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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Archebuster Basic Character Information Name: Boscawen (self given, known to the key members of Frostbites) , Vyom Packard (real name, known by the key members of the Frostbites), Mr. Mukhota (known to all Frosbite Pirates) Nickname: Toxic Devil, The masked Frostbite Age: 28 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Marines / Pirates Rank (Commendations): Lieutenant Commander(29) Achievements:
Profession: Primary Profession Smith A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy which allows them to make custom materials or mix new ones together. A smith is proficient in any melee weapon they make, and have no maximum rank limit for martial techniques involving these weapons. Secondary Profession Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Position: Squad leader in Division 217 , Frost Bite Pirates Physical Appearance Height: 7’7 Hair: Vyom Packard initially had nape length, deep purple messy hair, which was slicked back. However, now even though Boscawen has his hair slicked back, he has relatively shorter hair than in the the past, only down to his neck Eyes: He has deep set drooping eyes, and thin eyebrows that appear to be in a perpetual 'sad' position. Vyom also sports several kinds of shades, glasses and goggles for separate occasions. However, his most preferred shades will be his favorite round framed orange glasses. Clothing/Accessories: Vyom wears a red coloured full shirt along with a black tie with golden stripes on it. Both the sleeves of the shirt are rolled upto the elbows. I star shaped bronze medal is pinned up on the left side of the shirt. Along with that, Boscawen also wears a deep grey(just a tone lighter than black and almost black) trouser with similar coloured shoes. Boscawen also wears black leather gloves on both his hands. There are words written on both the gloves just above the fingers and knuckles. On the the right glove, the words 'JUSTICE' and 'SHALL...' are printed in white. While the left glove has words 'AlWAYS' and 'PREVAIL!!' printed on it in the same manner. He also wears the "Justice" (正義 Seigi) Junior Officer's coat by draping it on his shoulders. However as Mr. Mukhota, the most important part of his clothing are the different types of masks he wear, ranging from oni masks to paper bags with holes to gas masks to plague doctor masks. Along with the mask, he also sports various wigs on different occasions. Vyom also wears a black cloak with the hood over the top of his outfit. His outfit is generally stuff that doesn't make him look like a marine. General Appearance: Vyom is a tall man with medium body build. Despite this, one could see his sharp body features such at muscle cuts, broad chest, etc. His features could say that, he had trained from a very young age to gain them. He initially had floral tattoos made on the left side of his body. But, over the in Grandline, those tattoos were covered up with an 'X' shaped cut mark on the left side. Also, Boscawen had burn marks in some parts of his body. After consuming doku doku no mi, Vyom seemed to have turned more pale. Along with that, he now had dark circles around his eyes, which he keeps covered with either his glasses or his mask. The Character Personality: Boscawen was initially a laid back person who often talked with other marines in a low and polite tone irrespective of rank. He also had an habit of mocking his opponents during his fights, which was a part of his game plan. He really cared and looked out for his men during his earlier days. He liked talking with non pirates. However, after, the incident in Sabaody Archipelago, Vyom initially turned a bit cynical and a bit ruthless after the death of his crew mates and was more stern and serious regarding his work. He also became much more thrilled while fighting others However, after being briefly stationed in Naia Island and being acquainted with the Frostbite Pirates secretly, he again had a change in his personality and he reverted back into his old personality of being laid back. But, This laid back personality is just something Vyom did to hide the monster inside him. I fact, he did not change, he just put forward a fake guy guy act just to avoid any suspicion of being involved in fishy business. More than that, he was more blood thirsty and ruthless than ever. And this side only revealed itself only when situation really demands it. Hometown: Swift Breeze(original), Karate Island(early days), Marineford(current) History: Boscawen was born in Swift Breeze, South Blue. But, at the age of 