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Kay T. Law 2.0; ~Revision Scoop ~ [Flagged]
Topic Started: Aug 21 2015, 04:37 AM (259 Views)
Zavy-Sama
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Basic Character Information
Name:Kay T. Law
Nickname:
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation:Pirate
Bounty:5,500,000
Achievements:Developed His Own Style of Martial Arts Callled The Kay Slay Style
Profession:

Martial Artist -A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.


Bartender
A Bartender is someone who has acquired a knack for the mixology of alcoholic beverages. They have a generally good knowledge on the consistency of an enjoyable beverage, as well as insight on what it may require to enhance an aspect of an existing drink.



Physical Appearance
Height:6'4
Weight:150lbs
Hair:White, Shaggy
Eyes:White
Clothing/Accessories:

Kay loves to be free and comfortable. He Doesn't like to wear anything that's too extravagant, he just likes to keep it simple and nice. You can usually see him wearing a black tank top or a black vest, with some long cargo pants or jeans. His fav. colour is black and red so he has alot of that in his wardrobe. He usually wears dog tags that has different stuff or images on it with that has meaning to him, but he always wear one that says "Grand Line, K.L/M.L".

He can dress fancy but doesn't and frankly can't be bothered to since he hates to dress fancy. He doesn't usually wear shoes and likes to trot over the place bare foot and as a result the bottom feet are usually black with dirt and rough but he still likes to wear slippers from time to time. He usually keeps his hands up to his wrists wrapped in bandages to hide his blemishes

General Appearance:
He is tall and built with a lot of muscle and definition as a result of his past training. His shaggy hair reaches down to his just above his shoulders but doesn't cover eyes or other facial feature. He has broad shoulders and large arms. His hands are rough from axe wielding and has a bit of hair on his arms. He has a hairless chest with cut definition that goes down to his abs to his legs. His legs are proportional to his legs and are big. He has big feat with veins stretching on top of it. He has multiple scars over his hands from the years and years of training he has received but has no other scars else where.

Looks Sorta Like This


The Character
Personality:
Kay is an easy going guy that likes to kick it back and have a good time with his friends or anyone who is just wants to have fun. His mates and friends are his life and will die to protect them, however you do not want to cross him. He will not help people who double-crosses him and uses him for foul intent an usually ends ups breaking them apart leaving them half to death. He doesn't have that much of a temper and it takes a lot to get him riled up when it gets out of control he known to run wild until his temper is sedated.

He loves challenges and doesn't like to easily give up but but if the challenge is going to in anyway and somehow hurt him, he will not do it, as he has learned to respect his body. He usually keeps a friendly smirk on his face and always looks like he is ready for a good time, however he is still a pirate.

When meeting or interacting with new people, he uses his friendly atmosphere to get close with the person, to find out how much he is worth to see if they are worth kidnapping and robbing. He usually takes a job seriously and leaves no witnesses. He has no problem killing an innocent if the job calls for it and does what needs to be done.

Hometown: Karate Island, South Blue

History



Abilities and Possessions

Combat: Kay is a close ranged fighter that wastes no movements. He might have large arms and legs but his agility is on point. Kay is an all around-er with weapons but he prefers to use his own two fists. Using his own martial arts, The Kay Slay Style, he developed from other martial arts he knows how dodge attacks by rolling out the way or by using swift movements. His big and strong legs also give him incredible jumping abilities. He is able to block with his forearms, if he has any sort of armor, and counter/disarm in a swift movement. He doesn't like to waste time in battle and gets right to it. If he gets agitated he goes into a rage like mode and attacks with relentless strikes with almost nothing to slow him down.

Weaponry:
Extendable Staff: A Staff That Extends From The Size Of 4 Foot To A 6 Foot Long Staff Extending From All Both Sides. It Has a 2 inch Diameter And It Is Iron Quality. It Ejects From All Both Sides Until The Staff Is 6 Feet, So Its A Foot Extension From Both Sides. A 16 inch iron blade Ejects out of one end, Marked with a certain design, turning it into a glaive.

Items:Steel Gauntlets, Rope, Red Paperclip
Hi-Tech Goggles

Beli: 2,200,000
SD Earned:76

Stat Points:103
SD Remaining:0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats:108
  • Used for Fortune:0

    • Strength:35
    • Speed:25
    • Stamina:25
    • Accuracy:23
    • Fortune:27


Traits:

Gen Traits:



Pro. Traits:


Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Ushi Ushi No Mi-Model Bull
Devil Fruit Type:Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability:Using this Devil Fruit, Kay can transform into a Bull, a Bull-human hybrid, and in time may be able to discover even more complex transformations.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 54
Used Regular Technique Points: 26
Special Technique Points: 7
Used Special Technique Points: 7

Zoan Techniques
Animistic Sense: Hearing (7)
Type:Support
Range:Self
Stats:
Description:Using the power of the Zoan Sense, Kay can now hear the intricate sounds that a regular person cannot. He can distinguish sounds around him.

Yell of The Beast
([4 free+8]12)
Type:Support
Range:Self
Stats:+4 Strength, +4 Speed, +4 Stamina
Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a complete bull standing on all fours, 6'5 long, From horns to tail, Weighing over 200lbs

Grunt of The Beast (12~Signature)
Type:Support
Range:Self
Stats:+7 Strength, +5 Stamina
Description: Using the power of the Zoan Fruit, Kay transform into a bull-Hybrid standing over 8 Feet covered in fur with a bulls head with big thick human-like arms and hands and large human-like feet covered in fur



Techniques
Kay Slay Style: Taurus Charge (1*)
Type:Offensive
Range:Melee
Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent And Twist His Body And Strikes The Opponent.

