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Zuile Pelarian; bleahghfgg [Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 27 2015, 07:01 PM (827 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Zuile Pelarian
Nickname: Kaupat
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Bountyhunter
Threat: 0
Achievements:
Profession: Assassin
The Assassin profession gives stealth skills, the ability to move silently through areas without being detected. It also gives general poison knowledge. An Assassin generally has little actual combat experience, since their victims don't fight back, and as such don't fare that well in a true fight. Assassins are able to create poisons that debuff, and have access to stealth techniques. Additionally they will be proficient in small weapons such as daggers or blow darts.
Weapon Specialist
A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.
Position: Pariah


Physical Appearance
Height: 5'8" ( cm)
Weight: 134 lbs ( kg)
Hair: Thin black hair that falls around his head. Some of it drapes along his face all of the time but the hair is often flapping everywhere even in the slightest wind. He isn't responsible for styling his hair, the world is.
Eyes: Blue, always seem to imply boredom.
Clothing/Accessories: Wears a simple, innocuous outfit that lets him blend in most any crowd. This is usually a slightly-oversized white collared shirt and black pants. His shoes are as black as his pants, and a combination of wood and leather soled. The main constant pieces of his outfit are two cloth bracelets that cover his wrists and creep on his hand and a black choker with a dog tag.
General Appearance: Has a plain appearance, as someone who's not too pretty or too ugly, and feels pretty easy to ignore most of the time. His expressions are always subtle. It's easy for him to be perceived as a constant, sturdy but not immovable. His eyes look exceptionally dull most of the time.

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The Character
Personality: Zuile is a hard man. He didn't have a pleasant life or many luxuries and he often doesn't know how to live pleasantly or with luxuries. It's difficult for him to enjoy things and people find him difficult to enjoy. That's not to say he's exactly crude, malignant, or incapable of socialization. He's reasonably well-adjusted as an adult, save for his career choices, and mentally balanced as well. He can still smile, laugh, and wonder about the absurdity of life. It just all happens to come from the perspective of a survivor.

When it comes to "work" Mr. Pelarian attempts to be ruthlessly effective. He doesn't revel in killing, enjoy forcing people to suffer, or find some pleasure in battle that he can never feel outside of it. Work is just a matter of money for effort. What would seem like high-risk to someone else just didn't seem that dangerous to him. Taking life, risking your own; it's just a part of the human equation.

Hometown: S.I.R.V., Calm Belt
History: Zuile Pelarian was born in the most troubling of times for his father's kingdom. The nation of Serenditty had recently been completely destroyed after a long war against a neighboring country. The result was obvious, and an ark had been built to house as many citizens of Serenditty as possible. The Serenditty Island Refugee Vessel was incomplete when it launched, abandoning many. The island's regent and her entourage, along with two fifths of the kingdom's population, set sail into the turbulent waters of the grandline. The self-sustaining ecosystem of the boat sustained the small population with ease, and Zuile's childhood didn't suffer when it came to food. The S.I.R.V. became a hell-on-earth because of human nature.

The Pelarian boy had never thought much about how his father and him lived on the massive boat. He never suffered much at the hands of others. His father and others who had worked for the former regent did though. The Queen's Executor was often given the short end of the stick when it came to the limited resources on the ship (choosing to give everything he could to Zuile and suffering more for it) while he chose to continuing serving Serenditty's queen. About when Zuile was nine the grudges fueling dangerous emotions on the ship started to flame up yet again. People were seething with rage on the isolated regent's recent "proclamations" and a coup was absolutely certain. A civil war erupted in the halls of the ship, destroying the vessel piece by piece until finally the queen was executed along with her officers.

The Pelarian family began to suffer for being the losers of the little war. Zuile and his father worked as slaves trying to maintain S.I.R.V., being worked to the bone alongside the others who chose the wrong side. This feverish labor was only able to buy the large vessel only three more years of time before it began to break apart and become unusable while in the grandline, near a populated island. Zuile's father died as S.I.R.V. crumbled, with many of Serenditty's refugees.

