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William C. Ratchet [Pirate]; Protege Inventor [Flagged]
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Topic Started: Jun 25 2015, 09:54 AM (944 Views)
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Jun 25 2015, 09:54 AM
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Account Name: Fugitivebush
Basic Character Information
| William C. Ratchet |
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| Nickname: Metal Arms | Race: Human [Cyborg] | | Age: 21 | Affiliation: Pirates | | Gender: Male | Bounty: 7,500,000 |
Position: Captain of the Rising Sun Pirates Achievements:
- Beat the Don of the Cocoyashi Mafia, Donny Caltrone
- Gained a
2 Million Bounty
- Beat the shit out of Arthur of Velvet Industries
- Defended Self and Crew Against Bounty Hunter Invasion
- Bounty Upgraded to 7.5 Million
- Defeated a Marine Lieutenant, Patricia Hammon
Goals:
- Become King of the Seven Seas
- Destroy the World Government
- Have a Full Seven Man Crew
- Be the Best Fist Fighter in the World
- Make Arnold proud!
Professions:
- Martial Artist (Primary)
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A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.
- Inventor (Secondary)
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An Inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build gadgets and battle engines if they have enough materials.
Physical Appearance General Appearance Height: 6' 2" Weight: 195 lbs Hair: Blonde Eyes: Gold Irises, Black Sclera William is a Caucasian boy at the age of twenty one. He is six foot two inches and weighs in at around 195 lbs. He is rather muscular in his abdomen and legs. He just has a good physique, working out and keeping himself fit. His upper torso is probably the most built due to having to lift the metal in his arms every day. He is a natural blonde which shines with an intense gold flare to it. His eyes are rather special where the whites of his eyes are black. He had developed an odd mutation as a kid, changing the whites of his eyes. The irises are the same color as they were when he was born, a yellow gold color. He has scars on his shoulders where the skin and metal meet from the amputation process and when the pirate stabbed him multiple times.
Will usually has a straight face expression in his casual state. He often always stands with a straight back, even leaned a bit back when he puts his hands in his pockets as if he is relaxing. His posture seems rather upbringing, optimistic, and confident.
Clothing and Accessories East Blue Outfit For clothing in the East Blue, William wears a sleeveless black shirt underneath a white sleeveless pullover hoodie. He wears regular black jeans and red flat bottom shoes. He also wears a brown tool belt around his waist where he keeps all of his tools handy for use at any time. Attached to his shoulders, he has gold painted cybernetic arms due to an incident from his childhood. The arms are rather clean and shiny as he always polishes them. There might be a couple dents and scratches that he has been unable to buff out. His clothing isn't too tattered or torn from overuse. They look rather clean and kept. The arm holes of his shirt and hoodie aren't torn either as if he bought it sleeveless; they are all hemmed up.
South Blue Outfit In the South Blue, due to the warmer temperatures, William wears a light Hawaiian red floral button down shirt. It is unbuttoned and wide open. He doesn't wear any form of t-shirt underneath, showing off his abs and torso. A large scar is shown across his chest from upper left to bottom right. He wears a large straw hat on his head. For bottoms, he wears tan cargo shorts with flip flops as his shoe wear. His arms are yet again exposed and painted gold as per usual. His clothes aren't too tattered again as well, looking very fashionable and at the height of tropical fashion. However, this time, his Hawaiian shirt has short sleeves that only cover the beginning portion of his shoulders. Nothing is sleeveless. He also continues to wear a brown tool belt except this one is a little smaller to not look too bulky around his waist with his shorts and tropical attire.
Grand Line Outfit --
Pictures
Personal Information Personality William is a friendly person who enjoys being around people. He is a rather optimistic person, but also will focus on the reality of a situation. He is pretty serious when in battle, always thinking of the fight. He isn’t one to not think before doing something; he is only like that in battle. He has a good sense of humor and is fairly charismatic in the way he talks. He can sometimes be a little OCD and a clean freak, which often shows a small hidden crazy side of his. He thinks the world is full of bad people. People who want to rule over others in a corrupt sort of way. People who want to murder others. He wants to relinquish that hatred upon the world and began to create a better society. A society that supports freedom and not killing people for their gold or for the fun of it. His goal is to be the pirate that Arnold was and spread that ideology to everyone. He also has a tasteful dislike for Marines since they allowed bad pirates to kill his family. Hell, they even joined in on it.
