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| JediBrainWash | Jul 21 2015, 02:33 AM Post #1 | ||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: JediBrainWash Basic Character Information Name: Kiba Gyojin Nickname: “Kaiju” Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Fishman (Parrotfish) Affiliation: Bounty Hunter Threat: 1 Achievements: Profession: Primary: Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques. Secondary: Doctor A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. Position: Physical Appearance Height: 5’8” Weight: 160 lbs Hair: Kiba has medium-length spiky, dark green hair. Eyes: Kiba has large eyes with black irises and pupils. Clothing/Accessories: Kiba wears an unbuttoned purple jacket with a straight collar. He wears no undershirt and his muscular torso is exposed. He wears Dark blue shorts beneath his jacket, along with a pair of thin, tan sandles. General Appearance: As a Parrotfish fishman, Kiba has blue-tinted skin that has a somewhat reflective appearance in directly light, refracting light to a small degree to give it an almost metallic appearance. He has normal humanoid attributes mostly, with only two arms and two legs. Being that parrotfish are not carnivorous, his teeth appear as normal human teeth and are not sharp. He is somewhat short for a fishman, and has an athletic, muscular build from years spent training his body. Portrait The Character Personality: Kiba is a goodhearted individual with a number of characterizing quirks. He has a strong sense of right and wrong, and believes in practicing vigilante justice and handing out a butt-whooping to bad people. He is somewhat immature and looks upon the world with child-like awe and amazement. When encountering things like cyborgs, seakings, monsters, and other sorts of oddities he is often fascinated. At times, Kiba will simply declare things about people, either what they are, what they will do, or what they are like, which often makes them angry. In cases in which he makes a declaration, Kiba almost never backs down. Kiba envy's all the powers possessed by others that he runs into, regardless of how awesome or useless they may be, and will at times try to physically take them from them. Obviously, this does not work in the case of racial abilities or devil fruit abilities, but makes for comical display. Kiba is also infatuated with money and the idea of becoming rich. He dreams of owning islands of his own and becoming a figure of power and respect. Many of the actions and quests that he performs are driven by his urge for money and treasure. At times, Kiba is forced to choose between doing the right thing and making a lot of money, in which he will almost always choose to do the right thing albeit begrudgingly. When things don’t go his way, Kiba often pouts and complains. Despite his many flaws, Kiba has an strong ability to make friends and has the charisma of a natural leader. He is very driven towards growing more powerful, and despite his immature behavior he fights with the skill of a more intelligent and tactical fighter. He cares deeply for friends when he makes them, and refers to his crew or team as his family. Hometown: Fishman Island, Grand Line/ Goa Kingdom,Dawn Island History: Kiba was born on the outskirts of Fishman Island as part of a brood of 20+ children. His parents were nomadic coral gatherers, and as was the case of the less civilized Fishmen, it was not rare that an individual child of the brood be misplaced during travels. In the case of Kiba, he was the unfortunate child to have strayed from the pack at the wrong moment, and found himself soon wandering through the silent sea all by himself. After a few days of swimming and reaching his physical limit of exhaustion, Kiba lost consciousness and his body rolled with the tide of the waves. Only 3 years old, Kiba awoke to find that he was on a soft sand beach on the surface lands. An elderly female found the young Fishman starving and dying, and wrapped him in a blanket and carried him home to nurse him to health. Along with her husband, the elderly female watched over Kiba day and night until his health improved. Kiba was still at a young age and his undeveloped mind knew that these two people were not his parents, yet still felt deep down that he could trust them. Growing to learn their language and their customs, Kiba was raised as their “grandson” and loved them both dearly. His grandparents’ was located on the border of Foosha village, and when he reached the appropriate age he attended school inside the village. The decision to allow a fishman into the school system was unpopular with a few families, yet most residents of the village seemed to be nice and understanding people, and happily allowed Kiba to join into village life without batting an eye at his race. As a result of this peaceful and paradise-like setting, Kiba’s experience with racism was minimal and he developed more-or-less as a normal human child. The other children of his classes had a variety of dreams for when they grew older, particularly on whether or not they desired to become pirates, marines, or tradesman of some sort. Kiba was undecided on what he wanted to be when he grew up, but after a trip to Goa City with his grandparents he knew that whatever he ended up doing, he wanted to be rich. Though he seemed to do well as a normal child in the village, Kiba’s grandparents felt bad that Kiba had no traditional experiences that others of his race had, and sent a letter to an old Fishman martial artist they heard took residence in Goa City. Begging the man to come visit their home and speak with their child about Fishman culture and life, the old fish sage agreed and traveled all the way to the small village. He sat down with a 12 year old Kiba and explained to him what he was and what it meant to be such a being. To his own surprise, Kiba did not seem interested in Fishman