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Topic Started: Aug 28 2015, 05:39 AM (609 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Adrajhan
Nickname: “Ad”
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 2,500,000
Achievements: N/A
Profession:

Primary: Weapon Specialist- A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.

Secondary: Smith- A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy which allows them to make custom materials or mix new ones together.

Doctor- A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew.

Thief- The Thief is a job closely related to the assassin. They both provide stealth capabilities, though a Thief gains lockpicking skills instead of poison knowledge, can generally know their way around the ways of barter and trade, and pickpocketing. Thieves don't have it hard to find 'underground info' in most cities, either.

Position: Captain of the Freedom Pirates

Physical Appearance
Height: 5’10”
Weight: 180lb
Hair: Black, short, and flattened because it’s under his hood almost all the time.
Eyes: Green, intelligent, hides a secret if you’re good at reading people
Clothing/Accessories: Plain black, short sleeve shirt with simple blue pants. A dark, blood-red (almost brownish) cloak with an attached hood that he keeps up at all times. Dark Brown, leather boots.
General Appearance: Adrajhan has fair skin and is a little bulkier than the average person, but by no means a giant or broad shouldered. He has no tattoos, markings, scars, or other standing features.

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The Character
Personality: He will not confess himself to others, let alone talk to them unless he has to. He is a good fighter and an excellent addition to a crew if you can convince him to join you, though don't expect him to say much for idle chit-chat. He keeps to himself as long as he can, but will jump to the aid of his crew without a second thought. Ask him about it later though and he'll deny everything. He enjoys fighting, not for life or death but for the thrill and excitement it gives a person, and on that note, he hates having to, or seeing, lives be taken unnecessarily. He will not stop someone from taking a life unless he knows it can be avoided (So he's not gonna jump in and stop any executions or anything) He generally has a neutral disposition towards people, the government, and other pirates. He understands everyone has their views and he doesn't try to persuade or interject his views on them.

This is however overwritten completely with his new personality and outlook on life due to his memory loss, and he also acts more open with those he trusts as close friends.

Hometown: Alabasta, Grand Line
History: Adrajhan was born to a rich merchant family in Alabasta. Deep in the trade of silks and other fine articles and items, as well as being one of the more renowned doctors of the island. He was raised in the lap of luxury and taught how to heal the sick as a way of life. One day when he was out with his father, they were attacked and Adrajhan was kidnapped for ransom. Adrajhan's father knew his son would be dead when he was returned to him, and didn't wish to pay for a corpse. So he made an empty grave for his son and the two haven't seen each other since. Meanwhile, Adrajhan's captors were planning to sell the boy into slavery, after confirming a deal with slave ring they began to celebrate their monetary gain. One of them came down to see Adrajhan in the brig, his breath wreaked of alcohol and Adrajhan took this chance. As the man came close to him to mock him Adrajhan delivered a powerful blow to the man's forehead with his own. He managed to get the key off the man's belt and undo his bindings. Taking his sword and shield Adrajhan rushed up to the top of the ship. He found the rest of the crew celebrating, he managed to take out a handful before they realized what was going on, but by then Adrajhan had claimed another blade. He realized things wouldn't go well for him if they all ganged up, so he jumped ship and began to swim towards the nearest island, Goa Kingdom. As he managed to climb up onto the docks, the immense amount of adrenaline coursing through him began to subside and he felt exhaustion beyond anything he'd ever experienced before. After wandering through the streets he passed out in a back alley. Waking up the next morning he had no memories of his past, only the weapons he'd stolen from his captors. He managed to make his way through the city, swindling a loaf of bread and some water for breakfast.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Adrajhan fights typically with sword and shield or twin swords. He will watch his opponents carefully before deciding to move in or to stay on the defensive. He will measure his options, the benefits and downsides of all of these, and make his choice accordingly. His style also depends on his current weapons, if he's using a sword and his shield he will typically fight more defensively, focusing on blocking attacks and countering, rather than trying to initiate on his opponent, but if he has dual swords, he'll leap towards his opponents in a flurry of blows and metal leaving no room for them to try an launch a retaliation attack.

After obtaining his third sword Adrajhan has begun to teach himself the basics of Santoryu, or "Three Sword Style" This style is unrefined and undisciplined so he doesn't have a particular use for it... yet
Weaponry: Iron Longswords x3, Iron Shield
Items: Medicines, clothes, Navigation Kit (East Blue), New Blood red cloak
Beli: 14,600,000
SD Earned: 32
Stat Points: 32
Advancement Points: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stats: 32
  • Used for Stats: 64
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 16
    • Speed: 16
    • Stamina: 16
    • Accuracy: 16
    • Fortune: 16


    Traits:

    Jack of All Trades (1 trait)- The character is able to master multiple skills, and has become adept at a number of things. This character gains two additional secondary professions.

    Sword Mastery (1 trait)- The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.

    Skilled Use of Medicine (1 trait)- Because of their expertise, these doctors have become extremely adept at producing their own medicines to aid others. They gain special Technique Points which can only be used on medicines that aid or buff, of the amount of half their fortune.

    Pickpocket (1 trait)- As a thief, the character is skilled at obtaining money by less-than-acceptable means. Thus, they will always earn 20% more Beli in their Storylines.

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Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 32
Used Regular Technique Points: 24
Special Technique Points: 8
Used Special Technique Points: 4

Techniques
Two Sword Style Techniques


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Edited by Guardian Alpha, Mar 16 2016, 04:27 PM.
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Take off the last two sentences of smith, the last sentence of doctor and the last three sentence of thief as only the primary gets the italic bonus.
This only means that your techniques will need to be shifted as you have no access to stealth techniques or doctor buffs and debuffs. Fadeaway and durability drugs won't work without primary doctor and thief respectively.

Your Stance technique can only be one stance so get rid of the other one.

Include footwear if applicable in Clothing.
Include a couple more lines of General Appearance.

Add several more sentences of Personality.

History and Hometown are about the facts so his memory loss is irrelevant. Write down his hometown and history regardless of his memory because it happened.

In combat as stated before, buffing medicines and stealth need Doctor and Thief primaries to work.

Longswords will be free starter weaponry, shield will cost 100,000 beli. Make a note in gains and losses if bought.
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If I might ask, do secondary Doctors only heal then?

and, Thieves have no benefits if the italics are only applied for primary professions.
Edited by Guardian Alpha, Aug 28 2015, 06:15 AM.
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  • Italicise your primary profession bonus.
  • Try to flesh out personality a bit. Maybe what he likes and doesn't like, his moral disposition, etc.
  • Combat could also use some more detail. Rather than just the weapons he fights with, include the style he uses. Is he very aggressive, or a conserved tactician? Does he fight with honour?
  • Specify that the longswords and shield are of iron quality.
  • There is a stray [/u] at the end of your Painkillers technique, and another after your gains and losses.
  • Secondary doctors can poison and heal, but cannot buff or debuff in doing so.
  • The benefit of thief as a secondary is access to their traits.
  • Also, I think you're missing a [/ list] after your stats.
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Edited as per your instructions.

So my "Pickpocket" Trait is applicable? I was concerned since it looked like an upgrade to the default 10% a Primary Thief gets.
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I went back in and added a stance so I can switch back and forth between Dual-Swords and Sword & Shield. That also brings me back up to my 16 TP.
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Gonna ask for you to flesh out the appearance and clothes more. At the moment, I can't picture what they look like

History is too short, expand on it and give as much detail as you can.

Everything else seems fine at first glance; I actually like the Attack and Defense stances with the Sword and Shield stuff.
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some weird formatting but content looks ok

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