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Abigail Williams; Marine [Approved]
Topic Started: Jun 9 2015, 03:22 AM (474 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Abigail Williams
Nickname: ???
Age: Twenty-Two
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Affiliation: Marine - Ginjo Xoi
Rank/Commendations: Lieutenant/15
Position: Student/Right Hand
Profession:
  • Martial Artist (Primary) - A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and may create "Stance" techniques.

  • Smith (Secondary) - A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy which allows them to make custom materials or mix new ones together.

Achievements:
  • N/A

Physical Appearance
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 156 lb's
Hair: Pitch Black
Eyes: Brown
Clothing/Accessories: A fighter first and a rebel next, Abby is someone who doesn't hesitate to wear her distaste for order on her sleeve. Of course, this would raise any sensible brow who would be confused to see this young woman siding with the World Government. They wouldn't however be surprised to see her refuse their uniform, something that had she joined any other unit, no doubt would have earned her far more trouble than she found under her commanders lead, assuming she would have joined them at all.

Most commonly, always dressed to fight, Abby opts for black tactical clothing, A Black padded vest, lightly armored with a symbol etched onto it. Something that is meaningless to most, but all too familiar to her from her days in "the Cage" as she refers to it. Her Lower body is much of the same, Black Cargo pants, knee pads also lightly armored, into a pair of black combat boots. Combat gloves round out her attire, a fairly simple look, and it reflects her incredibly simple and straight forward approach.

General Appearance: Considering her background, and the time she's spent within her unit. Abby has made one recovery for the records. Someone who when found was incredibly malnourished, beaten and bruised. Although after some time with regulars meals, she is looking much better, if still showing some hint of her former self. Starting off, we look to her head, full of Raven Black hair, kept long, straight in nature with the tips in certain areas reaching down to her belly button. Parted on the left side of her head with her bangs swept to the right. Looking a little further down, one is able to look into her eyes, a striking feature even considering the common shade of color. She possessing a pair of beautiful brown eyes which can be found staring back at you with hidden malice.

Taking in the grander view, and the one thing she has not been able to shake would be the paleness of her skin. Given that within the time she's been freed, minus the occasional scar, her skin has become near flawless, it still lacks the color of someone who has seen alot of sun light. This to be of no surprise from someone who spent most of their life fighting underground. Next up would be some of her feminine features, which she is certainly not without, showing curves as some would say "in the right areas".

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The Character
Personality: Straight forward, Quiet and with A Warriors Heart. Abigail isn't one whom is very loud when it comes to her capability, unlike alot of fighters whom will puff their chest and roar. This could stem from a level of confidence that she has, considering the fact that she lasted way longer than the typical slaves life expectancy. Although, just because she is quiet doesn't mean she's not ready to fight over nothing, all it means is, that you won't be getting a warning before she knocks your teeth out. Quite to the contrary, Abby is actually very short tempered, it just is wisely hidden behind a face which is hard to read. Her anger, shifting her into a more defiant person, rebelling against power.

She isn't without some tools to get by, though her motives or agenda don't align with her duty as a Marine. Abby isn't impatient, or dumb, more than willing to bide her time and make uses of what she has. So was the start of how she got her start after her freedom, although within this would also show the final aspect to what makes Abigail, well herself. Battle driven, there is no question about that. All of her problems have only ever been, and will only be settled by her fists. Considering her survival, and her will to survive to achieve her goal. If someone is able to earn her respect, and the only way in doing so is through a fight. She will hold that individual in high regard, even if her way of showing this is .. different.

Hometown: East Blue; Dawn Island - "The Cage"
History: This is the point in everyone's life, where there is mention to where they came from, and yet for someone like Abby, she doesn't have that luxury. Born into hell, and with no idea where she was, her home was quickly referred to as "The Cage". Her early years, all but a blur, and her first memories would be of her parents and many others being abused, and no matter how much she tried to run, there was always the cold steel of that cage stopping her escape. Some time later, years in fact for her parents to finally explain things.

Her family, these other people she had come to see and known around her, and of course, still a child, were all slaves to the World Government. Their village having been raided, and the people taken into custody, only to be brought to this location and locked away. To make matters worse, her Mother had been pregnant during this time, and this would ultimately mean that Abby was born into this life.

This all raised a question however, and this would be, Why? Why were her people "stolen" and for what purpose were they locked up. Any experienced set of eyes who could see them in that moment would know exactly why. The bruises, the maimed limbs. Abby would come to know some time later, when she "became of age" in her parents eyes. An excuse which would mask the truer intentions where it was coming closer for their daughter to participate as well.

Their purpose was to be brought out, not unlike Gladiators and to fight for the amusement of Nobles. Their lives degraded to cheap laughs and an excuse to throw beli around in some sort of half hearted bets. Though she was still too young to grasp this, as she grew older, it would become all too clear. Taught how to fight from her parents over the years, and forced to use such things to beat, and even in rare cases, kill the people she had come to know. People whom if their lives had been untouched, she would call neighbors...friends.

