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Sebastian Stark; Quite a talker... [Flagged]
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Topic Started: May 17 2016, 03:10 PM (506 Views)
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♦ SoIo
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May 17 2016, 03:10 PM
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"So, coach. Did I do you proud?" /s [-----] Account Name: ♦ SoIo Basic Character Information
Name: Sebastian Stark Nickname: "Seb" Age: 25 Gender: Male
| Race: Human Affiliation: Marine Rank: 0 (Seaman) Position: N/A |
Achievements: - Brought down a kingpin
who was 40 years old and single leopard Zoan user at Ilusia.
- Rescue of a renowned inventor from cult ninjas in Gesso Island.
- Blacklisted from Marine academies for having a dirty mouth.
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Profession: - Merchant – Primary: Merchants are fairly charismatic people who are skilled in both bargaining and selling things to others. Their expertise means that they are very knowledgeable of the economy, and deal with all manner of merchandise. Additionally, they they tend to be well-connected in trading circles. Merchants can get a 15% discount on any purchases they make, no matter what the item, for themselves. Additionally, a merchant may purchase any item that is available to be purchased, regardless of the normal requirements.
- Weapon(s) Specialist - Secondary: A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.
- Smith - Secondary: A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy which allows them to make custom materials or mix new ones together.
- Carpenter - Secondary: A Carpenter is someone who makes a living crafting things such as ships, submarines, buildings and other physical structures with expertise and materials not privy to non-carpenters. Carpenters are the only ones capable of creating ships with techniques.
| Physical Appearance
| Height | Weight | Hair | Eyes | | 6'0'' | 180lb | Light Brown | Dark Brown |
Clothing/Accessories: Sebastian typically wears any piece of clothing with a camouflage design as he likes to uses his clothing to stay hidden among his surroundings. Depending on his type of assignment (or if he feels like it), his colors are either green or Marine blue. Most of the time, he would wear a piece of cloth that comfortably wraps around his neck and extends to the bottom of his shoulder. Otherwise, he wears a white tank top and plastic padding that go from his shoulder to the top of his elbow. He wears black gloves, the type differing if casual or working. As for his pants, he wears puffy camouflage clothing or straight-up black sweatpants with hard leather working boots and black knee socks. If Sebastian is reporting for Marine duty, he typically wears camouflage design as his clothing. He only wears his Marine uniform if the situation calls for it.
| | General Appearance: Sebastian has a very strong body build due to his extensive work on buildings, weapons, and anything that requires hands-on mechanical engineering. His hair is stroked back completely, but slightly ruffled. A majority of females do find him handsome as he has a very appealing smile. | The Character
Personality: Under normal circumstances, Sebastian is considered to be one of the more chilled back (and considerably lazy) people. Rarely does he ever get emotional or become mad at his peers or enemies. This results in him not taking many aspects of his life too seriously, especially his position as a Marine. If any event he partakes isn't exciting, he won't be resolute about it. That said, Sebastian is very judgmental and irritable towards people he meet. In order to appease his daily boredom, he tends to be explicit in his language and thought process. Although his judgment is quite exuberant, he recognizes how rude it is. He does whatever it takes to not inform his peers of his views on them (unless asked). He tends to be very snarky when interacting with his peers, even more so with people he does not like. He typically likes to crack jokes and make vivacious analogies whenever the opportunity presents itself. In addition, he tends to comically overreact to certain situations that aren't considered to be normal to him. Due to his knack in building, he is incredibly passionate in building anything that requires his advanced engineering skills. It is a field that Sebastian recognizes he excels beyond anyone else and he takes enjoyment out of it as much as possible. Sebastian also unconsciously finds himself as a lady killer as well, resulting him in the tendency to carelessly visit a lot of brothels. Though, if he finds a girl (or any human being in general) interesting, he would persist to interact with them as long as his willpower allows him to do so. He recognizes refusal at an understandable scale, and accepts the decision. Sebastian rarely likes to stay around an island for a long duration (other than his hometown). It's uncertain if it's because he's homesick, but he tends to make elaborate excuses to justify his irritation. |
Hometown: Water 7, Grand Line
