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Basic Character Information Name: Specimen 4476 Nickname: Dmitri, The Virulent, 'Ratty' Age: 9 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Marines Rank (Commendations): Seaman Recruit (0) Achievements: He's still alive Profession: Doctor: A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. Doctors have the ability to create drugs and toxins that can buff allies or debuff enemies.
-Marksman: The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions.
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Physical Appearance Height: 4' even Weight: 50lbs Hair: Brown, scraggly and unkempt Eyes: black and beady, have a 'glazed over' look to them Clothing/Accessories: 'Dmitri' wears a set of scrubs and a rough hewn, greasy looking shawl that covers most of his body, unable to fully leave his 'hybrid' state, he tends to let his long worm like tail drag behind himself, which often leaves a mess from the sores and pustules that tend to adorn him. On mission he tends to wear a full body garbing, including special filtration masks, as much for his protection, as that of others. General Appearance: Short in stature due to being a 'child' dwarfing from a unique mutation of his immune system, and his need to stay in a hybridized or fully transformed state with his devil fruit, the small bipedal rat tends to look greasy or wet, tending to have a myriad of exposed and seeping or oozing sores. He tends to keep most of them covered but due to more constantly forming and opening he can't keep them all wrapped and bandaged up, and while he is infected, it's only contagious through blood (thankfully) making him fairly safe to be around, if you don't mind the smell and the look of the oozing sores and the odd, twitchy movements he sometimes makes. His tail, similar to the rest of him, has sores on it, however it usually is drug behind him, leaving a slightly oozy trail, when standing he'll tend to curl it around his own waist and tends to use it to grip onto things enough to balance himself but it lacks the grip or strength to hold his weight and lacks fine motor control which keeps him for using it to actually pick things up or manipulate them beyond just crudely pulling at them or something similar.
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The Character Personality: Rather morbid and grim, he's grown accustomed to death and what it feels to be dieing from a very young age. Tending to be rather level headed if ahnialistic, he can get some what more excitable when he finds a new 'toy' to play with, just don't ask about the screams from his personal quarters when he has one such new toy.
Hometown: Karakura Island: Experimental Medical Facility #98z32; Codename: Life Font. Birthplace: Namakura Island in the Grand Line History: Loading Journal Archives Please select Archive ->Specimen 4476 selected Loading first entry, please use the up and down arrows to scroll up and down, and the left and right arrows to changed journal entry days. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 1 Date: March, 27th -They brought me a new infected specimen today, it is a human male. Age of the specimen, is approximately four years since birth. It is 3'5" tall, weighs 23.42 lbs. It is oddly, calm, and aware of it's current situation despite the difficulty it exhibits with speaking. We have taken three vials of blood, appearance is normal, it's being sent of for full screening and examination by a hematologist. We are feeding it a standard dosage of class one antiviral and antibacterials.
Current symptoms -Moderate Fever -Dizziness -Nausea ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 2 Date: March 28th -The specimens condition is notably worse today. It doesn't mention that it is in pain, this could be an indicator that it is incapable of feeling pain, or that this illness could be numbing the pain receptors. I took more blood samples today, and....compared to yesterday, you'd think this was a joke. The color has gone from the fairly standard crimson to a dark orangish red and exhibits small bits of pocketed coagulation giving the blood a slightly 'chunky' appearance. I'm sending two of these new vials over to the hematologist for immediate analysis and starting to try lab rat infections to test for cross-species transference, and to see if they develop antibodies to them if that is indeed the case.
Current Symptoms -Anomalous Blood (denoted above) -Fever, up half a degree from the previous day -Dizziness -Flushed skin around the joints -Unpleasant 'aroma' in the room. This was detectable through surgical masks, from now on, class 1 biohazard gear will be used during examinations -Pupils are dialated, edges of the eyes seem 'glazed over' loosing their normal liquid sheen - Specimen said it's hungry, and seems to have no trouble keeping down food, nausea seems to have worn off, perhaps that was a side effect of the medications on day one
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 3 Date: March 29th -No significant change today, for future entries, I will only put them when notable changes in physical symptoms start, haven't been able to identify the culprit bacterium or virus in his blood as of yet, there are more than I had expected. The specimen is still oddly calm in it's quarantine chamber. It has started asking what I'm doing and for things to do. Fever seems to have stabilized at 102.4 degrees.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 4 Date: April 3rd -Analysis for the first samples I sent off came back today, it seems that the pathogens in its blood were not interacting with his blood or white blood cells and the like. Almost like its immune system was passively allowing the bacteria in. Its fever has also gone down slightly, but the discoloration around the joints has spread over most of its body, and it doesn't seem to be sleeping much. I gave it some old medical text books to keep it entertained with reading, and shockingly it has already finished the first of the lot, even now it's reading. I've also got a number of new sample types to study, there was a bright yellow mucus leaking from its nose, and some pustules formed on its neck that I drained and cleaned to get samples from.
