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Kofuga Lumos; Scoop [Flagged] [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jun 4 2016, 10:07 PM (1,303 Views)
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Posted ImageName: Kofuga Lumos
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Age: 16
Gender: M
Race: Human
Affiliation: Marine
Rank (Commendations): Lieutenant (15)
Achievements:
Position: Division 3 Leader
Professions
Inventor An Inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build gadgets and battle engines if they have enough materials. Inventors gain the ability to create explosives that they may use in battle and the AoE of their explosive techniques will have the effect costs of the tier below with short AoE being free. Inventors have access to certain additional traits.

Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body.
Height: 5ft 5in
Weight: 125lbs
Hair: Long black and spiky hair
Eyes: Ruby Red
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PersonalityKofuga is a young, smart and talented individual, who is very mature for his age. In recent years he has come to see himself as someone who cannot fail. This is only due to the hardships he has faced in life that have made him stronger and they are the reasons he keeps moving forward. In a time before the military he had dreams to see the world and travel far beyond the Grand Line, but now his only goal is to bring every pirate to justice no matter their age. Every pirate is guilty and all should face trial if they deserve it. He only developed this strong hatred for pirates when Ivan - his father figure- died in the line of duty. He now believes justice is the absolute, there is no one above the law. Even if it was his comrade, he would bring them to justice. The law drives him and he does not associate with those who do not follow it. He finds the seven lords of the sea to be a joke and a spit in the face of justice. He will slay all of them because they are no more than any pirate. He will do whatever it takes to make sure the job is done. He is very stern and it's hard to actually see him smile or laugh. There is no time for games when there is so much crime in the world. He has pledged himself to D3 and will not rest till he has removed all pirates.

As hardcore as he is, he does enjoy life. For it is his marine duty that makes him feel like a man. He provides great support for those who work along side him. It's because chemistry makes a division great. He strongly believes that getting to know each of his peers is a way to strengthen the cooperation within the division. Although he can be too blunt and honest, turning many away. He was never really the Social type, but he tries to when needed because he truly wants his division to succeed in their mission purging the world of pirates. A rather large dream it is and he works hard every day to assure that it will one day become a reality.
Hometown and HistoryIsland Hidden In The South Blue

Kofuga hails from a small hidden island in the south blue. The island was peaceful, but feared the outside world so they hid themselves very well. In truth the island was very easy to find, but the village itself was not, for it was underground. The village had one entrance and one exit. To find the village you would have to climb inside the great hollow oak wood tree. his tree was located in the center of the island.

Once you climb down the inside of the tree, a whole new world came to light. The village was highly advanced and its people specialized in inventing things that would help move their civilization into the right direction. Oddly, Kofuga was not interested in this way of life. He had always heard stories of the outside world and wanted to go beyond the oak tree. Only a few have left and none returned. One being his father who left when Kofuga was just 12. His father encouraged him to explore the outside world. Because of this, Kofuga never did well with other, he was not the happy tight and was jealous of those who actually had a relationship with their father. He was angry, because he thought he would never know what it was like to be a man, so he was always hard on himself and failure was not an option.

Although those around him discouraged him because he only had one arm. He was born prematurely so he had no right arm. Many would bully him and make fun of him nearly driving him to the point of suicide. His mother never tried to stop him, it was only his dream of seeing the outside world that kept him alive and his drive to become a man. Eventually he mustered the courage to leave the oak wood. He began his travels alone and faced many issues. He had nothing but a small row boat, but one night a furious wave destroyed his small boat.

He awoke in a hospital and by his side was a muscular bald man with a twirly mustache. The man asked Kofuga who he was and he gladly shared everything with this man because he man had told him he was the one to save him from Neptune's grasp. Turns out the man's name was Captain Ivan, he was a marine. Kofuga had always heard stories about the marines and was in love with their heroics, they were like superheroes to him.