Will doesn’t really have any trust issues. He just gets to know people like he would any other stranger as long as they don’t seem suspicious around him. His only real weakness is that he is still learning to function normally in a social setting with his cybernetic arms. He knows how to use them as they are connected to his nerves and are infused with his body. However, he still has trouble using the digits in his hand and gripping things fully. He also struggles emotionally with not being able to truly feel something with his hands. It is slowly growing to an afterthought as he learns to get over it. His biggest strength is just being able to deal with something horrifying or tough. Due to the event with his family and the strict relationship he had with Arnold, it was instilled into Will the need to be strong, so he can move on and live his life like his parents would have liked.
History Hometown:
- Cocoyashi Village, Conomi Islands, EB (Former)
- Port Nadal, Swift Breeze, SB
Born a healthy young boy to the parents of William C. Ratchet Sr. and Rachel Blanchette, his family is from the island in the East Blue, Conomi Islands. They specifically live in the village of Cocoyashi. His mother and father were simple folk who ran a bakery together. Everybody in the town knew each other; they knew the Ratchets very well. He was named after his father, William C. Ratchet Jr; of course, the middle name was a different c-lettered word. Will Jr. grew up a regular young boy running around the town and playing with the other kids. He loved his parents very much and wanted to even grow up to be like his Dad, a baker. However, everything was too happy for too long. In recent years, Conomi Island had succumbed to the same disease that plagued the villages on the island during Luffy’s era. Domineering pirates looked to control the villages, stay here for free as hideaways from the marines, and steal the townspeople’s money as taxes. It was a repeat of the past as the marine units in charge of looking after the Conomi Islands were once again bribed by the stowaway pirates to share in these taxations. Because of this corrupt coalition between pirates and marines, the marines made up a plan to invade Cocoyashi Village as an attempt to look like they are clearing out the pirates, but to join in with them in a mass raiding party of the villagers. At this time, Will Jr was at around five years old. It was in the middle of the night and he was inside the house with his mother. The villagers were told that marines were coming to liberate the pirates hiding in the village. They were all warned to stay inside. William Sr. was posted at the door with a gun, ready to protect his wife and son if the need arose. And so it did. The Marines landed on the beaches of Cocoyashi Village as they started to scatter into the village. They entered the main plaza of the village. They were ordered up into regiments as the commanding officer stepped forward. They waited outside for what seemed like hours, but only 15 minutes passed when pirates came walking out of the shadows with evil grins on. They approached the marine units as they themselves grew evil grins. Within a few minutes, everyone broke out into a mad frenzy running to shops and homes, busting in to raid the villagers. They were taken by surprise of said betrayal as many villagers were beat up and stolen from. Some of the villagers took up arms like William Sr. to defend their families. Many of the pirates decided to also kill the villagers for the fun of it. None of the marines did so though. William Sr. kept pirates and marines alike from entering into their house as the front door buckled with copious amounts of strikes and shots. Windows were broken as pirates attempted to come in that way. William Sr. told for Rachel and Will to leave for a safer area as Rachel said her goodbyes to William Sr. and took off with Will. Will’s father held back as hard as he could, but to no avail, the pirates and like busted through. He fought them for what felt like hours, but in the end, he was stabbed in the back by a pirate. He was left to die on his living room floor as the pirates searched his home for their treasures and the rest of his family. Rachel had taken Will down into their basement, locking the door behind them. She stood there, holding Will’s hand as he started to tear up from all the confusion and ruckus. The basement door began to buckle as pirates aimed to try to get into the basement. She began to panic in finding a way out. The only option was a small window big enough for both of them to crawl through. She ran to the window, using all of her upper arm strength to push it open. It was tight and took a minute or two that they didn’t have. It finally opened as she picked up Will, pushing him through the window. He crawled out of the basement window, turning around and gesturing his hand to his mother. The basement door busted open as pirates began to pile through. As the pirates flooded into the basement, Rachel was halfway through the window as she looked back to find a horde of crazed men coming towards