| History: From the ambitious waters of the Grand Line, Sebastian grew up in the mecca land of shipwrights and engineers. His mother is a renowned Civil Engineer in building architectural buildings, in which she has been unsuccessfully trying to convince the general population to build newer buildings at Water 7. His father is a Carpenter under a wealthy contract by the Highwater Group. Educated and grown, Water 7 has been nearly Sebastian's entire life as he grew up. After the nasty reign and the still recurring age of piracy, Sebastian's parents have been very insistent in him to join the Marines as they knew his physical capabilities and passion in engineering. While he didn't particular enjoy the sea protectors, he did feel it was morally better and unenthusiastically joined the ranks. After serving the Marines for about 2 years, Sebastian decided that he had wanted to work in contract with Water 7's Highwater Group alongside his father. In application for the group, Sebastian held an incredibly ambitious idea for a ship design. With his father's enthusiasm, the two built the design together as father and son. However, competitors for the position realized their own efforts were in vain and the only way to beat Sebastian was through sabotage. Paying bribes to the Highwater Group, the design was intentionally subverted while it was in display. However, it was tampered too extremely and it caused the design to self-destruct within a small blast radius. With a mix of instinct and love, Sebastian's father saved his son by covering him, causing his father to fatally take the full blast. The newfound Engineer wept in agony as he examined whatever remained of his father's corpse. The explosion immediately disavowed Sebastian's application. After the competitors (to which a few were accepted) regrettably revealed their involvement in the sabotage, it extremely pissed off Sebastian. However, due to the Highwater's immense power in Water 7, there was nothing he could do. To his chagrin, this lead Sebastian into currently working as a traveling Marine Engineer, in order to temporarily escape the embarrassment in Water 7 and to run away from accepting his father's death. He now adapts the talent and gifts from his parents and continues to have a passion in building, supplying whatever services and weapons that is needed for the world outside of Water 7. He has considered coming back in order to teach the Highwater Group a lesson...but that will come another day when Sebastian had clearly thought through purpose in life.. | Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Sebastian has one particular fighting style that involves the smooth usage of his two hands to utilize object manipulation. He is a master of coordination in handling weapons that use ropes to swing his weapon of choice. In order to keep a very firm grasp of his weapons, he lets the rope dangle down, takes the rope up between two fingers and wraps it around in two pairs of his fingers: Pinky and Ring, and Index and Middle. In this style of offensive combat, he likes to keep moving around his strung weapons, almost to the point of conducting choreography with it in order to keep a constant motion. Due to his training and mastery of hands-on application with engineering, Sebastian is very skilled in holding handled weapons, such as swords. However, he prefers to use his main weapon: The windmill shurikens. Weaponry:- 2x Iron Window Shuriken Attached by Rope – These are two large four bladed shurikens, which can be collapsed for easy storage. There is a rope firmly attached to the dead center, allowing it to be swung around by the user. Comparably, it is much lighter than normal in order for the weapons to be swung around in ease.
Items: Beli: 30,000,000 |
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SD Earned: 93 Stat Points: 125 [32 + 93] Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 SD Used for Stats: 125 SD Used for Fortune: 0 |
| Strength | Speed | Stamina | Accuracy | Fortune | 44 (38+9) | 25 | 38 | 24 | 31 |
| Traits: 3 General - 1 Professional |
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General
| Fate of the Strong (3 Traits) – By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of 9 (3*3) to your strength stat.
Pending (1 Trait) - ???
| Professional
| Jack of All Trades (1 Trait) – The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions.
Pending (1 Trait) - ??? |
| Devil Fruit |
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Devil Fruit Name: N/A Devil Fruit Type: N/A Devil Fruit Ability: N/A | Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 14 / 72
| Special Technique Points: 0 / 0 |
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| Name/Type/Range/Power/Stats/TP | Description/Notes
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Windmill Butterfly Weave (4) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 4 Stats: N/A
| Description: Sebastian puts both of his arms close together and rapidly swings the rope containing his two windmill shurikens around his arms in the same vertical axis, but in a slightly different horizontal axis, allowing the two weapons to pass each other with ease. He attacks his opponent with the shurikens while maintaining his weave.
| Windmill Cross (4) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 0 Stats: N/A
| Description: Sebastian swings the ropes of both of his shurikens forward and crosses them together in deliberate swiftness, attacking anyone within range
Effects: Speed [-4]
| Windmill Thrasher (6) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 6 Stats: N/A
| Description: Sebastian either holds onto the center of his shuriken or powerfully throws it within his rope's distance to drive an attack towards his opponent. |
Development History
Edit Log - 7/13/2016 - Added some beef to the Achievements, Personality, History, Combat, Weaponry, and updated SD
- 7/25/2016 - Tech Update 1
- 10/17/2016 - Updated in 40SD
- 1/21/2017 - Added earnings from SL
Edited by SoIo, Jan 21 2017, 04:53 PM.
