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Kay T. Law 2.0; ~Revision Scoop ~ [Flagged]
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Topic Started: Aug 21 2015, 04:37 AM (259 Views)
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Aug 21 2015, 04:37 AM
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Basic Character Information Name:Kay T. Law Nickname: Age: 28 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation:Pirate Bounty:5,500,000 Achievements:Developed His Own Style of Martial Arts Callled The Kay Slay Style Profession:
Martial Artist -A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.
Bartender A Bartender is someone who has acquired a knack for the mixology of alcoholic beverages. They have a generally good knowledge on the consistency of an enjoyable beverage, as well as insight on what it may require to enhance an aspect of an existing drink.
Physical Appearance Height:6'4 Weight:150lbs Hair:White, Shaggy Eyes:White Clothing/Accessories:
Kay loves to be free and comfortable. He Doesn't like to wear anything that's too extravagant, he just likes to keep it simple and nice. You can usually see him wearing a black tank top or a black vest, with some long cargo pants or jeans. His fav. colour is black and red so he has alot of that in his wardrobe. He usually wears dog tags that has different stuff or images on it with that has meaning to him, but he always wear one that says "Grand Line, K.L/M.L".
He can dress fancy but doesn't and frankly can't be bothered to since he hates to dress fancy. He doesn't usually wear shoes and likes to trot over the place bare foot and as a result the bottom feet are usually black with dirt and rough but he still likes to wear slippers from time to time. He usually keeps his hands up to his wrists wrapped in bandages to hide his blemishes
General Appearance: He is tall and built with a lot of muscle and definition as a result of his past training. His shaggy hair reaches down to his just above his shoulders but doesn't cover eyes or other facial feature. He has broad shoulders and large arms. His hands are rough from axe wielding and has a bit of hair on his arms. He has a hairless chest with cut definition that goes down to his abs to his legs. His legs are proportional to his legs and are big. He has big feat with veins stretching on top of it. He has multiple scars over his hands from the years and years of training he has received but has no other scars else where.
Looks Sorta Like This
The Character Personality: Kay is an easy going guy that likes to kick it back and have a good time with his friends or anyone who is just wants to have fun. His mates and friends are his life and will die to protect them, however you do not want to cross him. He will not help people who double-crosses him and uses him for foul intent an usually ends ups breaking them apart leaving them half to death. He doesn't have that much of a temper and it takes a lot to get him riled up when it gets out of control he known to run wild until his temper is sedated.
He loves challenges and doesn't like to easily give up but but if the challenge is going to in anyway and somehow hurt him, he will not do it, as he has learned to respect his body. He usually keeps a friendly smirk on his face and always looks like he is ready for a good time, however he is still a pirate.
When meeting or interacting with new people, he uses his friendly atmosphere to get close with the person, to find out how much he is worth to see if they are worth kidnapping and robbing. He usually takes a job seriously and leaves no witnesses. He has no problem killing an innocent if the job calls for it and does what needs to be done.
Hometown: Karate Island, South Blue
History For as long as Kay can remember he, grew up in an orphanage in the South-Blue and do not know where he was originally born. He never knew his parents, he didn't even know if they were alive or dead. All he knows is that when turned 8 he received a short letter that said, "We are sorry Kay, if your answers in the grand line" and a dog tag that read "Grand Line K.L/M.L". Ever since then he has devoted himself to finding these 'answers' that lay in the grand line.
Growing up in the Orphanage he always was a rebel. He has been this way ever since he found the book that entails all the marvelous misadventures of famous pirate crews of the past such as the straw hat pirates, the whitebeard pirates and the roger pirates. He saw that they were free and not restricted to any sort of laws or rules and did as they saw fit and they achieved tremendous stuff. He used that inspiration and always rebelled against authority. He always stole extra dinner from the kitchen, took apples from the store in towns and sneaking and staying out late. His caretaker one take got tired of it and decided to kicked him out and turned him over to an old man at a dojo in town. The old man happily took him in and took one look in his eyes and saw that he had potential.
Growing up in the dojo was hard, the old man put him threw vigorous training regiments to strengthen his body. He learned many different marital arts but he could not devote himself to one so he decided to make his own comprised of the martial arts he has learned before, The Kay Slay Style. However he did not lose his passion for to become a pirate. Even though he was with the old man at the dojo still snuck out and hang out with the guys he rebelled with when he was at the orphanage But one night changed everything.
