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Mercy Graves; That bitch [Flagged]
Topic Started: May 16 2016, 06:45 PM (1,273 Views)
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Name: Mercy Gray
Nickname: "That Bitch"
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Skypeian/Mermaid
Affiliation: Hunter
Threat: 0
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Marksman - The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and their range techniques will have the effect costs of the tier below with short range being free.

Inventor:

An Inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build gadgets and battle engines if they have enough materials.

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Height: 5’8
Weight: 125 lb / 140 lb Mermaid form
Sports a Dirty Blonde Hairstyle that is usually wet, causing it to be matted.

She has very big bulgy eyes with black slits for pupils.
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Clothing/Accessories:

Skypeian/ Mermaid form

A very raveger-esque outfit, Mercy wears clothing from her very design line, Bleu. Starting from the head, she is never seen without her blue cowboy hat with several red beads around being held together by a strap which goes around the top of the hat. This hat is meant to pay a slight homage to Ace, but different enouch to be it's own style. Going down you'll notice headphones with several black engravings on them, with the center holding a "☢" symbol, the logo of her design line. Branching off the right ear is a simple michrophone, allowing her to be a loud mouthed bitch.

She sports a light blue double gorii-rabbit cape of cotton quality that wraps around the neck. The cape has her design symbol "☢" embezzled with human bone fragments painted red on the side. Under her cape is a short vest and a very short white shirt revealing her cleavage, leaving more of her body to the open so she may feel the wind blow across her body as she surfs. Topping off the upper body is an elbow long black glove with several straps, giving off a slight gothic vibe. This glove was made of lizard skin.

Ending her clothing choice is a black/gray legging, with the upper parts being padded. Strapped around the thigh and upper hamstring are several cartiridges, holding smaller items. On the back is a large box like quiver, usually hidden by the cape. These leggings can easily stretch for her mermaid form.

She also sports green tinted sunglasses with a red frame because she's a cool kid.
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General Appearance:

Skypeian form

Mercy is what you would call a "fit" girl, being considered physically attractive for the standards of a 17 year old teenager. She has curves in the right place along with a very toned body, usually tanned due to the time she spends in the sun. Her constant surfing and sea diving also leaves her skin feeling damp, matting her hair down in the process. She posses nice juggs along with a decently plump arse, usually posing in vivacious poses to lure men or others into falling in love with her on sight.

Due to her being partly Skypeian, she also posseses small wings on the back tilted upwards. The wings are feathered, yet slightly scaly like a fish.

Tbh I think the best thing about her would be her Kylie Jenner lips.

Mermaid form

When submerged in water, her entire lower body takes a new form, starting from the lower portion of her belly. This entire portion forms into the tail of a seahorse, not all merfolk are blessed with beautiful clown fish tails or glittery shark tails. She's just glad she wasn't one of the octopuses. Her tail is also blue with a double gold lining on the side, and several gold glitters spread around, intesifying the lower it gets until the point the tip of the tail is basically glowing gold. This is usually hidden by her extremely flexible leggings of course.

The wings also change, turning webbed as the feathers retract.


Artwork

Archery Practice

Worst Photoshop ever: Hometown


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Personality

Always smiling, Mercy has a very strong outgoing and vivacious personality, epitomizing the joy of being a care-free surfer. She usually exaggerates her actions, always speaking with a rather loud voice, and let's not even add the microphone to the mix. This is primarily due to the fact that she's a business woman and in order to get your product out there, you must be heard. Or so she says. She wears her emotions on her sleeve and loves to have fun, expressing herself in flamboyant ways in the process. While this might be found annoying, she has a rather strong sway over men as she is openly flirtatious with them, even those that are taken. This leads to jealousy from other women or straight annoyance, earning her the title "That bitch."

However, despite her stereotypical blonde persona, on the battle field she takes on an entirely new one. Her bitchy frivolous attitude intensifies, usually mocking the opponent in an upbeat tone while never seeming to stop talking. Despite all of her antics she is still a no-nonsense fighter, taking the battle/hunt very seriously and is usually angered when a loved one or clsoe one is hurt, going into a berserker-like rgae revealing her mroe sadistic side as she slowly kills the target and laughs while at it.