Current Symptoms -Fever, seems to be fading, perhaps another reaction to the medications we tried? -Skin discoloration, potentially a rash -Pustules -Yellow mucal drainage from sinus cavity -Insomnia -Increased apatite ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 5 Date: April 10th -Incredible, simply incredible, the specimen is somehow still alive and conscious, and with some help I was able to confirm, it isn't sleeping. It has started ranting some, and showing clear signs of sleep deprivation, I will be sedating it to get it to sleep tonite, a specimen with this unique of an immune system is invaluable for research. Its blood has returned to normal, no longer having the anomalous appearance, although I've noted bacterial 'clusters' that seem to be forming around new bacterium I've introduced into the samples I've taken, almost like the bacterium inside it are acting like a form of immune system, perhaps its more passive immune system causes a more symbiotic relationship with some of the less deadly infections, allowing them to live inside it, which if that's the case lead to some major break through. The pustules have become more of abscesses that are in a number of areas over its body and constantly seep and ooze out puss. It has complained about it's dislike of the feeling, but that it doesn't hurt until I start scraping them out.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Final Entry Entry 6 Date: April 11th -Damnit, all this work, ruined, all because some one didn't check what they mixed into its food. It is still covered in sores, and is still reading every book I allow it too, but now...now...how can one properly use a specimen for medical research when it's no longer the 'blank slate' it once was. Some idiot cook must have just dumped all the fruit into a blender or something, as when I arrived this morning after its meal time, it wasn't fully human any more, looking like a walking, sore covered, rat. When I told it to go back to its normal form, it simply replied with a snarky comment about how it didn't feel as gross in this new form, like it did in its human form. Sadly with Zoans exposure to sea prism doesn't force reversion of forms, instead it locks them in their current form. Damn it, this is just my luck, I finally get a specimen that should let me make a name for myself and some buffoon ruins my chances, tomorrow I will return it to marine custody for returning to its parents, none of the illnesses it had in it seemed fatal while I was examining them over the past few weeks. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sitting there reading through the journal entries a table across from a Chief Petty Officer, 'Dmitri' frowns, the ratkin of a 'child' looking across at the man "I have no home, no family to go back too, no one would want this as kin, I am an it, not even a person according to this, if that is the case then I wish to stay on a ship. Perhaps find out what the point of continued existance is. I've felt all these terrible things, in such a short time, as you've read. Will putting me through more of the same make the 'justice' of the marines right. What about my removal from the home I had originally to begin with. Was that in the sake of 'justice' as well? What exactly is this 'justice' I see emblazoned on the back of officers, does it truly mean anything other than 'this gives us free reign to do as we wish' or does it mean something else?" he'd ask as he slowly stands up "So will it be letting me stay upon a ship and teach me about what justice truly means to the marines, or will you abandon some one who has medical knowledge in a place with no way to do anything and prove that marine justice is really a 'rule of strength' situation?" he says in a flat level tone, his glazed over eyes staring deep into the eyes of the Officer
"Well...shit kid if you put it like that I don't have a choice do I...welcome to the core" and with that simple exchanged his life would finally start being something other than a Specimen.
Abilities and Possessions Combat: 'Dmitri' does not like close range fighting, instead he utilizes a strange pneumatic long rifle to ping his targets from long range. Often times he'll mix various illnesses into the pellets to have more of an effect with minimal effort on his part. Weaponry: Pneumatic Long Rifle (Iron tier, crank charge, single shot only) Items:
- Combat gear (No armor value, has a built in gas mask)
- Field Dressing Kit (Doctor tools)
- Sample Kit (Contains various flasks, vials and such)
- Sack of 'scraps' (random bits of food)
Beli: 6,000,000 SD Earned: 11 Stat Points: 43 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 43
- Used for Stats: 43
- Used for Fortune: 0
- Strength: 7
- Speed: 11
- Stamina: 5
- Accuracy: 20
- Fortune: 10
Traits: Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits) Nezumi Nezumi no Mi (Rat Rat Fruit) Medical Malpractice (1 trait(Proffession)) Part of knowing what is required to keep somebody healthy is knowing what will cause others to become unhealthy. Doctors who put this knowledge to practical use may make especially potent poisons. They gain special Technique Points which can only be used on toxins that harm or debuff, of the amount of half their fortune.