Many years of this, the experience would leave its toll on Abby. Making her quite jaded, giving her a stone faced expression when entering combat, making her hard to read unlike some of the newer individuals brought in to replace the stock which died. The fearful looks in their eyes only to meet the confident and icy glare of her own. This would continue well into her adulthood, she would watch alot of people fall off the map, people she came to love, as well as her own parents.

Testing her mental state, and making her question how much longer she had left in this life before she was killed off. Fortunately, as this story would end on a high note, a Particular Marine Unit would have something to say about all of that, and a new member to recruit. Although Abby's freedom would come with a silent promise to herself. To watch the Nobles burn for their sins, and working with the World Government, the ones responsible, would allow her to observe them from the inside.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Straight forward, simple, and effective. These are the three words which are used to describe anyone who has fought or seen her fight. Abigail isn't someone who tries to use any sort of flash, or taunt her opponent. All she ever concerns herself with is quite simple, stick to her opponent and beat the holy hell out of them. Her weapon of choice would be a background of Kickboxing, taught to her by her parents whilst in captivity. Her tools of survival, where here body becomes a weapon. Leaving her opponent to wonder just what is coming, a punch, kick, shoulder, elbow, anything which she could throw their way. She is quick, and deceptively strong, Abby is someone with alot of mix up potential.

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Items

Beli: 55,500,000/85,500,000
SD Earned: 189
Stat Points: 208 [32+150+(39/1.5)+(0/2)+(0/3)]
Advancement Points: N/A
SD Remaining: 0

Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 208
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 62 (52+10)
    • Speed: 52
    • Stamina: 62 (52+10)
    • Accuracy: 52
    • Fortune: 52

Traits: (6/11 General Traits, 3/6 Professional Traits)

  • Mighty Strength (1 General Trait) - This character's strength is boosted by 20%.
  • Bear Stamina (1 Profession Trait) - This character's stamina is boosted by 20%.

  • Fate of the Future (4 General Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you gain no bonus as then you have to explain why you suddenly lost those bonuses when you spend the saved traits otherwise.

  • Advanced Kickboxing Mastery (2 Professional Traits) - The character has attained supreme mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. Additionally, all techniques which gain this benefit have their focus cost reduced by half.

  • Adorably Brutal (1 General Trait) - Characters with this trait are gifted with the ability to command respect and admiration from others through a combination of cuteness or brutality. Sentient NPCs are easier to sway over to the side of those with this trait. They may gain information, calm down the angry, and sometimes even placate hostile adversaries. Additionally, those normally friendly to strangers find themselves easily enamoured with the character. The user also gains one NPC henchman, who behaves as a crew NPC and is controlled by the player of the main character. They are exceedingly loyal to their ‘master’.
NPC - Kat/Baby-Bird

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A

Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 104 (52x2)
Used Regular Technique Points: 49

Technique Legend
 
✚ - Advanced Mastery

Personal
Get Serious (17)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: +3 Strength, +2 Speed
Description: Abigail is able to push past her normal limits, focusing on her own physical abilities and breaking them to push herself to her limit. This grants her a boost to her speed and strength, and tends to make her pupils shrink and irises to narrow.

Offensive
Hook (1*) ✚
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Abigail releases a hard left or right hook with her fist, aimed to maximize the strength of her normal strength for slightly more force than usual.
Heavy Hook (4*) ✚ [Branched from "Hook"]
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Abigail releases a hard left or right hook with her fist, aimed to maximize the strength of her normal strength for slightly more force than usual. The strike now has much more force behind it, breaking through Non-Tier Substances with ease.
Iron Hook (10*) ✚ [Branched from "Heavy Hook"]
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Abigail releases a hard left or right hook with her fist, aimed to maximize the strength of her normal strength for slightly more force than usual. The strike now has much more force behind it, capable of punching through Tier I Materials.
Jab (1*) ✚
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Abigail releases a hard left or right jab with her fist, this strike sacrifices increased power to instead be quick and more accurate.
Blurred Jabs (4*) ✚ [Branched from "Jab"]
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Abigail releases a barrage of high-speed jabs, each is weaker than a normal strike from her but it allows her to fire a barrage of strikes at high-speed in a gattling esc maneuver to increase the likelihood of multiple hits.