He was with his regular crew in the marketplace at night and he came across a strange looking fruit growing in a nearby field. Curious he told his friends to wait as he went to get the desired fruit. Immediately he ate it and cursed as he swallowed the distasteful fruit. He then began to feel strange and start to feel himself change. He Howled at the pain and when his friends went to check on him, they say a freakish man bull creature. Scared they attacked him thinking that the creature killed Kay but as they attacked the creature swing at them and broke their necks on impact and sent them flying. He then calm down and his rage was replaced with a fright because of what he had done. He ran off before anyone saw him and rushed back to the dojo with the old man. The old man was furious to see him out late but Kay stopped him to tell him what he had done. The old man stared at him with anger and hatred and could not forgive him of his sins and told him to leave. Kay became anger because he was the closest thing to a father figure but he held his dog tag close to him and remember his purpose and walked off with noting but his staff that he had obtained through the years living there and his own personal martial art, The Kay Slay Style.
After Kay was abandon by his mentor, he became more vicious and merciless in combat as it was the only way for him to release his pent up anger. He was still a nice fun guy to hang out with that didn't listen to authority but he longed for friends that he could call family. That day changed his life and he left the island, with his martial arts that he developed with the old man, in hopes to find the grand line to find the answers that was left to him to find.
Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Kay is a close ranged fighter that wastes no movements. He might have large arms and legs but his agility is on point. Kay is an all around-er with weapons but he prefers to use his own two fists. Using his own martial arts, The Kay Slay Style, he developed from other martial arts he knows how dodge attacks by rolling out the way or by using swift movements. His big and strong legs also give him incredible jumping abilities. He is able to block with his forearms, if he has any sort of armor, and counter/disarm in a swift movement. He doesn't like to waste time in battle and gets right to it. If he gets agitated he goes into a rage like mode and attacks with relentless strikes with almost nothing to slow him down.
Weaponry: Extendable Staff: A Staff That Extends From The Size Of 4 Foot To A 6 Foot Long Staff Extending From All Both Sides. It Has a 2 inch Diameter And It Is Iron Quality. It Ejects From All Both Sides Until The Staff Is 6 Feet, So Its A Foot Extension From Both Sides. A 16 inch iron blade Ejects out of one end, Marked with a certain design, turning it into a glaive.
Items:Steel Gauntlets, Rope, Red Paperclip
Hi-Tech Goggles Goggles that look like regular goggles and can have an up to a 4x magnification for zoom and night vision.
Beli: 2,200,000 SD Earned:76
Stat Points:103 SD Remaining:0 Stats:
- Used for Stats:108
- Used for Fortune:0
- Strength:35
- Speed:25
- Stamina:25
- Accuracy:23
- Fortune:27
Traits:
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Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits): - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types.
Super Sense (1 trait) - Requires any Zoan Devil Fruit This character has achieved mastery over their heightened senses, gaining a single sense on par with Observation Haki. They gain special Technique Points that can only be used on this sense, of the amount of a quarter of their fortune.
Pro. Traits:
Kay Slay Style Mastery (1 Trait) - The character has attained mastery in his own martial arts, The Kay Slay Style, which focuses on no wasted movements with precise and powerful strikes. This style focuses powerful strikes that stem from a fighter that is already using a consistent motion(IE bouncing on toes, leaning left to right etc). From that consistent motion, by using the momentum, the fighter can shift their body into any strikes in a punching or kicking motion or counters. (can make techniques greater than rank 14) . All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.
In-Training (1 Traits) – This is the equivalent of Fated for the character’s Professional Skills, but no paths exist for this. General traits may not be spent to purchase In-Training.