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Devil Fruit Name: Nezumi Nezumi no Mi (Rat Rat Fruit) Devil Fruit Type: Zoan Devil Fruit Ability: Transormation into a rat or hybrid states
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 8 Special Technique Points: 4 Used Special Technique Points: 4
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Standard Form (Rank number 4, free) Type: Zoan Transformation Range:N/A Power:N/A Stats:+2 Speed, +2 Accuracy Cost: 0 (Free 'signiture' form) Rank: 4
| Description: Transform into a mostly rat like state, down to the tail, fur and head shape, but retaining enough of the human form to remain bipedal and articulate, he's still covered in erratic and seeping sores and tends to leave a wet 'trail' behind himself from dragging his tail on the ground. He lets of a 'sick' smelling aroma and what fur he does have is more on the scragly side and a mottled white and brown color. The skin on his hands/feet/tail are mostly pink, and he has a bit of a slouch to his stance, keeping him from standing his full four feet in height.
| Rat Form (Rank 4, first four free) Type: Zoan Transformation Range:N/A Power:N/A Stats: +4 Speed Cost: 0 (First four ranks free) Rank: 4
| Description: Transform fully into a rat, be one with your rodent self, eat some cheese, squeeze through impossible places. In this form his significantly smaller than he normally is, he does however, still have the seeping sores and lacks bandages to properly cover them, so they drip and ooze more notably. Similar to his 'standard' form, the fur that covers him is scraggly and a mottled mixture of white and brown, and much like a rat he can fit through surprising spaces, and the seeping wounds do help with this by acting like a lubricant, although, it leaves a clear trail of his passing
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Class 1 Virus Type:Supportive Range:Melee Power:4 Stats:N/A Cost: 4 points (special) Rank: 4
| Description: 'Dmitri' coats a weapon or projectile with a fast acting, short lived virus that rapidly destroys cells around the site of the injury, dealing this techniques power as damage
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Long Shot Type: Offensive Range: Short Power: 0 Cost:4 points Rank:4
| Description: 'Dmitri' takes aim with his Pneumatic Long Rifle, firing an accurate shot, even if it lacks stopping power on it's own.
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Class 1 Amoeba Type: Supportive Range: Melee Power:0 Stats:+1 Accuracy, +1 Speed Cost:4 points Rank:4
| Description:By utilizing one of the bacterial strains that tends to inhabit his eyes, Dmitri has synthesized a 'pill' form of it that bolsters the imbibers eyesight and reaction time slightly. Lasts 3 rounds.
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Development History Gains/Losses: Gained 5,500,000 Beli, 11 SD, and +3 Commendations from this storyline Edit Log:
"Edit Log" Updated Attribues gained by SL grading (even if a year late) 11/11/2017 at 2318 GMT-6
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Andrena Ferox • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Apiarist (Bee themed inventor) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 13,000,000 • Location: North Blue: Aokuchi Island
Olenoe the Milkmaiden • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Weapon Specialist(Axe), Lumberjack (Secondary) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Swift Breeze - South Blue
Specimen 4476: Dmitri • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Doctor (primary), Marksman (secondary) • Crew: N/A currently • Rank & Comendations: Seaman Recruit • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: None specified
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♦ Gigasheep
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May 21 2016, 09:30 AM
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I'm actually really liking this character. I like the log type thing as part of his history. I'm still probably going to need a hometown though, sorry.
State Medical Malpractice is 1 trait please.
Could you give a little bit of description to the appearance of your zoan forms please.
Cost is sometimes different to the rank of the technique. Could you add the rank to all techniques, like done with the zoan forms.
The rest looks good.