her. She hurried to get herself through as Will tried to pull her through. However, she found herself stuck in the window because her hips were too wide to fit through. Pirates grabbed at her legs and dress as they attempted to pull her back through. Will held onto his mother’s hand, playing tug of war with her body. She attempted to use her free hand to grip the grass or whatever she could to make it out. It was no use, though. For seeing her own demise, she yelled at Will to let go of Mommy and run into the woods. “Run Will! Mommy will meet you in the forest! Let go of Mommy!” She said. Will began to cry as he continued to hold onto her. However, she managed to mangle her hand away from his hand, forcing him to slip back and onto his butt. He watched as his mother was dragged back in. He wiped away the tears before listening to her and running into the forest. Unfortunately for Will, a lone pirate snuck out from the window in the basement to chase after him. As Will traveled through the forest, he didn’t look back. He wasn’t ready to look back. His mother told him to continue running. She wanted him to run as far away as he could from the village. What he didn’t know was a faster pirate was following him and soon enough, he caught up to poor Will. He tackled the small child as he sat on top of him, smiling with crazed eyes. He greeted the child in a crazed notion, speaking to him about what he was going to do to Will. Will squirmed and screamed underneath the pirate before suddenly getting stabbed in the right shoulder. It shut him up for about 1 minute before he yelled in pain. The pirate was going to slowly murder the kid. He was going to torture him, paralysis him, then kill him. He stabbed another knife into his left shoulder, letting out another set of screams. He continued to stab his shoulders to torture Will on where he might decide to stab next. It went on until Will lost all feeling in his arms and just when the pirate was ready to move on, his head was blown off by someone behind Will. However, Will was already beyond passed out when this rugged middle aged man had come. He moved the pirate’s body off of Will as he checked Will’s vitals. He was barely alive due to blood loss. He took out the knives in his shoulder as he lifted Will carefully off the ground. He took him somewhere as they left the village. Next thing Will knew was that he was on a boat in the middle of the day. He got a full picture of the old man as he stared up at him. He was a grizzly old man with a long white beard and a bandana over his head. Will, shocked at this new development, woke up alarmed before being calmed down by the old man. He introduced himself as Arnold Bunty. He was an old pirate from a different era. He was there last night hiding out from the marines just like the other pirates, but he didn’t participate in the chaos. He was just there to try to live out his life in peace. He tells Will that he witnessed what happened to the boy and told him about what happened to both of his parents. Will was distraught as he started to cry. The old man got strict with him as he said that he wasn’t going to take in a weakling. They spent the rest of the journey somewhere separated. After a long month of travel and several attempts at escape by Will, they made it to their destination. Arnold’s hometown, Swift Breeze in the South Blue. When they got to the city, Port Nadal, Will was immediately moved to the hospital. Even after Arnold’s treatment, he still couldn’t feel the feeling in his arms. They had to amputate his arms. He was given cybernetic arms which were made by Arnold himself. Over the years, Will warmed up to Arnold as he eventually adopted Will. He taught Will everything he knew about cybernetics and mechanics. Will learned from him super quickly and was looked at as a protégé. He grew to think of Arnold as a father figure. It was hard to replace the love he had for his real Dad and he never really lost that love. However, Arnold made his life after that event so much easier. He found a sense of forgiveness to pirates and learned that there were different kinds of pirates. He learned that everyone had a different meaning of piracy. He wanted to be what Arnold was. The kind of pirate he was. He wanted to rid the world of the evil pirates and the corrupt marine core that killed his family. The time finally came when he turned 21 and finally decided to leave Swift Breeze to set off on his journey. He tried to learn everything he could at Swift Breeze from the citizens and Arnold. It was time for him to move on and grow on his own. To chase after his goal.
Abilities and Possessions Combat Will mostly fights with his hands and feet as he was never taught to wield any sort of weapon. He mimicked what he saw in the bars with his adoptive father. He became a self-taught MMA fighter, developing more as a street fighter. Because of this, his fighting skills are unpredictable and often uncontrollable. His punches often vary in strength due to his lack of proper technique. However, it suits his heated physical power when pushed into a fight.
