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New Traits & Techniques; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 4 2016, 10:45 PM (245 Views)
Kaguya Light1
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Character: Sylvia Vermillion
Request: Adding Trait, and Techniques.
Changes: Adding Trait, and Techniques.
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Edited by Kaguya Light1, Jan 18 2017, 06:11 AM.
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You gain a general and professional trait to spend upon hitting 50SD.

I feel like that tech is doing too much for a rank 8. I may be mistaken but I thought that TESI enabled otherwise rank 28's, to be rank 14's instead when it came to elemental damage, and a little bit extra. I'm not sure though, feel free to question another mod about it.
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Since you asked me to look at this:

Yeah, that tech is doing way too much. This sounds like a elemental damage plus disable deal going on. And Giga is right in thinking that TESI would bring elemental damage down to 14, but not any less than that. If you tone the description down then you could maybe have this tech as just a flavorful type deal, but at only rank 8 it can't do the things you're after.

As a side note, I'd also ask that you make it something more fanciful than just an "ice cube." Extra Special Ingredient is supposed to be about, you know, Special Ingredients.

Giga also right, you get both a general and professional trait at 50SD
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Still working on this? I'm gonna give this another 24 hours before archiving it.
I'm going to be less active as of 9/25/17. Kinda hitting a point where I'm contemplating why I'm here while having a full-time job.

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I have 100 sd now. I would like this looked at please.
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Not to leak too much, but there are some planned changes coming to Life Return that will effect its trait cost, so you may want to hold off on getting it that for now to avoid complications in the future.

Hybrid Life Return Of Speed is +14 speed, but otherwise seems harmless enough.

Destroying Aura, Claws Of Destruction: If it "send them backwards" then it would need displacement, which you wouldn't be able to afford alongside shockwave. Speaking of shockwave, there is no range added to it so it would be only melee range and thus... just a regular hit. The blue glue, so long as it isn't too dramatic, is fine as flavor.

Fang Bite I am going to no in its current form. Life Return/Zoans let you control aspects of your own body, as well as ratios when using other zoan forms, but there's never been anything to suggest you can alter the fundamental structure and placement of parts; that's straying into mad scientist/bio mod, or even Hana fruit territory.

So for now please keep claws on fingers and fangs in mouths. Firing nails from her fingers and then regrowing them, although still quite bio mod-y, is at least feasible with life return I feel.
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Okay, I removed that one and fix all the rest, and yes the blue glow is only for flavo.
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Still need to put range on Asura. I'm presuming its short? If that's the case, then power will be 10. The type is also offensive, not transformation.
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Okay I fixed it all. Sorry I missed that part.
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Looks good.

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