Kay Slay Style: Taurus Turn (1*)
Type:Offensive
Range:Close
Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes while leaning from left to right which allows him to be more faster and fluid in his motions in battle. Kay waits for the opponent to come close before side stepping out the way.

Kay Slay Style: Super Taurus ChargeBranched From Taurus Charge (4*)
Type:Offensive
Range:Melee
Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay Then Lunges Forward On A Single Bounce Towards The Opponent And Twist His Body And Strikes The Opponent. A Successful Attack Can Leave The Opponent Knocked Off His Feet

Kay Slay Style: Super Taurus Turn Branched From Taurus Turn (4*)
Type:Offensive
Range:Melee
Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes while leaning from left to right which allows him to be more faster and fluid in his motions in battle. Kay waits for the opponent to come close before side stepping out the way. If Kay successfully counters his opponent, he can knock his opponent off his feet as he side steps by kicking them with as he bounces on his toes.

Kay Slay Style: Taurus Crash (10*)
Type:Offensive
Range:Melee
Stats:
Description: Kay utilizes the fruits of his training training and start bouncing on his toes in place Leaning On The Left Or Right Side (Depending The Flow Of Battle). Kay bounces forward twisting his whole arm with his fists leading into one punch. A Successful Attack can break Tier 1 Objects.


Bartender Techniques
N/A (X)
Type:N/A
Range:N/A
Stats: N/A
Description: N/A


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Development History
*Scoop From Krauss Lawston*


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Edited by Zavy-Sama, Sep 11 2015, 06:41 PM.
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Zavy-Sama
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This is a revision scoop from:

http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5377184/1/?x=0#post1687493

In this scoop I've added a custom trait, Custom Profession and Two rank 1* techs
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HeartOfLight
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This does not qualify as a Revision/Patch scoop. A patch scoop can only be used for a character whom has been effected by the patch to some degree. Your character has not been effected in any way.

If I have somehow missed something please let me know. Otherwise this is a full scoop, and will take up your scoop from every 6 months- assuming it is currently open.

On a side note, custom flavor profession is fine. But giving it a trait that can give buffs is not, that is strictly a primary profession bonus only.
Edited by HeartOfLight, Aug 21 2015, 08:08 AM.
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Edited; Made the custom my primary....Also I didn't say anything about this being a patch scoop. I declared this as my revision scoop which spends my normal scoop.

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Revision Scoops - is is when you spend your normal scoop to revise (change or update) an existing character, rather than to create a new character in that slot. It is a distinction, not it's own special kind of scoop.


Ive declared it here:

http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5497507/12/#new

And my name isn't on the list so I am cleared for scooping:

http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5497507/1/



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Taking into account your buffing trait, I'd say you should try and reskin the Chef profession.

Special TP for Super Sense is 7.

Max Rank is 12, so you can add on extra stats with your zoan forms! ^^

Speaking of which, please denote which one of your forms are gaining the benefit of the signature ability.

If you could change the range on all of your techniques to melee and change Taurus Turn to Offensive rather than support, that'd be dandy.
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Edited; Edited and changed the ranks of the techs and labeled the signature ability.

Also I don't want a chef profession if thats what you are implying by 'reskin the chef profession. I've added some new alcohol techs. Not sure if the ranks are correct but since am here I figured I can iron them out one time.

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Shamma
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Dusk's point about this being a Chef reskin seems accurate in how you are using it currently. Food buffs but limited to alcohol. They'll follow the same guidelines as food buffs in stat changes & duration. What you're doing currently with your alcohol techniques is a system used exclusively by Stances/Life Return.

Stats only add up to 96.

You get 4 free ranks on the zoan transformation that isn't signature (Yell of the Beast in this case).

Are the techs of the same name under the Kay Slay Style meant to be branched or upgrades?

As a side note, you need to maintain an Edit Log with dates of changes/what is done. Noticed that was not done on the old app.
Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

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Edited;

I don't think you all understand how I am trying to label my character. I understand under the current mechanics the chef profession is a more viable option in the uses of the techs and stuff I'm making and stuff. However the chef profession is broadly described and labeled as cooking and preparing various foods that gives buffs/debuffs and I don't want Kay to be labeled as that. I want him to be labeled as an alcoholic that gains special fighting prowess from alcohol. Not a chef that just deals with alcohol because that really isn't a chef from a descriptive standpoint.

That being said I've decided to ditch that all together and go with a custom that was already approved here:

http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/5807459/1/
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- I didn't check the app in it's previous incarnation with the alcohol stuff BUT a way to manage it, is to use Personal Buffs (refer to techniques) and flavor them as a result of your alcohol.

- You can kill the upkeep section.

Techniques:

- For a branch to be viable, the next technique in a branch needs to have all the effects of the previous. Meaning that in this case Mighty Taurus Charge - without a knockback - isn't a direct branch of Super Taurus Charge, necessitating a full TP pricing.

The alternative is adding the knockback, but that would make the rank 14*, which I'm not sure Kay can afford. I think the former option should work.

- Super Sense Hearing is fairly heavily systemized here: at rank 14 and up, it becomes a sort of radar sense thing (representing sense of sight, sound, whatever), similar to obs haki but without premonition.

At rank 7 you're hearing won't be at that mind-blowing radar-level, but I'm fine with being able to distinguish different sounds that Kay does manage to pick up.
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Edited ... When iGet some inspiration ima make some techs for my bartender...
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There's a stray [/center] in your general techniques spoiler, in case you want to know.

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I edited your Used Regular Technique Points to 26 because I didn't want to hold you up over it being 28!

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