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Basic Character Information Name: Samuel Withers Nickname: Age: 27 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Threat: 87.7 Achievements: Profession: ~Entertainer An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific. Entertainers can use their performance skills, be they song, dance or anything else, to influence others and use them as various buffs.
~Inventor An Inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build explosives and battle engines if they have enough materials. Inventors gain the ability to create explosives and gadgets that they may use in battle.
~Weapon Specialist A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.
~Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Position: Crewman
Physical Appearance Height: 5'9" Weight: 184lb Hair: his hair is brown and cut relatively short and matted. It's kept at the point which blurs the line between neat and messy. Eyes: brown Clothing/Accessories: Samuel typically wears a white collared shirt loosely with a black vest and necktie with matching slacks. His clothes are somewhat dusty as a result of traveling and not always having an opportunity to get them cleaned and pressed. For the same reason, he doesn't go out of his way to get exceptionally fine or pricey clothing either except for special occasions. He has a belt with some tool pouches for working with his machinery as well as having his trombone strapped to his back when not using it. General Appearance: As part of the "professional" appearance he tries to give off, he has good posture and doesn't make any unnecessary movements, usually folding his arms. When he relaxes or gets excited, he talks a lot with his hands and adds a flourish to his motions. When faced with an embarrassing situation, he grits his teeth and clenches his fists as he tries not to openly express his frustration.
Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Withers is quite concerned with other people's impressions of him and endeavors to have others see him the way he wants to be seen. The way he wants to be seen is as a cool expert of his chosen field, not letting things bother him and being in total control of his surroundings. He breaks this facade when things don't go as planned, grumbling a bit in visible frustration. He tries very hard to inspire awe in those around him, especially towards his creations. His flare for combat and performance as a whole is an effective mask for his insecurities within of only really being able to measure himself according to those around him. -As a result of his experience working with the Jacks of All Trades, he is a bit more relaxed than he used to be, exchanging banter with his comrades. He has a great deal of emotional investment in his equipment. He has also adjusted to being completely overshadowed by Minerva O'Malley on a regular basis and thus tries not to compare himself to others quite so much. Hometown: Seabear Island (North Blue) History: Samuel Withers was born to a small family on Seabear Island in a rural community. Somewhat sickly as a lad, his legs were very weak, a situation that annoyed him greatly. His significant time spent at home encouraged Samuel to foster a talent for music, favoring the lively tones of brass instruments in particular. By chance, a stanger had been passing through his hometown picking up supplies for a voyage, hefting a large crate of foodstuffs through main street with arms made of iron. The concept of improving the body to make up for natural shortcomings struck a chord with young Withers, deciding at that moment that he would strive to obtain improvements like that for himself one day. A few months later, he was found to have a terrible infection that forced him to remain indoors for yet a few more months afterwards, giving him an opportunity to work out in his mind the specifics of his future goal. He'd show everyone that he wasn't going to be controlled by anything. During his quarantine he developed plans for his proposed "improvements" and gathered scraps of metal and wiring from things in the couple of rooms he had access to. During this entire process he still wasn't sure how to make the switch from his natural legs to the new ones he had been working on, but destiny made the decision for him as the final stages of the illness suddenly flared up in his own legs from the knees down, forcing them to be amputated. Everyone was shocked by his readiness for the operation and his presentation of his prototype prosthesis. Nobody in town really approved, but kept silent in order not to dash this poor child's dreams. In the end, the operation and Withers' later integration of his new legs were a success, to the amazement of himself and the whole town. This first success and the sudden wave of encouragement was intoxicating and led to large amount of tinkering in the future leading up to when he finally came of age and was able to leave his home to seek his fortune. With his increased mobility, he was able to exercise much more vigorously and improve his overall health dramatically, no longer seeming nearly as frail as he was in his childhood. Withers continued experimenting in ways to improve his "improvements" and found that such a thing required funding. Much more than simply being a street musician could really afford. At that time, he found that bounty posters often had fairly sizable rewards offered. Deciding to become a bounty hunter meant that he'd have to start fighting dangerous criminals, so Samuel took it upon himself to obtain a weapon with which to do his dirtywork. Obtaining a new weapon that he could learn to wield would be pricey, so he decided to make one instead. After a great deal of work and scrap-finding, he was able to build into his personal trombone the ability to change shape and be used as a weapon! With that modification and a great deal of practice, he was prepared to begin his work. Over a couple years, he was able to get a decent enough payout from his small-time bounty hunting to refine his inventions to a point of being respectable tools. With everything ready to go, he boldly set out to find out how good he really was...