- Devil Fruit
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Devil Fruit Name: Ushi Ushi No Mi-Model Bull Devil Fruit Type:Zoan Devil Fruit Ability:Using this Devil Fruit, Kay can transform into a Bull, a Bull-human hybrid, and in time may be able to discover even more complex transformations.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 54 Used Regular Technique Points: 26 Special Technique Points: 7 Used Special Technique Points: 7
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Animistic Sense: Hearing (7) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:
| Description:Using the power of the Zoan Sense, Kay can now hear the intricate sounds that a regular person cannot. He can distinguish sounds around him.
| Yell of The Beast ([4 free+8]12) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:+4 Strength, +4 Speed, +4 Stamina
| Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a complete bull standing on all fours, 6'5 long, From horns to tail, Weighing over 200lbs
| Grunt of The Beast (12~Signature) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:+7 Strength, +5 Stamina
| Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a bull-Hybrid standing over 8 Feet covered in fur with a bulls head with big thick human-like arms and hands and large human-like feet covered in fur |
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Kay Slay Style: Taurus Charge (1*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent And Twist His Body And Strikes The Opponent.
| Kay Slay Style: Taurus Turn (1*) Type:Offensive Range:Close Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes while leaning from left to right which allows him to be more faster and fluid in his motions in battle. Kay waits for the opponent to come close before side stepping out the way.
| Kay Slay Style: Super Taurus ChargeBranched From Taurus Charge (4*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent And Twist His Body And Strikes The Opponent. A Successful Attack Can Leave The Opponent Knocked Off His Feet
| Kay Slay Style: Super Taurus Turn Branched From Taurus Turn (4*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes while leaning from left to right which allows him to be more faster and fluid in his motions in battle. Kay waits for the opponent to come close before side stepping out the way. If Kay successfully counters his opponent, he can knock his opponent off his feet as he side steps by kicking them with as he bounces on his toes.
| Kay Slay Style: Taurus Crash (10*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay bounces forward twisting his whole arm with his fists leading into one punch. A Successful Attack can break Tier 1 Objects.
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N/A (X) Type:N/A Range:N/A Stats: N/A
| Description: N/A
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*= Style Mastery Is In Effect
Development History
*Scoop From Krauss Lawston* 02/01/14: -Gained 13SD, 3,200,000 Beli And 250,000 bounty Gain from I Know It's In Us02/04/14 -Brought A Pair Steel Gauntlets For 2,000,000 Beli From Price Check. Deducted Beli From My Signature And Character Template. 02/18/14 -Gained 4SD And 950,000 Beli from Kidnapping Is Not Romance04/03/2014 -Gained 3SD and 700,000 Beli From Changing Shifts
Gains/Losses : No Shoes, No Sail, No Service: +3.9Mil Beli, +13 SD, +750,000 Bounty Purchased An Upgrade To The Extendable Staff From The Marketplace-Gained 3Sd From The March Contest-Gained 7Sd and 1, 750,000 Beli From What A Glorious Day To Relax-Gained 6SD and 6.6m Beli From OPRP 6th Anniversay -Gained 13SD and 3.25m Beli From Eternal Darkness? Heck No!-Gained 1SD from February Contest Results-Purchased The Dolphin Classed Ship 'Oculus Rift' From The Shipyard -17,000,000 Beli-Gained 8SD, 2mil beli and 4.5 Bounty from Peaches, Peaches And No Peaches-Purchased Hi-Tech Goggles From The Marketplace -1,000,000 Beli -Gained 5SD and 1.5 Beli From Tale of Gold, Guns and Guts-Upgraded Goggles for 1 mil to include night vision from The Market Place
Edit Log 24/08/15: -Edited stats and techs and replaced the alcoholic profession with the bartender profession, 07/09/15: -Added SD, Beli and stats from Tale of Gold, Guns and Guts11/09/15: -Edit Hi Tech Goggles after purchasing upgrades
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 | Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
|  | Name: Marco Ohshi Affiliation: Marine (Chief Petty Officer) of The HQ Patrolling Sqaud Commendations: 0 Professions: Martial Artist/Inventor Beli: 100,000 SD Earned: 27 Location: N/A Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 20(14+6) Stamina: 15 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16
|  | Name: Kaji "Sanguine Parasite " Higuchi Affiliation: Pirate - First Mate Of The Kumo Pirates Bounty: 4,000,00 Professions: Doctor/Weapon Specialist Beli: 3,560,000 SD Earned: 22 Location: South Blue, Awestrila Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 13 Stamina: 10 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16(13+3) |
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Zavy-Sama
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Aug 21 2015, 04:40 AM
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This is a revision scoop from:
http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5377184/1/?x=0#post1687493
In this scoop I've added a custom trait, Custom Profession and Two rank 1* techs
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 | Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
|  | Name: Marco Ohshi Affiliation: Marine (Chief Petty Officer) of The HQ Patrolling Sqaud Commendations: 0 Professions: Martial Artist/Inventor Beli: 100,000 SD Earned: 27 Location: N/A Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 20(14+6) Stamina: 15 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16
|  | Name: Kaji "Sanguine Parasite " Higuchi Affiliation: Pirate - First Mate Of The Kumo Pirates Bounty: 4,000,00 Professions: Doctor/Weapon Specialist Beli: 3,560,000 SD Earned: 22 Location: South Blue, Awestrila Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 13 Stamina: 10 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16(13+3) |
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Aug 21 2015, 08:08 AM
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This does not qualify as a Revision/Patch scoop. A patch scoop can only be used for a character whom has been effected by the patch to some degree. Your character has not been effected in any way.