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The Characters Samson Hale Samson Hale • Herb Doctor • Martial Artist/Doctor • Beast Blood Pirates • Bounty: 100,000,000 • SD Earned: 531 • Beli: 7,500,000 • Location: Birka, Sky Islands • Colour: #41A317 Cynthia Ciou Cynthia Ciou • Forensic Pathologist • Bounty: 10,000,000 • Colour: #ff6699 Scarlett Scarlett • Investigator • Marksman/Inventor • N/A • Commendations: 50 • SD Earned: 211 • Beli: 45,750,000 • Location: Cactus Island, Route Three • Colour: #ff6a80 Kid Nathaniel Tennante Kid Nathaniel Tennante • First Mate • Inventor/Chef/Marksman/Weapons Specialist/Thief/Smith • The Eclipse Pirates • Bounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 270 • Beli: 13,300,000 • Location: Boin Archipelago, Route One • Colour: #d2691e Yumi Mirai Raine Nimia Raine Nimia • Rage Machine • Entertainer/Martial Artist/Weapons Specialist/Carpenter • The Constellar Pirates • Bounty: 13,500,000 • SD Earned: 135 • Beli: 30,750,000 • Location: Cretakari Island, Route Three • Colour: #808080 Mae Nimia Wynter Feria Brycen Watts Brycen Watts • Doctor • Merchant/Doctor/Weapons Specialist/Martial Artist/Carpenter • The Cream Pirates • Bounty: 21,000,000 • SD Earned: 338 • Beli: 12,150,000 • Location: Iron Knife Island, Route One • Colour: #4B0082
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May 21 2016, 02:49 PM
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ah thanks, guess I missed some things, I'll probably put hometown as [Redacted] and put a facility number though, it fits the character, and I'd put the 'hybrid' form desc in standard, I'll move that down as well
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Andrena Ferox • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Apiarist (Bee themed inventor) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 13,000,000 • Location: North Blue: Aokuchi Island
Olenoe the Milkmaiden • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Weapon Specialist(Axe), Lumberjack (Secondary) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Swift Breeze - South Blue
Specimen 4476: Dmitri • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Doctor (primary), Marksman (secondary) • Crew: N/A currently • Rank & Comendations: Seaman Recruit • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: None specified
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May 22 2016, 12:42 AM
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Techs still need their rank listed, not just cost.
Example | Viral Plague Tree |
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Class 1 Virus 4 Type:Supportive Range:Melee Power:4 Stats:N/A Cost: 4 points (special) Rank: 4
| Description: 'Dmitri' coats a weapon or projectile with a fast acting, short lived virus that rapidly destroys cells around the site of the injury, dealing this techniques power as damage the 'round' after the boosted attack hits
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Long Shot 4 Type: Offensive Range: Medium Power:0 Cost:4 points
| Description: 'Dmitri' takes aim with his Pneumatic Long Rifle, firing an accurate long ranged shot, even if it lacks stopping power on it's own.
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Class 1 Ameba 4 Type: Supportive Range: Melee Power:0 Stats:+2 Accurace, +2 Speed Cost:4 points
| Description:By utilizing one of the bacterial strains that tends to inhabit his eyes, Dmitri has synthesized a 'pill' form of it that bolsters the imbibers eyesight and reaction time slightly
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The rest looks good though.
Topic is flagged for approval.
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The Characters Samson Hale Samson Hale • Herb Doctor • Martial Artist/Doctor • Beast Blood Pirates • Bounty: 100,000,000 • SD Earned: 531 • Beli: 7,500,000 • Location: Birka, Sky Islands • Colour: #41A317 Cynthia Ciou Cynthia Ciou • Forensic Pathologist • Bounty: 10,000,000 • Colour: #ff6699 Scarlett Scarlett • Investigator • Marksman/Inventor • N/A • Commendations: 50 • SD Earned: 211 • Beli: 45,750,000 • Location: Cactus Island, Route Three • Colour: #ff6a80 Kid Nathaniel Tennante Kid Nathaniel Tennante • First Mate • Inventor/Chef/Marksman/Weapons Specialist/Thief/Smith • The Eclipse Pirates • Bounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 270 • Beli: 13,300,000 • Location: Boin Archipelago, Route One • Colour: #d2691e Yumi Mirai Raine Nimia Raine Nimia • Rage Machine • Entertainer/Martial Artist/Weapons Specialist/Carpenter • The Constellar Pirates • Bounty: 13,500,000 • SD Earned: 135 • Beli: 30,750,000 • Location: Cretakari Island, Route Three • Colour: #808080 Mae Nimia Wynter Feria Brycen Watts Brycen Watts • Doctor • Merchant/Doctor/Weapons Specialist/Martial Artist/Carpenter • The Cream Pirates • Bounty: 21,000,000 • SD Earned: 338 • Beli: 12,150,000 • Location: Iron Knife Island, Route One • Colour: #4B0082
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yep, just derped a bit XD
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Andrena Ferox • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Apiarist (Bee themed inventor) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 13,000,000 • Location: North Blue: Aokuchi Island
Olenoe the Milkmaiden • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Weapon Specialist(Axe), Lumberjack (Secondary) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Swift Breeze - South Blue
Specimen 4476: Dmitri • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Doctor (primary), Marksman (secondary) • Crew: N/A currently • Rank & Comendations: Seaman Recruit • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: None specified
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For OOC purposes, you need to list the home island/birthplace. To avoid any later origin reveal hijinks that would not be approved.
I'd consider a 'Delay' effect to have a similar set up to Duration Damage, certainly not a low tier general effect.