Abilities and Possessions Combat: Withers' fighting style is meant to showcase his skills to the maximum, relying heavily on his varied creations, whether they are his leg enhancements or his Dual-Mode Trombone. Nearly all of his attacks or maneuvers use these in some way in order to prove their effectiveness. When a fight starts, Withers usually takes a moment to wait and see what he is up against and decide how to fight, often playing music to set the pace. Weaponry: ~Slide Rascal, Dual-Mode Trombone Withers' pride and joy, "Rascal" is a titanium trombone that has been engineered and modified to switch between being a traditional instrument and a lethal lance. A negligible amount of sound quality was lost by including several joints and hinges throughout the structure, allowing the curves to straighten out and lock into place while a small handle unfolds within the mouth. A breath dial has been installed so that, when Rascal is in lance form, a trigger on the handle can be pressed for a temporary burst of increased thrust. -Each of Withers' cyborg legs contain a 4-inch titanium piston which can forcefully extend/retract at will for assisted jumps and additional impact from kicking. Items: --Odd green saxophone reed that enables the Entertainer to perform Speed-stat debuffs. This item gets an additional 2 rank upgrade to one debuffing technique (must be stated at the beginning of an SL). This item caps at rank 28 (not including the 2 rank upgrade)
8th Anniversary Swag Bag This golden thread bag contains eight special treasures - An exclusive limited edition 8,000,000 beli note which glows in the dark. Can be spent as normal currency or kept as a momento. - A pair of extra sparkly sunglasses fashioned in the shape of the number 8. This attention demanding eye-wear can be used once to boost the fame reward earned in a future SL by 8%! Afterwards they lose their appeal. - A Get Out of Impel Free card. This black and white piece is not official and every Impel Down jailer has seen one and knows they are not real. However, any other jailer or law enforcer may pause for a moment to consider the validity of the item, giving an opportunity to get away with a small crime. - A rolled up poster requesting help to find a missing Admin. The 'Where is the Unspeakable?' poster is unable to state last known whereabouts but does apologise for an inability to hand out Eye rewards until he is found. - An ancient dusty silver bracelet with the words Raftel inscribed on it several times. Characters in possession of this item have an 8% better chance of uncovering clues in the New World to find the lost island. - A coupon from Bubbly Bill's Ship Coating offering a free ship coating on Sabaody. Bubbly Bill is able to offer a bubble coating in any color of the rainbow. - Pink candy wrapped in a foil with the number 8 on it. When eaten, the candy brings out the inner potential of a character based on the following; If over 200 SD Earned, the character gains 8 SD! If between 151 & 200 SD Earned, the character gains 16 SD! If between 101 & 150 SD Earned, the character gains 24 SD! If between 51 & 100 SD Earned, the character gains 32 SD! If 50 SD earned and below, the character gains 40SD!
