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| Lojikal | Jun 28 2016, 01:22 AM Post #1 | ||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Lojikal Basic Character Information Name: Olivia Gram Nickname: Oli Age: 19 Gender: Female Race: Human Affiliation: Marine Rank (Commendations): Chief Warrant Officer (0) Achievements: N/A Profession: Carpenter [Primary]: A Carpenter is someone who makes a living crafting things such as ships, submarines, buildings and other physical structures with expertise and materials not privy to non-carpenters. Carpenters are the only ones capable of creating ships with techniques. A carpenter is proficient in the use of the tools of their trade as weapons, and have no maximum rank limit for martial techniques involving these tools. Furthermore, carpenters are able to use techniques that enable the rapid construction of basic, temporary structures such as walls, bridges and ladders. Carpenters have access to certain additional traits. *Note: Carpenters are the only ones capable of ignoring the general rules for ship making and can even purchase materials for ships not found in the chart for ship making. They are also the only ones who can create ships beyond what is typically found, including submarines. Martial Artist [Secondary]: A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Position: N/A Physical Appearance Height: 5’5 Weight: 145 lbs Hair: Light Brown Eyes: Golden Clothing/Accessories: Olivia wears the standard marine uniform at all times when on duty, but when she isn't working, her usual outfit consists of a blue long-sleeved sweater, black bloomer shorts, black converse shoes and white socks. She has a somewhat large wardrobe, so she also has plenty other outfits to wear, and when she needs to disguise herself she will put anything on. General Appearance: Olivia's physical attributes include short, soft pale toned skin and a slim build, along with her beautiful facial structure. This combination makes Olivia a catch to plenty of men, but she doesn't like to really flaunt it, always having on a long sleeved shirt or sweater when she can help it. Usually she can be seen smiling because she is almost always talking to someone, and that makes her feel very good. She also can be seen giving off most expressions like curiosity when she is curious, a sad one when she is sad, etc. The only expression she probably doesn't use much is one of anger, as she rarely gets angry about anything. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Olivia is a very determined individual, seeing to it that just about everything that she takes on gets done, no matter how hard the task. She is also extremely productive, always asking for extra hours on duty as a marine, “since I have nothing better to do anyway,” she always says when someone asks her about it. If Olivia does a bad job in her higher ups’ eyes, then she will try twice as hard the next day, and if that is not good enough, more and more harder until she either succeeds or breaks. Olivia can be very helpful when needed. She also describes herself as a hero of the people, sometimes going out of her way to help out a citizen in need. This meshes into her always needing to be productive, doing this if the higher up marines deny her the extra work hours she always asks for. She was always taught that if she keeps giving, then she will eventually receive something of equal value, whether it be something she can physically hold or not. Olivia can be very nice and helpful, but she is also very blunt and honest, saying what is on her mind even if it will cause people to get emotional. She has always been taught to speak her mind, because if she doesn’t then she will go through life living a lie. A lot of people might think of Olivia as a douchebag because of this trait, but she doesn’t mind. She was told that not everyone is going to like her, and is ok with that. Olivia loves talking to people, often going on about random tidbits, and a lot of people seem to be annoyed by this, but the girl just can’t help herself. If she isn’t interacting with other people for dozens of minutes at a time, she will feel really lonely, and that leads to depression for her. She considers anyone willing to listen to her go on and on like this while responding to her a friend. Hometown: Karate Island (South Blue) History: Olivia Gram was born on Karate Island in North Blue; an average-sized island. Her father’s name is Axel Gram and her mother’s name is Sarah Gram, and they both own a karate dojo together, one of the very many on the island. From a very young age Olivia began her training in Karate, learning the various styles so that she could take over the dojo when she was old enough. While most children would hate the stress put on them to train six days of the week, Olivia loved it. She came at every day with great enthusiasm and goals, punishing herself on top of being punished by her parents if she screwed up. During the one day a week that Olivia had off from training, she spent it with the other children around the island talking, going to various location, sparring, and many other things that she found happy in life. At times her friends would find her annoying, but a lot of them