A doctor buff at Ranks 1 to 13 is only 60% of Technique Rank, not 100%. Duration 3 rounds.
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot Rockets • Bounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island
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May 26 2016, 09:10 AM
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For OOC purposes, you need to list the home island/birthplace. To avoid any later origin reveal hijinks that would not be approved.
I'd consider a 'Delay' effect to have a similar set up to Duration Damage, certainly not a low tier general effect.
A doctor buff at Ranks 1 to 13 is only 60% of Technique Rank, not 100%. Duration 3 rounds. There wouldn't be any origin reveal hijinks, but okay, fine
It's not a duration, it just hits once, that's it
Okay, so doctor buffs work unlike other buffs, and have an initial and ongoing ae cost, while being weaker
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Andrena Ferox • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Apiarist (Bee themed inventor) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 13,000,000 • Location: North Blue: Aokuchi Island
Olenoe the Milkmaiden • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Weapon Specialist(Axe), Lumberjack (Secondary) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Swift Breeze - South Blue
Specimen 4476: Dmitri • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Doctor (primary), Marksman (secondary) • Crew: N/A currently • Rank & Comendations: Seaman Recruit • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: None specified
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Since you're not a marksman primary, you can't take medium range at your current rank. So, change the range of Long Shot to short and the wording of the technique description to reflect that please.
After that's been done, I think this can be approved.
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Characters Mariead 'Forehead' Mockday, the Frontosa Fishman 'I guess victory slipped from your grasp, eh?' Mariead Mockday • Affiliation: Pirate • Crew: Brofist (former) Raijin (former) • Position: Shipwright, 'Curiousity' • Profession: Sleek Woman / Ship-Designer / Freaky-Fishperson • Bounty:  50,000,000 • SD Earned: 290 • Location: Red Line, Fishman Island • Hanada Hakamori, the Legendary Taunt 'Underestimating me is a surefire way to get hurt!' Hanada Hakamori • Affiliation: Other • Crew: wandering with cherry blossom • • Profession: Chef / Weapon Specialist • Threat: 5.0 • SD Earned: 51 • Location: Somewhere • Wiltrude Famino, the Criminal Upper 'Well now, let's see if we can't do something about my boredom.' Wiltrude Famino • Affiliation: Criminal • Crew: n/a • Position: n/a • Profession: Jao Kun Dōdo / Long-Leg Tribesman • • Bounty:  10,000,000 • SD Earned: 52 • Location: East Blue •
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Could have sworn you didn't have to take a profession as primary to get the perks for it like that, that was my understanding after a good bit of chatting with people about it in c-box, but if that's not the case and a profession has to be primary to get the perks of it, you may need to let some other people know as there seem to be varying camps on it (particularly with prof traits)
Also, would that mean it would have power now? The way I'd originally done it is sacrificing power for range so at medium to really do anything he'd have to prep the round with his 'poison' before firing it
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Andrena Ferox • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Apiarist (Bee themed inventor) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 13,000,000 • Location: North Blue: Aokuchi Island
Olenoe the Milkmaiden • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Weapon Specialist(Axe), Lumberjack (Secondary) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Swift Breeze - South Blue
Specimen 4476: Dmitri • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Doctor (primary), Marksman (secondary) • Crew: N/A currently • Rank & Comendations: Seaman Recruit • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: None specified
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Jun 5 2016, 02:44 AM
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There can't really be different opinions on a rule that's set in stone, I'd say. The marksman bonus (so the italicized part in the profession description) is what you get if you take it as a primary, othewise you only get access to the traits for the most part.
That's why you're not getting the discounted range and it would still be at 0 power because range costs power and short range is valued at 4 without the bonus. For example, the primary bonus would give you short range for free because of the discount and medium range at the same price as short range.