- A stylish orange sweatshirt with the number 8 on front and back from Doskoi Panda. This item makes the wearer just a little more charismatic and more convincing when talking with mooks. However it is only fashionable on Autumn islands and has no effect when worn out of season. Beli: 11,500,000 SD Earned: 214 Stat Points: 224 (32+150+42) Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: Stats:
- Used for Stats: 199
- Used for Fortune: 25
- Strength: 42 (39+3)
- Speed: 64
- Stamina: 32
- Accuracy: 64
- Fortune: 64 (49+15)
Traits: General Traits ~Advanced Cyborg (3 Traits) - This is a high-tech cyborg, rarely encountered anywhere but the Grand Line. A character must be within the Grand Line to access this kind of technology. Advanced Cyborgs begin with up to 12M Beli worth of modifications. They are made of steel and may be constructed of materials up to titanium in strength, and may have additional body parts added. Their size may vary from their original form at a cost. Each arm may conceal two weapons and each leg may conceal one. Additionally, they may externally mount cybernetics/weapons at this stage. Cyborgs of this type may have multiple special systems, though moderators may enforce a limit eventually. Advanced Cyborgs may also purchase additional fuel charges up to a limit of 5. Upgrades from Basic Cyborg modifications are maintained and do not count against Advanced maximums. -Both legs are made of steel and contain light compressed-air thrusters which can be activated to release a blast of air from the ankles of each foot equivalent to the use of 1/2 breath dial, allowing the cyborg to jump higher than normal as well as being able to have a burst of thrust midair and perform an "air dash." (power is equal to dividing 1 breath dial between the two legs) Each leg also has a 4-inch titanium piston which extends/retracts from the heel at will. The legs are powered by pure olive oil. ~Crowd Control (1 Trait) – Due to the nature of their skills, their performances will affect basically anyone who can see and hear them. Buff techniques used by these entertainers will have the same maximum effect as if they were affecting a group of targets one crowd tier smaller than the size of the crowd the technique was intended to effect. ~Prop Performance (1 Trait) – An entertainer with this trait has learned how to integrate one of their performing props into their fighting style. They gain the ability to make martial techniques involving one item above rank 14. Additionally, they may perform freeform attacks with this item while performing at no additional expense of action economy. ~Fate of the Strong (1 Trait) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (1 of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your strength stat.
Professional Traits ~Jack of All Trades (1 Trait) – The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions. A character may not have Weapons Specialist, Marksman and Martial Artist. ~Advanced Lance Mastery (2 Traits) - The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed.
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Devil Fruit Name: N/A Devil Fruit Type: N/A Devil Fruit Ability: N/A
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 145 Used Regular Technique Points: 110 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
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Rascal Rush 4* (4) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power:8 Stats: N/A
| Description: Withers uses his legs' pistons to spring forward with his lance in a frontal piercing assault.
| Rascal Rise (branched from Rascal Rush) 12* (4+8) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 16 Stats: N/A
| Description: (Displacement) Withers powers forward with his leg-pistons, Lance pointed at the enemy. Just before contact, he lowers the lance before again using his leg modifications to propel himself up while angling the lance back up to knock/spear the target into the air.
| Slide Drop 8 Type: Offensive Range: melee Power: 8 Stats: N/A
| Description: Withers uses the slider of his trombone to hook one of his opponent's appendages and pulls back and down to throw them to the ground.
| Piston Drive (9) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 9 Stats: N/A
| Description: (Displacement) Withers gets a few paces away from an opponent before planting the point of his lance in the ground and swinging both legs out for a double-kick, activating his leg-pistons on contact for a significant boost in concussive force, knocking them back.
| Battle Jam (20) Type: Support (Performance Buff) Range: AOE Medium Power: Stats: +6 speed +5 Strength
| Description: Withers plays a spirited, rousing melody that gets the blood pumping, encouraging allies (and self) to move faster and hit harder for as long as he is playing. Buff ends when playing ceases.
| Piston Overdrive(branched from Piston Drive) (9+11+4=24) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 10 Stats: N/A
| Description: (Gatling, +14 Iron-breaking, Fuel-Empowerd) While using his lance to vault into an opponent, Withers consumes a charge of fuel to begin rapidly kicking at them and activating his leg piston several times in the process. The repeated hits are sufficient to wear down and break through iron.
