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♦ Gigasheep
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Mar 9 2016, 12:32 PM
Post #46
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Thank you for your patience. Your storyline has been reviewed.
| Kintarou | 0 SD | 0 | Bonuses:: Deductions::Inactive | Alexis | 13 SD | 3,250,000 | Bonuses:: Deductions:: | Kuroda | 20 SD | 5,000,000 | Bonuses:: Deductions:: | Kai | 7 SD | 1,750,000 | Bonuses:: Deductions:: | Stitch | 7 SD | 1,750,000 | Bonuses:: Deductions:: |
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For any cool things that the characters find
SL Notes Nice small SL. Posting order made it a bit confusing, but it was cool when everything came together nicely. Cypher and Davy, your posts were conclusive enough, although that was only after a little bit of reading, this is aimed more towards Davy (who needs to sort is signature out ASAP). Zikari completely left which was a little annoying, I’d been looking forwards to him meeting you guys. Rest seems OK. Enjoy your SD. Commentary - We’re off to a good start
- How Alexis didn’t realise from simply the horrible taste I’ll never know
- I’m curious about him being here too peach lady
- Moo
- That’s one way to start and end a fight
- Is he actually opening a Macdonalds? That sounds awesome
- Interesting intro there Davy, not seen much first person talk around here either, new perspective is fun
- Seawater isn’t their only weakness I see
- Blinded by his anger or oblivious?
- Well, I knew the marines were corrupt, but this bad?
- Scared/infatuated people act irrationally I guess
- Yama introducing a Whiterun guard here
- Or not, he’s a cool guy, maybe
- At least you tried Alexis
- I was going to comment on the power difference but I’m enjoying the technique description too much
- Good guy Kai. Hey that rhymes
- Is it me or does he really like shouting?
- Kuroda is going all out here, pipe bomb is a good description of it indeed
- Enter, large woman
- Well that was unexpected, shameless advertising for the win
- And this guy is probably dead
- Just going to run off with Alexis? Sure
- Poor girl
- Entertaining ending, even if it felt a tad sudden. Ah well
- End
Kuroda gets blues amount of money for this, although if I receive information saying he can have Grandline amounts then I'll PM you, but for now there's no point holding up the grading any longer.
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