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| ♦ TGIFlash | Jul 9 2015, 12:19 PM Post #46 | ||||||||
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Old Sea Dog
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Djazz sighed as the dust settled form his attack. It would seem as though Commander Xio had also returned from his fight to bare witness to the last few moments of Silvers battle. Not even he knew the outcome of his attack as he waited patiently for the cookie to crumble. Her stammered words was all that it took to know that she was still alive, though only moments later dropping to the ground limp as though her body had given out. Just because she couldn't feel pain didn't mean her body didn't take damage and it would seem as though the woman had reached her limit. Or perhaps the fact that the final attack had defeated her without killing her was enough to break her will to continue to fight. Recalling the words 'thank you' he could only imagine her disappointment when she realized that she was not yet dead. Djazz sighed as he walked to a craggy rock near by and slide the blunt edges of the blade against it to clear it of any blood before sheathing his sword. Meanwhile, Xio had called the invasion order for men to start flooding in and making arrest. It would seem as though they were just in time, as a few individual among those who had been knocked out by the king's haki were starting to stir once again, slowly coming to as though in a groggy, hung over haze somewhere between consciousness and sleep. He turned to Xio, about to answer his question as to what her 'deal' was before seeing the horrendous remains of one of the wolf zoans. His eye twitched at the gruesome scene before looking to Xio. He was so used to clean cuts and while things sometimes got messy they were hardly ever... disgusting to look at. A bit taken aback he exclaimed, "Wow... I hate to see the other guy. That explosive sword of yours... gross." He said before smiling much more light heartedly. Though the commander Xio had been nothing but courteous to him since his arrival, the scene suggested a much darker side that he would much rather not awaken. Turning to the woman as a pair of marines came to fetch her and take her away his eyes narrowed. "She was tough... I really wasn't expecting something this serious at a place this early in the grandline. It's cause for concern..." He said pausing for a moment, "It was a bit disturbing but... I believe she wanted to die. In spite of being broken out of prison she was haunted by her own sins. She thought that death would be escape but wanted to die in an honorable fashion I suppose. Pity I wasn't 'the one' she was looking for..." he said, pausing for a moment. The situation had stirred him a bit, "I imagine if she was fighting to live instead of fighting to die this would have been a much different situation. But alas... you're right. Jobs done." he said. A few moments of silence passed as the ships he had cut slowly sank into th sea, though stopping at the shallow bottoms. He took a second to look around, appreciating the extent of the operation that was doomed to fail. To think all this was led by someone who wanted to fail, who ultimately fought so that she could be defeated. No wonder this Jay L. Breaker guy was considered such a threat. However after the few moments past, something more pressing came to mind... "Say, you wouldn't happen to know if that buffet is still open would you?" he said, as his stomach immediately started growling once again. -Fin- Edited by TGIFlash, Jul 12 2015, 02:50 PM.
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![]() ![]() Phunk D. Buzzkill • MA/Assassin • Free Agent • Bounty: 346,000,000 beli • SD Earned: 918 • Beli: 148,000,000/397,000,000 • Location: Raijin Island | |||||||||
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| Shizuochan | Jul 16 2015, 03:26 PM Post #47 | ||||||||
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a real naga
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Thank you for your patience. Your storyline has been reviewed.
the shichi-subordinate and the marine already puts this in fairly rarified air for an sl, which is nice. Djazz showing his age with the old-school sword shit was pretty funny, and actually does quite a bit for his bad-ass credibility, given what he's capable of. Ginjo's fairly likable, all things considered. spar was neat fight was really neat the brief backstory for shockwave bitch was intriguing, although you were arguably better-served leaving her one-dimensional and just milking her crazy bitch deviancy, if only because of the post constraints. really nice sl tho. oops, I forgot. Ginjo can take five commendations. |
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Okay, fine, I actually have characters.
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