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| Shizuochan | Dec 26 2015, 04:08 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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Rough Template [-----] Account Name: Shizuochan [-----] Basic Character Information Name: Quinta Corrado Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Threat: 0 Achievements: Profession:
Position: Angsty Headcase. Physical Appearance Height: 6'1 Weight: 210lbs Hair: Orange/blonde. Eye: Orange. Clothing/Accessories: His typical outfit consists of a well-fitted complement of dark suit and shirt, with the adamant requirement that the collar be adequately loosened. One commonly noticed detail is that Quinta Corrado never unties a tie, simply pulling it from over his head when he needs to remove it (and, naturally, throwing it back over when he needs to wear it again). As such, his ties are extremely loose around the neck, adding a degree of rugged sloppiness to his apparel. Another contrast is between his dress pants and dress shoes; while his sleek black pants are typically kept to perfection, Quinta apparently has little time to clean footwear. If one looks closely enough, one can sometimes note the presence of dried bloodstains. General Appearance: Quinta Corrado is a man of fair complexion, albeit aged by a constant countenance of pursed lips and furrowed brows. His gaze is measured and attentive, lending him a sort of solemn gravitas. Said gravitas is enhanced by a wiry, strongly constructed body. Him The Character Personality: Quinta is a man compelled inexorably by his rage. This is not to say, necessarily, that he is a man prone to petty tantrum. Rather, it means that his anger comes in deep, passionate throes, and envelops him to the detriment of all other sensibilities. The cruel, the oppressive, the corrupt, and the vile are simultaneously the causes and recipients of his rage. Very much a believer in dealing evil unto evil, the tragedy is that Quinta is capable of the same cruelty as his adversaries. Stoic and often quiet, Corrado is a difficult man to approach, and an even harder man to know. He largely chooses to keep to himself, although finds that he has emotion that desperately craves for release. While generally he finds release in doling out just injustice to the wicked, the absence of such opportunities sometimes causes a yearning for company and attention. Still, force of habit compels Quinta to bind himself to introversion. Despite all his detrimental social qualities, there is a kindness in Quinta. He is in part informed by a need to be the 'protector', displaying particular compassion to the weak and the helpless; Quinta's rage reaches its most terrible peak when harm befalls such people. It is difficult, unfortunately, for Quinta to express his care in ways other than vengeful rampages. Hometown: La Casa Blanca, Grand Line As a young boy, Quinta Corrado only knew of weakness. His father; a weakness for gambling. His mother; black lungs and a failing heart. And Corrado himself, meek and quiet, gasping under the weight of poverty and starvation. The three of them survived, although not well. For Quinta, it was not the hunger that tore at his stomach, it was the feeling of being the weakest, unable to be of help to anyone. So perhaps it was a strange relief to Quinta when the Corrado family welcomed a daughter; someone weaker, someone who could need him. The relief Quinta felt at the birth of Sophia Corrado was only matched by the disappointed reluctance of his father. After all, Julian Corrado already had a medley of children to care for; the blackjack tables and the slots. By necessity, the tenderly aged Quinta, Sophia's only capable caretaker, found himself becoming stronger to support his sister. Thievery was the typical order of the day, and occasional shifts moving crates at the docks when he found his feeble muscles to be cooperative. Born in weakness, Quinta Corrado eventually found himself becoming strong. Meanwhile, Julian Corrado's weakness festered. Deeper and deeper into debt he spiralled. The type of debt that required retribution. Quinta was twelve years old when enforcers of the local Family came to collect. Quinta and Sophia watched from beneath the bed as the scene unfolded. There was little theatricality to it. Julian was the weak after all, and his disposal was as unremarkable as his life. In the search for what remaining worldly possessions Julian had to his name, they found Quinta and Sophia, trembling and crying. Naively, Quinta found himself offering his services - citing a proficiency in pickpocketing - in exchange for mercy. He found his proposal countered by snide, uncaring laughter. They took Sophia. They left Quinta to rot away on his own. And as he rot away, the mold upon his spirit turned to rage, weakness transforming into fury. --- Years later, made unrecognisable by a decade of malignant hatred, Quinta Corrado infiltrated the Family that had taken his beloved sister. In another year, the entire Family found itself dismantled; key members vanished without a trace, storehouses went up in smoke and flames. And from the storm of fire Quinta Corrado emerged, made whole by vengeance. Only Sophia was nowhere to be found. [-----] Abilities and Possessions Combat: A fearless combatant, Quinta's methodology is most notable for its single-minded brutality. Equally proficient with knives and fists as he is with guns and bombs, Quinta Corrado employs all four in equal measure to achieve total destruction of his adversaries. There is very little artfulness to his martial prowess, although his economy of motion is impressive; he is consistently aware of the most efficient steps to take, and his sense of space and timing is impeccable. Weaponry: Two six-shot Titanium pistols [11.5mx2]. One Titanium katana [10m]. Two iron knives [Free]. Items: N/A Beli: 4,600,000 SD Earned: 120 SD Stat Points: blah Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 96 (80 + 16) Used Regular Technique Points: 96 Special Technique Points: 20 [BrM] + 20 [LO,R] Used Special Technique Points: 14 [BrM] + 14 [LO,R]
Development History Gains/Losses: Gains/Losses: Samwell Pinkerton
Lancer Devil
Quinta Corrado
Edit Log: ADDED ANNIVERSARY SD RIGHT BEFORE SCOOP Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Shizuochan, Oct 17 2016, 02:15 AM.
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| Shizuochan | Dec 26 2015, 04:09 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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hi. i didn't price weapons. i also wasn't very careful about the last few techniques and matching them up to system, please approach with caution! scoop of Lancer Devil |
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| Drifter | Dec 27 2015, 02:05 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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Hail Hydrift
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Hi Shizu. :^) I like your character! Let's see: One Titanium Pistol: Six-shot: 1.5M Titanium: 10M Total Price for one pistol: 11.5M Titanium Katana: 10M Iron knives can be free, on the house!! On all your bombs, instead of short do Short AOE please, and add Short Range AOE behind each effect. For Wailing sister, do Power: 14pt please. Last Stand would need to have [Omnidirectional, Short Range] behind it please. Same with the other two please. :) Also, on Retribution, where are you getting the fast Reload effect from? |
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| Shizuochan | Dec 27 2015, 03:32 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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ok should be done the fast reload thing is not an effect i took from the table - i put it there because i thought it might warrant a rank increase past the standard gatling effect |
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| ♥ Dusk | Jan 2 2016, 09:43 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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Since Short-AOE is free, Ripper-Max could be rank 8. Otherwise, you're just paying for power. Wailing Sister- Duration Damage costs 8 power per turn. Desperado Art: Retribution - Power 20 for the Short Range. |
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| Shizuochan | Jan 2 2016, 06:44 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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addressed on all counts; and yeah ripper-max is straight payment for power | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♥ mockday | Jan 7 2016, 12:54 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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i do inportent shit
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I'd tell ya to paste in the full description for Fate of the Whimsical, but I fear the repercussions, ayayaya. Everything else checks out. Topic is flagged for approval. Edited by mockday, Jan 7 2016, 12:54 PM.
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| Drifter | Jan 8 2016, 10:10 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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