 49 Accuracy: 45 Fortune: 51 SD: 183
Anna Kranjcar Name: Anna KranjcarProfession: Weapon Specialish/Chef Affiliation: Marine Location: Grandline  Strength: 30 Speed: 50 Stamina: 30 Accuracy: 27 Fortune: 33 SD: 115
Sylvia Vermillion Name: Sylvia VermillionProfession: Chef/Martial Artist Affiliation: Other Location: N/A :origin()/pre14/8029/th/pre/f/2015/018/3/b/nakiri_alice_by_ichijo_raku-d8ed7je.jpg) Strength: 31 Speed: 40 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 30 Fortune: 34 SD: 135
Liliana Araya Name: Liliana Araya
Profession: Gambler/Con-Artist Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Location: N/A  Strength: 22 Speed: 27 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 40 Fortune: 30 SD: 99
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Jan 18 2017, 05:26 AM
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Still need to put range on Asura. I'm presuming its short? If that's the case, then power will be 10. The type is also offensive, not transformation.
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Characters! Eve Senba 
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- Name: Eve Senba
- Rank: Rear Admiral
- Profession: Markswoman
- Marine Division: N/A
- Commendations: 220
- SD Earned: 495
- Beli: 80,500,000 / 235,500,000
- Location: Water 7, Grandline
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Langsam Spinne 
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- Name: Langsam Spinne
- Profession: Private Detective, Merchant, Entertainer, Martial Artist
- Crew: The Jacks of all Trades
- Threat: 145
- SD Earned: 280
- Beli: 63,400,000
- Location: Neptunia, Grandline
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Kazan Tetsukana
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- Name: Kazan Tetsukana
- Profession: Doctor, Inventor
- Crew: N/A
- Bounty: N/A
- SD Earned: 171
- Beli: 58,500,000
- Location: Rust Pit, Grandline
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Jan 18 2017, 06:11 AM
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Okay I fixed it all. Sorry I missed that part.
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Alexis Crimson Name: Alexis CrimsonProfession: Assassin/Scholar Affiliation: Pirate Location: North Blue  Strength: 45 Speed: 67 Stamina: 49 Accuracy: 45 Fortune: 51 SD: 183
Anna Kranjcar Name: Anna KranjcarProfession: Weapon Specialish/Chef Affiliation: Marine Location: Grandline  Strength: 30 Speed: 50 Stamina: 30 Accuracy: 27 Fortune: 33 SD: 115
Sylvia Vermillion Name: Sylvia VermillionProfession: Chef/Martial Artist Affiliation: Other Location: N/A :origin()/pre14/8029/th/pre/f/2015/018/3/b/nakiri_alice_by_ichijo_raku-d8ed7je.jpg) Strength: 31 Speed: 40 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 30 Fortune: 34 SD: 135
Liliana Araya Name: Liliana Araya
Profession: Gambler/Con-Artist Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Location: N/A  Strength: 22 Speed: 27 Stamina: 35 Accuracy: 40 Fortune: 30 SD: 99
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Jan 19 2017, 01:55 PM
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Characters! Eve Senba 
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- Name: Eve Senba
- Rank: Rear Admiral
- Profession: Markswoman
- Marine Division: N/A
- Commendations: 220
- SD Earned: 495
- Beli: 80,500,000 / 235,500,000
- Location: Water 7, Grandline
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Langsam Spinne 
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- Name: Langsam Spinne
- Profession: Private Detective, Merchant, Entertainer, Martial Artist
- Crew: The Jacks of all Trades
- Threat: 145
- SD Earned: 280
- Beli: 63,400,000
- Location: Neptunia, Grandline
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Kazan Tetsukana
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- Name: Kazan Tetsukana
- Profession: Doctor, Inventor
- Crew: N/A
- Bounty: N/A
- SD Earned: 171
- Beli: 58,500,000
- Location: Rust Pit, Grandline
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Jan 27 2017, 05:39 AM
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The Characters Samson Hale Samson Hale • Herb Doctor • Martial Artist/Doctor • Beast Blood Pirates • Bounty: 100,000,000 • SD Earned: 531 • Beli: 7,500,000 • Location: Birka, Sky Islands • Colour: #41A317 Cynthia Ciou Cynthia Ciou • Forensic Pathologist • Bounty: 10,000,000 • Colour: #ff6699 Scarlett Scarlett • Investigator • Marksman/Inventor • N/A • Commendations: 50 • SD Earned: 211 • Beli: 45,750,000 • Location: Cactus Island, Route Three • Colour: #ff6a80 Kid Nathaniel Tennante Kid Nathaniel Tennante • First Mate • Inventor/Chef/Marksman/Weapons Specialist/Thief/Smith • The Eclipse Pirates • Bounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 270 • Beli: 13,300,000 • Location: Boin Archipelago, Route One • Colour: #d2691e Yumi Mirai Raine Nimia Raine Nimia • Rage Machine • Entertainer/Martial Artist/Weapons Specialist/Carpenter • The Constellar Pirates • Bounty: 13,500,000 • SD Earned: 135 • Beli: 30,750,000 • Location: Cretakari Island, Route Three • Colour: #808080 Mae Nimia Wynter Feria Brycen Watts Brycen Watts • Doctor • Merchant/Doctor/Weapons Specialist/Martial Artist/Carpenter • The Cream Pirates • Bounty: 21,000,000 • SD Earned: 338 • Beli: 12,150,000 • Location: Iron Knife Island, Route One • Colour: #4B0082
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