Will doesn’t think clearly when he fights. He is brash. He often flies into the fight, fists flying one after the next. He is quick on his fist moving around his opponent, ready to squeeze another punch in. He gets very heated in his fights; he gets into the moment. When he is in the moment, his punches mean that much more and fly at his opponent with a lot more power. He isn’t a strategist; He’s a fighter. Or maybe just a monster.
When he gets tired, his golden hair dulls to a grey-ish yellow and sort of flattens down. This is when he has to drink some of his ginger ale fuel to re-energize to be back to peak physical condition.
Weaponry: - Cybernetic Arms
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They are two iron quality cybernetic arms that are painted gold. They are fueled by the intake of Ginger Ale Soda. No weapons were built into the cybernetic arms; however, each arm has the ability to spin incredibly fast like a drill at the forearm only. Right Arm (1.5m beli)
- Spinning Drill Mechanism Installed
Left Arm (1.5m beli)
- Spinning Drill Mechanism Installed
Fuel Source: Ginger Ale
Beli: 21,500,000 Items:
- Two Iron Cybernetic Arms
- Tool Belt w/ tools
- 48 Pack of Ginger Ale
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| Strength | Speed | Stamina | Accuracy | Fortune | Focus |
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| 39 (28+11) | 26 | 30 (27+3) | 20 | 31 (25+6) | 2 |
| Used for Stats | Used for Fortune | | 101 | 10 |
| SD Earned | Stat Points | Advancement Points | SD Remaining | | 79 | 111 | 0 | 0 |
General Traits
- Basic Cyborg (1 Trait)
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This is the most basic level of cyborg, and the most commonly encountered type in the blues. A Basic Cyborg begins with up to 3M Beli worth of modifications. Their bodies are made out of Iron and do not vary from their original size. They may have one concealed weapon per arm or leg, and one basic system per other appendage. Note that these weapons or systems are very basic.
- Super Strength (2 Traits)
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This character's strength is boosted by 40%. (+11 Stat Points to STR)
- Fate of the Mighty (1 Trait)
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By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your stamina stat.
Profession Traits
- Cybertronic Genius (1 Trait)
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These inventors have studied their cybernetics especially well, and pay 20% less to upgrade their own Cyborg parts. Material Used: Iron Cybernetic Arms
- Boxing Mastery (1 Trait)
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The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 62 Leftover Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 46 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Normal Technique Rank: 15 Boxing Mastery Technique Rank: 19
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Gorilla Gong! (4*) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 4
| Description: Will extends his both of his arms backwards as far as they can go, forcing his chest to protrude outwards. When ready, he swings both of his fists forward, coming around and striking his opponent on the exact opposite side of each other. It'd look as if he had to large hand cymbals in each hand and clashed them together like he was in a marching band. The sudden slam to the opponent's temples would disorient them. (+4 Disorient)
| Gatling Gong! (12*) (4+8) (Branches from Gorilla Gong!) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 8
| Description: Will extends both of his arms backwards as far as they can go, forcing his chest to protrude outwards. When ready, he swings both of his fists forward, coming around and striking his opponent on the exact opposite side of each other. After striking him once, Will rolls into throwing several short punches as he rapidly punches his opponent on the exact opposite side of the former punch like two cymbals clashing a punching bag. After receiving several punches to their temples, the opponent should be very disoriented. (+4 Disorient, +4 Gatling)
| Kei Dageki (4*) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 8
| Description: Will extends any of his arms fairly far backwards in preparation for a strong punch. From as far back as he can go, he throws his fist forward, aimed at his opponent.
