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Kazuki D. Gendo; [Flagged]
Topic Started: May 14 2016, 07:49 PM (816 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Kazuki D. Gendo
Nickname: The Copper Monarch, Butterfly Prince
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Marines
Rank (Commendations): Rear Admiral (208)
Achievements:

Assisted in the evacuation of Osula during the skirmish between the yonkou Bright Eyes and the seaknight Horus.

Took down the 30 million pirate and potential pirate king reincarnation Gou F. Tama

Captured the pirate Candybeard and marine traitor Tombs and gained information aiding in the impediment of an army recruited by one of the four emperors.

Assisted in the reclamation of drum island from King Hiking Bear and his mink’s

Profession:

~Assassin

The Assassin profession gives stealth skills, the ability to move silently through areas without being detected. It also gives general poison knowledge. An Assassin generally has little actual combat experience, since their victims don't fight back, and as such don't fare that well in a true fight. Assassins are able to create poisons that weaken their foes, and have access to stealth techniques. Additionally they will be proficient in small weapons such as daggers or blow darts

~Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body.
Position: Captain


Physical Appearance
Height: 7ft 4
Weight: 175 pounds
Hair: flowing and jet black just past shoulder length, it seems to separate somewhat into long draping thin spikes.
Eyes: deep hazelnut brown, with a sharp shape that give's him a somewhat piercing gaze.
Clothing/Accessories:Kazuki has always been a fan of long flowing type clothing that generally tends to give him a rather regal appearance that further adds to his already imposing stature. he wears a coper orange shirt, long sleeved but with sleeves that are baggier as the go down the arm, with this goes tight fitting black trousers and black boots that run high up his thigh's. to top it all off is a deep red overcoat full body length with a thin black fur rimmed collar and an outer edging the same colour as his shirt.

The only accessories he wears are two piercings in his left ear, and leather arm guards.

General Appearance: Kazuki has an appearance rather counter productive to his personality he has an imposing figure mainly due to his hieght and a gaze that has the ability to instil submission and obedience, he is a tall figure with clean cut features and skin without blemish.

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The Character
Personality: Kazuki was for a large portion of his life quite a loner, he spoke to few people and when he did he found that he rarely had much in common, he was both sensible and aloof, able to both see the logical basis in a situation but at the same time expand his speculation's into the impractical and wonder just what might befall the world under these circumstances. He is at the very core a kind soul who has no problem with helping others, but he understands duty and has a clear sense of what he considers right and wrong and may the heavens help those who act in a manner he deem's unacceptable. He is not an advocate of absolute justice, and freely admits that within the law there are gray area's where certain indiscretions may be condoned but he is still a marine and as such as soon as you step from gray to black the time has come for apprehension to be put into course.

Hometown: Aokuchi Island, North Blue
History:

Living on Aokuchi island for the majority of his early years Kazuki lived an easy going life, aside from school and the menial amount of chores he was committed to in the homestead there was very little he was obligated to do. As such he found he was able to enjoy spending the majority of his time doing what he loved best, simply laying back and watching the clouds go by, dreaming of the far of lands that lay outside his homeland and imagining the millions of scenarios in which he left the island and ventured of to become the hero of many nations through a plethora of epic battles, maiden saving escapades, and daring duels with villainy. Like any other boy of his age Kazuki had a wild imagination but the problem was more that he enjoyed embracing it alone, rather than playing the games of make believe many of his school friends enjoyed, his lack of attempts to interact with them meant they quickly shunned him and altogether stopped trying to play with him at all which suited Kazuki fine but only lead to escalate his already solitary nature. His parents became worried by his lack of friends and tired to push him to find some sort of kindred spirit in the children that live close to their home since he was unable to find any sort of bonds within the population of his school it seemed.

Simply to appease his parent's the young kazuki found himself making an effort to integrate himself into the society of sprouts around his home, joining in with their games, laughing at their jokes and taking part with vigour in the adventures they engineered, discovering that while he never connected with any of them completely he did enjoy spending time with them and playing they games they played and that it was nice to feel apart of a group and know there were others around that cared for you. The years were untroubled and beautiful with him slowly growing up with his friends around him and evolving through the different activities a youth partakes in as they age. By age 11 he'd known the others for a good 3 years and it was to be the first time a new addition had been made to the group since his own initiation, he name was Anna and she'd moved to the island from the grand line for reasons she was never keen to divulge, Within day's kazuki had made a friend like no other, her exotic stories of her homeland enthralled him and her passion for the imaginative matched his like two pieces of a puzzle, there was not an interest they did not seem to share and weather it was washing dishes of watching the floating of the clouds above no activity seemed boring when the two of them were together.