4, he was orphaned in the sea as the ship carrying him and and his family got destroyed by a heavy storm, killing everyone else but him. Vyom then ended up in Karate Island along with the wreckage. Being a resident of Karate Island from the age of 4, he had developed an interest for Martial arts. So, from a very young age of 6, he had began training solo in Sandbag forest to become a martial artist as he didn’t have money to pay for being a member of a dojo. He was a poor kid who didn't have any Beli to spend on his training fees. During his training days, he trained with wild animals to bandits who took shelter in the forest(the bandits were afraid of Karate kid) with one dream in mind to be able to fight for his own interests. By 13, He had well adapted to many numerous martial art forms but had yet to master any. He starting gaining fame at the age of 15 when he defeated many of the young martial artists in a junior tournament organized by the dojos. He defeated everyone until he was eliminated in the Quarter Finals. However, Boscawen after all these years of training to fulfill his dream had lost interest in being a poor person. Karate Island wasn't interesting anymore to him. He couldn’t find anything to do that caught his attention. Even a time came when Boscawen tried out the art of carpentry, but even then he eventually lost interest in it, despite gaining vast amount of knowledge in carpentry. Then, he decided to join the Marines at the age of 16. And in the span of 4 years, he rose up solely on the basis of his own merit and outstanding performance. He fulfilled assignments of taking out Thieves, bandits, etc very seriously so that he could find his lost interest in life. It appeared he started gaining his lost interest, but by now, he also started losing interest in being a non-commission officer. Vyoms turning point in his life was during his days as a Lt. Juniour grade. He had a crew with him which was almost like Family to him.But they were killed off in a pirate ambush because of lack of reinforcements as all the marines on the nearest oupost, Sabaody Archipelago Marine base were forcefully assigned to re capture a Celestial Dragon's dog which had escaped. This brought about changes in Boscawen for good. Eventually, his hate for Celestial Dragons grew at a geometric rate. However, in the Grandline, Vyom actually started to unfold his potential and destiny as he ended up consuming doku doku no mi and also secretly joining the Frostbite Pirates as they all had a common interest now and a common feeling. Boscawen trailed Frostbites and eventually met up with the Shichibukai, Izuru Kazehara and then found common interests. All of them despised the Celestial Dragons and Vyom finally found something in the Frostbites that he almost found among his first crew, i.e. A family. While going up in ranks, Boscawen had learned an important skill of forging and being able to wield melee weapons very efficiently. Combat: Vyom Packard was initially a martial artist and with his days on Karate Island, he came up with his own style of combat, The Salvage Jujitsu. As the name suggests, this martial art style came into existence when he clubbed together some series from various moves of martial art styles he had seen during his life on Karate Island and then fusing it into one particular style. However, the martial art style of his gives a lot of stress on kick boxing, hence his moves are mostly punches and kicks. It also incorporates palm thrusts and grappling.(The mastery is only applied to Punches, kicks and palm strikes) Along with this Boscawen has developed a new skill in forging swords and armour. And because of that, Boscawen also has proficiency over every melee weapon he creates for himself. But his preference is generally a sword. So he can work his way quite nicely while using swords which he made himself. Weaponry:
Items: Lion Wrestling Costume Bag containing 400 lead bullets A pair of knuckle dusters Haki Shockwaves Speak Keychain Fighting Kicks Squeaky Duck Beli: 26,150,000 ![]() SD Earned: 178 Stat Points: 200 SD Remaining: 0 Stats: •Used for Stats: 200 •Used for Fortune: 0 oStrength: 60(50+10) oSpeed: 50 oStamina: 60(50+10) oAccuracy: 50 oFortune: 50 Traits: 6 General, 3 Professional Specific Devil Fruit (6 General Traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited to Paramecia and Zoan, and further limited based on moderator discretion. Bear Stamina (1 Professional Trait) - This character's stamina is boosted by 20%. Mighty Strength (1 Professional Trait) - This character's strength is boosted by 20%. Salvage Jujitsu Mastery (1 Professional Trait) - The character has attained mastery in one specific weapon or form of attack that they have Martial Proficiency (can make techniques greater than rank 14) with. All techniques using this weapon or form of attack are always treated as being four ranks higher for purposes of calculating their technique rank benchmark, though their actual rank is not changed. This benefit ceases to apply for techniques higher than rank 28.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 125 Used Regular Technique Points: 116 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