Zuile woke up on the shore of the nearby island, free from the tyranny of the masses but alone in the world. He had become a survivor during his troubled life on S.I.R.V. and continued to show a resilience and ingenuity that he gleaned from his old man. Living as an urchin didn't prove difficult, it just required a different mindset that this boy managed to pick up. Most of his adolescence proved to be like this, but he never had any consistent success. After turning 18, and traveling to a few islands as a stow away, Zuile became desperate for money. Living on the streets while on a winter island was proving too much for him. In desperation he discovered his future career, getting rid of problems. It was a bounty he took under the recommendation of a lazy town guardsmen. Zuile Pelarian thought it was the easiest money he had ever made. He took to this profession and honed his skills for the next seven years of his life.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Zuile fights conservatively. Generally opting to use his range advantage on most opponents to work on wearing down their defenses before showing them he is equally as skilled at using his wire to fight from a distance as he is skilled with his knives. He generally chooses to avoid fighting though. As a problem solver he focuses on making sure people die instead of how to kill people. Avoiding direct confrontations only allows for fewer variables to exist, nothing more.
Weaponry: ~ 2 Steel (Tier 2) Knives.
~ 2 Retractable 30 Foot Titanium (Tier 3) Wire Spools, with Titanium Hooks on the ends of the Wire.
Items: ~ A Pair of Tier 2 Gloves (made of Stenops Cotton).
Omble Coronation Cocktail Sword.

Super Rare Item: Galaxy Shard

Special 8th Anniversary Swag Bag

Beli:
270,000
SD Earned:
127
Stat Points:
159
Advancement Points: 0
SP Remaining: 4
Stats:
Used for Stats: 120

Used for Fortune: 35

  • Strength: 35

  • Speed: 25

  • Stamina: 40 (25+15)

  • Accuracy: 35

  • Fortune:51 (30+21)


Traits:

Fate of the Mighty (5 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your stamina stat.

Technically Adept (1 Trait) - Increases total technique points by 40% of your fortune score. [51*.4=20.4)

In-Training (1 Trait) - This is the equivalent of Fated for the character’s Professional Skills, but no paths exist for this. General traits may not be spent to purchase In-Training.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 122
Used Regular Technique Points: 104
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques


Gains/Losses:
Gains and Losses

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Edited by A.R., Oct 6 2016, 11:17 PM.
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i'll figure out your beli later

Masterful Poi needs to be rank 12 (4 for short range, 8 for gatling)
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I changed that and will eagerly, yet patiently, wait for your verdict.
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You've actually only used 95 for stats. Also, you haven't added your +15 to stamina from Fated.

Your source for the January Event leads to some broken image link instead of any post or thread.
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All fixed. Really don't get how that happened with the link.
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Technically Adept only gives you 40% of your fortune score tech points. 44 x .4 = 17.6. 88+17=105.

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Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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It's better. Maybe all set.
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Now I noticed that your February Event 2 has no url at all?? C'mon, man... I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and standardize your beli including that, though. But find that link again.

64 SD from non-events, so 50 x 250,000 = 12,500,000 + 14 x 500,000 = 19,500,000. Event beli brings that up to 40,550,000, but your previous purchases bring you down to 33,070,000. Sorry, you lost a tiny bit.

Also, little thing, but your Essence de Mamba is in fact 0 Power. It still does damage over time, just not additional tech damage initially.
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Rayne92: fresca i hope you brought a step ladder
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I fixed my technique and the weirdness with my gains and losses. I sure wasn't joshing nobody.

On a different note, I'd always been told that purchases were refunded when you scoop a character. So I'm confused when you say my previous purchases bring me down. I'll put 33,070,000 down.

And that's that.
Edited by A.R., Jan 9 2016, 02:59 AM.
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Yeah, so I suck a little. 40,550,000 without your purchases and I'll go ahead and price this new stuff you want for you.

2,800,000 ::beli:: for the knives, 28,000,000 ::beli:: for the wire and hooks, and 2,000,000 ::beli:: for the gloves.
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Alright. I think that makes me all set.
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Essence De Cobra: There should be a Power cost for the per turn damage iirc.

Withering Poison: Same thing.

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Error on my part. It was a misleading support technique, dealt no damage. I feel dumb for not seeing the answer sooner.
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Counting 114 tech points used.

Could be an area of not labeling a tech as a branch or something. Please investigate.
Amyral Vansen [color=#006400] • Crew Position • Ninja/Martial Artist/Chaplain/Navi • ? • Bounty: 30,000,000 • SD Earned: 274 • Beli: 78,885,000 • Location: Romulin Island

♦ Str: 33 ♦ Spd: 125 ♦ Sta: 50 ♦ Acc: 88
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All fixed. Can't count 3 individual rank 20s apparently. Thanks for your help. Now I can do a branch instead. Just removed 10 spent TP from that last technique, so I should be at 104 spent.
Edited by A.R., Jan 29 2016, 03:30 AM.
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