On another note, for the sake of consistency, it'd be best to change the 'long ranged shot' portion in that tech's description to maybe just 'ranged shot' or 'short ranged shot' to better reflect that,
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Characters Mariead 'Forehead' Mockday, the Frontosa Fishman 'I guess victory slipped from your grasp, eh?' Mariead Mockday • Affiliation: Pirate • Crew: Brofist (former) Raijin (former) • Position: Shipwright, 'Curiousity' • Profession: Sleek Woman / Ship-Designer / Freaky-Fishperson • Bounty:  50,000,000 • SD Earned: 290 • Location: Red Line, Fishman Island • Hanada Hakamori, the Legendary Taunt 'Underestimating me is a surefire way to get hurt!' Hanada Hakamori • Affiliation: Other • Crew: wandering with cherry blossom • • Profession: Chef / Weapon Specialist • Threat: 5.0 • SD Earned: 51 • Location: Somewhere • Wiltrude Famino, the Criminal Upper 'Well now, let's see if we can't do something about my boredom.' Wiltrude Famino • Affiliation: Criminal • Crew: n/a • Position: n/a • Profession: Jao Kun Dōdo / Long-Leg Tribesman • • Bounty:  10,000,000 • SD Earned: 52 • Location: East Blue •
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Jun 5 2016, 10:59 AM
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Andrena Ferox • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Apiarist (Bee themed inventor) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 13,000,000 • Location: North Blue: Aokuchi Island
Olenoe the Milkmaiden • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Weapon Specialist(Axe), Lumberjack (Secondary) • Crew (Currently N/A) • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: Swift Breeze - South Blue
Specimen 4476: Dmitri • Crew Position: N/A • Profession Name: Doctor (primary), Marksman (secondary) • Crew: N/A currently • Rank & Comendations: Seaman Recruit • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: None specified
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Jun 12 2016, 02:37 PM
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[-----] Account Name: Hivekeeper Basic Character Information Name: Specimen 4476 Nickname: Dmitri, The Virulent, 'Ratty' Age: 9 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Marines Rank (Commendations): Seaman Recruit (0) Achievements: He's still alive Profession:Doctor: A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. Doctors have the ability to create drugs and toxins that can buff allies or debuff enemies.-Marksman: The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. Position: Physical Appearance Height: 4' even Weight: 50lbs Hair: Brown, scraggly and unkempt Eyes: black and beady, have a 'glazed over' look to them Clothing/Accessories: 'Dmitri' wears a set of scrubs and a rough hewn, greasy looking shawl that covers most of his body, unable to fully leave his 'hybrid' state, he tends to let his long worm like tail drag behind himself, which often leaves a mess from the sores and pustules that tend to adorn him. On mission he tends to wear a full body garbing, including special filtration masks, as much for his protection, as that of others. General Appearance: Short in stature due to being a 'child' dwarfing from a unique mutation of his immune system, and his need to stay in a hybridized or fully transformed state with his devil fruit, the small bipedal rat tends to look greasy or wet, tending to have a myriad of exposed and seeping or oozing sores. He tends to keep most of them covered but due to more constantly forming and opening he can't keep them all wrapped and bandaged up, and while he is infected, it's only contagious through blood (thankfully) making him fairly safe to be around, if you don't mind the smell and the look of the oozing sores and the odd, twitchy movements he sometimes makes. His tail, similar to the rest of him, has sores on it, however it usually is drug behind him, leaving a slightly oozy trail, when standing he'll tend to curl it around his own waist and tends to use it to grip onto things enough to balance himself but it lacks the grip or strength to hold his weight and lacks fine motor control which keeps him for using it to actually pick things up or manipulate them beyond just crudely pulling at them or something similar. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Rather morbid and grim, he's grown accustomed to death and what it feels to be dieing from a very young age. Tending to be rather level headed if ahnialistic, he can get some what more excitable when he finds a new 'toy' to play with, just don't ask about the screams from his personal quarters when he has one such new toy. Hometown: Karakura Island: Experimental Medical Facility #98z32; Codename: Life Font. Birthplace: Namakura Island in the Grand Line History: Loading Journal Archives Please select Archive ->Specimen 4476 selected Loading first entry, please use the up and down arrows to scroll up and down, and the left and right arrows to changed journal entry days. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 1 Date: March, 27th -They brought me a new infected specimen today, it is a human male. Age of the specimen, is approximately four years since birth. It is 3'5" tall, weighs 23.42 lbs. It is oddly, calm, and aware of it's current situation despite the difficulty it exhibits with speaking. We have taken three vials of blood, appearance is normal, it's being sent of for full screening and examination by a hematologist. We are feeding it a standard dosage of class one antiviral and antibacterials. Current symptoms -Moderate Fever -Dizziness -Nausea ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 2 Date: March 28th -The specimens condition is notably worse today. It doesn't mention that it is in pain, this could be an indicator that it is incapable of feeling pain, or that this illness could be numbing the pain receptors. I took more blood samples today, and....compared to yesterday, you'd think this was a joke. The color has gone from the fairly standard crimson to a dark orangish red and exhibits small bits of pocketed coagulation giving the blood a slightly 'chunky' appearance. I'm sending two of these new vials over to the hematologist for immediate analysis and starting to try lab rat infections to test for cross-species transference, and to see if they develop antibodies to them if that is indeed the case. Current Symptoms -Anomalous Blood (denoted above) -Fever, up half a degree from the previous day -Dizziness -Flushed skin around the joints -Unpleasant 'aroma' in the room. This was detectable through surgical masks, from now on, class 1 biohazard gear will be used during examinations -Pupils are dialated, edges of the eyes seem 'glazed over' loosing their normal liquid sheen - Specimen said it's hungry, and seems to have no trouble keeping down food, nausea seems to have worn off, perhaps that was a side effect of the medications on day one ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 3 Date: March 29th -No significant change today, for future entries, I will only put them when notable changes in physical symptoms start, haven't been able to identify the culprit bacterium or virus in his blood as of yet, there are more than I had expected. The specimen is still oddly calm in it's quarantine chamber. It has started asking what I'm doing and for things to do. Fever seems to have stabilized at 102.4 degrees. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 4 Date: April 3rd -Analysis for the first samples I sent off came back today, it seems that the pathogens in its blood were not interacting with his blood or white blood cells and the like. Almost like its immune system was passively allowing the bacteria in. Its fever has also gone down slightly, but the discoloration around the joints has spread over most of its body, and it doesn't seem to be sleeping much. I gave it some old medical text books to keep it entertained with reading, and shockingly it has already finished the first of the lot, even now it's reading. I've also got a number of new sample types to study, there was a bright yellow mucus leaking from its nose, and some pustules formed on its neck that I drained and cleaned to get samples from. Current Symptoms -Fever, seems to be fading, perhaps another reaction to the medications we tried? -Skin discoloration, potentially a rash -Pustules -Yellow mucal drainage from sinus cavity -Insomnia -Increased apatite ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Entry 5 Date: April 10th -Incredible, simply incredible, the specimen is somehow still alive and conscious, and with some help I was able to confirm, it isn't sleeping. It has started ranting some, and showing clear signs of sleep deprivation, I will be sedating it to get it to sleep tonite, a specimen with this unique of an immune system is invaluable for research. Its blood has returned to normal, no longer having the anomalous appearance, although I've noted bacterial 'clusters' that seem to be forming around new bacterium I've introduced into the samples I've taken, almost like the bacterium inside it are acting like a form of immune system, perhaps its more passive immune system causes a more symbiotic relationship with some of the less deadly infections, allowing them to live inside it, which if that's the case lead to some major break through. The pustules have become more of abscesses that are in a number of areas over its body and constantly seep and ooze out puss. It has complained about it's dislike of the feeling, but that it doesn't hurt until I start scraping them out. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Final Entry Entry 6 Date: April 11th -Damnit, all this work, ruined, all because some one didn't check what they mixed into its food. It is still covered in sores, and is still reading every book I allow it too, but now...now...how can one properly use a specimen for medical research when it's no longer the 'blank slate' it once was. Some idiot cook must have just dumped all the fruit into a blender or something, as when I arrived this morning after its meal time, it wasn't fully human any more, looking like a walking, sore covered, rat. When I told it to go back to its normal form, it simply replied with a snarky comment about how it didn't feel as gross in this new form, like it did in its human form. Sadly with Zoans exposure to sea prism doesn't force reversion of forms, instead it locks them in their current form. Damn it, this is just my luck, I finally get a specimen that should let me make a name for myself and some buffoon ruins my chances, tomorrow I will return it to marine custody for returning to its parents, none of the illnesses it had in it seemed fatal while I was examining them over the past few weeks. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sitting there reading through the journal entries a table across from a Chief Petty Officer, 'Dmitri' frowns, the ratkin of a 'child' looking across at the man "I have no home, no family to go back too, no one would want this as kin, I am an it, not even a person according to this, if that is the case then I wish to stay on a ship. Perhaps find out what the point of continued existance is. I've felt all these terrible things, in such a short time, as you've read. Will putting me through more of the same make the 'justice' of the marines right. What about my removal from the home I had originally to begin with. Was that in the sake of 'justice' as well? What exactly is this 'justice' I see emblazoned on the back of officers, does it truly mean anything other than 'this gives us free reign to do as we wish' or does it mean something else?" he'd ask as he slowly stands up "So will it be letting me stay upon a ship and teach me about what justice truly means to the marines, or will you abandon some one who has medical knowledge in a place with no way to do anything and prove that marine justice is really a 'rule of strength' situation?" he says in a flat level tone, his glazed over eyes staring deep into the eyes of the Officer "Well...shit kid if you put it like that I don't have a choice do I...welcome to the core" and with that simple exchanged his life would finally start being something other than a Specimen. Abilities and Possessions Combat: 'Dmitri' does not like close range fighting, instead he utilizes a strange pneumatic long rifle to ping his targets from long range. Often times he'll mix various illnesses into the pellets to have more of an effect with minimal effort on his part. Weaponry: Pneumatic Long Rifle (Iron tier, crank charge, single shot only) Items:
- Combat gear (No armor value, has a built in gas mask)
- Field Dressing Kit (Doctor tools)
- Sample Kit (Contains various flasks, vials and such)
- Sack of 'scraps' (random bits of food)
Beli: 500,000 SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: 32
- Used for Stats: 32
- Used for Fortune: 0
- Strength: 6
- Speed: 8
- Stamina: 4
- Accuracy: 14
- Fortune: 8
Traits: Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits) Nezumi Nezumi no Mi (Rat Rat Fruit) Medical Malpractice (1 trait(Proffession)) Part of knowing what is required to keep somebody healthy is knowing what will cause others to become unhealthy. Doctors who put this knowledge to practical use may make especially potent poisons. They gain special Technique Points which can only be used on toxins that harm or debuff, of the amount of half their fortune.