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| ShadowBlade | May 24 2015, 01:42 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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* I'll save your beli standardization for when it isn't 3am. * Lets say 3M for the revolver * Mera and Pika should really be the only logia that get color change. I'm not well versed on steam but I'm not sure it changes color much. * Your style should probably specify kicks, its a bit vague saying you get 'all kicking' * Gatling bullet speed on your Advanced Knuckle Stakes should probably be upwards of rank 24-26 imo. * Dense steam should come from haki for your r 14 version of DF * Punk step should be more like R 14 * Eh there's the word tremor in your second to last technique for Steam, what is that about? I'm just careful with wording here. (For Mine Geyser) * Rest seems fine. |
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| Archebuster | May 24 2015, 08:13 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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* Okay. will leave it to you. Cuz everytime I do this beli standardization, I miss out one thing or the other. * Done. Paid for it. * There isn't anything I could add more along with flight and levitation at rank 8 for my df. Would it help if I would say, I could change my colour from white to any other colour from 50 shades of grey? *Got it. My mastery actually covers kick boxing and palm strikes. Grappling is just something I'd do if I get a chance. And last time I had mastery for kick boxing and elbow bashes. *It isn't bullet speed. It's the generic blurry speed which is slower than bullet speed. *Then help me with what I should put for rank 14 of my df. And for the record I copy pasted Leander's rank 14 for Moku and modified it to fit steam. It's dense alright. But not dense enough to be tangible. * Punk Step 1 allows me to move at the speed my current stats would allow me do. Punk Step 2 is Blurry speed. I didn't get what you were trying to say here. * Okay, about tremors. Thats basically flavour to my tech. It's a very mild shake that happens as the steam moves through the ground. Nothing damaging and worth worrying. * Good to know Edited by Archebuster, May 24 2015, 08:23 AM.
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| Hideo | May 25 2015, 01:17 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I started reviewing the app and making comments and whatnot but then I realized you're still in the Blues on this character. You need to be in the Grand Line to claim T1 or T2 fruits. So you can either drop the fruit and save the techs and such for later in a Char/Misc topic or I can move this to the WIP apps. Also if you're going to do a revision scoop you need to post in the scoop thread (preferrably once you can actually get the fruit if you still plan on having your fruit techs approved here) Lastly please provide a link to the previous character app in the gains and losses. You did provide the previous threads which is good, but the app as well please. Edited by Hideo, May 25 2015, 01:17 PM.
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| Archebuster | May 26 2015, 02:37 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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* I wanted to basically revision scoop my char out of Blues and put him in gl. I will be using this char in the gl. And Hids am already engaged in an sl in the Blues(and the last Blues sl) with the Mark 2 version of Boscawen. No point I'd even be able to use this there. specially with different proffs and strengths. That will basically disrupt the current flow of the sl. And since I was told t1 and t2 fruits are paradise stuff so... I am scooping myself to the gl and will use it in my next sl which will be anywhere out of the Blues. Hope this explains a bit. * Uh I guess I should have asked to move this app to revision scoop from the Incomplete registration. Sorry about that. * I included the previous app links. Edited by Archebuster, May 26 2015, 02:53 AM.