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I'm going to be less active as of 9/25/17. Kinda hitting a point where I'm contemplating why I'm here while having a full-time job.
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| Strength | 45 | | Speed | 80 | | Stamina | 45 | | Accuracy | 45 | | Fortune | 41 |
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Jun 6 2016, 03:29 PM
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165lbs is a bit low-end for a 6'0 male who is described as being physically strong and muscular. 180-190lbs would make it a bit more believable. It's no biggie, though.
Would someone so calm and laid-back be "snarky"? With people he does not like it's understandable, but snarkiness implies actually being nasty towards others. You could try finding a better word to describe his attitude, unless that was your intent.
Please expand the history a little bit more.
Please denote the shurikens' quality as iron.
Aside from that, everything seems to be in order. I'll flag this once you've fixed those.
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RIO Rio[Pirate] • Crew Position • Weapon Specialist Primary / Thief Secondary • No Crew • Bounty: 42,000,000 • SD Earned: 204 • Beli: 49,000,000 • Location: Saline City, Grand Line
BORLIN Borlin Holdt[Marine] • Rank • Marksman Primary / Martial Artist Secondary • No Division • Commendations: 5 • SD Earned: 16 • Beli: 4,750,000 • Location: Out at Sea - North Blue
ARSTEEL Arsteel van Renesse • Ensign • Weapon Specialist / Chef • N/A • Commendations: 5 • SD Earned: 50 • Beli: 2,100,000 • Location: East Blue - Shell Town
TALLARN Tallarn Sorel • Citizen • Carpenter / Inventor / Marksman / Smith • No Crew • SD Earned: 18 • Beli: 550,000 • Location: South Blue - Briss Kingdom
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♦ SoIo
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Jun 6 2016, 07:54 PM
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- Meh guess I'll go at the higher end of the BMI then.
- Was using "snarky" in context of sarcasm. "Acerbic" then.
- History's at least 150 words, which is usually the standard guideline. There's really nothing special about him, that's saved for later. Don't make character creation a pain in the arse as it already is.
- Huh how did I forget iron.
Changes made.
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I'm going to be less active as of 9/25/17. Kinda hitting a point where I'm contemplating why I'm here while having a full-time job.
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| Eileen Falkner Commendation: 65 (Captain) Assassin/MW/MA/Doctor No Assigned Marine Division SD Earned: 177 Beli: 69,900,000 Location: Romulin Island, Route 1 [color=lightseagreen]
| Strength | 45 | | Speed | 80 | | Stamina | 45 | | Accuracy | 45 | | Fortune | 41 |
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Jun 7 2016, 12:23 AM
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It's only a pain in the arse if you're predisposed to think that way.
There are always things to write about that don't make your character "special" in any way. You could expand more on how Sebastian gained his passion for engineering, for example, or even expend a bit of time telling what his life was like in the water city. Regardless, if you really don't want to, I won't force your hand since it does fit within the standard guideline.
Topic is flagged for approval.
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RIO Rio[Pirate] • Crew Position • Weapon Specialist Primary / Thief Secondary • No Crew • Bounty: 42,000,000 • SD Earned: 204 • Beli: 49,000,000 • Location: Saline City, Grand Line
BORLIN Borlin Holdt[Marine] • Rank • Marksman Primary / Martial Artist Secondary • No Division • Commendations: 5 • SD Earned: 16 • Beli: 4,750,000 • Location: Out at Sea - North Blue
ARSTEEL Arsteel van Renesse • Ensign • Weapon Specialist / Chef • N/A • Commendations: 5 • SD Earned: 50 • Beli: 2,100,000 • Location: East Blue - Shell Town
TALLARN Tallarn Sorel • Citizen • Carpenter / Inventor / Marksman / Smith • No Crew • SD Earned: 18 • Beli: 550,000 • Location: South Blue - Briss Kingdom
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Jun 7 2016, 04:38 AM
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