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Kofuga Lumos; Scoop [Flagged] [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jun 4 2016, 10:07 PM (1,304 Views)
ChibiDaGod
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An electromagnetic field is a physical field produced by electrically charged objects. Kofuga has the necessary things needed to perform this and it should be possible at his current rank. His fuel source is electricity and it's not like he lacks the power for it. It's not just some simple punch that magically produces electricity. The generator in his arm is electrically charged and the generator is connected to his right arm, he throws a punch to discharge, releasing the electricity from the charged object - the generator, but it travels through the arm it's connected to, to exit - which then surrounds his body in a short area. It's not like i'm using "Shounen Science", he has the necessary tools and power, so I dont see why it would need to be Rank 30 without a valid explanation. I do understand something like this would not be possible if any other member used it.

For Shounen Science Electricity it would be R28 that in addition to the R8 aoe, so for the average person, without the necessary utensils, you would need a R36 tech to pull this off. But Kofuga is a Cyborg with electricity for fuel, rules say: "Adds the benefits of a single element to a technique. If created through practical means (ie Inventions, Matches etc), the minimum rank is Rank 14." In my case i'm using practical mean, so R22. If there is a reason why it is in the grounds of R30 even though I have everything needed to perform it, than I will remove it. I mean Dusk flagged it, so im assuming he read it and did not see a issue with it . :/
Edited by ChibiDaGod, Jul 1 2016, 07:01 PM.
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Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
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Bounty:20,000,000l
Beli:81,000,000
Earned SD:346
Crew:N/A
Current SL:Click

Accuracy:75
Speed:100
Stamina:60
Strength:60
Fortune:79
Focus:5

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Its a feat of supernatural nature to pull off with his current tools which pushes it into the R30s realm.

Giving your character application another review, the Basic Cyborg trait is not actually enough for the electricity shenanigans you are trying to pull. All of the following would require Advanced Cyborg; 'The arm can become supercharged if it was to be hit by an outside electrical force. This arm is also capable of harnessing the energy of the battery to do electrical base attack.'

You would also need to pay for those additional benefits too.
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Ahhhhh, this is true when you put it that way.

As for the "Basic Cyborg ", I thought that was what you were going to say., but that too is understandable. I wanna stay "Basic Cyborg" for character development, so this in not a big deal. I'll gladly get rid of the techniques since I to agree that I was milking my cyborg. I am now curious on what exactly I can do now. I still want to have electricity as my fuel, but considering how basic works how exactly would I be able to harness the electricity I have and use it combatively? Am I even able to harness this electricity to use it? Like, can I even do an Electrical Punch? Do I need to wait till I obtain "Advance Cyborg" to have any electrical base techniques?

I'm only asking all this for future reference, I don't wan't to have to bother anyone else about it. I find its best that I ask now while you are here, so when I make techniques in the future I don't have to contemplate if I'm able to do something.
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Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
Affiliation:Other
Bounty:20,000,000l
Beli:81,000,000
Earned SD:346
Crew:N/A
Current SL:Click

Accuracy:75
Speed:100
Stamina:60
Strength:60
Fortune:79
Focus:5

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I found the Shinra Tensei attack to be okay because it checks boxes effect-wise.

Basic elemental shenanigans like electric punch are okay.
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Ok so the only attack I have now is Chidori. I removed everything Shama and I talked about. The arm can no longer be charged by outside forces, I will wait till advance cyborg. Everything else should be in order.
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Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
Affiliation:Other
Bounty:20,000,000l
Beli:81,000,000
Earned SD:346
Crew:N/A
Current SL:Click

Accuracy:75
Speed:100
Stamina:60
Strength:60
Fortune:79
Focus:5

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What is your fuel source? If the implication was that it is electricity, it isn't. Make it some sort of food or drink or something goofy that makes sense in the realm of OP.
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Well, I'm not trying to make it something of silly nature as such. Is there an issue with it being electricity? I've seen another run on blood, which I found to be quite entertaining.. Idk how having a battery that runs of eletricity is just not gonna work, What if I make him run off gas, and the generator uses this gas to have its fans conduct electricity? I just don't wanna run of some stupid shit like juice. I do how my fule does not make sense in the realm of Op.
Edited by ChibiDaGod, Jul 12 2016, 06:28 AM.
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Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
Affiliation:Other
Bounty:20,000,000l
Beli:81,000,000
Earned SD:346
Crew:N/A
Current SL:Click

Accuracy:75
Speed:100
Stamina:60
Strength:60
Fortune:79
Focus:5

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It's been a wide spread realm that some manner of liquid is required as a fuel source, based off of how the current example of cyborgs in canon is Franky. Might I recommend something that isn't silly, such as Oil? That'd fit the theme of an actual machine along with the One Piece setting. Don't tie yourself down to something silly, there are plenty of serious characters within the universe, your ideas just need to conform with said universe.
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At the shoulder is fuel, the power core. This power core is motorized by Oil. The power core uses oil to propel its fans, so that when they rotate, the fans conduct electricity .

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Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
Affiliation:Other
Bounty:20,000,000l
Beli:81,000,000
Earned SD:346
Crew:N/A
Current SL:Click

Accuracy:75
Speed:100
Stamina:60
Strength:60
Fortune:79
Focus:5

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I remember reading over this before actually, and he's actually pretty cool. Cool tech too. Anyway everything looks pretty good.

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