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Wiltrude Famino; [Flagged]
Topic Started: May 21 2015, 09:53 AM (518 Views)
HeartOfLight
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Everything else seems to check out, and the summaries and such seem fine imo.

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Spunky Misunderstood Genius
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Provide the length and style of hair.
The way you organize your traits irks me.
Remove the part about making an enemy unconscious from that discount tech.
I need to see some word similar to "try" or "attempt" in the description of that Gift Basket tech.

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Added a few lines to the hair descriptions and switched up the wording on those two techniques to make them tamer.

Ain't gonna do shit about those traits, tho.
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The reason your trait format irks him is because, functionally, it doesn't serve that great of a purpose. It's far more relevant what traits are bought with General trait points, and what traits are being bought with Prof trait points. For a starter, I'm not going to press; but it is something to consider.

At larger trait numbers, I'll probably make you change it.

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