Over the years their bond developed and best friends fell in love with one another, becoming a couple closer than any seen before not only was their affection for one another there but still they maintained the fun that they were so used to having year after year not a time in his life could Kazuki ever remember being happier, but it was not only their relationship that had developed as the years went by the rate of pirate docking s had been sharply rising month by month, with the inglorious scumbags becoming bolder and bolder with every boat that stopped at the shores. rumours of pillaging's had begun to circulate, and murder a once unheard of term was slowly becoming rife within the citizens vocabularies. It was a time of an uprising of fear but the island of merchants knew not how to deal with it. The marine presence just wasn't strong enough to counter the vast number of pirates that had begun arrival's and before they knew what was happening the criminal presence arrived at kazuki's front door. They seemed to overrun the village in minutes bodies charging everywhere, flames licking at the skies and tinting the horizon with their orange glow, screams echoing out into the night and howls of pained sorrow as villagers began to find the corpses of their loved ones. And amidst it all there was not a thing Kazuki could do, a lone bandit burst into his home whilst the boy had come downstairs to investigate the commotion, but such a laxidasical persona untrained in any form of combat stood no chance against the muscled brute and he soon found himself flung to the ground with a now profusely bleeding head-wound, it was finally his father who came to the rescue pounding the assailant across the head several times from behind, an iron fireplace poker in his hand.

Clutching a bloodied rag to his injury a violently dizzy Kazuki charged towards the only thought on his mind.....Anna running through the fray, smoke charring his lungs as he desperately searched for her house finally finding it at the villages edge and bursting in through a front door who's lock had already been broken, only to find the entire place ransacked. In desperate hope he stumbled his way to the kitchen entering the pantry only to find it untouched and with the flame of hope rekindled he lifted the hidden trap door in the rooms floor shakily decending into the small concealed basement as best he could,
"Kaz?" came a timid voice and with the realisation that his beloved was alive relieve washed over him and so too did darkness, as he blacked out losing control of his body and leaving the limp form to topple down the staircase.

When coming too he found it was daylight and the raid was over, the marines having responded to distress calls and driven the bandits away he was now lying in his own bed his vision coming back to him hazily only to see the blurry outline of a figure sat looking over him. It was of course anna, and with a tearful embrace their reunion was sealed. It developed later that when coming down to her mothers scream anna had found the woman being assaulted by a pair of the pirates, only to have herself thrown into a wall and knocked unconscious with a broken arm saved for later by the vulgar creatures like some sort of twisted dessert, it was only thanks to the intervention of their friend jiro and a couple of well placed shots from his rifle that it was allowed to go no further. The thought of anna in such pain left kazumi distraught and he found himself unable to face her for a fair few days. when they revisited he vowed to her he would become strong enough to protect her from any danger but for now was leaving her to join the marines, despite the fact that the very idea of their separation was slowly killing him inside. She could sense that he'd changed, his dreamy nature was not gone but was now counter parted by something more serious, he had gained some resolve, some back bone, A cause for which he was deeply passionate and now that he was focused on a goal he had developed as a person.

With a final kiss he departed, leaving the island to join one of the many marine bases as a simple ensign with starry eyed thoughts of becoming an admiral one day and returning to his dearest a changed man.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: In combat Kazuki heavily realies on supplementing his fighting skills with his devil fruit, whilst creating a powerful offence by fighting at close range with martial skill and at long range obscuring his opponents vision and then firing bullets through a haze of butterflies to better inhibit their ability to dodge.

Weaponry:
20 Shot Steel Revolver
Steel Kusanagi

Butterflash


Fist of Raijin


Items:Simple leather arm guards
Beli: 204,000,000
SD Earned: 437
Stat Points: 326
Advancement Points: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 326
  • Used for Fortune: 0


    • Strength: 127 (106+21)
    • Speed: 90
    • Stamina: 80
    • Accuracy: 50
    • Fortune: 81


Traits:

General:

Specific Devil Fruit (5 traits)
- The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited to Paramecia and Zoan, and further limited based on moderator discretion.

Awakened Haki (4 Traits) Dormant

- The character has awakened their dormant ambition and is able to utilise this mysterious force in combat. They may specialise in one of the two basic colors (The Color of Armaments or The Color of Observation) or a Dormant Specialization. For their specialist colour, the character's Haki maximum rank is 1/2 Fortune. For any other colour, the maximum rank is 1/4 Fortune. They are also capped at rank 44 for their Specialist color techniques, and rank 28 for any other colours.

Mighty Strength (1 Trait)
- This character's strength is boosted by 20%.

