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Uno Ocho; Character [Flagged]
Topic Started: Dec 16 2015, 10:54 PM (792 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Uno Ocho
Nickname: Kid
Age: 18
Gender: M
Race: Human
Affiliation: Bounty Hunter
Threat: 2.5
Achievements:Beat up a blind woman...
Profession: Weapon Specialist

A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.
Smith

A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally, swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy which allows them to make custom materials or mix new ones together.
Position: Craven Hunter


Physical Appearance
Height: 5'9
Weight: 180
Hair: His hair appears black short and tamed
Eyes: His eyes are black as well
Clothing/Accessories: He wears a basic black long sleeve shirt with a white wife beater on the inside. His pants match his shirt, both have small white stripes going down them, and he has black boots that look like colored timberlands with white short socks.He wears a golden chain around his neck that has his fams crafting emblem on it that look's like a swordsman messing with a whetstone. Lastly, he has a black glove equipped to one hand
General Appearance: He is an average size and although he seems weak and skinny he is toned in his chest area. His arms are quite muscular though they are most of the time hidden and his usual expressions seem as though he is intrigued by everything around him.He stands tall most of the time but tends to arch at times because life kicks his ass time to time.

"My favorite"


"They said it was cold outside"


The Character
Personality: Being one of the sons to a small and not very well-known family of smiths, he seems to hold himself pretty high and appears happy all the while. He has a tendency to freak out and mute himself when he doesn't know what to say or how to react at a time, but, even though he is scared out of his mind in these times, he is also very focused. His main moods are happy, exhausted, scared out of his mind, blank, and surprised. He likes every sort of person and believes there is some good in each person. He enjoys nature, staying inside, practicing in his swordsmanship, learning, hot wings, top ramen, and sour candy. He doesn't like irrational people because they are almost impossible to sway to reason, sweet stuff, any food that isn't hot or sour, being taken advantage of to the point he beats someone, beating up people, being forced into awkward situations, and people that do evil for the sake of doing it...Basically for bad reasons. He's smart when it comes to building weapons and fighting with the sword. Well,that is when he can focus. He's pretty passive, timid and friendly so when in a fight it's hard for him to switch into serious mode.

Hometown: 1738, Fugazi island, South blue
History: Growing up in a bad environment, his ass has been saved over the years by being a member of his family and knowing how to make some weapons for pirates, crooked marines, and other people that mess with him. His family seemed to provide the majority of criminals, marines, and hunters with weapons around the village, and since he is a passive person that is easily intimidated, a lot of them used it to their advantages to bully him into making them free stuff.1738 was known mostly throughout the south blue for it's crime rate and messed up environment, and though he wanted to leave because of this, his family members all grew up in this town and refused. He eventually got ran over to the point his father taught him how to use a sword in multiple styles at the age of 10 and his intrest in swordsmanship to fit his instinctive style lead to him picking up champloo Kendo by himself later on.

One day while he was out and about to gather some stuff, he seemingly beat a pirate that was running from the marines with a swift chop with the bottom of his sword to the side of the head, and (Even though it was just an instinct) the marines there were like "THIS GUY TOOK HIM DOWN WITH NO ISSUE? Must be a bounty hunter" And eventually he had to become one because rumors were getting out that he actually was no matter how much he told people he really wasn't. He left his home to strip it from burdens of incoming pirates (Since bounty hunters and marines get stomped out around his town), and left to go explore around the south blue; finally free.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: He seems to act instinctively in fights and relies on his training when he has the time to concentrate(Hardly ever). In that case, he would think rationally and calculate his chances of winning, losing, escaping, and reasoning. He's not a master of the sword by a long shot.Though he knows how to use a sword, he incorporates multiple sword styles into his arsenal that his father has taught him like Iaijutsu, iaido, and one his father didn't teach him, Champloo Kendo when practicing. In battle, he usually picks one, but in some cases, he picks a mixture of all. Recently he's been striving to learn ittoryu and he's really opened to different styles and hopes to develop one of his own one day.
Weaponry:
Uno and dos-He carries a 2-foot sword that his father gave to him inside of his black long sleeve shirt by a strap. It is unnoticeable, and he can take it out from its scabbard by the top only. That is if he doesn't just strap it around his black shirt. In that case, it's on his back or hip and can be pulled out with ease. Made out of iron of course though the scabbard is wood layered with iron to make it perfect for blocking attacks from time to time.The sword lastly has a circular guard.

