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Tabor Ironflayer; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jun 18 2016, 06:19 PM (488 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Tabor Ironflayer
Nickname: N/A
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Race: Human with giant blood.
Affiliation: Marine
Rank (Commendations): Seaman (0)
Position: Qaurter Master
Achievements:
  • N/A

Profession:
  • Martial Artist - Primary: A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.
  • Smith - Secondary: A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy which allows them to make custom materials or mix new ones together.

Physical Appearance
Height: 8'7
Weight: 608lbs
Hair: Dark brown cut short that appears a bit wavy in places. His sideburns combine with his glorious beard giving him the air of a gentleman.
Eyes: Dark green eyes. Grow darker when in zoan forms so that they're almost black.

Clothing/Accessories: Tabor generally will wear a marine cap, but not much else to signify his status as a Marine. the uniforms tend to tear when he's in combat so he saves them for special occassions. Typically he will wear a dark brown, black, or grey t-shirt with matching pants. He wears thick combat boots most of the time, but wears sandals when he is merely relaxing. In combat he wears armor forged by himself for extra protection. This of course makes him look all the more intimidating.

General Appearance: Tabor is a very large intimidating man who appears older than he really is. Despite the fact he is twenty seven he is often confused for someone around the age of forty. He has a glorious dark brown well kept beard that makes him look all the more intimidating. Tabor has one scar on his brow from a fight long ago, but other than his callused hands he has no blemishes on his skin.

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The Character
Personality: Despite appearances Tabor is generally a hardworking teddy bear. He enjoys the simple things in life such as good food, great company, and training. He has a bit of a weakness for helping those who can't help themselves and for the fairer sex. Though his large frame and dour look tend to drive them away. While he is capable of really hurting people Tabor prefers to coax his enemies into surrender if he feels they are just out of their league. If they're completely horrible he'll swat them like flies. His sense of justice leans towards Moral justice instead of Absoulute since he thinks Absolute justice causes far more problems then it fixes.

Hometown: Karate Island, South Blue

History: Tabor is the third son out of a family of seven children. Two brothers and four sisters. His father Tavvar is one of the few smiths on Karate island. The only one ,to the family's knowledge, of giant descent. Growing up Tabor was the most mild mannered of his brothers and because of his large size was often picked on by the students at the various dojo. Typically it never went past name calling or throwing of garbage due to Tabor's older brothers being well, more aggressive than him and wrecking anyone who messed with thier siblings.

One day Tabor was wandering round the island as young kids were opt to do when he came across a dojo of sumo wrestlers. The big men were not as cool or flashy as the other fighting styles, but they were just as destructive. The men knew how to weild their power and weight and hit like frieght trains. He watched them for a time before returning home. On his way back one of the local bullies was trying to prove to his friends just how strong he was by picking on Tabor because he was bigger then most everyone by a foot. He ran up and punched Tabor only to be sumo slapped in the face hard enough to lose some teeth for his bravado. Needless to say no one messed with Tabor again after that.

Years later Tabor felt working as a smith wasn't as worthwile as being a Marine would be. He had been practicing sumo style fighting for years and felt he could help the world more by keeping the seas safe rather then simply making weapons and tools. With his parents blessing he enlisted at age eighteen and has been with them ever since.

Over the course of basic training the higher ups saw his fighting style and felt it would be the best fit for a zoan they recently acquired. Though he would miss swimming a bit Tabor gladly accepted the gift and grew all the more dangerous in combat. Now all he often has to due is shift into his hybrid form to scare enemies into surrendering.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Tabor is a front line melee combatant. He uses a combination of sumo style attacks, a large hammer, and his zoan fruit to simply roll over most opponents. In any form he is easily capable of crushing someone under foot or by simply sitting on them. His massive size and tough skin make him hard to bring down so he will rush almost anyone regardles of how they're armed.

Weaponry
Gauntlets.
Two simple iron guantlets that cover his hands. They allow him to hit harder and block strikes from melee weapons without fear of damaging his hands.
Hammer
A large hammer constructed of iron. The weapon is five feet long with a massive iron head. It is flat on one side, but has a sharp spike at the other end. Fairly heavy in a normal persons hands, but for Tabor it is fairly light.

Items
Blacksmith tools
An arrangments of hammers, anvils, tongs, and etc used to create or repair his crews weapons and tools. Much are left on the ship, but he keeps a few on him in case he needs to fix something on the go.
Travel pack
A large backpack filled with items to survive out in the world. Includes; thirty feet of rope, flint, steel, sleeping bag, water bottle, compass, matches, spare clothes, first aid kit, flashlight, whistle, chalk, dried rations, and mittens.
Chain mail
A simple suit of sturdy chain mail armor forged by Tabor himself. It helps him resist attacks from blades and bullets easier. It covers his body from shoulder blades down to his writs, the down to cover his stomach.
Iron Helmet
A simple iron helmet that protects his noggin. Mostly covers the top of his head, but leaves the face exposed.