Professional:

Technically Adept [1 Trait]
- Increases total technique points by 40% of your fortune score.

Technical Mastery [1 Trait]
- Increases total technique points by 100% of your fortune score, but does not stack with Technically Adept (this benefit overrides the previous benefit). Requires Technically Adept and 100 SD earned.

Critical Hit (1 Trait)
– Through training in pressure points and learning how to hit vital points in the body, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck.

Poison Killer (1 Trait)
– With some basic training in the use of poisons to kill their targets, these assassins gain special Technique Points that can only be used on poisons, of the amount of half their fortune.

From the Shadows (1 Trait)
- Unlike others who have merely adopted the dark, the thief/assassin was born in it, molded by it. The thief/assassin gains special technique points equal to half their fortune that can be used to create Camouflage techniques, or any technique hides or otherwise obscures the presence of the character.

Devil Fruit
 
Chou Chou no Mi: Butterfly Omen Fruit
Devil Fruit Type:Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability:Users of this fruit power can summon swarms of small, brilliantly coloured butterflies. These obey the user's will and can be controlled in a small radius around them. Additionally, the users learns to read signs based on the butterflies' colours and movements. This lets them perform all manner of augury. Additionally, it obscured their form somewhat, making them harder to strike.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 350/364 (283+81) 278 DF + 68 for MA
Used Regular Technique Points: 350
Special Technique Points: 80 (40+40)
Used Special Technique Points: 80