If I have somehow missed something please let me know. Otherwise this is a full scoop, and will take up your scoop from every 6 months- assuming it is currently open.
On a side note, custom flavor profession is fine. But giving it a trait that can give buffs is not, that is strictly a primary profession bonus only.
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Zavy-Sama
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Aug 21 2015, 01:10 PM
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Edited; Made the custom my primary....Also I didn't say anything about this being a patch scoop. I declared this as my revision scoop which spends my normal scoop.
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Revision Scoops - is is when you spend your normal scoop to revise (change or update) an existing character, rather than to create a new character in that slot. It is a distinction, not it's own special kind of scoop.
Ive declared it here:
http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5497507/12/#new
And my name isn't on the list so I am cleared for scooping:
http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5497507/1/
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 | Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
|  | Name: Marco Ohshi Affiliation: Marine (Chief Petty Officer) of The HQ Patrolling Sqaud Commendations: 0 Professions: Martial Artist/Inventor Beli: 100,000 SD Earned: 27 Location: N/A Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 20(14+6) Stamina: 15 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16
|  | Name: Kaji "Sanguine Parasite " Higuchi Affiliation: Pirate - First Mate Of The Kumo Pirates Bounty: 4,000,00 Professions: Doctor/Weapon Specialist Beli: 3,560,000 SD Earned: 22 Location: South Blue, Awestrila Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 13 Stamina: 10 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16(13+3) |
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Aug 22 2015, 02:34 AM
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Taking into account your buffing trait, I'd say you should try and reskin the Chef profession.
Special TP for Super Sense is 7.
Max Rank is 12, so you can add on extra stats with your zoan forms! ^^
Speaking of which, please denote which one of your forms are gaining the benefit of the signature ability.
If you could change the range on all of your techniques to melee and change Taurus Turn to Offensive rather than support, that'd be dandy.
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Zavy-Sama
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Aug 22 2015, 10:43 AM
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Edited; Edited and changed the ranks of the techs and labeled the signature ability.
Also I don't want a chef profession if thats what you are implying by 'reskin the chef profession. I've added some new alcohol techs. Not sure if the ranks are correct but since am here I figured I can iron them out one time.
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 | Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
|  | Name: Marco Ohshi Affiliation: Marine (Chief Petty Officer) of The HQ Patrolling Sqaud Commendations: 0 Professions: Martial Artist/Inventor Beli: 100,000 SD Earned: 27 Location: N/A Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 20(14+6) Stamina: 15 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16
|  | Name: Kaji "Sanguine Parasite " Higuchi Affiliation: Pirate - First Mate Of The Kumo Pirates Bounty: 4,000,00 Professions: Doctor/Weapon Specialist Beli: 3,560,000 SD Earned: 22 Location: South Blue, Awestrila Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 13 Stamina: 10 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16(13+3) |
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Aug 23 2015, 08:11 AM
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Dusk's point about this being a Chef reskin seems accurate in how you are using it currently. Food buffs but limited to alcohol. They'll follow the same guidelines as food buffs in stat changes & duration. What you're doing currently with your alcohol techniques is a system used exclusively by Stances/Life Return.
Stats only add up to 96.
You get 4 free ranks on the zoan transformation that isn't signature (Yell of the Beast in this case).
Are the techs of the same name under the Kay Slay Style meant to be branched or upgrades?
As a side note, you need to maintain an Edit Log with dates of changes/what is done. Noticed that was not done on the old app.
