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Topic Started: Jul 17 2015, 04:28 PM (192 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Bell Hyper
Nickname: N/A
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Great White Shark Fishwoman
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 0
Achievements: N/A
Profession:

Doctor -
A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. Doctors have the ability to create drugs and toxins that can buff allies or debuff enemies.

Weapon Specialist -
A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.

Position: Captain


Physical Appearance
Height: 6' 11''
Weight: 520 lbs
Hair: Emerald green and long, extending past her shoulders.
Eyes: Dark green and dull. They are triangularly shaped on her face.
Clothing/Accessories: Bell wears very suitable clothing at all times. She prefers comfort and utility over appearance. Her primary outfit is a black shirt with sleeves for each of her arms. The shirt has a bell shaped logo with a red lightning bolt behind it. She wears skin-hugging jeans that show off her body and she likes simple flats or sandals on her feet. She's not too picky and doesn't wear jewelry often since it gets in the way but she does like donning wide brimmed rounin straw hats and cloaks from time to time.
General Appearance: Bell is a massive sharkwoman. Her skin is dark blue in color on her back and sides but her front is distinctly pure alabaster. Her face is slightly elongated and she has rows upon rows of devilishly sharp teeth. Her nose is more an upturned "u" shape with two slits for nostrils. Her body is very strong looking and she has the build of an athlete. Her breasts are large but only in comparison to other women. They are very normal looking on her due to the difference in scale. Her hands and feet are webbed but her fingernails are trim and proper. Her bangs often hang down and obscure part of her face.

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The Character
Personality: Bell is a viscous leader. She has a take charge personality and she's always looking for a fight. She tends to rope other people into strange situations and she never feels bad for doing it. She's a true blue pirate captain and she sees the world as one big oyster for her to pry open. She loves the feel of chaos and she enjoys making more of it.

Bell tends to get attached to people in a strange way. If she grows to like someone she treats them more as a possession than as another living creature. She becomes fiercely agitated if someone threatens one of her possessions, living or otherwise, and she will fight to kill if necessary in order to drive any foes out.

Bell is exceedingly territorial and will often "Claim" buildings or ships even when she reasonably has no way to actually conquer or control them. She is prone to massive moodswings when talking about things she enjoys and, at the same time, she is still liable to attack anyone for a word out of place.

Hometown: Fishman Island, Grand Line
History: Bell was born as a rambunctious child. Her parents wanted her to be a doctor. She wanted to be a warrior. Eventually she decided to compromise and became a mad doctor warrior who does surgery to fix the people she breaks along the way. She liked this compromise.

She would always fight with her siblings and, over the years, she quickly established dominance over them with her strength. Her skill with swords wasn't her most terrifying feature: her unwavering determination to fuck over all those who stood against her will was. She wasn't above cutting you in your sleep or kicking you when you were down. Her older brothers feared she would try to cut off their private parts if they didn't fall under her command.

In time Bell came to be a bit of a warlord among the other children of fishman island, and the adults started to take notice. She was reprimanded so many times her parents hands were just as sore as her bottom. Still, she was incorrigible.

Bell was determined to one day become the greatest warrior in the world. So, when she had saved up 500,000 beli, she snuck aboard a transport ship headed for the wide world above the waves. With tears in her eyes, mostly from the fact that she wouldn't be able to stomp all over her brothers anymore, she wished her home goodbye and promised not to return until she was a great warrior in charge of a magnificent crew.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Underhanded and downright cruel, Bell targets the most sensitive areas of a foe. She duel wields her swords for better effect and looks to maintain an offensive style at all times. She doesn't like giving enemies the chance to breath. Often she'll use the two modifications she's made to her own body in order to better her chance if possible. She mostly uses her modifications in tandem with her swordplay to create a yin and yang style.
Weaponry: Two Iron Katana
Items: N/A
Beli: 500,000
SD Earned: 0
Stat Points: 32
Advancement Points: 0
SD Remaining: 0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 32
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 9 (8+1)
    • Speed: 8
    • Stamina: 8
    • Accuracy: 8
    • Fortune: 8
Traits:

Fishman (2 Traits) - Fishmen gain the benefits of the Mighty Strength trait, and may breath underwater. Their movements in water are not hampered as greatly as normal humans, and they may swim at great speeds. They also gain attributes or natural weapons based on their species. The number of traits needed depends on the species.

- Great White Shark: Iron hard teeth that grow back after a short time.

Mad Scientist (1 Trait) – The epitome of madness. Cackling and gleeful hand-rubbing is a favorite pastime of this character, and every time they finish an experiment, there are obligatory flashes of lightning. The mad scientist has the ability to make one major biological modification to themselves or any NPCs they control.

- Fire Palm: Bell has altered her left palm to secrete a special chemical. This chemical, when in contact with oxygen, will instantly ignite into flames. This chemical is released when she squeezes the muscles in her hand in just the right way.

Mad Scientist (1 Trait) – The epitome of madness. Cackling and gleeful hand-rubbing is a favorite pastime of this character, and every time they finish an experiment, there are obligatory flashes of lightning. The mad scientist has the ability to make one major biological modification to themselves or any NPCs they control.

- Ice Palm: Bell has altered her right palm to secret a special chemical. This chemical, when in contact with oxygen, will instantly suck heat from the air creating an ice element. This chemical is released when she squeezes the muscles in her hand in just the right way.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 16
Used Regular Technique Points: 16
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
The Angel's Left (4)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: Fire Palm: Bell has altered her left palm to secrete a special chemical. This chemical, when in contact with oxygen, will instantly ignite into flames. This chemical is released when she squeezes the muscles in her hand in just the right way.
The Devil's Right (4)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: Ice Palm: Bell has altered her right palm to secret a special chemical. This chemical, when in contact with oxygen, will instantly suck heat from the air creating an ice element. This chemical is released when she squeezes the muscles in her hand in just the right way.
Yin Slash (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Bell slashes her left blade at a foe while simultaneously wiping it with her off hand, coating it in a thin layer of frost/ice to add a small bit of cold damage.
Yang Slash (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Bell slashes her right blade at a foe while simultaneously wiping it with her off hand, coating it in a thin layer of fire to add a small bit of heat damage.


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Edited by Underworld, Jul 19 2015, 04:51 PM.
Bell Hyper • Captain • Doctor • Heaven and Earth PiratesBounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 0 • Location: East Blue
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You'll have to get a more experienced mod to approve of your Mad Scientists mods, though everything else looks good. Welcome to the site, by the way!

As a note, if they are approved, your flames and ice attacks will be very weak until you reach some of the much higher ranks.

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You may want to copy and paste your fire palm and ice palm into a description of a tech because you can't freeform them.

Your sword is incapable of retaining the fire or frost. And your tech rank is too low to defy the laws of logic. So you won't have a fiery sword or a frost sword to wave around. Drop those two techs.

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Okay I have copied and pasted the mad scientist descriptions into their respective techs.

Why can't she set her sword on fire or effect it with frost? It's a secreted chemical, which would be easy enough to lather onto them. If you're going to be difficult about this then I'll just change her to a martial artist and get rid of the swords altogether since that seems to be the point of your contention.
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It's more a problem of sustaining the flames and frost. Mad scientist doesn't give black fire from Naruto or temperature defying ice. And at that low rank it cannot sustain itself by defying logic. At a higher rank, sure.

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Okay I've edited again. Will this work now?
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