Devil Fruit Techniques
Chou Chou no mi (x)
(free DF technique)
Type: Devil Fruit
Range: n/a
Stats: n/a
Description:Users of this fruit power can summon swarms of small, brilliantly colored butterflies. These obey the user's will and can be controlled in a small radius around them. Additionally, the users learns to read signs based on the butterflies' colors and movements. This lets them perform all manner of augury. Additionally, it obscured their form somewhat, making them harder to strike.
Omen of Disturbance (22)
Type: Supplementry
Range: Mid
Power: 0
Description: A thick flurry of butterflies is produced that rapidly flutter about enemies their colors specifically sequenced to cause the sense of sight to lose it’s ability to process information and causing temporary blindness.
(Sensory overload -14, Mid AoE -8)
Birth of a Butterfly (28)
Type: Supplementry
Range: Self
Power:
Description: Kazuki produces a large mass of butterflies which then attach first to his back and then to one another forming a beautiful pair of butterfly wings, he is then able to use these for sustained flight.
(Flight 28)
Omen of Insight (40)
Type: Supplementary
Range: self
Stats: +20 speed +20 Accuracy
Description: Kazuki produces a butterfly that rests atop him, through the butterfly he is able to channel omens of impending events, allowing him to gain glimpses of his opponents next action.
Omen of Deterrent (14)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Melee
Power: 14
Description: Kazuki jettisons a thick column of butterflies from his hand and sleeve capable of repelling an opponent or projectile.
(Displacement)
Butterfly Wheel (18)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 18
Description: Kazuki produces several butterflies that then fly in a circle at high speeds using the thin wing edge to create a disk of compressed wind with a razor edge that he then throws at an enemy.
(Shockwave 14, Short range)
Fleeting Butterfly Wheel Branched from Butterfly Wheel 26(18+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 18
Description: Fairly similar to the preceding technique though it has been refined in that the wheel is streamlined to fly at the enemy with great speed.
(Shockwave 14, Short range, Quick -8)
Butterfly Wheel Barrage Branched from Fleeting Butterfly Wheel 30(22+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 22
Description: Making use of the speed of this technique Kazuki launches a continuous barrage of them in quick succession swarming the enemy with a hail of projectiles.
(Shockwave 14, Short range, Quick -8, Gatling 8)
Butterfly Wheel Barrage Branched from Fleeting Butterfly Wheel 34(30+4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 22
Description: Similar to it’s forefather technique however he can now operate at a longer range.
(Shockwave 14, Mid Range -4, Quick -8, Gatling 8)
Blunted Butterfly Wheel Branched from Butterfly Wheel 22(18+4)
Type:Offensive
Range: Mid
Power: 18
Description: This technique works much like it's predecessor with the exception that The butterflies fly with the flats of their bodies facing outward creating a blunt wheel used for non-lethal supression.
(Shockwave 14, Mid range -4, Damage type change Blunt)
Butterfly WaltzBranched from Butterfly Wheel Barrage 34(26+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Power: 22
Description: Kazuki creates countless discs that will swirl around him in a lacerating storm, or can be used to barrage a single target all at once.
(Shockwave 14, Gatling 8, Quick -8, Mid Range -4)
Fluttering tempest (30)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Power: 22
Description: Releasing a furious swarm of butterflies the insects coalesce into a swirling cyclone whipping up winds with their movements till it turns into a tornado made up of cutting winds. The cyclone encompasses a medium radius.
(Elemental damage: Wind 14, AoE Mid -8)
Tempest Field Branched from Fluttering Tempest 40(30+10)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Power: 32
Description: Performed much in the same way of it's predecessors though this time several smaller cyclones can be produced. They can be directed to collide and fuse forming one huge cutting tornado, and tearing whatever's caught between them to pieces.
(Elemental damage: Wind 14, AoE Mid -8, Gatling 8)
Butterfly Ball (18)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 18
Description: After producing a small mass of butterflies they then fly in concentric circles entrapping and compassing a volume of wind into a cannon ball sized sphere which is then shot forward at the opponent.
(Shockwave 14, Short Range)
Butterfly Wrecking Ball Branched from Butterfly Ball (18+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Power: 26
Description: After producing a small mass of butterflies they then fly in concentric circles entrapping and compassing a volume of wind into a cannonball sized sphere which is then shot forward at the opponent hitting them with enough force to likely send them flying back
(Shockwave 14, Short Range, Displacement 8)
Butterfly Bomb Branched from Butterfly Ball (18+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Power: 18
Description: Using more butterflies a larger mass of wind is compressed and is done so at a higher pressure when hitting its target it will then explode with intense concussive force.
(Shockwave 14, Short range, AoE Mid -8)
Butterfly Bomb Barrage Branched from Butterfly Bomb (26+8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Power: 26
Description: Kazuki creates a multitude of butterfly bombs that hover around him before casting them towards an opponent where they will detonate.
(Shockwave 14, Short range, AoE Mid -8, Gatling)
Battering Butterfly Bomb Barrage Branched from Butterfly Bomb (34+6)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Power: 28
Description: Kazuki creates a multitude of butterfly bombs that hover around him before casting them towards an opponent with an even further maximum range, where they will detonate on command.
(Shockwave 14, Mid range -4, AoE Mid -8, Gatling)
Butterfly Portrait (16)
Type:Support
Power:4
Description: Kazuki is able to create a pair of clones from his butterflies that look fairly similar to himself. They can disperse into a cloud of butterflies. (After image -8, Additional after image -4)
Vivid Butterfly Portrait (16+14)
Type:Support
Power: 14
Description: Kazuki is able to create a trio of clones from his butterflies. They can disperse into a cloud of butterflies. By controlling the vibration of the butterflies wings the clones are able to imitate kazuki’s voice. (After image -8, Additional after image -4, Additional after image -4)
Vivid Butterfly Portrait (28+12)
Type:Support
Power: 24
Description: Kazuki is able to create a trio of clones from his butterflies. They can take a couple good hits or a single technique before dispersing into a cloud of butterflies with medium radius. By controlling the vibration of the butterflies wings the clones are able to imitate kazuki’s voice. (After image -8, Additional after image -4, Additional after image -4)
Butterflies Cocoon (26)
Type:Support
Power: 12
Description:Kazuki coats himself in butterflies that shift the color of their wings to cause him to blend in with natural sources of camouflage, capable of concealing him from both natural and supernatural senses (Natural Camoflage 14)
Swaddling Butterflies CocoonBranched from Butterflies Cocoon (30+10)
Type:Support
Power: 12
Description:Kazuki coats his body in butterflies that shift the color of their wings with such precision he can blend with any environment whether it presents natural sources of camouflage or not, capable of concealing him from both natural and supernatural senses. He is able to make the transition appear as if his body is breaking down into butterflies. (Open Camoflage 28)



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Kenpo Techniques

Fist of the White Dragon Tail (16)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 16
Stats: -11 speed
Description: A Strong Punch that is executed with the apex of Kazuki's strength thrown into it aimed towards the thorax damaging the victims lungs and impairing their ability to breath properly for 4 post's afterwards.
Strike of the White Dragon TailBranched from Fist of the White Dragon Tail (16+14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 30
Stats: -25 speed
Description: A Strong Punch that is executed with the apex of Kazuki's strength thrown into it aimed towards the thorax damaging the victims lungs and impairing their ability to breath properly for 5 post's afterwards.
Fierce strike of the White Dragon Tail Branched from Strike of the White Dragontail (30+10)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Power: 40
Stats: -34 speed
Description: A strong punch that is executed with the apex of Kazuki's strength thrown into it aimed towards the thorax damaging the victims respiratory system and causing their body to become less responsive for 5 post's afterwards.
Shimmer Step (28)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: Once a post, an individual can use this technique to put on momentary bursts of speed that make them invisible to the untrained naked eye. The user may move to any location they could normally reach within a number of meters equal to the rank of this ability near-instantaneously. During this movement, they cannot be seen by anybody who's accuracy is less than double this technique's rank, appearing as a blurred streak to anybody who's accuracy is above that point. Additionally, the user cannot be hit by a targeted attack by anybody who's speed is lower than the user while the technique is active.