Ivan took kufuga under his wing and trained the boy personally so that he may be an outstanding soldier. Ivan was a great martial artist and Kofuga was a fast learner. Ivan assisted the boy and creating a right arm for himself that would assist him and combat. The schematics were all drawn by Kofuga and the arm was also smithed by him. Iva only gave advice on how it should look. Together they took on many pirates together, but what rubbed off onto Kofuga was Ivan's cruelty towards pirates and his stern ways of absolute justice. Ivan would do whatever it takes to catch a pirate, even if they were small time, Kofuga admired his ways and respected his drive. He wanted to be just like Ivan, so he followed in his footsteps.

Eventually Ivan would fall in the line of duty when taking on some strong pirates and Kofuga was not there to assist him, this moment would haunt him for the rest of his life. He became obsessed with tracking down the crew that Killed Ivan. This emotion strengthened his hate towards pirates because Ivan was like a father to him. A man teaching him the ways of life. Out of rage he pledge himself to D-3 and vowed to bring every pirate to justice. In his eyes none are innocent.
Arsenal
Equipment Material DescriptionPicture
Right Arm Of LumosIron
The arm is colored black and the fingertips are sharp much like blades. At the shoulder is fuel, the power core. This power core is motorized by Oil. The power core uses oil to propel its fans, so that when they rotate, the fans conduct electricity .This arm is also capable of harnessing the energy of the power core to do electrical base attack. Kofuga may uses a fuel charge of Oil to conduct a heightened amount of electricity, which then add more power behind his attacks. Additionally the arm has a Short sword (Katana) concealed inside only being 1 foot long. Only being the length of the forearm so that the arm can still bend without issues.
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Mask Of LumosIronAn invition smithed by kofuga. A fox like mask that Kofuga wears to shield his face. The mask act as a gas mask, so when wearing it his voice sounds different as if he had a voice changer and the eyes have night vision. Additionally the eyes have the same ability as the Pacifista. Being able to identify the target in the line of site to obtain their name and bounty.
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Beli:25,920,000
SD Earned:Stat Points:Advancement Points: SD Remaining:
9312500
  • Used for Stats: 105
  • Used for Fortune: 20
StrengthStaminaSpeedAccuracyFortune
2430213041 (38+3)
Profession Traits
Punch Mastery (1 Trait) - The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.
Cybertronic Genius (1 Trait) These inventors have studied their cybernetics especially well, and pay 20% less to upgrade their own Cyborg parts.
General Traits
Basic Cyborg (1 Trait)This is the most basic level of cyborg, and the most commonly encountered type in the blues. A Basic Cyborg begins with up to 3M Beli worth of modifications. Their bodies are made out of Iron and do not vary from their original size. They may have one concealed weapon per arm or leg, and one basic system per other appendage. Note that these weapons or systems are very basic.
Fate of the Emperor (3 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated) to your fortune score.
Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: n/a
Devil Fruit Type: n/a
Devil Fruit Ability: n/a
Combative
Combat: Kofuga is an highly skilled fighter, utilzing his arms to deliver relentless and accurate strikes to detain his opponent. The majority of his strikes rely on his cybernetic limb, but one should not only focus on that because he use will use his Short Sword in his free hand if need be. His most dangerous attacks come from his right hand, so that would be his weak spot also. He stays completely aware of his target actions and surroundings. In the middle of combat, he likes to change the course of his strike when his opponent reacts so that he can hit them where they are open. When using his short sword he holds it in reverse with his hand still gripping the hilt. He uses the short sword for counters or for quick techniques.


