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leeroy jenkins; leeroy79
Topic Started: Jul 17 2015, 11:11 AM (423 Views)
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Leeroy Jenkins

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Account Name:leeroy79


Basic Character Information
Name:leeroy jenkins
Nickname:leeroy
Age:18
Gender:male
Race:human
Affiliation:marine
Rank (Commendations):0
Achievements: Faught a whole pirate crew and survived
Profession:martial artist/chef
Position:crew


Physical Appearance
Height:6'4"
Weight:233 lbs
Hair:blonde, wavy
Eyes:sky blue
Clothing/Accessories:black boots with a white strip on the side, dark blue jeans, a black shirt with the marine's symbol on it, a leather jacket on, and finally a marine's hat.

General Appearance:a strong and darkish face, usually pretty serious but on rare ocassions shows a smile. stands up right and with a strong posture. his most distinguished look is when his face is shadowed by his hat with a very serious glare. He has a scar on his jaw line on the right side leading the the middle of his neck. He has a large back tattoo of an ancient alchemist circle. He is very musclularly built with defined muscles on his chest, legs, arms, and back. He has average sized hands and feet.


The Character
Personality:He is normally a laid back type of guy who is allways doing some type of hardworking task or working on his body by lifting weights or training in combat. He is normally on good terms with everyone and has no problems with comunication. He feels that pirates are corrupting the world with their constant attacks on everyday people and seeks to put an end to their crimes and by doing so he is forfilling his dream of having world peace. He completely hates pirates and seeks to end their reign of the seas. His habit is that he is always training his body and skills.He will try to destroy and kill any pirate that crosses his path.


Hometown:nameless islsand in the east blue
History:He was raised on an island that a voyaging ship was traveling by when a pirate ship came along and damaged causing the ship to sink so the passengers abandoned ship and swam to the island but only a few got the island while most drowned in the sea. He was just a small child at this time. When the passengers reached the island they only had a few seconds before the pirates were firing down on the beach killing and wounding even more survivors causing them to retreat into the main land of the island. Little did the survivors know that the pirates were the least of their fears on this island. The island was home to some of the terrifying animals in the east blue and over time the survivors were almost all killed off by the animals and the pirates down to just the boy. But during all this time the boy was learning how to survive and now he was ready to fight back. He had been training himself in martial arts and survival tactics and he launched an attack plan against the pirates and eventually won by ridding them one by one till he was able to sneak on board and steal a row boat and floated off to sea. He was stranded for a very long time and was on the verge of death when he came to the shores of a marine island and was picked up by the marines and taken in. After a few years he joined their ranks and is now the strong marine you see today.



Abilities and Possessions
Combat:In a fight he uses his hands and feet, and strikes his apponents with strong blows. He is usually very tacticlly smart when attacking leaving very small openings for error in his fights. his only weakness is that when he fights he is focused on the task in front of him leaving him open for attack behind him.

Weaponry:none

Items:a ring given to him by a close friend when he was very young
Beli: 500,000
SD Earned:0
Stat Points:0
Advancement Points:0
SD Remaining:0
Stats:
  • Used for Stats:0
  • Used for Fortune:0

    • Strength:8
    • Speed:8
    • Stamina:8
    • Accuracy:8
    • Fortune:8
Traits:Hardened Fighter (1 Trait) – Through excessive training in breaking planks, punching rocks, and all those durability-building exercises, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained flesh that is as hard as iron, making them much more resistant to physical damage.


Mighty Strength (1 Trait) - This character's strength is boosted by 20%

Bear Stamina (1 Trait) - This character's stamina is boosted by 20%.

Anti-Weapon Specialist (1 Trait) – Through training and experience in fighting armed opponents when unarmed, the character gains special Technique Points, of the amount of half their fortune, for techniques which are aimed to disarm, disable or block the use of a weapon.

Techniques
Regular Technique Points:16
Used Regular Technique Points:0
Special Technique Points:0
Used Special Technique Points:0

Techniques
Solid Fist (Rank number)
Type:offensive
Range:short/medium range
Stats:n/a
Description: the user pulls back their arm and tightens their fist into a mors solid mass and punches at full force.

Unbreakable body (Rank number)
Type:Deffensive
Range:self
Stats:n/a
Description:the user puts up their arms infront of them tightens their chest to protect themselves from an attack.



Development History
Gains/Losses:n/a
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Edited by leeroy79, Jul 19 2015, 08:40 PM.
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Please use the coded template found at the bottom of the character template topic.

The fruit won't work. We are strict with custom devil fruits here. Please make use of the cbox and dfs ahoy in filtering out fruit ideas.

Max starting rank is Chief Warrant Officer, 0 commendations.

Fighting a fleet of pirates is too much for a starter.

Lets start with that for now.
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sorry sir i will work on it
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i was wondering if it was ok if i use the Kira Kira no Mi-Diamond Diamond Fruit? or some thing like the black arm or leg ability if that is ok with you
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Later on? Sure. But right now you can only have 3 general traits, which can be three fated for it, and if you save those you can save up for theDiamond fruit. Or Haki to get black legs. But no for now
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so just fate my traits then i will be good?
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  • Your profession cannot be crewman. Please see the professions section of the rules, found here, to see what can be chosen from. You may have one primary and one secondary, the descriptions of which must both be included.
  • Weight is 223 what? Stone? Pounds? Tonnes? Please include a unit of measurement.
  • Please try to flesh out personality a little bit more. What does your character like and dislike? Does he have any habits? Does he want to murder all pirates indiscriminately, or only ones he sees doing evil deeds?
  • In weaponry, write "none"
  • As a starter, you have 3 general traits and 1 professional trait to spend. A list of these traits can be found here. You must spend all of your traits. If you wish to save traits, you may spend them on Fated or In Training.
  • You cannot have the Kira Kira no mi. Devil fruits each have a trait cost associated with them, which must be spent using general traits. A starter only has 3 general traits, and so can only start with a devil fruit costing 3 traits or less. Additionally some fruits may be taken by other characters, making them unavailable. A list of devil fruits can be found here.
  • Both of your techniques use the Kira Kira no mi, which your character cannot have. Consequently, these techniques must be removed.
  • Finally, while not specifically an error, it may interest you to place descriptions outside of coding so that your entire app is not bold or underlined. For example:
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[b]Name:[/b] Leeroy Jenkins

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[b]Name: Leeroy Jenkins[/b]

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I tried to fix what you mentioned I hope I meet the standards now.
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:)

You have one more trait to spend. This one is a professional trait though, so you can only spend it on professional traits (last section in the opening post of the traits rule topic). Link is above, kindly provided by Oceonax.
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thank you very much I will fix it right now. and also thank you to all of the moderators who have helped me this far I appreciate the help very much.
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I dont know if I did but I hope I fixed everything now
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  • The entire descriptions of your professions must be written out, with the bonus provided to the primary in italics.
  • You have not added the bonuses from Mighty Strength and Bear Stamina to your stats. 8*1.2=9, so your strength and stamina should be 9. Next to it, write (8+1) to show what your base stat was.
  • Your techniques need to be given ranks, instead of just "rank number". For now, I would recommend 4, thus making your Used Regular Technique Points 8.
  • Your Used for Stats should be 32, and your Stat Points also 32.
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