| Whirlwind Driver (26+8) Type: Offensive Range: melee Power: 30 Stats: N/A
| Description: (Gatling 8, Displacement 8, Omnidirectional 10, Additional General Effects 4, Double Fuel-charged) Samuel drives the point of his lance into the ground, handstands with a grip on the handle, then overcharges his legs' air compressors in a rapid spinning kick! The speed of the rotation creates a small vortex that pulls close by enemies into the attack to be kicked repeatedly.
| Screw Dive (24*+4) Type: Offensive Range: melee Power: 16 Stats: N/A
| Description: ( Quick 8, Piercing 8, Lance Mastery Tech, Single Fuel-Charge) Samuel rushes toward a target before diving forward with a slight spin. Engaging the thrust mechanics of his legs and lance, he accelerates significantly in the air and increases his spin to the point where he can effectively drill through tierless material!
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Development History Gains/Losses: -JoAT Fleet: -16,500,000 Beli -Arma d'Exotique: +29 SD, +14,500,000 Beli, +30 Threat -Withers' Break: + 6,000,000 Beli, 12 SD -down 10,000,000 Beli for Titanium Heel-Pistons -8th Anniversary Event: +8,000,000 Beli +32 SD -1 fist 2 fist, red fist blue fist: +13,500,000 +27SD +30 Threat -28,000,000 beli for Trombone -11,000,000 beli for Cyborg Costs not covered by Advanced Cyborg budget -Patching Scoop from Samuel Withers 1.0
Samuel Withers 1.0 Gains and Losses -220,000 beli for trombone As Noted Here+2,200,000 beli, 0 threat, 9 SD from The Bounty is Caught! Relaxing in Loguetown+2,700,000 beli, 3 threat, 11 SD from The Bounty is Caught? Let's Move on to the Next.+350,000 beli, 0 threat, 2SD from A crowded SL+9,500,000 beli, 8 threat, 19 SD from Brick Blues Run Red+11,500,000, 10.7 threat, 23 SD from The Feud Mystery+9,500,000 beli, 19 SD from Gorge Yourself
Krest Kolton gains/Losses Edit Log:
Spoiler: click to toggle 6/12/17: Added latest SL Rewards 5/18/17: Speed patched to quick 3/5/17: Added latest gains 2/26/17: Edited In the Approved techs Here2/24/17: Edited in the approved cyborg weapons upgrade 2/13/17: Adjusted Performance Buffs to conform to recent patch 1/31/17: Corrected some bad math in SD and TP 2/10/15:Expanded upon fighting style to match how it is really played. 7/6/2015: upgraded trombone as noted in gains/losses 7/16/2015: Added techs as noted Here
Edited by Togamau, Jun 15 2017, 12:36 PM.
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Characters Samuel Withers• Bounty Hunter • (no position yet) • Entertainer/Inventor/Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Jacks of All Trades • Threat: 87.1 • SD Earned: 214 • Beli: 11,500,000 • Location: NeptuniaCaptain Dynamic• Superhero • "Captain" • Martial Artist/SuperHero • The Allies of Justice! • Threat:50• SD Earned: 261 • Beli: 81,000,000 • Location: Bratham (Part One)Salasais Racto• Pirate • Surgeon/spirit healer • Doctor/Martial Artist • Eclipse Pirates • Bounty: 15,000,000 • SD Earned:288 • Beli:123,930,000 • Location: Boin ArchipelagoBarkus Quimby• Marine • (No Position) • Weapon Specialist/Smith • (No Crew) • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 145 • Beli: 41,050,000 • Location: Rust PitPeoria • Unaffiliated • Marksman/Inventor • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 81 • Beli: 21,900,000 • Location: Salt IslandPreston Kaylock • Elder • Merchant/ Weapon Specialist • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 45 • Beli: 11,750,000• Location: Noirevoile (North Blue)
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♦ Togamau
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Jan 8 2016, 12:19 AM
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Changes involved: -traded out an Obsolete Trait Weapon Mastery [Lance] (1 Trait) – The character masters the use of a specific weapon type. All techniques involving the weapon get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for techniques involving this weapon is two higher than the natural maximum. For Crowd Control -Reworked techs to fit new system -Also submitting Advanced Cyborg upgrade for approval, sorry if that complicates things. It is consuming a newly earned trait and a fated trait slot.