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Aug 24 2015, 07:24 PM
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Edited;
I don't think you all understand how I am trying to label my character. I understand under the current mechanics the chef profession is a more viable option in the uses of the techs and stuff I'm making and stuff. However the chef profession is broadly described and labeled as cooking and preparing various foods that gives buffs/debuffs and I don't want Kay to be labeled as that. I want him to be labeled as an alcoholic that gains special fighting prowess from alcohol. Not a chef that just deals with alcohol because that really isn't a chef from a descriptive standpoint.
That being said I've decided to ditch that all together and go with a custom that was already approved here:
http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5807459/1/
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 | Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
|  | Name: Marco Ohshi Affiliation: Marine (Chief Petty Officer) of The HQ Patrolling Sqaud Commendations: 0 Professions: Martial Artist/Inventor Beli: 100,000 SD Earned: 27 Location: N/A Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 20(14+6) Stamina: 15 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16
|  | Name: Kaji "Sanguine Parasite " Higuchi Affiliation: Pirate - First Mate Of The Kumo Pirates Bounty: 4,000,00 Professions: Doctor/Weapon Specialist Beli: 3,560,000 SD Earned: 22 Location: South Blue, Awestrila Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 13 Stamina: 10 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16(13+3) |
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Aug 25 2015, 10:06 PM
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- I didn't check the app in it's previous incarnation with the alcohol stuff BUT a way to manage it, is to use Personal Buffs (refer to techniques) and flavor them as a result of your alcohol.
- You can kill the upkeep section.
Techniques:
- For a branch to be viable, the next technique in a branch needs to have all the effects of the previous. Meaning that in this case Mighty Taurus Charge - without a knockback - isn't a direct branch of Super Taurus Charge, necessitating a full TP pricing.
The alternative is adding the knockback, but that would make the rank 14*, which I'm not sure Kay can afford. I think the former option should work.
- Super Sense Hearing is fairly heavily systemized here: at rank 14 and up, it becomes a sort of radar sense thing (representing sense of sight, sound, whatever), similar to obs haki but without premonition.
At rank 7 you're hearing won't be at that mind-blowing radar-level, but I'm fine with being able to distinguish different sounds that Kay does manage to pick up.
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Okay, fine, I actually have characters.
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Zavy-Sama
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Aug 27 2015, 02:54 PM
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Edited ... When iGet some inspiration ima make some techs for my bartender...
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 | Name: Kay T. Law Affiliation: Pirate- First Mate of The Goggled Eye Pirates Bounty: 5,500,00 Professions: Martial Artist/Thief Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Location: South Blue, South Amerigo Stats: Strength: 31 Speed: 25 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 20 Fortune: 25
|  | Name: Marco Ohshi Affiliation: Marine (Chief Petty Officer) of The HQ Patrolling Sqaud Commendations: 0 Professions: Martial Artist/Inventor Beli: 100,000 SD Earned: 27 Location: N/A Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 20(14+6) Stamina: 15 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16
|  | Name: Kaji "Sanguine Parasite " Higuchi Affiliation: Pirate - First Mate Of The Kumo Pirates Bounty: 4,000,00 Professions: Doctor/Weapon Specialist Beli: 3,560,000 SD Earned: 22 Location: South Blue, Awestrila Stats: Strength: 20 Speed: 13 Stamina: 10 Accuracy: 10 Fortune: 16(13+3) |
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Oceonax
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Aug 28 2015, 10:33 AM
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There's a stray [/center] in your general techniques spoiler, in case you want to know.