[Tres-Mgen-"A unique sword with a curved blade and a hilt with two prongs sheathed across his back, and the other a small tantō concealed at the end of his scabbard"(?????,Samurai Champloo wiki,Mugen, fighting style)

A sword exactly like one of the fictional swordsman he idolizes, he spotted such a blade while going threw a shop and was hyped that the iron tanto came with the steel blade. When he carries this sword, he usually doesn't wield his other.
Items/Equipment: Chain with emblem, whetstone,
Jack it:Due to the poor state his old jacket was in, uno decided to go out and cop a brand new jacket...Made the exact same as his old one IF it wasn't for it being crafted with seaking leather among many of the other material put in the original jacket. Still fits the same and looks the same.

Sap Handle-A weird branch thing fell on his head one night.As it turned out, that branch wasn't normal, and soon he would find that it was a perfect handle that could be added to any of his swords! The rich sap that seeped out of it was strong and sticky, making attempts to disarm him while he uses the sword he adds it to all but impossible! In addition, it decreases the power of any disarming techs used against it by 4. (Hasn't been added to any of his swords.)

Blessed chip A wooden chip with his name on it, gained from winning a fight with two other bounty hunters
Beli: 6,820,000
SD Earned: 36
Stat Points: 68
Advancement Points: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats:51
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength:13
    • Speed:26 ( 20+ 6)
    • Stamina:13
    • Accuracy:16
    • Fortune:17(15)
    Traits: Born Leader (1 Trait) - Characters with this trait are gifted with the ability to command respect and admiration from others. Sentient NPCs are easier to sway over to the side of those with this trait. They may gain information, calm down the angry, and sometimes even placate hostile adversaries. Additionally, those normally friendly to strangers find themselves easily enamored with the character. The user also gains one NPC henchman, who behaves as a crew NPC and is controlled by the player of the main character. They are exceedingly loyal to their ‘master’.

    ^Npc:http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5923487/1/#new

    Fate of the Swift (#2 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your speed stat.


    Critical Hit (1 Trait) – Through training in how to hit vital points in the body, the character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N/a
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 26
Used Regular Technique Points: 12/26
Special Technique Points: 6
Used Special Technique Points:

Techniques
A. ( Rank:4)
Type: Offensive
Range:
Power:4
Stats:N/A
Description: He quickly removes his sword from his scabbard and slashes something in front of him horizontally before placing it back.


M.a.d.d. (4)
Type: Defensive
Range:Self
Power:4
Stats:N/A
Description: Rasing his sword and scabbard into an x formantion in front of him to block attacks.


M. (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: melee
Power:4
Stats:N/A
Description: He quickly and accurately bashes the side of an adversay that he allows to pass him to either the left or the right side with his srabbard before adjusting it;back in place.






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Edited by Kid, Dec 24 2016, 03:40 AM.
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The coding like [/b] and [/u] should go before what you write, not after. For example:
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[b]Name:[/b] Uno Ocho
Instead of
[b]Name: Uno Ocho[/b]


Threat is 0.

Italicise the primary-specific bonus of your primary profession, which is the part in italics written in the profession in the rules.
Remove the primary bonus from your secondary profession.

Please expand on personality a little. What does he like and dislike? Is he intelligent? Cunning?

I don't understand what you've written for Hometown. It should be nothing more than the name of the Island and the name of the Sea it is in.

Please expand on history. Why was he saved by being a member of his family? What was his family like, and why did he make weapons for bad people? It is far too brief.
Additionally, you cannot have taken down a pirate in your history, as this would have given you threat.

Expand on combat a bit. What style of fighting does he use, when incorporating his training and when not?

Your speed should be written as:
16 (10+6)
This is so that the original, unmodified stat can be seen.

A. can only target one opponent. Range is melee.

You haven't made a technique that utilised Critical Hit. Not sure if you just didn't want to use it, but I'm mentioning it anyway in case you forgot.
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Alright. Tell me if I need anything else...Well I mean if anything else is needed for some adding or whatever. The people below say that there is no real need for me to take out the pirate thing if it was a no named one.
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The coding issue is still present in your techniques. You can leave it if you want I guess, though. If he didn't have a bounty then it's fine to take down that pirate. So,

Topic is flagged for approval.
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Don't forget to purchase your NPC's weapon.
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Done
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Edited by Drifter, Dec 24 2015, 07:39 AM.
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