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Devil Fruit Name: Nezumi Nezumi no Mi (Rat Rat Fruit) Devil Fruit Type: Zoan Devil Fruit Ability: Transormation into a rat or hybrid states
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 8 Special Technique Points: 4 Used Special Technique Points: 4 | Zoan Transformations |
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Standard Form (Rank number 4, free) Type: Zoan Transformation Range:N/A Power:N/A Stats:+2 Speed, +2 Accuracy Cost: 0 (Free 'signiture' form) Rank: 4
| Description: Transform into a mostly rat like state, down to the tail, fur and head shape, but retaining enough of the human form to remain bipedal and articulate, he's still covered in erratic and seeping sores and tends to leave a wet 'trail' behind himself from dragging his tail on the ground. He lets of a 'sick' smelling aroma and what fur he does have is more on the scragly side and a mottled white and brown color. The skin on his hands/feet/tail are mostly pink, and he has a bit of a slouch to his stance, keeping him from standing his full four feet in height.
| Rat Form (Rank 4, first four free) Type: Zoan Transformation Range:N/A Power:N/A Stats: +4 Speed Cost: 0 (First four ranks free) Rank: 4
| Description: Transform fully into a rat, be one with your rodent self, eat some cheese, squeeze through impossible places. In this form his significantly smaller than he normally is, he does however, still have the seeping sores and lacks bandages to properly cover them, so they drip and ooze more notably. Similar to his 'standard' form, the fur that covers him is scraggly and a mottled mixture of white and brown, and much like a rat he can fit through surprising spaces, and the seeping wounds do help with this by acting like a lubricant, although, it leaves a clear trail of his passing
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Class 1 Virus Type:Supportive Range:Melee Power:4 Stats:N/A Cost: 4 points (special) Rank: 4
| Description: 'Dmitri' coats a weapon or projectile with a fast acting, short lived virus that rapidly destroys cells around the site of the injury, dealing this techniques power as damage
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Long Shot Type: Offensive Range: Short Power: 0 Cost:4 points Rank:4
| Description: 'Dmitri' takes aim with his Pneumatic Long Rifle, firing an accurate shot, even if it lacks stopping power on it's own.
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Class 1 Amoeba Type: Supportive Range: Melee Power:0 Stats:+1 Accuracy, +1 Speed Cost:4 points Rank:4
| Description:By utilizing one of the bacterial strains that tends to inhabit his eyes, Dmitri has synthesized a 'pill' form of it that bolsters the imbibers eyesight and reaction time slightly. Lasts 3 rounds.
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Characters Mariead 'Forehead' Mockday, the Frontosa Fishman 'I guess victory slipped from your grasp, eh?' Mariead Mockday • Affiliation: Pirate • Crew: Brofist (former) Raijin (former) • Position: Shipwright, 'Curiousity' • Profession: Sleek Woman / Ship-Designer / Freaky-Fishperson • Bounty:  50,000,000 • SD Earned: 290 • Location: Red Line, Fishman Island • Hanada Hakamori, the Legendary Taunt 'Underestimating me is a surefire way to get hurt!' Hanada Hakamori • Affiliation: Other • Crew: wandering with cherry blossom • • Profession: Chef / Weapon Specialist • Threat: 5.0 • SD Earned: 51 • Location: Somewhere • Wiltrude Famino, the Criminal Upper 'Well now, let's see if we can't do something about my boredom.' Wiltrude Famino • Affiliation: Criminal • Crew: n/a • Position: n/a • Profession: Jao Kun Dōdo / Long-Leg Tribesman • • Bounty:  10,000,000 • SD Earned: 52 • Location: East Blue •
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