Assasination Techniques

N'gwa Toxin (16)
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: -11 strength
Description: A poison extracted from the crushed entrails of the N'gwa caterpillar, upon contact it will seep into the victims flesh and it will act as a muscle relaxant causing the victims body to become less responsive. It's effects will last on a victim for 4 posts.
N'gwa PoisonBranched from N'gwa Toxin (30)
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: -25 strength
Description: A poison extracted from the crushed entrails of the N'gwa caterpillar, upon contact it will seep into the victims flesh and it will act as a muscle relaxant causing the victims body to become less responsive. It's effects will last on a victim for 5 posts
N'gwa VenomBranched from N'gwa Poison (40)
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: -34 strength
Description: A poison extracted from the crushed entrails of the N'gwa caterpillar, upon contact it will seep into the victims flesh and act as a muscle relaxant causing the victims body to become less responsive. It's effects will last on a victim for 5 posts


Development History
Gains/Losses:
-33 mill Ship

+9SD and 4.5 mill Birthday Times

+4 SD Fite fite

+34 SD, 17 milli and 100 Commendations from ME times

Holiday with Squibmo - 42 SD and 21,000,000 +16 commendations

Some unfinished shit - 27 SD and 13,500,000 beli + 7 commendations.

That piece of shit zander inflicted - 6 SD 3 mill

Mighty Mythical- 6SD 3 mill

Chicken 50SD 12,500,000 beli and 30 commendations

7 sheets of stasis - 43 SD 10,750,000 beli

Gourrested - 21 SD and 5,200,000 Beli and 20 commendations
Beating up beastbloods -
- 15 SD and 3,750,000
+44SD 10 commendations and 10,950,000 beli from Still Counting

+7 SD and 3,500,000 Beli from July comp

-24,500,000 beli for Shock Gloves

+34 SD and 8,449,950 beli and 1 commendation from This town ain't big enough

+3 SD and 3,000,000 beli from April Comp

- +13 SD and 3,200,000 beli from Potential Health Hazard

- 7th april scooping from Kazuki

+13SD, 1 commendation and 3,500,000 beli from Hazard Mountain

-1,730,000 beli for revolver Here

32SD 7,950,000 beli, 3 commendations Here

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Edited by Singularity, Jan 20 2018, 04:37 PM.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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I'll have to ask you to update the character sheet, specifically where it says upkeep and a lack of Advancement sections, just to keep things up-to date.

For the base effect of Chou Chou no Mi, I'd say the best you could get is free Short Range / AOE, regardless of the rank scaling. So I'll have to ask you to edit all techniques that make use of this. The problem being that free Medium Range is more than most fruits get, atop of this you also have the precognitive abilities. If you'd like to get confirmation from a higher up on what you can/can't have, please feel free.

Omen of Insight, alongside other prediction techniques, should follow Observation Haki rules, which means that predicting inbound attacks should be Rank 28. Range: Self.

It should be noted that shockwave only has a cost of 10. Not that this effects the techniques.

Omen of Deterrent, the way that it's worded makes it appear like it should be Short Range, depending on how the above statement regarding the free short range goes about, you may have to increase this technique by 4 ranks.

Butterfly Waltz: You'll need to pay for the mid range.

Fluttering tempest: Wind counts as elemental damge, so you'd have to up it from 10.

Butterfly Portrait : You're currently only paying for two clones, though you can up that to 3 by using up the 4 power. It should also be stated that they're easily distinguishable from Kazuki.

Fist of the Purple Emperor: You don't have haki, also should this be using a speed effect?

Barrage of the Purple Emperor: We've apparently stopped letting people branch from Rank 1's to Rank 4's. A minimum of 4 Ranks must be used per branch.

Fist of the White Dragon Tail : this along with each branch should have Range: Melee.
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Yeh it was shamma who suggested the high tier benefit of bomu which is the AoE thing, i can forward the PM or you can ask him if you'd prefer it first hand.
Think i've altered the ranks and effects of the rest as requested
Edited by Singularity, Jul 1 2016, 09:59 AM.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Not gonna doubt you buddy.

Doing us proud here, gj.

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