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Techniques; [Flagged]
Topic Started: Jun 28 2015, 11:07 PM (40 Views)
Red
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The Pokemon Trainer
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Character: Minori Kobayahi
Request: Adding Techniques
Changes:

Dive Slash
(Rank 4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Minori dives forward, slashing his sword in a downward motion across his enemy's chest.

Upper Slice
(Rank 4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Minori cuts upwards with both of his swords, dragging the razor sharp blades up his opponents torso.

Spiral cut
(Rank 4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Minori holds his swords together so that they form a point, he then dives through the air, rotating his body to create a strong piercing attack.
Edited by Red, Jun 30 2015, 10:26 AM.
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Your first two techs are fine however the third goes beyond your rank limit. Maximum technique rank is half of your fortune which is currently 8.

You can simply make the attack a rank 4 though.

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