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Topic Started: Jun 28 2015, 11:07 PM (40 Views)
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♣ Red
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Jun 28 2015, 11:07 PM
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Character: Minori Kobayahi Request: Adding Techniques Changes:
Dive Slash (Rank 4) Type: Offensive Range: Short Stats: N/A Minori dives forward, slashing his sword in a downward motion across his enemy's chest.
Upper Slice (Rank 4) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Stats: N/A Minori cuts upwards with both of his swords, dragging the razor sharp blades up his opponents torso.
Spiral cut (Rank 4) Type: Offensive Range: Short Stats: N/A Minori holds his swords together so that they form a point, he then dives through the air, rotating his body to create a strong piercing attack.
Edited by Red, Jun 30 2015, 10:26 AM.
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Seth | Ten K | | Real Name: Seth Dryden | | Affiliation: Marine | | SD Earned: 135 | | Beli: 55,500,000 | | Commendations: 25 | | Ship: -- | | Traits: Haki, Rokushiki | |
| Rank: | Lieutenant Commander | | Crew/Group: | Division K-7 | | Professions: | MA/WS | | Location: | Cactus Island, Grand Line, Route 3 |
| Strength: 55 | Speed: 40 | | Stamina: 51 | Accuracy: 38 | | Fortune: 35 | Focus: 4 |
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Hideo
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Jun 30 2015, 12:41 AM
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Your first two techs are fine however the third goes beyond your rank limit. Maximum technique rank is half of your fortune which is currently 8.
You can simply make the attack a rank 4 though.
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Characters The Crimson Devil | "Crimson Bomber" |
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| Str: 57|Spd: 40|Stm: 56| Acc: 70| Fortune: 79 | Hideo Katsua • Captain • Inventor • Crimson Angels • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 28- • Beli: 40,500,000 • Agrababa(2.5) |
The Hound of Blue Depths | "Predator of the Deep" |
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 | Str: 94|Spd: 70|Stm: 91| Acc: 80| Fortune: 73 | Amezoku Seikan • Lieutenant Commander • Fishman Karate Master • Currently Unnamed Division • Commendations: 21 • SD Earned: 342 • Beli: 97,700,000• Location: Little Garden [Grand Line] |
The White Shadow | "The Huntress" |
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| Str: 105|Spd: 105|Stm: 75| Acc: 83| Fortune: 64 | Raine G. Argose • Assassin/Huntress • Assassin/Martial Artist • The Jacks of All Trades • Threat: 204.5 • SD Earned: 382 • Beli: 152,800,000::beli:: • L: Flint Island[Grand Line] |
The Punk in Red | "Knight of Heart" |
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| Str: 45|Spd: 65|Stm: 33| Acc: 47| Fortune: 60 | Drake Ashford • Red • Botanist/Weapon Specialist • N/A • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 222 • Beli: 1,600,000 • Boin Archepelago |
The Green Grappler | "Freya: Fighter of Slamazon" |
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| Str: 43| Spd: 15| Stm: 24| Acc: 15| Fortune: 12 | Gabrielle Cruz • Gourmet Wrestler • Gourmet Physician/Martial Artist • N/A • Threat: 7.1 • SD Earned: 62 • Beli: 16,000,000 • Morioh Island |
The Blackest Night | "Blade Mistress" |
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| Str: 6| Spd: 18| Stm: 6| Acc: 12| Fortune: 9 | Nyx Avalos • Blade Dancer • Swordsman/Bladesmith/Inventor/Assassin • N/A • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 7 • Beli: 6,780,000 • Blues Scrub |
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Jun 30 2015, 10:26 AM
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Seth | Ten K | | Real Name: Seth Dryden | | Affiliation: Marine | | SD Earned: 135 | | Beli: 55,500,000 | | Commendations: 25 | | Ship: -- | | Traits: Haki, Rokushiki | |
| Rank: | Lieutenant Commander | | Crew/Group: | Division K-7 | | Professions: | MA/WS | | Location: | Cactus Island, Grand Line, Route 3 |
| Strength: 55 | Speed: 40 | | Stamina: 51 | Accuracy: 38 | | Fortune: 35 | Focus: 4 |
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Jul 2 2015, 08:34 PM
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Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson | "The Celestial King" | Wanted Dead or Alive!! 310,000,000
RAIN - 雨 Artwork by ShadowBlade |
Rain SK. D. Waters JaggerJohnson • Super-Rookie • Weapon Specialist / Surgeon • ✯ Golden Star Family ✯ • Bounty: 310,000,000 • SD Earned: 711 • Beli: 34,000,000 • Location: Birka • Text Color: Deepskyblue| Strength: | Speed: | Stamina: | Accuracy: | | 140 | 130 | 130 | 120 | Styled and created by INsane |
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IZUMI - 泉 Izumi JaggerJohnson • Son of Rain • Chore Boy • Smith / Carpenter / Inventor / Thief • Freelance Marine (Aka a disaster) • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 51 • Beli: 8,500,000 • Location: North Blue
VAIN 脈 Vain D. Schnieder JaggerJohnson • Clone of Rain • Bounty Hunter • Inventor / Marksmen • Freelance Bounty Hunter • Threat: 0 • SD Earned:85 • Beli: 30,060,000 • Location: Cactus Island
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Jul 3 2015, 01:23 AM
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Characters The Crimson Devil | "Crimson Bomber" |
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| Str: 57|Spd: 40|Stm: 56| Acc: 70| Fortune: 79 | Hideo Katsua • Captain • Inventor • Crimson Angels • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 28- • Beli: 40,500,000 • Agrababa(2.5) |
The Hound of Blue Depths | "Predator of the Deep" |
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 | Str: 94|Spd: 70|Stm: 91| Acc: 80| Fortune: 73 | Amezoku Seikan • Lieutenant Commander • Fishman Karate Master • Currently Unnamed Division • Commendations: 21 • SD Earned: 342 • Beli: 97,700,000• Location: Little Garden [Grand Line] |
The White Shadow | "The Huntress" |
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| Str: 105|Spd: 105|Stm: 75| Acc: 83| Fortune: 64 | Raine G. Argose • Assassin/Huntress • Assassin/Martial Artist • The Jacks of All Trades • Threat: 204.5 • SD Earned: 382 • Beli: 152,800,000::beli:: • L: Flint Island[Grand Line] |
The Punk in Red | "Knight of Heart" |
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| Str: 45|Spd: 65|Stm: 33| Acc: 47| Fortune: 60 | Drake Ashford • Red • Botanist/Weapon Specialist • N/A • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 222 • Beli: 1,600,000 • Boin Archepelago |
The Green Grappler | "Freya: Fighter of Slamazon" |
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| Str: 43| Spd: 15| Stm: 24| Acc: 15| Fortune: 12 | Gabrielle Cruz • Gourmet Wrestler • Gourmet Physician/Martial Artist • N/A • Threat: 7.1 • SD Earned: 62 • Beli: 16,000,000 • Morioh Island |
The Blackest Night | "Blade Mistress" |
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| Str: 6| Spd: 18| Stm: 6| Acc: 12| Fortune: 9 | Nyx Avalos • Blade Dancer • Swordsman/Bladesmith/Inventor/Assassin • N/A • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 7 • Beli: 6,780,000 • Blues Scrub |
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