Edited by Togamau, Jan 8 2016, 12:20 AM.
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Characters Samuel Withers• Bounty Hunter • (no position yet) • Entertainer/Inventor/Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Jacks of All Trades • Threat: 87.1 • SD Earned: 214 • Beli: 11,500,000 • Location: NeptuniaCaptain Dynamic• Superhero • "Captain" • Martial Artist/SuperHero • The Allies of Justice! • Threat:50• SD Earned: 261 • Beli: 81,000,000 • Location: Bratham (Part One)Salasais Racto• Pirate • Surgeon/spirit healer • Doctor/Martial Artist • Eclipse Pirates • Bounty: 15,000,000 • SD Earned:288 • Beli:123,930,000 • Location: Boin ArchipelagoBarkus Quimby• Marine • (No Position) • Weapon Specialist/Smith • (No Crew) • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 145 • Beli: 41,050,000 • Location: Rust PitPeoria • Unaffiliated • Marksman/Inventor • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 81 • Beli: 21,900,000 • Location: Salt IslandPreston Kaylock • Elder • Merchant/ Weapon Specialist • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 45 • Beli: 11,750,000• Location: Noirevoile (North Blue)
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Jan 26 2016, 05:52 PM
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Techs don't have power and stats at the same time unless they're a debuffing attack like Rokuogan, it's either/or, so remove the power part from your buff techs.
I'm getting 47 for TP used.
Trait stuff is fine.
9 Million beli for the cyborg legs.
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Kaji "Dragon" Jones Kaji "Dragon" Jones • Captain • Martial Artist • Draco Pirates • Bounty: 57,250,000 • SD Earned: 225 • Beli:27,500,000 • Location: Grand Line, Route 5 Strength: 70 Speed: 60 Stamina: 51 Accuracy: 51 Fortune: 58
Kizurra Lovelace Kizurra Lovelace • Captain • Inventor• [url]No crew yet[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 207 • Beli: 900,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 40 Speed: 96 Stamina: 40 Accuracy: 60 Fortune: 62
Bardock Kresnov Bardock Kresnov • Bounty Hunter • Doctor • Equilibrium • Threat: 159 • SD Earned: 204 • Beli: 48,275,000 • Location: Route 2, Grand Line Strength: 75 Speed: 39 Stamina: 66 Accuracy: 39 Fortune: 54
Baxcel Reed Baxcel Reed • Pirate • Martial Artist • [url]N/A[/url] • Bounty: 50,000,000 • SD Earned: 221 • Beli:9,925,000 • Location: Route 1, Grand Line Strength: 57 Speed: 57 Stamina: 58 Accuracy: 57 Fortune: 57
Silas Mortlock Silas Mortlock • Other • Weapon Specialist • [url]N/A[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 77 • Beli: 30,820,000 • Location: South Blue Strength: 22 Speed: 34 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 33 Fortune: 27
Oriana Arma Oriana Arma • Other • Thief • [url]N/A[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 41 • Beli: 16,300,000 • Location: South Blue Strength: 20 Speed: 16 Stamina: 21 Accuracy: 16 Fortune: 18
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Jan 27 2016, 11:41 AM
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I was under the impression that tech power for stat-changes was just a measure of how much they can change a stat. I will change it, nonetheless.
Edit: Actually doing the math, accounting for branches and such I got 60 points used. Since the final total points for tech trees are 12, 8, 20, and 20. Removed power from stat techs.
