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Luciel L Rosabelt; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Oct 14 2016, 08:01 PM (337 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Luciel L Rosabelt
Nickname: none
Age: 13
Gender: male
Race: human
Affiliation: marine
Rank Commendations (0): Seaman Recruit
Achievements:none
Profession: Marksman

The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. 𝘊𝘩𝘒𝘳𝘒𝘀𝘡𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘸π˜ͺ𝘡𝘩 𝘡𝘩π˜ͺ𝘴 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘧𝘦𝘴𝘴π˜ͺ𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘒𝘷𝘦 𝘒𝘀𝘀𝘦𝘴𝘴 𝘡𝘰 𝘀𝘦𝘳𝘡𝘒π˜ͺ𝘯 𝘒π˜₯π˜₯π˜ͺ𝘡π˜ͺ𝘰𝘯𝘒𝘭 𝘡𝘳𝘒π˜ͺ𝘡𝘴 𝘒𝘯π˜₯ 𝘡𝘩𝘦π˜ͺ𝘳 𝘳𝘒𝘯𝘨𝘦 𝘡𝘦𝘀𝘩𝘯π˜ͺ𝘲𝘢𝘦𝘴 𝘸π˜ͺ𝘭𝘭 𝘩𝘒𝘷𝘦 𝘡𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘀𝘡 𝘀𝘰𝘴𝘡𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘡𝘩𝘦 𝘡π˜ͺ𝘦𝘳 𝘣𝘦𝘭𝘰𝘸 𝘸π˜ͺ𝘡𝘩 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘳𝘡 𝘳𝘒𝘯𝘨𝘦 𝘣𝘦π˜ͺ𝘯𝘨 𝘧𝘳𝘦𝘦.
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An Inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build gadgets and battle engines if they have enough materials.





Position: Crewman


Physical Appearance
Height: 5 foot 4
Weight: 120
Hair: Luciel has brown hair that goes everywhere even outside his hoodie, he has tried to manage it several times but always fails,his hair goes all the way to the back of his neck and almost to his shoulders when it isnt sticking up.
Eyes: Luciel has gray eyes however when he focuses them it fills up his whole eye giving them a wolf like appearance.
Clothing/Accessories: Luciel wears baggy jeans with a jacket that is black but with a gray hoodie, he also has a grey shirt on underneath.
General Appearance: Luciel is as pale as paper having a skinny frame that makes it look like he hasn't exercised in years as his only experience has been with his sniper. Luciel also has no scars or damages growing up in a rich fashion however his hands do have some blemishes and markings from using his gun when he was younger.

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The Character
Personality: Luciel has a personality that believes justice should not be a thing just for pirates but for humans overall and they should all be judged by their actions. He originally had a happy personality until he was 10 and he found his parents doing a deal with a couple of bandits to kill their enemy company and the ended up dying 3 days later. This majorly affected his personality believing that his parents should be executed even if he is too young to inherit the money from his parents.

When luciel is spending his free time he will usually have a child like personality one of his favorite things being to just blow bubbles and run after them however he believes he shouldn't act like this around elders and people he should respect and will only act like this towards the people he trusts the most.
Luciel also has a logical side to him however in times of battle one of his hobbies being to figure out people's abilities to see how they could be used exactly, this also contributes to his combat style of using a sniper seeing no point of fighting at close range.

Hometown: Ilusia, west blue
History: Luciel was born in a royal family on illusia who has long cooperated with the marines and funded them even during times it seems like the marines would undoubtedly lose. Luciel grew up very comfortably not really seeing the world's problems or even the problems with his own town. Although one odd thing his parents noticed was his eyes that seemed to focus in which his vision was 4 times sharper however his vision would get constantly blurry, Scientists were baffled by this and helped him gain control over his eyes with some practice until he was 2 in which he was finally able to control his vision.

Luciel grew up with no major problems until he was 10 and found out how his parents were using pirates bandits and even more to kill his enemy companies that apparently took away his customers this was when Luciel first went to the marines asking to sign up and even though he was questioned by the marines why he wanted to join he still wouldn't answer.