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Cute Girls. (Minus One)  | Sam Wright ⚡ Tsundere ⚡ Ranged Projectiles Expert / Sort-of-Maid / Metallurgist / Scientist ⚡ Harlequin Pirates ⚡ Bounty: 105,000,000 ⚡ SD Earned: 660 ⚡ Beli: 100,920,000 ⚡ Location: Out at Sea, Grand Line
Strength: 136 / Speed: 58 / Stamina: 46 / Accuracy: 70 / Fortune: 137 / Focus: 6
|  | Saza Rinami ♥ Centre ♥ Idol / Dancer ♥ Fruity Devils ♥ Fans: 0 ♥ SD Earned: 75 ♥ Beli: 24,000,000 ♥ Location: Brick Blues Isle, Grand Line
Strength: 11 / Speed: 9 / Stamina: 9 / Accuracy: 9 / Fortune: 35 / Focus: 3
|  | Worm ☣ Cute Girl(?) ☣ Doctor / Marksman ☣ Plucky Squabs ☣ Threat: 0 ☣ SD Earned: 40 ☣ Beli: 10,500,000 ☣ Location: South Amerigo, South Blue
Strength: 14 / Speed: 19 / Stamina: 12 / Accuracy: 12 / Fortune: 23 / Focus: 2
|  | Silverbeard ☠ Captain ☠ Swashbuckler / Cannoneer ☠ Silverbeard Pirates ☠ Bounty: 0 ☠ SD Earned: 0 ☠ Beli: 200,000 ☠ Location: idk, Grand Line
Strength: 11 / Speed: 11 / Stamina: 11 / Accuracy: 5 / Fortune: 8 / Focus: 19
|  | Zekamashi ⍟ Destroyer ⍟ Engineer / Naval Gunner ⍟ United Seas of Ameriga ⍟ Threat: 50 ⍟ SD Earned: 244 ⍟ Beli: 41,100,000 ⍟ Location: Boin Archipelago, Grand Line
Strength: 40 / Speed: 148 / Stamina: 20 / Accuracy: 38 / Fortune: 56 / Focus: 4
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♠ Shamma
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Aug 30 2015, 08:02 AM
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I edited your Used Regular Technique Points to 26 because I didn't want to hold you up over it being 28!
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[-----]Account Name:ZavyBasic Character InformationName:Kay T. Law Nickname:Age: 28 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation:Pirate Bounty:5,500,000 Achievements:Developed His Own Style of Martial Arts Callled The Kay Slay Style Profession: Martial Artist -A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques. Bartender A Bartender is someone who has acquired a knack for the mixology of alcoholic beverages. They have a generally good knowledge on the consistency of an enjoyable beverage, as well as insight on what it may require to enhance an aspect of an existing drink. Physical AppearanceHeight:6'4 Weight:150lbs Hair:White, Shaggy Eyes:White Clothing/Accessories:Kay loves to be free and comfortable. He Doesn't like to wear anything that's too extravagant, he just likes to keep it simple and nice. You can usually see him wearing a black tank top or a black vest, with some long cargo pants or jeans. His fav. colour is black and red so he has alot of that in his wardrobe. He usually wears dog tags that has different stuff or images on it with that has meaning to him, but he always wear one that says "Grand Line, K.L/M.L". He can dress fancy but doesn't and frankly can't be bothered to since he hates to dress fancy. He doesn't usually wear shoes and likes to trot over the place bare foot and as a result the bottom feet are usually black with dirt and rough but he still likes to wear slippers from time to time. He usually keeps his hands up to his wrists wrapped in bandages to hide his blemishes General Appearance: He is tall and built with a lot of muscle and definition as a result of his past training. His shaggy hair reaches down to his just above his shoulders but doesn't cover eyes or other facial feature. He has broad shoulders and large arms. His hands are rough from axe wielding and has a bit of hair on his arms. He has a hairless chest with cut definition that goes down to his abs to his legs. His legs are proportional to his legs and are big. He has big feat with veins stretching on top of it. He has multiple scars over his hands from the years and years of training he has received but has no other scars else where. Looks Sorta Like This The CharacterPersonality: Kay is an easy going guy that likes to kick it back and have a good time with his friends or anyone who is just wants to have fun. His mates and friends are his life and will die to protect them, however you do not want to cross him. He will not help people who double-crosses him and uses him for foul intent an usually ends ups breaking them apart leaving them half to death. He doesn't have that much of a temper and it takes a lot to get him riled up when it gets out of control he known to run wild until his temper is sedated. He loves challenges and doesn't like to easily give up but but if the challenge is going to in anyway and somehow hurt him, he will not do it, as he has learned to respect his body. He usually keeps a friendly smirk on his face and always looks like he is ready for a good time, however he is still a pirate. When meeting or interacting with new people, he uses his friendly atmosphere to get close with the person, to find out how much he is worth to see if they are worth kidnapping and robbing. He usually takes a job seriously and leaves no witnesses. He has no problem killing an innocent if the job calls for it and does what needs to be done. Hometown: Karate Island, South BlueHistory For as long as Kay can remember he, grew up in an orphanage in the South-Blue and do not know where he was originally born. He never knew his parents, he didn't even know if they were alive or dead. All he knows is that when turned 8 he received a short letter that said, "We are sorry Kay, if your answers in the grand line" and a dog tag that read "Grand Line K.L/M.L". Ever since then he has devoted himself to finding these 'answers' that lay in the grand line.