-paid the 9 million. so how does this relate to the 12million allowed by the trait? Are we saying the 9million would be covered by it or is the enhancement basically costing 21 million?
Edited by Togamau, Feb 1 2016, 12:22 PM.
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Characters Samuel Withers• Bounty Hunter • (no position yet) • Entertainer/Inventor/Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Jacks of All Trades • Threat: 87.1 • SD Earned: 214 • Beli: 11,500,000 • Location: NeptuniaCaptain Dynamic• Superhero • "Captain" • Martial Artist/SuperHero • The Allies of Justice! • Threat:50• SD Earned: 261 • Beli: 81,000,000 • Location: Bratham (Part One)Salasais Racto• Pirate • Surgeon/spirit healer • Doctor/Martial Artist • Eclipse Pirates • Bounty: 15,000,000 • SD Earned:288 • Beli:123,930,000 • Location: Boin ArchipelagoBarkus Quimby• Marine • (No Position) • Weapon Specialist/Smith • (No Crew) • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 145 • Beli: 41,050,000 • Location: Rust PitPeoria • Unaffiliated • Marksman/Inventor • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 81 • Beli: 21,900,000 • Location: Salt IslandPreston Kaylock • Elder • Merchant/ Weapon Specialist • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 45 • Beli: 11,750,000• Location: Noirevoile (North Blue)
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Feb 14 2016, 05:50 PM
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While I consider 9mil for a breath dial-esque enchancement to be pretty generous, considering breath dials cost 14mil on their own, I guess I can trust Kaji's judgement here. Unless someone else vetoes it.
That said, the 9mil is detracted from your 'cyborg budget', which isn't the same as your actual beli count since it can only be used on cybernetics or things related to it. That means you still have 3mil for that, but you don't need to spend it right away.
Everything else seems to check out.
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Characters Mariead 'Forehead' Mockday, the Frontosa Fishman 'I guess victory slipped from your grasp, eh?' Mariead Mockday • Affiliation: Pirate • Crew: Brofist (former) Raijin (former) • Position: Shipwright, 'Curiousity' • Profession: Sleek Woman / Ship-Designer / Freaky-Fishperson • Bounty:  50,000,000 • SD Earned: 290 • Location: Red Line, Fishman Island • Hanada Hakamori, the Legendary Taunt 'Underestimating me is a surefire way to get hurt!' Hanada Hakamori • Affiliation: Other • Crew: wandering with cherry blossom • • Profession: Chef / Weapon Specialist • Threat: 5.0 • SD Earned: 51 • Location: Somewhere • Wiltrude Famino, the Criminal Upper 'Well now, let's see if we can't do something about my boredom.' Wiltrude Famino • Affiliation: Criminal • Crew: n/a • Position: n/a • Profession: Jao Kun Dōdo / Long-Leg Tribesman • • Bounty:  10,000,000 • SD Earned: 52 • Location: East Blue •
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Feb 28 2016, 09:58 AM
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Remove upkeep.
You have a stray [/table] just before development history.
I am unfortunately inclined to make the leg thruster things 14mil, like breath dials. It would make no sense to make them cheaper, when their function is exactly the same.