| Kibin Kei Dageki (8*) (4+4) (Branches from Kei Dageki) Type: Offensive Range: Close Combat Power: 8
| Description: Will extends any of his arms fairly far backwards in preparation for a strong punch. From as far back as he can go, he throws his fist forward to hit his opponent. However, from the distance he brings it back, he is able to swing it forward faster than usual; the speed also giving it more power as it impacts the target harder. The harder impact also knocks back the target a bit. (+4 Displacement)
| Boushi Kei Dageki (12*) (8+4) (Branches from Kibin Kei Dageki) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 12
| Description: Will extends any of his arms fairly far backwards in preparation for a strong punch. He then flicks his middle finger inwards to trigger his forearm to spin rapidly like a drill as he continues to bring his fist back. From as far back as he can go, he throw his spinning fist forward to hit his opponent. The spinning helps propel his fist forward faster than before as the speed gives the impact more power. The harder spinning impact causes the opponent to fly backwards a few feet in a spinning motion. (+4 Displacement)
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Sakadachi Kikku (4) Type: Offensive Range: Close Combat Power: 4
| Description: Will rolls onto his hands as he stands up feet first in the air. He then proceeds to throw a kick with any of his legs as he slams the heel of his foot into the back of his opponent's neck, using his hands to rotate and move his body throughout the form of the kick.
| Boushi Kikku (8) (4+4) (Branches from Sakadachi Kikku) Type: Offensive Range: Close Combat Power: 4
| Description: Will rolls onto his hands as he stands up feet first in the air. He then proceeds to kick his legs out around himself as he spins his body with his arms. His flailing feet become an AoE type attack for any nearby opponent(s), knocking them back from his area of effect. (+4 Displacement)
| Heddorokku Gachan (8) (4+4) (Branches from Sakadachi Kikku) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Power: 4
| Description: Will rolls onto his hands as he stands up feet first in the air. He then proceeds to throw both of his legs towards his target as if he was about to kick them. However before making contact with the target, he wraps his feet around their head before gripping them tight into a headlock and vaulting them over his body, slamming their head into the ground in front of him. After getting their head smashed into the ground, the opponent is rather disorientated. (+4 Disorient)
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Recharge! (8) Type: Personal Buff Range: Self Stats: +2 Stamina
| Description: When in times of trouble and in need of some extra juice, Will opens up his right shoulder as he throws in a can of ginger ale, giving him a quick boost of energy and power to continue fighting. He gets a +2 bonus to Stamina for as long as he has it on.
| Double Tap (1) Type: Offensive Range: Melee Stats: N/A
| Description: Will attempts to headbutt his opponent.
| Rabbit's Retreat (1) Type: Defensive Range: Melee Stats: N/A
| Description: Will jumps back from his opponent in an attempt to distance himself from them.
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Development History
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| I. Away for 16 Years | +26 | +6,500,000 +2,000,000 Beli Bounty | 8/3/2015 | | II. The Mother Lioness | 0 | -3,500,000 | 8/5/2015 | | III. New Techniques/Character Changes | 0 | +3 new techniques (-12 TP) | 8/6/2015 | | IV. Rise of a Lost Burden | +21 | +5,250,000 | 8/24/2015 | | V. New Techniques | 0 | +2 new techniques (-12 TP) | 9/2/2015 | | VI. A Scarlet Dame to Kill For | +25 | +5,750,000 +5,500,000 Beli Bounty | 9/23/2015 | | VII. New Techniques | 0 | +2 new techniques (-12 TP) | 9/27/2015 | | VIII. Anniversary Rewards | +7 SD | +7,000,000 | 9/29/2015 | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | |
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| 8/3/2015 | Added rewards from Away for 16 Years SL | | 8/5/2015 | Added loss from the Mother Lioness Tuna Class Ship Purchase | | 8/6/2015 | Added new techniques/character changes | | 8/24/2015 | Added rewards from Rise of a Lost Burden | | 9/2/2015 | Added new techniques | | 9/23/2015 | Added rewards from A Scarlet Dame to Kill For | | 9/27/2015 | Added new techniques | | 9/29/2015 | Added Anniversary Rewards | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | |
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Characters Tru Dat 1.0 • Captain • Thief/Weapon Specialist • Tru and his Wingmen • Bounty:  20,000,000 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli:  -- • Location: TBD Str 84 (60+24) • Spe 61 • Sta 60 • Acc 60 • Fortune 66 (60+6) • Focus 4 Vanis V. Veridium 2.0 • Doctor • Doctor/Chef • n/a • Bounty:  5,500,000 • SD Earned: 64 • Beli:  16,070,000 • Location: -- Str 22 • Spe 33 • Sta 26 • Acc 15 • Fortune 24 • Focus 3
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Jun 27 2015, 10:35 AM
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Put all the categories in the order they go. Divide appearance into Clothing/Accessories and General Appearance. You can make it fancy, but don't change the order of the categories.
