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Topic Started: Aug 4 2016, 08:56 PM (263 Views)
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Aug 4 2016, 08:56 PM
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Basic Character Information Name: Abel Seigfried Nickname: N/A Age: 20 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Marine Rank (Commendations): Chief Warrant Officer (0) Position: Doctor
Professions:- Martial Artist - Primary: A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.
- Doctor - Secondary: A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew.
Physical Appearance Height: 6 foot 0 inches Height: 175 Hair: Mid length clean white hair down to the jaw and mid neck Eyes: A piercing deep blue color with excellent vision.
Clothing/Accessories: Abel wears black tennis shoes with long black pants. A sleek thin black jacket that afforded movability and was a long as an inch past his waist with a thin hood. Under his jacket he wears a plain white t shirt.
General Appearance: Abel has a thinner athletic build. Because he keeps most of his body covered it's hard to notice the caloused Feet, legs and elbows, but they are noticable on his hands. He has a pale white complexion with larger tattoos on his torso and arms. A Dragon's face on his chest with a lion as his right sleeve ending halfway through his forearm with his mouth opening around the forearm. The same on the opposite arm, but with a wolf. Finally on his back a mountain shattered all the way to it's foundation. He wears a black glove on each hand and a small silver cross around his neck.
Abel The Character Personality: Generous Heart:Abel grew up on an island with people with incredible will and determination. Men and women would drop like flies from exhaustion, broken bones, and from injuries received. Of course there were plenty of physicians, but they would only do it for the cash. Being a Martial Artist himself and admiring their tenacious nature every night and every afternoon Abel made rounds on the island and did the best he could to mend or heal everyone he could, and that was the heart he had. People in need whether they deserved it or wanted it he would help them. He would care for them and would go out of his way to do so.
Determined:Day in and out his passion drove him. Whether it is Martial Arts or Medicine he blood, weariness, weather. Nothing would stop him. He was surrounded by people who strove for greatness and because of that he himself decided he would be the best he would be for his best and others.
Quiet:Though he helped a lot of people and tend to be in places where there were huge groups of people he was never really social. In his profession he either had people who were pig headed and didn't want help, passed out so he had no reason to talk or just his training which he didn't need to talk he was just told and critiqued.
Disciplined but aloof:With years of medical and martial training Abel's reflexes and knowledge are deeply engrained into him, but without much real world experience He will unknowingly walk through a mine field or accidentally walk off a cliff without a second thought.
Hometown: Karate Island, South Blue
History History: Growing up on an island that is the literal shape of a fist it would have been weird if he hadn't have been fascinated with Martial Arts. Abel had an amazing family with genuine friends, but none of them understood why he went to the lengths that he did. It was like he was always fighting towards something, but never had a goal. Ever since he could remember day in and day out he would leave early and train. He had plenty of support but it was nothing he ever needed. Like a tunnel vision through his life he would walk a journey that would build him higher and higher everyday. Only out of necessity did he begin working with medicine only to find it would be another passion of his.
In his teens he began a daily regimend. First he would training for the beginning of the day at one of his dojos. After he trained he would rest briefly then walk the island in order give medical care to anybody who needed it. Then he would rest again momentarily, train more, heal more and sleep. For years this went on. He obviously grew in strength in knowledge day in and day out, but his experience was never anymore than what had become his bland routine. He enjoyed learning and growing in what he knew, but at the point he had reached after nearly a decade of the same routine.
In his late teens he began to ponder why he had become this way. What he was missing. For the first time he was not content. He consulted his teachers and contemplated with all of the knowledge he had, but he couldn't figure it out. Until one old man came through the island.
Dojo to Dojo he went and defeated every head martial artist. Every teacher, leader or strong willed person he defeated them. Abel spent more time healing than anything in those days, but it didn't much matter to him. For some reason the different nature of things made it... better.
Like any other day he would make his rounds and one day an old man entered the Dojo he was doing healing in. He had nearly finished his healing when the old man slowly walked over and said
"So you are the one who's cleaning up my mess? How interesting...
He knelt down next to Abel as he was putting an arm in a sling and as he did the the old man observed him very closely. Noticing the marks of training and the muscle build that meant he was a Martial Artist which intrigued the man, but even more so what intrigued him was that he had seemingly been, for free at that, helping many.
"Boy you interest me, but I can tell this doesn't interest you as much. I can see your movements are all, but mechanical and straight forward. I know why there is no light in your eyes and why you yearn for more."
At the end of that sentence Abel stopped moving and looked at him. Like all his cards were just shown in a game of poker. Or his deepest most well kept secret had been reveealed. This man who he had just met saw through him instantaneously and he didn't know how to react
"Hmmm seems like I struck a chord. The reason you are so empty now is because you are like a boat. one who has sailed to ever sea it can, but now that it is incapable of sailing anywhere else it is stuck, sad and immobile. You need another ship. You need more seas and, son what you really need is adventured experience
Never even once thinking that what he could need was something like that his eyes opened wide and he realized the old man was right. The old man knew it too which somewhere inside Abel was discomforting, but what followed made his decision of what to do next concrete. He pulled a card out of his pocket with the symbol of the marines.
"The coordinates of the closest marine outpost should be easy enough for you to find. Give this to the recruiter, and find me at the top someday
The day of that encounter was the last time that old man was seen on the island and the week after Abel found the nearest outpost and became a marine. That now was two years ago and he has moved up in rank now ready for an adventure.
