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| Goldenblast | Mar 5 2016, 10:42 PM Post #1 | ||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Goldenblast Basic Character Information Name: Wilhelm Suru Nickname: One shot Age: 27 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Threat: 0 Achievements: none right now Profession: Assassin/Sniper Position: Gunner Marksman- The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. Assassin- The Assassin profession gives stealth skills, the ability to move silently through areas without being detected. It also gives general poison knowledge. An Assassin generally has little actual combat experience, since their victims don't fight back, and as such don't fare that well in a true fight. Physical Appearance Height: 6.3 Weight: 213 Hair: blonde, medium length, slightly curly. Eyes: blue Clothing/Accessories: Belt across his chest with various Bolt heads and Bolt shafts. The shirts he wears tend to be army camo that are dark in color. He has dark camo pants. He also wears Leather arm-guards on his wrists and fore-arms. General Appearance: A tall well built guy with blue eyes and Blonde hair. He has a straight posture with a bored expression on his face most of the time. He is slightly stocky, and has a broad chest. He moves in a quick determined fashion, like he is in a rush to be somewhere. He has a scar on his right cheek from when a crossbow string broke. The Character Personality: Wilhelm tends to be in the back, out of the limelight. he tends to remain unemotional towards his contracts and jobs. He tends to be blunt and sometimes uncaring. He tends to view people as one of three things, Threats, Friends and Enemies. Threats are just people who could be a threat to him. Friends are what Friends are, people he can trust. Enemies are people who he has deemed unfit or too dangerous to be a friend. Threats can become friends to him but not enemies. He prides himself on being a efficient Sniper. His motto is "Have a plan to kill everyone you meet." Hometown: Loguetown, east blue History: He was born in Loguetown but didn't stay long, as a kid he had traveled pretty much everywhere until some pirates killed his parents. After that for the next couple of years he stayed where his parents had died. He mad his use of his Marksman skills to earn a living as a hunter and part-time bounty hunter. Several years after his parents died. He meet the pirates who killed his parents. After he got his revenge, things seemed to slow down with bounties and everything else. His father used to be a pirate and his father quit being a pirate when he was born. When Wilhelm was young his father taught him how to use weapons.Early on he never really got into the normal weapons, he didn't like swinging the sword, The hand cannon was too loud, and the bows were too big. The crossbow was one of the only things that he liked to use. He had spent many hours practicing with his Crossbow. Wilhelm's time in the marines was what you would expect. He thought Marines were supposed to be more valiant and noble. That was as far from the truth you could get. They never really told him much about what not to do just what to arrest people for and to do it no matter the cost. He did not agree with this, and he used the Marines to find the Pirates and kill them. The main reason why his family traveled so much was because his father was a ex-pirate. Whenever the neighbors discovered that his dad used to be a pirate they either chased them out, or called the marines. He did not make many friends growing up and left him kinda lonely, which is why he turned towards the Crossbow. His father supported him using the crossbow but always told him to not become a pirate because it would change your life for better or more likely for worse. Abilities and Possessions Combat: He tends to fights with a good amount of distance between him and his target usually waiting for a opening to get one good shot to end the fight before it begins. This earned him the nickname of Oneshot. Weaponry: Large Iron Crossbow Items: Crossbow Bolts Beli: 500,000 SD Earned: 0 Stat Points: 32 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:
Art of Stealth (1 Professional Trait) - After a lifetime of learning how to survey an area's or targets' weak points, this assassin has a particularly effective set of skills for the purposes of stealth. All stealth techniques are treated as if they are four ranks higher for purposes of effectiveness. Fate of the Strong (2 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your strength stat. Top Gun (1 Trait) - These marksmen are top of the line when it comes to being able to draw their weapon and fire. These characters are also always reloading their gun reflexively faster than those around them notice thus they never have to actually deal with taking the time to reload at a critical moment in battle.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 9 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points:
Development History Gains/Losses: na Edit Log: na Spoiler: click to toggle Edited by Goldenblast, Mar 25 2016, 06:33 AM.