Beli: 80000

Advancement Points: 0
SD Earned: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stat Points: 32 (32 + 0)
  • Used for Stats: 32
  • Used for Fortune: 0
    • Strength: 12
    • Speed: 4
    • Stamina: 12
    • Accuracy: 4
    • Fortune: 8 (32 / 4)

Traits: 3 General, 1 Professional
GeneralSpecific Devil Fruit (3 Traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types.
ProfessionalForge Furnace (1 Trait) - After spending that much time welding weapons and having to put up with the extreme temperatures of the furnace, the character gains immunity to heat-based attacks similar to having an iron body. Any heat-based attack that wouldn’t damage iron won’t harm them.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Zou Zou no Mi Model African Elephant.
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: Allows the user to turn into an elephant or a hybrid form to boost their combat potential.


Techniques
Used/Total Regular Technique Points: 8/16 (8 * 2)
Used/Total Special Technique Points: 0/0

Techniques
"Bad." (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 4
Stats: N/A
Description: A simple open palm strike delivered by Tabor's massive hand
Hybrid Form (4)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Power: 0
Stats: +2 Str, +2 Sta
Description: Signature Skill

A hybrid form in which Tabor grows up to fourteen feet tall, grows tusks, a trunk, large ears, massive feet, and thick gray skin. His hair recedes making him seem just like an elephant that can walk on two legs. His hands are human tough just massive. In this form he weighs around ten thousand pounds.
Elephant form (4)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Power: 0
Stats: +2 Str, +1 Spe, +1 Sta
Description: This allows Tabor to turn into a bull elephant. He becomes massive and capable of dishing out a lot of damage and taking a good deal as well. He is fourteen feet tall and thirteen thousand pounds in this form.
"Desist." (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 4
Stats: N/A
Description: A basic bash with his massive hammer.


Development History
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This Character Template was created by the OPRP Character Builder v1.0.1.0
Calculations should be done correctly if not bugged or changed by Ancladar
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Notes:

At the very least put N/A or None under nickname. It looks better, same for Achievements.

Professions need to be formatted, and their effects need to be listed at the very least. Primary should have final

Clothes could use a better description. What color pants, is it just the same pair all the time? Does he wear shoes, socks, sandals?

Please add more information under combat. Do they fight with instinct, are they cautious, do they prefer to be at the front of the back of stay behind?

No items? Really? Not even a bag, rope, emergency kit, food or water? You can't think of anything this character might have besides their weapons an clothes?

What materials is the hammer made out of? Are the gauntlets basic or do they have an additional use/ special materials besides iron. I would like a description of each of these for clarification purposes.

Zoan forms should be "Self" under Range

Trait need to be formatted.

Achievement Points and SD Remaining should be at 0 if you have none.

Formatting Issues on Third Tech List

Are you sure you don't want any other attacks, you're just going to slap people and use zoan forms? Do you want any techs with that battle hammer of yours?
Edited by DarkEko13, Jun 21 2016, 04:02 PM.
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Sorry bout that. I just found the character builder and redid my sheet on there. However, it's not letting me copy and paste it onto here. I've made all the corrections in it. Sorry bout the hassle. Any ideas why it won't lemme copy it?
Edited by Ancladar, Jun 22 2016, 06:29 PM.
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I just wanted to point out that only Zou Zou, the one from the series that was Funkfreed and Zou Zou no mi, model: mammoth are the only two types of elephant zoan. Aside from the mythical one we have.

Primarily because there is not much difference between elephants to warrant different models. Unlike dogs or cats, for example. Just wanted to point that out before approval.

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Edited by Ancladar, Jun 27 2016, 07:59 PM.
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You need to edit your first post with the character sheet, not create another post with the character sheet. When people look at this page, they only look for the top post. It also makes this app needlessly long. Also, the second half of the app has some coding issues. It looks like your techs are stuck in the "Profession" part of the table.

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ItemEstimated Price
Gauntlet100,000 [50,000 per Gauntlet]
Hammer120,000
Total220,000

*This is estimated and another mod or admit may change the pricing during review*


Edited by DarkEko13, Jun 23 2016, 03:03 PM.
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It is still a coding error that needs to be fixed so that it has correct formatting for future uses. Trust me, when you start adding stuff to this the table becomes a coding disaster to figure out. It's best to fix it now rather then later.
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Edits made and I think the code was fixed. Added some stuff for brainstorming kinda happened. Shall I delete the second profile post I made?
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Heya. It'd probably be best to remove the second profile just to avoid any confusion.

You don't have enough money for all that armour, but I'll price everything and let you decide what you keep.

Gauntlets - Free
Large Hammer - 120k
Chain Mail - 220k
Steel Boots - 2M
Legs - 100k
Head - 80k.

If you state the Steel boots as iron instead they become 100k.

Remove anything you don't want to buy, and deduct any Beli you end up spending. Make sure to take note of it in your Gains/Losses section too please.

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Bad and Desist would have 4 power.
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Edits made!
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Elephant form should only be buffing by 4. Right now its 6.

Desists type would be Offensive.

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