Abilities and Possessions Combat: Abel is a very mechanically precised Martial Artist. Using slightly lowered staring base his attacks start with a right handed guard. His right hand near his right cheek and left about a foot in front of him. He uses punches and elbows with his upper body and wide kicks and knees with is lower.
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Beli: 500,000 Advancement Points: 0 SD Earned: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stat Points: 32 [32 + 0]
- Used for Stats: 32
- Used for Fortune: 0
- Strength: 10 [9 * 1.2]
- Speed: 15 [9 + (3 * 2)]
- Stamina: 7
- Accuracy: 7
- Fortune: 8 [32 / 4]
Traits:
Fate of the Swift (2 General Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your speed stat.
Mighty Strength (1 General Trait) - This character's strength is boosted by 20%.
Hardened Fighter (1 Professional Trait) - Through excessive training in breaking planks, punching rocks, and all those durability-building exercises, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained flesh that is as hard as iron, making them much more resistant to physical damage.
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Devil Fruit Name: N/A Devil Fruit Type: N/A Devil Fruit Ability: N/A
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 [8 * 2] Used Regular Technique Points: 16 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
* denotes +4 Rank Mastery
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Cerebral Splitter (4) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 4 Stats: N/A TP Spent: 4R
| Description: From a right handed stance Abel uses his right elbow and swings it over his right shoulder and down on the top of the middle of his target.
| Spiral Crusher (4) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 4 Stats: N/A TP Spent: 4R
| Description: Leaning on his back foot he shoots a straight kick at his targets chest and spins his front foot to the right upon impact causing the impact to leave a spiraled mark.
| Rib Cracker (4) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 4 Stats: N/A TP Spent: 4R
| Description: Abel squares up to his opponent and kicks his back leg in the middle of the opponents rib cage
| Encapsulment (4) Type: Defensive Range: Melee Power: 4 Stats: N/A TP Spent: 4R
| Description: Abel widdens his based and squares up with his opponent. He then puts his forearms together vertically in front of him with his fists in front of his face and elbows in front of him stomach |
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Edited by Teijo, Aug 8 2016, 04:48 PM.
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James Alexander
Kiel Toro Kiel Toro • Chief Petty Officer • Weapon Specialist/Doctor • Leviathan Fang • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: North Blue
Abel Siegfried Abel Siefried • Chief Warrant Officer • Martial Artist/Doctor • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: South Blue
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Aug 6 2016, 03:26 PM
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Aug 8 2016, 02:50 PM
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Defeating the heads of every dojo on the island might be a little much for a starter. Could you maybe change the wording to challenging or just fighting, perhaps?
Encapsulment sounds more like an offensive tech, with the elbowing, than a defensive.
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Aug 8 2016, 04:41 PM
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The one who faced the heads of the dojos was the old marine, not Abel himself. Just a sort of mentor/wise man type person. The elbows were talking about the positioning of where his forearms were in front of him. If you'd like me to change the wording I can
Edited by Teijo, Aug 8 2016, 04:45 PM.
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James Alexander
Kiel Toro Kiel Toro • Chief Petty Officer • Weapon Specialist/Doctor • Leviathan Fang • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: North Blue
Abel Siegfried Abel Siefried • Chief Warrant Officer • Martial Artist/Doctor • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: South Blue
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♥ Dusk
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Aug 9 2016, 01:00 PM
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Should be fine, Flag stays intact.
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Follow the Clown Agenda!
The Catastrophic Clarabell Grace "Ladies and Gentleman, I am here to introduce myself as the marvelous, Harlequeen~!" | •Performer Pamphlet•
| •Name: Clarabell Grace
| •Epithet: Harlequeen
| •Bounty: 160,050,000
| •SD Earned: 553
| •Position: Harlequin Pirates Captain
| •Professions: Inventor•Marksman•Entertainer•Prop Designer
| | •Route Progression: 6/7 |
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Characters Blair Flanagan • Deck Swabber • Merchant - Weapon Specialist • Blue Fang Pirates • Bounty: 51,500,000 • SD Earned: 179 • Beli: 14,302,500 • Location: Out at Sea #913EEEOphelia Pahntom • Ghost • Monk - Hitman • Fame: 0 • SD Earned: 119 • Beli: 47,500,000 • Location: N/A (GL Island Count: 0) [color].[/color] Mulaney M. Midas • Wandering • Smith - Weapon Specialist • N/A • Threat: 4 • SD Earned: 19 • Beli: 5,250,000 • Location: Other Island, Grand Line #FFCC00Vish Tavack • Deed-Sea Diver • Carpenter • N/A • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: OrangeTonō, Enkō • Other • Chef/Fisherman • N/A • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: #cc5490#00a86b
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Aug 11 2016, 10:19 AM
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Yeah, just me being bad at reading!
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Characters! Eve Senba 
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- Name: Eve Senba
- Rank: Rear Admiral
- Profession: Markswoman
- Marine Division: N/A
- Commendations: 220
- SD Earned: 495
- Beli: 80,500,000 / 235,500,000
- Location: Water 7, Grandline
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Langsam Spinne 
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- Name: Langsam Spinne
- Profession: Private Detective, Merchant, Entertainer, Martial Artist
- Crew: The Jacks of all Trades
- Threat: 145
- SD Earned: 280
- Beli: 63,400,000
- Location: Neptunia, Grandline
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Kazan Tetsukana
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- Name: Kazan Tetsukana
- Profession: Doctor, Inventor
- Crew: N/A
- Bounty: N/A
- SD Earned: 171
- Beli: 58,500,000
- Location: Rust Pit, Grandline
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