history whatsoever, and rather was drawn towards the fish sage’s stories of his travels on the sea, his battles with pirates and marines, and his stories of riches. Kiba begged the fish sage to train him in his martial ways, and feeling bad for the fishchild who knew nothing of his own people, the fish sage agreed. For five years, Kiba trained under the fish sage in his special martial art of Fishman Ninjutsu. Kiba was a headstrong apprentice who shied away from daily chores and responsibility and maturity increasing tasks, but excelled in raw combat itself. As he reached the age of 17 and completion of his apprenticeship under the fish safe, Kiba was graduated in the fish art and issued his final mission. As part of his journey as both a fish and a man, the fish sage tasked Kiba with forging a destiny of his own on the vast seas, to seek adventure and riches, and to return to the sage before his death and tell him of his accomplishments. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Kiba practices the art of Fishman Ninjutsu, a rare form of fighting that is closely related to Fishman Karate and Fishman Jujutsu. Fishman Ninjutsu is a broad art of fighting that encompasses water art theory into different attack forms. Kiba specializes in the practice of the art of the submarine empty hand. Through Fishman Ninjutsu, he utilizes skills designed to strike at the water within an organic enemy as well as utilize water in his direct vicinity. Along with his art’s focus on water, Kiba has been trained in adjusting his art to incorporate the sand produced by his body alike it was water. Weaponry:
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Beli: 3,250,000 SD Earned: 11 Stat Points: 43 Advancement Points: 0 SD Remaining: 0 Stats:
Techniques Regular Technique Points:16 Used Regular Technique Points:8 Special Technique Points:0 Used Special Technique Points:0
Development History Gains/Losses: + 11SD, + 2,750,000 Beli, +1 Threat~~ Going Wrong Eventually Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle Edited by JediBrainWash, Sep 20 2015, 05:34 PM.
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| Shizuochan | Jul 21 2015, 10:48 AM Post #2 | ||||||||
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To clarify, martial arts related masteries need to be somewhat narrowed (in the same way weapon-based mastery traits are narrowed due to being related to one weapon), being nominally referred to as a 'broad' fighting style doesn't help! Basically, "Through Fishman Ninjutsu, he utilizes skills designed to strike at the water within an organic enemy as well as utilize water in his direct vicinity." this could be your primary (or one of the primary) parameter(s) for determining if the mastery bonus applies, but I thought you might like to refine that, or do whatever. I like the fish doe. |
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| JediBrainWash | Jul 21 2015, 11:00 AM Post #3 | ||||||||
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Ah, that must be why people keep choosing things like "Arm Mastery". I'll switch out the trait for something else and then edit my technique. Edit: added technically adept, fixed the technique, added another tech Edited by JediBrainWash, Jul 21 2015, 11:14 AM.
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| Shizuochan | Jul 21 2015, 12:41 PM Post #4 | ||||||||
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the points you get from technically adept are just added to your regular technique points, tbh | ||||||||
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| JediBrainWash | Jul 21 2015, 04:06 PM Post #5 | ||||||||
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Oh whoops. Fixed. | ||||||||
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| Spunky Misunderstood Genius | Jul 21 2015, 04:31 PM Post #6 | ||||||||
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Parrotfish is a five trait fishmen. Three if you drop the healing mucous. And that stuff Parrotfish excrete, that stuff is waste. You want poop armor? On the upside, Parrotfish are able to make protective cocoons. It can be as strong as iron but will never be stronger than that. The cocoon you make will be small at first but at r14 it can be big enough to cover your entire body. They look pretty awesome on google images. So maybe there is even an upside to dropping that mastery trait. Hmm. |
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| JediBrainWash | Jul 21 2015, 04:39 PM Post #7 | ||||||||
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Lol it's sand. They poop it but it's just granulated coral, and Kiba excretes it from his skin. I was under the impression that fish men have only whatever traits of the regular fish that you decide to give them, being that many shark fishmen would have bioelectric haki essentially otherwise. Is it still a 3 trait fish an if all he has is the ability to convert stone and coral he eats into sand he can excrete from his skin?
Edited by JediBrainWash, Jul 21 2015, 04:40 PM.
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| JediBrainWash | Jul 21 2015, 05:53 PM Post #8 | ||||||||
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After speaking to strength, we determined that the ability to excrete sand from his skin, rather than poop it, he would need mad scientist. As a result I made the following changes: removed technically adept, changed martial artist as primary, doctor as secondary now. Mad scientist was taken to alter sand production through skin rather than pooped | ||||||||
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| Shizuochan | Jul 22 2015, 11:39 AM Post #9 | ||||||||
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Okay, fine, I actually have characters.
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| HeartOfLight | Jul 22 2015, 02:25 PM Post #10 | ||||||||
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