Growing up in the Orphanage he always was a rebel. He has been this way ever since he found the book that entails all the marvelous misadventures of famous pirate crews of the past such as the straw hat pirates, the whitebeard pirates and the roger pirates. He saw that they were free and not restricted to any sort of laws or rules and did as they saw fit and they achieved tremendous stuff. He used that inspiration and always rebelled against authority. He always stole extra dinner from the kitchen, took apples from the store in towns and sneaking and staying out late. His caretaker one take got tired of it and decided to kicked him out and turned him over to an old man at a dojo in town. The old man happily took him in and took one look in his eyes and saw that he had potential.
Growing up in the dojo was hard, the old man put him threw vigorous training regiments to strengthen his body. He learned many different marital arts but he could not devote himself to one so he decided to make his own comprised of the martial arts he has learned before, The Kay Slay Style. However he did not lose his passion for to become a pirate. Even though he was with the old man at the dojo still snuck out and hang out with the guys he rebelled with when he was at the orphanage But one night changed everything.
He was with his regular crew in the marketplace at night and he came across a strange looking fruit growing in a nearby field. Curious he told his friends to wait as he went to get the desired fruit. Immediately he ate it and cursed as he swallowed the distasteful fruit. He then began to feel strange and start to feel himself change. He Howled at the pain and when his friends went to check on him, they say a freakish man bull creature. Scared they attacked him thinking that the creature killed Kay but as they attacked the creature swing at them and broke their necks on impact and sent them flying. He then calm down and his rage was replaced with a fright because of what he had done. He ran off before anyone saw him and rushed back to the dojo with the old man. The old man was furious to see him out late but Kay stopped him to tell him what he had done. The old man stared at him with anger and hatred and could not forgive him of his sins and told him to leave. Kay became anger because he was the closest thing to a father figure but he held his dog tag close to him and remember his purpose and walked off with noting but his staff that he had obtained through the years living there and his own personal martial art, The Kay Slay Style.
After Kay was abandon by his mentor, he became more vicious and merciless in combat as it was the only way for him to release his pent up anger. He was still a nice fun guy to hang out with that didn't listen to authority but he longed for friends that he could call family. That day changed his life and he left the island, with his martial arts that he developed with the old man, in hopes to find the grand line to find the answers that was left to him to find. Abilities and PossessionsCombat: Kay is a close ranged fighter that wastes no movements. He might have large arms and legs but his agility is on point. Kay is an all around-er with weapons but he prefers to use his own two fists. Using his own martial arts, The Kay Slay Style, he developed from other martial arts he knows how dodge attacks by rolling out the way or by using swift movements. His big and strong legs also give him incredible jumping abilities. He is able to block with his forearms, if he has any sort of armor, and counter/disarm in a swift movement. He doesn't like to waste time in battle and gets right to it. If he gets agitated he goes into a rage like mode and attacks with relentless strikes with almost nothing to slow him down. Weaponry: Extendable Staff: A Staff That Extends From The Size Of 4 Foot To A 6 Foot Long Staff Extending From All Both Sides. It Has a 2 inch Diameter And It Is Iron Quality. It Ejects From All Both Sides Until The Staff Is 6 Feet, So Its A Foot Extension From Both Sides. A 16 inch iron blade Ejects out of one end, Marked with a certain design, turning it into a glaive. Items:Steel Gauntlets, Rope, Red Paperclip Hi-Tech Goggles Goggles that look like regular goggles and can have an up to a 4x magnification for zoom.
Beli: 1,700,000 SD Earned:71 Stat Points:103 SD Remaining:0 Stats:- Used for Stats:103
- Used for Fortune:0
- Strength:35
- Speed:25
- Stamina:20
- Accuracy:23
- Fortune:25
Traits:Gen Traits: [/center]
Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits): - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited based on moderator discretion but can be of any of the three types.
Super Sense (1 trait) - Requires any Zoan Devil Fruit This character has achieved mastery over their heightened senses, gaining a single sense on par with Observation Haki. They gain special Technique Points that can only be used on this sense, of the amount of a quarter of their fortune.