Luciel was trained for 3 years managing to master his eyes gaining him the nickname β€œwolf eyes” from the people around him but within this time luciel learned to use a sniper using his logic as he believed what's the point of fighting an enemy at close range when you can just shoot them from a distance and kill them in one shot.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Luciel uses a sniper from a mid-long range to kill his opponents in one shot or to wound them so that they are easily captured showing a more support or assassin based fighting style.
Weaponry: A sniper which is all black and is made out of iron with one normal scope. This sniper is only a single shot.
Items: None except the clothes on his back
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Beli: 500,000
SD Earned: 0
Stat Points: 32
Advancement Points: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats:32
  • Used for Fortune:0

    • Strength: 6
    • Speed: 5
    • Stamina: 5
    • Accuracy: 19 (16+3)
    • Fortune: 8
Traits: Critical Hit (1 Trait) – Through expert skills in aiming and sniping as well as learning how to hit vital points in the body, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck. (Professional Trait)

Sniper Mastery (1 Trait) - The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28. (General Trait)

Funky Body (1 Trait) - Luciel was born with eyes that can allow him to see up to 20 kilometers or 4 times the normal human eye by focusing his eyes automatically however this also makes his eyes get dry 4 times faster if he uses it and continued use for 1 hour can make his eyes start having pains and force him to unfocus his eyes making his vision blurry for an hour. (General Trait)

Fate of the Cunning (1 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (1 of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your accuracy stat. (General Trait)

Beast Handler (1 Trait) - Characters with this trait have a natural affinity for getting along with animals. Wild animals tend to behave either neutrally or friendly towards the character, unless they are very strongly aggressive. These animals, with proper approach and care, may be made to be merely distrustful and may sometimes refrain from attacking. The user also gains one NPC pet, who may possess humanlike intelligence, behaves as a crew NPC and is controlled by the player of the main character. (General trait)
Muse:
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Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points:16
Used Regular Technique Points:8
Special Technique Points:0
Used Special Technique Points:0

Techniques
Disabling Shot (4+4(from sniper mastery)
Type: Offensive
Range:Short
Power:8
Stats:Speed -2
Description: Luciel shoots the opponent in either leg from a long distance slowing them down. Uses Critical hit while using this tech.

Focused Shot (4+4(from sniper mastery)
Type: Offensive
Range:Short
Power:8
Stats:N/A
Description: Luciel uses his phenomenal accuracy to fire a shot at his opponent.




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Edited by CalmNimbus, Apr 4 2017, 02:26 PM.
Calm Ian James β€’ Crewman β€’ Weapon Specialist β€’ Monkhat Pirates β€’ Bounty: 1,000,000 β€’ SD Earned: 46 β€’ Beli: 10,000,000
β€’ Location: Grandline, Gesso Island
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- Italicize your Primary bonus

- Please specify the Sniper to be Iron quality. As for the scope, it is not within buying range as a starter.

- You cannot use more than half of your Stat Points on a given stat. So therefore, the maximum you can put on Accuracy is 16

- Please specify which Trait is using General and/or Professional

- Funky Body: ...I think this is fine. Note if you actually want to buff your Accuracy Stat, you need to make an actual Tech for it.

- "Disabling Shot": Put "-2 Speed" in the Stats. Also signify that you are using Critical Hit for this Technique. Range needs to be "Short" because a Long is min R28 for all Marksman Primary. Please refer to the Technique section for more specifics on how that works.

- "Focused Shot": Range needs to be "Short". Also, your Accuracy Stat doesn't apply in terms of making a Technique deal 'extra damage'. In terms of damage from a Techniuqe, we only look at Power. For this Technique, you can probably just say "Luciel uses his phenomenal accuracy to fire a shot at his opponent". It's simply a special move that is more unique than freeform attacks.
Edited by SoIo, Oct 17 2016, 06:41 PM.
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alright that should have covered it all.
Calm Ian James β€’ Crewman β€’ Weapon Specialist β€’ Monkhat Pirates β€’ Bounty: 1,000,000 β€’ SD Earned: 46 β€’ Beli: 10,000,000
β€’ Location: Grandline, Gesso Island
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- I take back the scope. You can have one for free, it's simply just for "Flavor".

- "Disabling shot": Just say '-2 Speed' for Stats

You should be good after that.

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- Sniper rifle should be one shot before reload. Specify it please.
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