Hometown: Ka Lani, Skypeia

That Bitch is born

::beli:: 10,750,000
SD Earned / Remaining / Advancement Points46 / 0 / 0
Stat Points 77




Used for Stats (Free): 77




Used for Fortune 0
Speed 20
Accuracy 30
Strength 18
Stamina 10
Fortune20 ( 19 + 1 )


Traits:


Skypeian-Mermaid (1 Trait) - The mermaid tail [Seahorse] of these characters split into leg once on land. They may breathe underwater and gain the Great Speed trait whilst submerged with their movements underwater being completely unhindered. Spending too long out of water can fatigue them somewhat whilst spending too much time in the water can also achieve the same effect. In addition, mermaids can talk to most types of fish, but not seakings.

Groovy~ Body (1 Trait) - Limited to one per character. Whether gained by birth, training, modification by themselves or another person, prolonged exposure to something, or plain dumb luck, this character has a body that is less than typical. They have a single biological or physical difference to their bodies, canon examples including Kuramarimo's ability to rapidly grow and detach static afros and Don Chinjao's abnormally hard and pointy skull.
  • Psuedo-Frog eyes: Most marksmen would wish for "Hawk eyes" or an "Eagle eye" but Mercy was blessed with two Frog-like eyes. While she does not have the extreme range that would naturally be given by Hawk eyes or anything of the likes, the large protruding eyeballs and rectangular pupils of Frog eyes allow her to obtain a 340 degree vision, topping the human maximum of 120 degrees. This allows he to see everywhere around her except the area directly behind her, which means there is a blind spot coning out from the nape of her neck. These Frog-like eyes also have night vision, but not night vision.


Fate of the Emperor (1 Trait) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of 1 to your fortune score.
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Bow Mastery (1 Trait) - The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher (Noted wiht a ) for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.
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Combat
"Combat Initiated: Playing " ~Mercy's headphones

When Mercy is aware that she is about to go into some sort of venture that requires repeated uses of her bow, she swipes her hands over her headphones, causing the usually black engravings to glow a sudden bright blue on the microphone as well. This means the headphones have been turned on as well as the mic, getting her in the proper mood for combat. Without them, her skill has a notable drop, missing 30% more shots without her music to calm her overly joyous persona.

Archery


Sword fighting


Techniques 24/32

☢ Bow
☢ Bang! (4*)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 8
Description: Mercy fires an arrow at her target that can ricochet off a surface once, usually towards her target. ( Ricochet 8 )
☢ Bang! Bang! (8*) (4 + 4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Power: 8
Description: Branch form Bang!
Mercy fires two arrows simultaneously that can ricochet off of surfaces twice, usually towards her target both times. (Ricochet 8 Medium -4)
☢ Pull! (8*)
Type: Supportive
Range: Short
Power: 8
Description: Taking two of her "safe" Magnetic arrows, Mercy fires one arrow at a sturdy location of choice and then immediately another magnetic arrow of an opposite polarity at her target or by simply keeping it in her quiver. The target flies towards the location of the prior arrow at high speeds. The maximum weight this technique can pull is 200 lbs.(Speed -4 Displacement 8)
☢ Wrap! (8*)
Type: Supportive / Offensive
Range: Medium
Power: 8
Description: Mercy shoots one of her trick arrows at her target, releasing an iron wire that wraps around the opponent three times once it hit's it's target. (Medium -4)

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Gains/Losses
 
Ape G. Flowers
SDBeliReason
+15+3.75 milDynamic Duo SL
+8+2 milA Dynamic Showdown!
+13+3 milA dying flame

SDBeliReason
+6+1.25 milGlorious Dawn


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Edited by Davy Jones, May 19 2017, 08:02 PM.
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*Caption - An Iron Bladed Recurve Bow...with a cotton grip :)
Function Summary:
  • Seldom for the grip and string, the bow is made of iron with the outer edge being bladed.
  • The grip is made of padded cotton and the string is made of a very tight band of leather.
  • With a simple twist of the grip, the lower portion of the bow relative to it's current postion collapses onto the grip, loosening the strings. This forms a hole due to the inward curved part of the grip placed outside the straight grip. Essentially, the bow has become an S curved sword due to the bladed edge of the part of the bow that is still standing straight.