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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| HeartOfLight | Mar 7 2016, 08:38 PM Post #2 | ||||||||
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Barely Concious
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Clothing/Accessories: Need at least 3-4 more sentences here, look into other characters to get an idea of what we require for clothing and such. General Appearance: Same as clothing, though preferably more like 5-6 sentences. History: We need a lot more than this, try to aim for at least 4 Paragraphs, that's usually a good safe amount. Detail his past, you have 27 entire years to play with- surely there are plenty of events worth writing about. Combat: One more sentence would be nice. Large Iron Crossbow: You can't really afford a scope as a starter character even at 2x zoom, so please remove that for now. Stat Points: This should be 32. Stats: Can only have SP put into it in intervals of 5. If you wish to do this please fix the rest of your stats. So you know, 1 Strength is comparable to a sickly child and it measures how hard your attacks with your crossbow hits. If you intend to put in 5 SP into fortune, your fortune will be 9 [(27/4)+3]. Traits: None of these are traits located in our trait board, and they don't really specify anything that would warrant a trait. Most of these qualify as techniques, not traits. Please look over the Technique and Trait rules, and pop by the chatbox or the suggestions/questions area if you have concerns. Techniques: A techniques maximum rank is 1/2 your fortune. So if you do what I said above and decide to have 9 fortune, your max rank is 4. Weapon "Charging" is not a thing, and I recommend again reading through the technique rules to understand how techniques work here. This would basically just be a Rank 4 power shot, granting 4 power and no unique effects- just hitting with more force. |
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| Goldenblast | Mar 9 2016, 07:20 PM Post #3 | ||||||||
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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| ShadowBlade | Mar 10 2016, 07:26 PM Post #4 | ||||||||
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#ReturnOfTheKing
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- Used for stats: you still have 2 SP remaining it should be 27 if you used 5 - You have 3 general traits you did not allocate -what is the material of the arm guards? -You cannot have more iron material for random shafts and such please keep it more basic i.e non tiered material - You've only used 4 tech points - please list the full description of your professions. |
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Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! 310,000,000RAIN - 雨 IZUMI - 泉 VAIN 脈
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| Goldenblast | Mar 13 2016, 05:12 PM Post #5 | ||||||||
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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| ♦ Gigasheep | Mar 17 2016, 02:10 PM Post #6 | ||||||||
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Please describe your characters hair in the hair section, give an idea of the style, even if brief. Why aren't you using all your stats? You have 32 to spend and you're using 27. Deadshot would have 0 power because of the range. Sneaky Sneaky can probably be freeformed but it'd be power 0 anyway. Stealth shot would be power 0 too. If you wanted higher power on the two sniping abilities you'd want to have short range instead. This would put power at 4. Just as a note. |
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| Goldenblast | Mar 18 2016, 01:31 PM Post #7 | ||||||||
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*Edited
Edited by Goldenblast, Mar 18 2016, 09:14 PM.
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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| ♦ Gigasheep | Mar 19 2016, 01:39 AM Post #8 | ||||||||
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You've spent 2 traits on fate of the strong. Your strength would be "16 (10+6)". All else looks ok. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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| Goldenblast | Mar 20 2016, 02:38 PM Post #9 | ||||||||
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*edited |
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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| Goldenblast | Mar 22 2016, 05:53 PM Post #10 | ||||||||
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Is bump allowed? *Bump | ||||||||
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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| ShadowBlade | Mar 24 2016, 02:11 PM Post #11 | ||||||||
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Would you please remove any note of anything that would have given you noteriety in your history? Mainly this:
I believe it says you were a marine before for your character. Please note that this would give you notoriety (even if small). You'll be starting from ground up. After this, I'll go ahead and approve this. |
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Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! 310,000,000RAIN - 雨 IZUMI - 泉 VAIN 脈
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| Goldenblast | Mar 25 2016, 06:33 AM Post #12 | ||||||||
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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| ♠ Shamma | Apr 3 2016, 12:38 PM Post #13 | ||||||||
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hey buddy sorry for the long delay, i'll consider old flag still valid Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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| Goldenblast | Apr 4 2016, 12:08 PM Post #14 | ||||||||
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thank you :3 | ||||||||
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The Mantis Shrimp Wilhelm Suru • Gunner • Ranged Assassin (assassin/marksman) • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.[/center] | |||||||||
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