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| ♦ Franky | Jun 12 2015, 12:25 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Archebuster | Jun 13 2015, 12:49 AM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Spunky Misunderstood Genius | Jun 13 2015, 08:31 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I'm here for your techs. Doku takers never learn. Remove all the rank nonsense in Doku's base technique description. Remove "transparent", where is the crowd tier? Man, I'm doing one hell of a half ass job, even just for your Doku techs. I kinda wanna say that you cannot stack doku poison of one tech with another doku poison of another tech as it seems that you are implying with Nerve whatever, but I should make sure. Uh uh uh, probably going to need a rank increase on doberman not sure you're like app number 1000 in the last hour, brain is shot. Take out "command" You know what, I'm going to go eat breakfast. This isn't even as fun as I thought it would be. |
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| Archebuster | Jun 13 2015, 10:26 AM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Done. Done. But, as much as I heard, all doku debuffs follow the crowd tier of 1, irrespective of the number of targets it aims at. So, I find it pointless mentioning the crowd tier. Made the tech a bit more clear and legit Removed the 'command' word. Tell me what else is wrong, if there is any I know the ways of the Staff to an extent to see what you guys will be throwing at the newest doku user. |
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| Spunky Misunderstood Genius | Jun 16 2015, 06:45 AM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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If a staff told you doku debuffs follow the crowd tier of 1 please supply his/her name. Whether you do or not, very few know what is okay and what is not okay when it comes to doku techs. Doku debuffs follows normal crowd tier rules. Mention the crowd tier. Doberman should be at least r28. And it wont be staying. It takes the shape of a dog, jumps/dash, attacks, whether it succeeded or not it disappears. No dissolving organic targets. If you're mixing Nerve with your damage poison then your opponent needs to be able to able to distinguish so. Hence clear or it's variant words aren't clam. |
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| Archebuster | Jun 16 2015, 07:45 AM Post #11 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I asked Franky and he said it follows the crowd tier of 1. And maybe Drift(I forgot who the second orange was) said that doku is 6 traits cuz of this special feature only. But now I asked Rayne and he said the same thing you said. You win this round. Done. Added a smell to the poison .Done. Edited by Archebuster, Jun 18 2015, 10:12 AM.
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| ♦ Franky | Jun 24 2015, 03:30 PM Post #12 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/single/?p=1652860&t=5259936 When did Doku's debuff ruling change? (also Drift wasn't involved in that conversation) As I understand it, all your SLs so far were in the blues, so beli standardization is easier: Starting beli: 500,000 Blues Beli: 153*250,000 = 38,250,000 GL beli: 0 Event beli: 9,600,000 Total: 48,350,000 ![]() Pricing: Imperial Han: 2,500,000 ![]() Justice Server: 4,200,000 ![]() You also spent 38 million on a ship & its den den. Beli: 3,650,000
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| Archebuster | Jun 25 2015, 12:20 AM Post #13 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Done with the beli edits. Just gonna hope this issue with Doku is solved pretty quick. |
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| Spunky Misunderstood Genius | Jun 25 2015, 11:56 PM Post #14 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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There is no Doku issue, just members and staff who quote things that happen years past under old laws with old rulings. It's why I started off by saying, "Doku takers never learn." We had three different doku takers in the past six months, all of which went through getting techs approved and we as staff have weighed in on it, but no one quotes those. No one reference those topics, just the broken zain & <2014 stuff. Staff job isn't to royally screw our members over at approval (or ever), its to make sure nothing broken gets through so to provide a fair environment for all. Approval process would be so much easier if everyone wasn't paranoid. Anyways, its so late at night...um. As long as you know that with a crowd tier of one you can only effect one person at any given time with said poison debuff technique. Then, uh...im okay with your techs. Oh and since you have a crowd tier of one and will only be able to effect one person at any given time, duration is rank/2 Confession Time! I derped: If you're mixing Nerve with your damage poison then your opponent needs to be able to able to distinguish so. Hence clear or it's variant words aren't clam. ^ That's not really true. It's what I get for checking 15+ apps consecutively. |
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| Archebuster | Jun 27 2015, 05:58 AM Post #15 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Edited the duration. Also, I believe it would be better if there is a section that states rulings and notes on a few dfs, just like we have a few rulings to clarify any confusions related to materials. |
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