Arrows + Assistance:
  • Polar switch: A finger sized flip switch that polarizes all the arrows to be "N" if turned on.
Magentic Arrow Appearance

  • "N" Magnet Arrow: Red wood body, Blue painted Shark tooth Arrowhead of Bronze quality. The inside of the arrow head contains a small magnet with a specialized North magnetic pole while outisde the arrow are 4 mini arrow heads of the reverse polarity, only responding to others who run off the same odd North/South frequency, such as itself. This arrow also comes with a "safe" version in which the arrowhead splits apart and forms a flat cohesive X when the tail is pressed. Still hurts.

  • "S" Magnet Arrow: Blue wood body, Red painted Shark tooth Arrowhead of Bronze quality. The inside of the arrow head contains a small magnet with a specialized South magnetic pole while outisde the arrow are 4 mini arrow heads of the reverse polarity, only responding to others who run off the same odd North/South frequency, such as itself. This arrow also comes with a "safe" version in which the arrowhead splits apart and forms a flat cohesive X when the tail is pressed. Still hurts.



Shark-Star
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*Caption - A surfboard with wheels.
Function Summary:
  • Can be ridden on land as well as water
  • Despite the wheels, it scales with character speed (Is it possible for me to make it faster?)
  • Long board: 7' 2" long



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☢Bleu 1st Class Red----
☢Bleu Over-phones - Red----
☢Bleu Box - Black----


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"People don't know what they want until you show it to them. Here at Bleu, we start with the customer experience, and then work backwards to the product."



Background
 
Our origin can be traced back to the Island of Rare Animals, where our glorious CEO, me, was stranded for six years. It was here that I learnt how to provide through my hunting. After re-integrating to the world of today, I'm able to mix my new knowledge with my old knowledge, giving birth to Bleu.

I have a small dingy in which I keep twenty products in the back, selling as much as I can to each person I meet. With my business I hope I can introduce the blues to technology far more advanced than the ones you would find in the new world, and at lower costs too.


FASHION LINE
Bleu 1st ClassThis is a flimsy cowboy like hat that can come in any color. The design is based off the deceased pirate, Firefist Ace. To pay patronage to such a honorable man, there are several red beads lined across the base with finally two smiling faces at the front. There are rings around the edges simply for design.
Bleu MoonA very stylish bleu designer shade. This comes in any color as well, allowing you to wear it with anything you wish.

*This product does not have UV protection and even intensifies light if the user looks up at a strong light source. It is liable to catch fire if staying in the heat too long, microwaved, or simple friction. We are not liable for any retina damage or housefires, if you do experience any other issue with the Bleu moon please contact us.
Bleu BasicA basic shirt with the bleu logo smack dad in the middle of it! Cut some frills, cut out the sleeves, add in a cape, this shirt is so basic that you can essentially make into whatever you need!
Bleu RavageThe bleu ravage is a large double cape that comes in any color. The outside of the cape is lamented with plastic for a shiny effect while the inside is made of the cotton like baby human hair, enjoy!


UTILITY LINE
Bleu BoxA box! It holds things! It's so compact, so neat, so tidy, it's a box!


ENTERTAINMENT LINE
Bleu Over-phonesThe bleu over-phone is a headphoen set that comes in any color. These headphones come with their very own mic, and can be turned on simply by waving your hand over it, causing it to play a certain track that you must install first.


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None as of yet
Edited by Davy Jones, Jun 7 2016, 10:48 AM.
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No to your professional bonus. Visiting sky island ic is required.

Put your sheet back in its original order.

No bounty and threat. Pick one.

No dragons.

History should include a detailed history not just a spoken narrative.

Sd remaining should be 1.

No to having a pet dragon.

No tacking on skypiean stuff to the mermaid trait. Should be the one in the rules. No additions.



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EDIT: I talked with some people and realzied the stuff I was wrong about, sorry if it seems like I was coming on hard or something, I'm not. I shouldve confirmed how emo got the two reputation and when I linked strs app I wasnt talking about the history detail, rather the fact you can have a spoken narrative of your history which I am being denied. AS for the dragons, they are one piece canon, not jus man made by vega punk. The Monsters story is One Piece canon, confirmed by Ryuma when he fought Zoro.