stuck with her, accepting her personality. Because of this, Olivia never felt that she had to change a single thing about herself. Everything went fine for Olivia until she turned 8, when her younger sister Clover was born. While Olivia had so much potential, Clover had much more, doing things that her older sister never pulled off in those younger years. After Clover turned 8. It was apparent who was going to get the dojo, so seeing that her family didn’t really need to her to stick around anymore, Olivia left the island in pursuit of joining the marines. During her time on Karate Island she learned fro her parents and many other residents the set of morals that most human beings had, and so she decided to use those teachings to stop criminals who would break these morals. Olivia started off as a Chore Boy, and as someone who most marines felt would never be promoted higher than a Seaman due to being a woman, but she sure showed them. After 3 years of trying her hardest and working harder than most of her colleagues, she was promoted to Chief Warrant Officer. As a marine, besides the general training, Olivia was also taught how to be a carpenter over the course of 3 years. Just after the first few months everyone around the girl could tell that she had a natural talent for it. She was so skilled at the profession that a lot of the marines came to her when their ships needed fixing. She pushed herself to get better and better at it because eventually she would join a marine crew, and they would probably need their own personal carpenter. A lot of marines know martial arts, so the female eventually stopped introducing herself as a master of martial arts and rather a skilled carpenter. Olivia has also made many friends at work, having originally thought that no one there would want to communicate with her. One day Olivia plans to go back to Karate Island and show her family that while they didn’t think she was good enough to own the dojo, she was plenty good enough to make it as a marine. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Olivia is a strategist first and foremost, always attempting to calculate her situation before she acts. Her main fighting style is close combat, but she can adapt depending on who her opponent is. When she is fighting with allies, Olivia will always listen to whoever is leading, trusting their ability to use a winning strategy, Weaponry: Iron Gauntlets Items: First Aid Kit Beli: 500,000 SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 32
Fate of the Strong (3 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your strength stat. Hardened Fighter (1 Trait) – Through excessive training in breaking planks, punching rocks, and all those durability-building exercises, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained flesh that is as hard as iron, making them much more resistant to physical damage.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 0 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Lojikal, Jun 28 2016, 03:10 AM.
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Oliver Windhelm • N/A • Martial Artist/Smith • N/A • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue Olivia Gram • Chief Warrant Officer • Carpenter/Martial Artist • N/A • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: N/A | |||||
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| ♦ InvadingAlex | Jun 28 2016, 02:44 AM Post #2 | ||||
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You could probably expand a bit on her general appearance - what does her expression look like most often? Is she often smiling, or is that rare for her? Etc. You list Carpenter as your character's main profession, but Olivia's history gives no explanation where she learnt her carpentry. Given her history, I'd think that she was primarily a martial artist because she has practised martial arts her whole life. There needs to be at least a paragraph's worth (overall) of material before I can plausibly accept Carpentry as her primary profession. Iron Gauntlets are weapons, they don't provide extra armor (you already have the iron-hard hands trait, of course). When these minor edits are done, I don't see anything hindering you from a flag. Edited by InvadingAlex, Jun 28 2016, 02:44 AM.
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RIO BORLIN ARSTEEL TALLARN
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| Lojikal | Jun 28 2016, 03:10 AM Post #3 | ||||
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Oliver Windhelm • N/A • Martial Artist/Smith • N/A • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: South Blue Olivia Gram • Chief Warrant Officer • Carpenter/Martial Artist • N/A • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • L: N/A | |||||
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| ♦ InvadingAlex | Jun 28 2016, 03:16 AM Post #4 | ||||
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For flavor, it probably sounds better if you have her enlisting in the Marine Academy's Carpentry Program or something, but this works just fine mechanically. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| ♥ treize | Jun 29 2016, 03:01 PM Post #5 | ||||
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