Regular Technique Points: 82
Used Regular Technique Points: 20
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points:0


  • Fuel Charge Technique Symbol: (*)
  • Mastery Technique Symbol: (*)
  • Technique Bonus Rank Color: (*)


Techniques
OverCharge: Chidori (20)*24
Type: Offensive
Range: Self
Power: 16
Stats:
Description: The generator in Kofugas right arm spins rapidly and electricity would then surges through his right arm and condenses around his palm. He than may throw a punch to pierce through his foe. (R14 Elemental) (R8 Piercing)
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Gains & Losses
LinkGains/LossesDate
Akusa Sazayla Scoop+61SD6/5/16
Dark Hand Capture+10 Commendation 8/9/2016
Oprp Bday 8+32 sd 8mil beli 9/29/2016

Akusa Sazayla G's & L's

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Edited by ChibiDaGod, Oct 14 2016, 07:53 PM.
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Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
Affiliation:Other
Bounty:20,000,000l
Beli:81,000,000
Earned SD:346
Crew:N/A
Current SL:Click

Accuracy:75
Speed:100
Stamina:60
Strength:60
Fortune:79
Focus:5

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Cyborg is not a race. Kofuga seems to be a human, so denote his race as Human.

16 years old is a bit too young to be so stern and exacting in nature, I think. It doesn't exactly make sense, that is.

Kofuga's history doesn't explain where he got his sternness and desire to imprison all pirates from. Those are very powerful emotions, and they logically need powerful catalysts.

You can't have Rank 14 techs just yet. The maximum rank your techs can be is half of your Fortune, which would make the max rank 10. That would give you a +6 Speed bonus instead of +8.

Same with OverCharge: Sokatsui. Just change the rank from 14 to 10.

Akusa, the character you scooped from, has (looking from Gains and Losses) 12,8 million beli. With the starter character bonus, that makes only 13,050 million beli. Not 15 mill.
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  • LOL, tbh i thought Cyborg was a race because it was under Racial Traits , thankyou. (Fixed)

  • Dude, i'm trying to be every shounen protagonist. 16, talented and smart. Don't destroy my dreams..this in One Piece..what is realistic? There is a 9 y/o kid trying to enter the marines on this site rn lol. No one said anything about it. (Pending)

  • I added many daddy issues and my only father figure died to the hands of a pirate and I could not stop it. A few blah blah blahs and bam. (Fixed)



  • No disrespect, but yes I can have rank 14 techs and this is why.

    "Cyborgs also have a specific type of fuel they consume, acting as a technique enriching resource. Similar to Franky's cola system, using a fuel empowered technique will use up a charge, or slot, of fuel. A single charge of fuel increases a technique rank by 4, with the advanced and new world cyborgs able to stack these charges. Below is a mini table to show the scaling.

cyborg teirfuel slotsmax chargetech rank boost
Basic Cyborg (Tier 1)314


Techniques that use fuel either exist as an individual empowered technique or branch from a standard cyborg technique. They require approval like any other technique before use, though the fuel charge acts as an artificial boost to technique ranks. In cases where the fuel empowered technique branches from a standard cyborg technique, they follow normal branch rules (similar technique but stronger/faster/better).

Meaning techs with "Overcharge" are me using a fuel charge. They have there own table because they are techniques I only plan to use when using a fuel charge. They are there own individual thing. (Fixed)



  • I read in the rules that Beli standardization work off sd, but i did do m math wrong. I calculated as if i was going to the GL. So if the rules say it runs off of sd than it would work like so; 54*250,000+500,000= 14 mil (Fixed)

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    Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
    Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
    Affiliation:Other
    Bounty:20,000,000l
    Beli:81,000,000
    Earned SD:346
    Crew:N/A
    Current SL:Click

    Accuracy:75
    Speed:100
    Stamina:60
    Strength:60
    Fortune:79
    Focus:5

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    Good to know about the fuel - legitimately had no idea.

    Being 16, talented and smart might be something others have done on this site, yeah. This criticism is not standard, however, it depends on the guy reviewing the app. But now you are describing him as smart and simple at the same time - smart here and simple in the personality section. That needs to be fixed.
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    • Contradicting personality: (fixed)


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    Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
    Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
    Affiliation:Other
    Bounty:20,000,000l
    Beli:81,000,000
    Earned SD:346
    Crew:N/A
    Current SL:Click

    Accuracy:75
    Speed:100
    Stamina:60
    Strength:60
    Fortune:79
    Focus:5

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    All seems to be in order.
    Edited by InvadingAlex, Jun 7 2016, 03:14 AM.
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    Topic is flagged for approval.
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    Mask of Lumos will cost you 80,000 Beli to act as armor, Thermal vision however is about 56 Mil Beli, and identification is flavor.