Take the last sentence of your secondary profession.
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Jun 27 2015, 11:20 AM
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Fixed.
Fixed again.
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Characters Tru Dat 1.0 • Captain • Thief/Weapon Specialist • Tru and his Wingmen • Bounty:  20,000,000 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli:  -- • Location: TBD Str 84 (60+24) • Spe 61 • Sta 60 • Acc 60 • Fortune 66 (60+6) • Focus 4 Vanis V. Veridium 2.0 • Doctor • Doctor/Chef • n/a • Bounty:  5,500,000 • SD Earned: 64 • Beli:  16,070,000 • Location: -- Str 22 • Spe 33 • Sta 26 • Acc 15 • Fortune 24 • Focus 3
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Jul 8 2015, 03:30 PM
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Alright, I HATE to do this since everything else is pretty nice. Name your Combat Paragraph as such, say your limbs are made out of iron. State it just below your cyborg trait too.
For Strength, do 15(11+4).
I believe this is it. Do this and I'll flag you, even out of order since everything else is clam.
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Demolition King is Back Baby Jolon Ryker • Bomb Expert/Asshole • • • Bounty: 120,000,000 • SD Earned: 559 • Beli: 61.9M • L: Raijin Island, New World Strength: 105 Speed: 50 Stamina: 75 Accuracy: 72 Fortune: 114
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Jul 8 2015, 04:11 PM
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Done and Done. Thanks broseph. Altho, wouldn't the name on the spoiler work for the title for the combat paragraph? Also what more is out of order? Cause I know that everything is in the right region according to the template. It is just put into spoilers. Its like some really minor positioning stuff. I don't think people will get lost when trying to read through my character.
But yeah, fixed everything. :)
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Characters Tru Dat 1.0 • Captain • Thief/Weapon Specialist • Tru and his Wingmen • Bounty:  20,000,000 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli:  -- • Location: TBD Str 84 (60+24) • Spe 61 • Sta 60 • Acc 60 • Fortune 66 (60+6) • Focus 4 Vanis V. Veridium 2.0 • Doctor • Doctor/Chef • n/a • Bounty:  5,500,000 • SD Earned: 64 • Beli:  16,070,000 • Location: -- Str 22 • Spe 33 • Sta 26 • Acc 15 • Fortune 24 • Focus 3
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Jul 8 2015, 04:18 PM
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Demolition King is Back Baby Jolon Ryker • Bomb Expert/Asshole • • • Bounty: 120,000,000 • SD Earned: 559 • Beli: 61.9M • L: Raijin Island, New World Strength: 105 Speed: 50 Stamina: 75 Accuracy: 72 Fortune: 114
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Jul 10 2015, 10:00 PM
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Characters Grit T. Write • Unlicensed Lawyer • Martial Artist • The Gang• Official Bounty: 110,000,000 • Private Bounty: 49,500,000 • SD Earned: 561 • Beli: 90,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island • #551A8B #8B2500 Ebby • Officer Chore Girl • Doctor • With a Horse • Commendations: 5 • SD Earned: 134 • Beli: 21,000,000 • Location: Loguetown #CC00CCHomerun Nikki • Baseball Superstar • Slugger • TBD • Threat: 21 • SD Earned: 131 • Beli: 8,650,000 • Location: Gilligan's Island #8B4500Ace McGunthrob Magnum • Cop • Detective • TBD • Commendations: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location: TBH #33F8FFYounger • Glass Cannon • Berserker • The Plucky Squabs • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 118 • Beli: 17,500,000 • Location:??? #A52A2APavlo R. Ing • Beggar • Thief • TBD • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,000 • Location:???
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