Pro. Traits:
Kay Slay Style Mastery (1 Trait) - The character has attained mastery in his own martial arts, The Kay Slay Style, which focuses on no wasted movements with precise and powerful strikes. This style focuses powerful strikes that stem from a fighter that is already using a consistent motion(IE bouncing on toes, leaning left to right etc). From that consistent motion, by using the momentum, the fighter can shift their body into any strikes in a punching or kicking motion or counters. (can make techniques greater than rank 14) . All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.
In-Training (1 Traits) – This is the equivalent of Fated for the character’s Professional Skills, but no paths exist for this. General traits may not be spent to purchase In-Training.
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Devil Fruit Name: Ushi Ushi No Mi-Model Bull Devil Fruit Type:Zoan Devil Fruit Ability:Using this Devil Fruit, Kay can transform into a Bull, a Bull-human hybrid, and in time may be able to discover even more complex transformations.
TechniquesRegular Technique Points: 50 Used Regular Technique Points: 26 Special Technique Points: 7 Used Special Technique Points: 7 | Zoan Techniques |
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Animistic Sense: Hearing (7) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:
| Description:Using the power of the Zoan Sense, Kay can now hear the intricate sounds that a regular person cannot. He can distinguish sounds around him.
| Yell of The Beast ([4 free+8]12) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:+4 Strength, +4 Speed, +4 Stamina
| Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a complete bull standing on all fours, 6'5 long, From horns to tail, Weighing over 200lbs
| Grunt of The Beast (12~Signature) Type:Support Range:Self Stats:+7 Strength, +5 Stamina
| Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a bull-Hybrid standing over 8 Feet covered in fur with a bulls head with big thick human-like arms and hands and large human-like feet covered in fur |
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Kay Slay Style: Taurus Charge (1*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent And Twist His Body And Strikes The Opponent.
| Kay Slay Style: Taurus Turn (1*) Type:Offensive Range:Close Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes while leaning from left to right which allows him to be more faster and fluid in his motions in battle. Kay waits for the opponent to come close before side stepping out the way.
| Kay Slay Style: Super Taurus ChargeBranched From Taurus Charge (4*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent And Twist His Body And Strikes The Opponent. A Successful Attack Can Leave The Opponent Knocked Off His Feet
| Kay Slay Style: Super Taurus Turn Branched From Taurus Turn (4*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes while leaning from left to right which allows him to be more faster and fluid in his motions in battle. Kay waits for the opponent to come close before side stepping out the way. If Kay successfully counters his opponent, he can knock his opponent off his feet as he side steps by kicking them with as he bounces on his toes.
| Kay Slay Style: Taurus Crash (10*) Type:Offensive Range:Melee Stats:
| Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay bounces forward twisting his whole arm with his fists leading into one punch. A Successful Attack can break Tier 1 Objects.
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N/A (X) Type:N/A Range:N/A Stats: N/A
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*= Style Mastery Is In Effect Development History*Scoop From Krauss Lawston* 02/01/14: -Gained 13SD, 3,200,000 Beli And 250,000 bounty Gain from I Know It's In Us02/04/14 -Brought A Pair Steel Gauntlets For 2,000,000 Beli From Price Check. Deducted Beli From My Signature And Character Template. 02/18/14 -Gained 4SD And 950,000 Beli from Kidnapping Is Not Romance04/03/2014 -Gained 3SD and 700,000 Beli From Changing ShiftsGains/Losses : No Shoes, No Sail, No Service: +3.9Mil Beli, +13 SD, +750,000 Bounty Purchased An Upgrade To The Extendable Staff From The Marketplace-Gained 3Sd From The March Contest-Gained 7Sd and 1, 750,000 Beli From What A Glorious Day To Relax-Gained 6SD and 6.6m Beli From OPRP 6th Anniversay -Gained 13SD and 3.25m Beli From Eternal Darkness? Heck No!-Gained 1SD from February Contest Results-Purchased The Dolphin Classed Ship 'Oculus Rift' From The Shipyard -17,000,000 Beli-Gained 8SD, 2mil beli and 4.5 Bounty from Peaches, Peaches And No Peaches-Purchased Hi-Tech Goggles From The Marketplace -1,000,000 Beli Edit Log 24/08/15: -Edited stats and techs and replaced the alcoholic profession with the bartender profession,
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