Ill fix what I can. ALso when I said Im trying to get it "fixed" I dont mean Im manhandling what I want, no. Ive complied to everything everyone kept reccomending to me on the custom thread, but each one is saying something else and Itd be nice if I could just get a straight answer of what I can and cant do. Like gasglow said, we have legacy traits as professional in the martials and iventor, and I can remove the no sky island visit easily, I did it before and I can do it again. I just need an answer which is getting harder and harder to find.

  • Sorry about the profession, I'm still trying to get it fixed in the S&Q to be appropriate. Fixed

  • I don't believe that's an official rule man...I have all the content of the char sheet.

  • Using both because I'm an adventurer. I expect my actions to earn a bounty at some points, and threat during other ventures.

    Character Example of more than one type of Reputation
    Fixed

  • No where in the rules does it limit my pet availability, and even if this were true it needs to be made public otherwise I just wasted my time for no fault of my own...Regardless, this "dragon" is weaker than a bear >.>
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  • You can have a spoken narrative
    Another example
    Epic misread, ty ty ty sorry!! mb, will fix asap

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    No where in the rules does it limit my pet availability, and even if this were true it needs to be made public otherwise I just wasted my time for no fault of my own...Regardless, this "dragon" is weaker than a bear >.>
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  • This entire list refutes that

    People reskin ruled traits constantly. The "Skypeian-Mermaid" only hidners me further, not even boosting. I wanted my char to have a nice weakness like "Cant stay above ground for too long" along with the "Cant stay underwater for too long" either. If you consider the high altitude breathing a bonus, it's not. Characters in the One piece world have 0 issue breathing in Skypeia or high altitudes in general like Zou. I simply said that for flavor. It's not like I'm going to breathe in space or something, if my char were in space she'd die. Like anyone else.


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    No to Weather Expert and its bonus.

    No to 'Skypeian-Mermaids'.

    No Dragon NPC (and the various abilities you tried to give it).
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    Ok ; ; I'll make adjustments accordingly but could I at least know the reasons why? So I know the type of stuff to avoid in the future

    I'll save the weathermancy shennanigans for my other char l8r down the line,

    My new char Mercy is ready for review ^^
    Edited by Davy Jones, May 29 2016, 08:27 PM.
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    Please denote techniques affected by your mastery with an Asterisk (*) symbol.

    Your Beli is 6,250,000.

    I'd say Surprise counts as a ricochet.

    for the surfboard, I'd be iffy for allowing it to be used to scale buildings. If you plan to use it on land, I'll be pricing it akin to an oversized jetpack.

    Tierless surfboard: 112,000,000 Beli. (Pricing two turbines as jetdials.)
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    Thanks! All fixed

    Ouch @.@ is it possible to work on a way to get it free like my skateboard on roofie? Would that mean removing the turbines? @.@ I could add wheels like a skateboard instead, removing the building scaling if that works?

    If not I'm fine with jus taking a normal surfboard for now ^^

    How does speed work on it?
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    No jetdials, and with wheels instead would probably be free, and could be upgraded later on.

    Speed I'd assume scales with yours. I'd say pricing on speed increases would work like buying techs, but the next mod will probably know more on that.

    Wasn't it a no to Skypeian-Mermaids? Or had you not paid a trait or something before? (I've always like the idea of Skypeian-Mermaids tbh)
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    fixed!

    The reason didnt remove skypeian mermaid wuz cuz i was talking on cbox a sometime back n no one saw an issue despite shammas ruling, i remember mockday being one. ive messaged shamma but i dont think he's going to reply, it's been like a week or two ):
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    Apart from the race confusion, everything looks good, so there's no point holding back a flag.

    Topic is flagged for approval.
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    As long as being skypeian mermaid doesn't entitle anything beyond what the regular mermaid bonus would give, then I think this is gucci. I mean, it's a pretty odd, even awkward combination, but not something that could be outright denied, unless of course I get overruled by a higher power.

    The only thing worth noting would be Zap!, since generally anything electric would need a r14/28 elemental effect to it. My personal suggestion would be to change it into a physical arrow with a disorientating effect, like a noisemaker arrow of sorts.

    I'll have this moved once that's been done.
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    All fixed, changed it to a simple wrapping tech.
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