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| Alekis | Jun 21 2016, 01:15 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Alekis Basic Character Information Name: Alekis Legionare Nickname: Red hair demon, Shark. Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Fishman (great white shark) Affiliation: Marines Rank (Commendations): Chief Warrant Officer Achievements: Profession: Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques. Doctor A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. Position: Marine Physical Appearance Height: 6'0 Weight: 320 pounds Hair: Crimson Red Eyes: Sea green Clothing/Accessories: Wears the ensign uniform of blue and white, the shirt being a bleach white, tight across his muscular chest. And blue pants looser around the legs for better kicks. a white coat hangs off his broad shoulders, no shoes. Has a bone necklace of bone shards from an actual great white, hammerhead, and tiger shark. General Appearance: Alekis is a six foot hulking shark with thick muscle body, corded arms the size of steel beams. His body is solid muscle with a six pack stomach, thick pecks, a axe width set of shoulders, thick trunk legs. His hair is cut short revealing the fin on his back between his shoulders. His hands are as large as catcher mitts and tipped with honed sharp claws. He has a double set teeth of pearl white color. His eyes are sea green and strangely gentle. His skin is a bluish white with scars on his torso and a scar on his left cheek. He walks with a calm demanor, every step seemingly calculated. His large bulk moving with a fluid movement. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Despite his hulking and vicious appearance. Alekis is a gentle soul with a kind heart full of kindness and the desire to do the right thing. He loves kids especially those that aren't afraid of him. A being of duty bound honor with flashes of a rebel streak. He loves the ocean and swimming it's deep depths, Ironically he doesn't much like fish but absolutely adores rice buns. Alekis enjoys traveling around the ocean with his fellow Marines and dreams of being an Admiral one day. Nothing seems to really bother him...at least in public, he hides the pain he gets from racial slurs and sterotypes. He buries it down and ignores it until he trains. Martial arts is the one thing he truly excells at. The fluid motion where skill matters more than anything. He is a people pleaser mainly cause he wants to be accepted. Sadly that comes off as a boot licker. Sucking up isn't what he does he just likes being useful. His feelings for humans are confusing to him. On one hand he likes their species and a human saved him so there is that. But their constant fear scent and mouthy mixed with cowardly nature gets on his nerves. Alekis rarely gets angry, preferring to laugh and joke around than take much seriously. Even when people are rude and mean, he wouldn't care if someone threw a drink or food on him. He would just laugh at it. However messing with his friends is something he won't forgive or forget. Hometown: Carnage Island (Grand Line) History: Alekis was born in the grand line to a pair of pirate parents who took him on their adventures in the grand island. Alekis was born on Carnage Island but it being his home would be an overstatement. His mother went into labor on the island when they landed. After he was born they left the island behind. A year passed and Marines finally took down his parents. A Captain finding Alekis huddled over the dead body of his mother took pity on the young boy. Alekis grew up on that Marine ship, his natural physique making the Mariens uncomfortable but the Captain just laughed. He trained Alekis in Martial combat, the nine paths he called it. When Alekis wasn't with the Captain he was with the ship doctor. A beautiful woman with hair the color of honey. Her hair mesmerized the young fishman and his anatomy interested her. She ran simple tests on him such as his stamina, the awesome ability to regrow his teeth. As time went on Alekis took an interest in her skills. Between his Captain's martial training and the doctors lessons he was torn between them. Warrior or healer, destroy or fix. His answer came when a battle erupted on the deck of the ship. Alekis was fourteen at the time but already tall and muscular. The pirates ambush was well planned and many Marines died. It was Alekis who turned the tide. Not with heroic battle skills or fast thinking. He changed it with a roar. The hulking fishman erupted from the cabin and let out a roar. The pirates stumbled as they tried to escape the vicious fishman who appeared. The Marines took the chance to turn the tide and captured them. Alekis was praised than sent off to the Marines in the blues to become a Marine. It wasn't easy but his martial skills stood him out. He tossed the other cadets around like they were nothing. He memorized lessons, cleaned and scrubbed, trained and bled. From the time he arrived he didn't have it easy, many Marines were cruel though they didn't say or do anything around command and Alekis never reported it. He got his payback in the sparring room. His skills and resolve caught quite a few eyes. Upon being assigned to a ship he was set as a chief warrant officer. Now the young shark looks forward to adventure on the seas. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Alekis prefers a melee combat using martial arts and body knowledge.studying as a doctor also showed him vulnerable points on the human anatomy. In battle he is the calm type, clear headed and not easily goaded. He tends to still be a nice guy up until someone tries to kill him. Weaponry: N/A Items: rope, backpack, compass, doctor tools, surgical knife, food, canteen. Beli: 500,000 SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 32
Fishman (2+ Traits) - Fishmen gain the benefits of the Mighty Strength trait, and may breath underwater. Their movements in water are not hampered as greatly as normal humans, and they may swim at great speeds. They also gain attributes or natural weapons based on their species. The number of traits needed depends on the species. Fate of the Mighty (1 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your stamina stat. Techniques Regular Technique Points:16 Used Regular Technique Points:16 Special Technique Points:0 Used Special Technique Points:0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Alekis, Jul 2 2016, 08:28 AM.
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[http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/6076542/1/#new]C Alekis Legionare[/url] • Chief Warrant Officer• Martial Artist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000• Location: South Blue | |||||||||||||||||
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| ♥ treize | Jun 21 2016, 03:19 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||
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Your app isn't flagged yet, so I don't know why you have that in your topic title. Add special and used special tech points as 0 each. Get rid of the "strength vs stamina" in his first tech. You can say he attempts to tear out a chunk of flesh, but leave the tearing to rping it out. You're missing a professional trait. Strength is 12 (10+2) Stamina is 10 (7+3) Take body out of weaponry and put N/A. Add more to Combat. How does he approach battle? Hot headed or calculated? Dirty fighter or honorable? Etc. Add Grand Line to Hometown. More detail in clothing please. Describe what parts of the outfit are blue and white. Please provide the full descriptions of professions. You can have 2. But onpy the primary gets to keep the italicized text. Max rank is Chief Warrant Officer and below. 0 commendations. |
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Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island ♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88 Wizardbeard and other characters Scooped Characters: Kove Chat Aliases Munchvengers - Oprp's Haxest Heroes; House Cup Tournament - Who will Win | |||||||||||||||||
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| Alekis | Jun 21 2016, 09:13 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||
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[http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/6076542/1/#new]C Alekis Legionare[/url] • Chief Warrant Officer• Martial Artist • [url=insert marine crew URL here]Marine Division name[/url] • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000• Location: South Blue | |||||||||||||||||
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| ♥ treize | Jun 22 2016, 12:42 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||
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Stat Points are 32 not 33. Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0 Not enough to hold back a flag though, just fix before approval. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island ♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88 Wizardbeard and other characters Scooped Characters: Kove Chat Aliases Munchvengers - Oprp's Haxest Heroes; House Cup Tournament - Who will Win | |||||||||||||||||
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| ShadowBlade | Jun 22 2016, 01:07 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||
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Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. Approved Application
Edited by ShadowBlade, Jun 22 2016, 01:08 PM.
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