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Cute Girls. (Minus One)  | Sam Wright ⚡ Tsundere ⚡ Ranged Projectiles Expert / Sort-of-Maid / Metallurgist / Scientist ⚡ Harlequin Pirates ⚡ Bounty: 105,000,000 ⚡ SD Earned: 660 ⚡ Beli: 100,920,000 ⚡ Location: Out at Sea, Grand Line
Strength: 136 / Speed: 58 / Stamina: 46 / Accuracy: 70 / Fortune: 137 / Focus: 6
|  | Saza Rinami ♥ Centre ♥ Idol / Dancer ♥ Fruity Devils ♥ Fans: 0 ♥ SD Earned: 75 ♥ Beli: 24,000,000 ♥ Location: Brick Blues Isle, Grand Line
Strength: 11 / Speed: 9 / Stamina: 9 / Accuracy: 9 / Fortune: 35 / Focus: 3
|  | Worm ☣ Cute Girl(?) ☣ Doctor / Marksman ☣ Plucky Squabs ☣ Threat: 0 ☣ SD Earned: 40 ☣ Beli: 10,500,000 ☣ Location: South Amerigo, South Blue
Strength: 14 / Speed: 19 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 12 / Fortune: 23 / Focus: 2
|  | Silverbeard ☠ Captain ☠ Swashbuckler / Cannoneer ☠ Silverbeard Pirates ☠ Bounty: 0 ☠ SD Earned: 0 ☠ Beli: 200,000 ☠ Location: idk, Grand Line
Strength: 11 / Speed: 11 / Stamina: 11 / Accuracy: 5 / Fortune: 8 / Focus: 19
|  | Zekamashi ⍟ Destroyer ⍟ Engineer / Naval Gunner ⍟ United Seas of Ameriga ⍟ Threat: 50 ⍟ SD Earned: 244 ⍟ Beli: 41,100,000 ⍟ Location: Boin Archipelago, Grand Line
Strength: 40 / Speed: 148 / Stamina: 20 / Accuracy: 38 / Fortune: 56 / Focus: 4
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♦ Togamau
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Feb 28 2016, 11:35 PM
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okay, so the price being 14 mil + 3 mil each for upgrading two legs means the cyborg budget is used and then 8 mil out of pocket, is that correct?
or does the fact I am upgrading the basic cyborg trait to Advanced eliminate the appendage cost? Changes to application represent an assumption that I am paying the difference between the cost of basic cyborg and advanced in the cyborg budget, resulting in an 8 mil out-of-pocket expense. (14+6-12=8)
Edited by Togamau, Feb 29 2016, 02:43 PM.
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Apr 5 2016, 07:40 AM
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I've standardised your beli and come to 45mil. Each leg made of steel costs 4.5mil, 9mil together Each breath dial is 14mil, 28mil together. I've noticed that your trombone upgrade was never actually approved, because you didn't reply after the price was given. But pricing it now, I come to 28mil. This means you're 8mil short, taking your cyborg beli into account. I'd recommend dropping one of the breath dials for the time being.
Also slide drop is power of 8.
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Apr 5 2016, 09:20 PM
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I was unaware that patch scooping involved a beli standardization... this complicates things beyond what I know how to fix. I suppose the fact that my current gains/loss includes the payment for the trombone is irrelevant? Can someone give me a quick step-by-step of how to get this straightened up and approved because I am completely lost now. How did this go from flagged to the gutter so quickly? Very frustrating.
Edited by Togamau, Apr 5 2016, 09:32 PM.
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Apr 6 2016, 06:47 AM
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- Oceonax
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I'd recommend dropping one of the breath dials for the time being. You have three breath dials, one in each foot and one in your trombone. Why not take one from a foot, and instead have just one breath dial in your legs that can send air to both feet using tubes? Then you'd have enough to pay for your stuff ^^
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Apr 7 2016, 01:35 AM
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thanks for the timely response, had to break out a calculator but I have the numbers right now, I think. Included in the Advanced Cyborg trait description that the COMBINED strength of the air compressors is 1 breath dial. 1/2 strength per leg. So, all costs calculated leaves a remainder of 6 mil in reserve. 45-28-9-14+12=6
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Apr 7 2016, 06:41 AM
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Double-checked and looks good. Edit in to your gains and losses a link to the post in which your stuff was priced, and you should be good to go.
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Strength: 11 / Speed: 11 / Stamina: 11 / Accuracy: 5 / Fortune: 8 / Focus: 19
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exact post within this thread, right? Operating under that assumption.
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Yup.
Topic is flagged for approval.
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Strength: 14 / Speed: 19 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 12 / Fortune: 23 / Focus: 2
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