    Beli is not calculated correctly. For a scoop, beli is equivalent to 500,000 for starting + SD of or less 50 x 250,000 + Any SD over 50 x 500,000. You do have 15 Mil Beli.

    OverCharge Blood Lightning lacks the appropriate effects, (Elemental Damage 14, Full Body 10) and as such means the power should equal 4.

    OverCharge Sokatsui has incorrect effects, they should be (Elemental Damage 14, Short Range 4) and as such the power should equal 10. If you want the tech to paralyze enemies you would need to add the effect (Disables 14), however you can't put that on this tech because there's not enough power. So please remove the details about paralysis.

    Counter, having one general effect should have a power of 10
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    Money added and subtracted (fixed)

    Techniques (fixed)

    -My bad, looking around on here I found out that you can do certain things earlier than most if you have a way to do so. My element was at rank 8 {which is the lowest it could be from what I've seen} because of this. I thought I did not have to use 14 because I have a way to obtain it faster than most since I run off of it. But okay

    Edited by ChibiDaGod, Jun 13 2016, 01:08 PM.
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    Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
    Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
    Affiliation:Other
    Bounty:20,000,000l
    Beli:81,000,000
    Earned SD:346
    Crew:N/A
    Current SL:Click

    Accuracy:75
    Speed:100
    Stamina:60
    Strength:60
    Fortune:79
    Focus:5

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    Earlier In Cbox
    Mockday: Quick reminder tho, even if you're probably changing it. Fuel techs don't count as buffs.

    Mockday: Nor can mastery, or cyborg fuel affect personal buffs.

    Mockday: Anywho, I'm off for now.


    I fixed this I no longer have a buff. (Fixed)

    After reviewing my own previous sheet Of Akusa, I noticed that i did not add the Oprp birthday Sd. So I did. I commented on the seventh page of the oprp birthday thread on october 2nd. Changes have been added to represent that. (Fixed)

    Beli has been edited following the format Linxwire used and I still subtracted the 80,000 from the mask
    + SD of or less 50 x 250,000 + Any SD over 50 x 500,000 = (18,000,000)

    18mil - 80thou = 17,920,000 (Fixed)
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    Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
    Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
    Affiliation:Other
    Bounty:20,000,000l
    Beli:81,000,000
    Earned SD:346
    Crew:N/A
    Current SL:Click

    Accuracy:75
    Speed:100
    Stamina:60
    Strength:60
    Fortune:79
    Focus:5

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    OverCharge: Blood Lightning - I consider shocking yourself and being fine but others are hurt to be breaching into the realm of Diable Jambe - which is Rank 28 territory. Plus the maths is wrong 14 + 10 =/= 18.

    OverCharge: Sokatsui - A 'large beam' (assuming significant width) would also require some AoE costs.

    Fury - 8 + 8 =/= 11.

    You need to list all your sources from the scooped character in this app too.
    Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

    Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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    Techs (Fixed)

    Switched profession for Martial Artist, this was so I can get Mastery with my cyborg techs to make them better.

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    Name:Shugo "Needle Mouth" Nagasaki
    Profession:Assassin/Weapon Specalist
    Affiliation:Other
    Bounty:20,000,000l
    Beli:81,000,000
    Earned SD:346
    Crew:N/A
    Current SL:Click

    Accuracy:75
    Speed:100
    Stamina:60
    Strength:60
    Fortune:79
    Focus:5

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    Creating a protective electric magnetic sphere from a punch is definitely in the realms of Rank 30s...
    Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

    Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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