Defensive
Guard (1*) ✚
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Raising her Leg or Arm in a cross-guard, Abigail focuses to absorb the impact of a strike with more ease at the cross-section of the limbs.
Heavy Guard (4*) ✚ [Branched from "Guard"]
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Raising her Leg or Arm in a cross-guard, Abigail focuses to absorb the impact of a strike with more ease at the cross-section of the limbs. She infuses now far more physical effort into it- allowing her to ignore normal (R8) knockbacks, and better resist stronger forces.
Footwork (1*) ✚
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Using a key principal of any boxer or kickboxer, Abigail is able to dodge out of range of an incoming strike with a standard sidestep or 'bounce'.
Fancy Footwork (4*) ✚ [Branched from "Footwork"]
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Using a key principal of any boxer or kickboxer, Abigail is able to dodge out of range of an incoming strike with a standard sidestep or 'bounce'. She has now increased it to allow her to knock herself in a desired direction with a kick to avoid an incoming attack with more ease.


Development History
Previous Gains/Losses
ThreadSDBeliOther
Starter Character+32 (SP)+500,000N/A
Character Scoop+104+39,000,000+Misc Items
Armor PriceN/A-420,000+Item: "Partial Leather Armor"
A Flirted Meeting+12+6,000,000N/A
Training & Learning+19+9,500,000N/A
Happy Number 7, OPRP!+7+7,000,000N/A
The Second Life of AbbyN/A-29,580,000N/A
Know Your Place+27+13,500,000N/A
Rest & Relaxation+20+10,000,000N/A
Edit Log
Edited by Shimura, Dec 1 2015, 06:59 PM.
Posted Image Name: Ishida Rin
SD Earned: 260
Beli: 8,000,000
Bounty: 50,000,000
Position: Best in the World
Crew: None
Professions: Assassin/Weapon Specialist/Martial Artist/Smith
Location: GL; Drum Island

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Name: N/A
SD Earned: 0
Beli: N/A
Rank: N/A
Position: N/A
Crew: TBA
Professions: N/A
Location: N/A

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Welcome Back~ May need an Island for your Birthplace. But that isnt worth holding you back from a Flag. Just put one of the blues islands- maybe the one Luffy and them grew up on since it had non-celestial dragon nobles.

Leather Armor that covers half-arms, hands, feet, half-legs, and chest is 420,000 Beli. Just add the loss to your gains/losses with a link to this post and update your Beli with the new total. :)

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Edited by HeartOfLight, Aug 19 2015, 11:37 AM.
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Hey just a few more things on jabs

In order for blurred jabs to be a legitimate branch, it needs to incorporate everything being done in the technique being branched from. Its missing the stun part at the moment. Should still be covered by current rank cost, though the stun would be considered a weak disable at this tier.

Same goes for Aimed -> Focused on branching legitimacy.

Armour Bypassing is typically around the R28 mark so the two jab branches I think are trying to avoid being full blown bypass would be higher ranks than they are now. Talking R18 and up.
Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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I based the Bypassing techniques off the same techniques that have been approved:Here. 'Geshoku Tsukuyomi', 'Geshoku Tsukuyomi "Whisper"', and 'Geshoku Tsukuyomi "Unbound"'.

Removed the 'Stun' bit as that was meant to purely be just a cosmetic filler-text. I don't want that as an actual effect for the technique
Posted Image Name: Ishida Rin
SD Earned: 260
Beli: 8,000,000
Bounty: 50,000,000
Position: Best in the World
Crew: None
Professions: Assassin/Weapon Specialist/Martial Artist/Smith
Location: GL; Drum Island

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SD Earned: 0
Beli: N/A
Rank: N/A
Position: N/A
Crew: TBA
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Already saw the Kamina techniques, so knew it was fine lol. We have had no further/different rulings, nor changes to those style of techniques via patches or anything else since, so they're fine.

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oops, sorry

I was the person who approved that technique on Kamina's prior scoop. About a month after its approval, Rayne and various other mods immediately found fault with it, and since then all other armor bypassers have by default used the r28 benchmark.

As things stand, Kamina's current incarnation no longer has the armor-bypassers, and the most recent armor-bypassers I can think of have all been held to the r28 standard.
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Well, I suppose the best course of action is just to remove them, which has been done, sooo fixed?
Posted Image Name: Ishida Rin
SD Earned: 260
Beli: 8,000,000
Bounty: 50,000,000
Position: Best in the World
Crew: None
Professions: Assassin/Weapon Specialist/Martial Artist/Smith
Location: GL; Drum Island

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Name: N/A
SD Earned: 0
Beli: N/A
Rank: N/A
Position: N/A
Crew: TBA
Professions: N/A
Location: N/A

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Need an Island for your Birthplace. Just put one of the blues islands- maybe the one Luffy and them grew up on since it had non-celestial dragon nobles.

Leather Armor that covers half-arms, hands, feet, half-legs, and chest is 420,000 Beli. Just add the loss to your gains/losses with a link to this post and update your Beli with the new total. :)
Just act on Heart's points and you are good.
Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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Reflagged. Skyped instead of posted- so just post you fixed it next time, but not that big a deal.
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Iron hook cannot branch from Heavy Hook, as branches need to maintain all of the effects of the previous technique.
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Huh. Learned something new today. I assume that its new change is fine.

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