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Topic Started: Jun 11 2015, 10:37 AM (233 Views)
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Character: Jean Carolina Scoville
Request: Tech upgrade
Changes:

139 / 137

Techniques
Crazy Diamond!! (28) Branched from Crazy Diamond!, +14
Type: Support
Range: self
Stats: -
Description: Jean uses the power of her stand Crazy Diamond to coat ay two limbs, her torso, her head + neck, or an object she is holding is a coat of armaments hardening Haki. The parts coated become shiny black in appearance and as hard as steel, or if they are harder than that function like they were coated in an additional layer of steel. By spreading the armaments power evenly throughout her body she can coat her entire body in a layer of armaments haki as hard as iron. Attacks made with coated parts/weapons also deal more damage than normal.

Habanero Poppers!!! (41) Branched from Habanero Poppers!! +11
Type: Support
Range: self
Stats: +27 Stamina
Description: A culinary masterpiece in which Jean lovingly crafts Habanero Popper's which are so spicy it livens up every cell in a person’s body increasing their vitality!

Stairway to Heaven: Requiem! (28) Branched from Stairway to heaven! + 8
Type: support
Range: self
Stats: +14 Speed
+14 Accuracy
Description: Utilizing The Power of Her Stand Stairway to Heaven Jean uses an observation haki sparkly eyes technique to grasp a single targets intentions allowing her a brief look at the surface thoughts of her target

Star Platinum!! (28) Branched from Star Platinum!!, +8
Type: Support
Range: self
Stats: -
Description: Jean summons the power of her Stand Star Platinum to protect her from harm. Jean creates a haki barrier that will negate any attack up to double the techniques rank. It wraps around her protecting her whole body.

Auto Parry: Lass Scamper (28)
Type: Support
Range: self
Stats: -
Description: Once a post, an individual can use this technique to put on momentary bursts of speed that make them invisible to the untrained naked eye. The user may move to any location they could normally reach within a number of meters equal to the rank of this ability near-instantaneously. During this movement, they cannot be seen by anybody who's accuracy is less than double this technique's rank, appearing as a blurred streak to anybody who's accuracy is above that point. Additionally, the user cannot be hit by a targeted attack by anybody who's speed is lower than the user while the technique is active.
Lass Scamper


Auto Parry: Acrobatic Fucking Pirouette (32)
Type: Defensive
Range: self
Stats: -
Description: Using instinct-driven, reflexive movements and loosening up all of their muscles, the user dodges an attack by flailing around uncontrollably in a very silly manner. While in use, this technique allows the user to automatically dodge attacks made by an individual with accuracy lower than it's current rank and reduces the effective accuracy of any attack made against the user by a value equal to this technique's rank. Attacks can not be made while using Acrobatic Fucking Pirouette.
Acrobatic Fucking Pirouette


Do The Windy Thing (36)
Type: support
Range: Self
Stats: -
Description: By kicking off of the air itself, the user of this technique can seemingly fly or "Air Walk." The user of this technique may remain airborn for a number of posts equal to ((Rank-30)/2) posts before needing land. The number of posts they can remain in the air at a single time is halved again if they cannot use one of their legs or if they are carrying a passenger/passengers who's total weight exceeds their own.
So Majestic

Edited by geomease, Jun 18 2015, 07:58 PM.
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Purple hermit - obs doesn't give an outright radar, just lets her gauge the position of people within the vicinity.

Star platnum - dome is excessive, you can either have a flat wall that protects you and another person perhaps two at a squeeze from one face or you can have it clad over your body.

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Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Habanero poppers would be +27

assuming that's done

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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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42 / 3 = 14
14 * 2 = 28
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Crazy Diamond needs N/A in stats.

Habanero Poppers needs to be changed to +27, regardless of whether you get 28 or 10,000 when doing the math. Put the crowd tier for it's range.

Change brief premonition in Stairway to Heaven: Requiem to brief look at the surface thoughts.

Star Platinum needs N/A in stats.

N/A in the rest respective stats sections.
Edited by Spunky Misunderstood Genius, Jun 16 2015, 06:25 AM.

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this is completely stupid and a waste of time but if it'll keep your OCD in check fine. However I'm going to be denoting it with a ' - ' instead of N/A. Since your techs do that there shouldn't be a problem right?

you guys actually use decimals in place of fractions now. That is just disappointing. Whatever if your going to minmax then so am I. Rank changed to 41 because 41*.66 = 27.06 rounded down to 27. I hope your happy

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