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Spark in the Dark!; Running in the 250's[Flagged]
Topic Started: May 10 2015, 04:57 PM (280 Views)
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Character: Venka Sparks

Request: New technique approval please.

Changes:

Regular Technique Points: 260 (195 + 65)
Used Regular Technique Points: 260
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0
Techniques marked with ╬ are (Grand)Mastery Techniques.

Monado Arts
Monado Art: Jester (4)
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: N/A
Description: Using Life Return, Venka is able to shape her hair in whatever hairstyle is pleasing aesthetically at the moment. She can alter it's length, volume, make braids and even fancy decoration folds and avoid split ends and whatnot suits a good flavour for the situation.
Monado Art: Chariot (16)
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: N/A
Description: Using Life Return, Venka creates 2 additional arms from her hair that act quite like her own.
Monado Art: Grand Chariot (32)
[Branched off "Monado Art: Chariot"]
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: N/A
Description: Using Life Return, Venka creates either 2 rather big additional arms from her hair or 4 more regular sized ones that act quite like her own.
Monado Art: Hanged Man (14)
Type: Support
Range: N/A
Stats: N/A
Description: A Life Return rebreathing technique, Venka is able to manage her oxygen and blood flow better than your regular human. Vertigo and G-forces have little effect on her and she can hold her breath way beyond a normal human's limits due to a better circulation.

Really in the dark on how a lot of this LR stuff works. But hey, here we go. Also wanna review some other general combat stuff but that's for a different topic. Just be prepared...
Edited by GlasgowSmiley, Jun 23 2015, 01:36 PM.
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Charlot can't branch from jester, it needs to be it's own standalone for 16 tp.

Hanged man - You can shape hair into a scythe but hair is just hair, it's not going to cut anything, it'd be blunt. Also the way the tech is written it's hard to tell wether she's wielding it as a weapon or wether she attacks freely with her firsts and attacks with that via magic hair control. If it's the latter, much like charlot it can't be branched into.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Re-done techniques.

Most of the techs changed entirely in function but kept names I used before so hanged man and such is an entirely different tech now for future reference purposes.

Also general question, I already asked Rayne and he said I needed a tech for flavour hairstyling like I have in Jester but just gonna ask here if I really do need that tech. Sure it's 4 tp but it's 4 tp I could use elsewhere...
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You could freeform it given time. Rank 4 would let you just do it quicker, more acccurately, and all around better.
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Uhm, can I finally get a review on my techs here? It's been almost a month...
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star would be 22
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Removed Star for now. Can't afford that tp even if I fiddled around.
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Honestly you can branch Chariot from Jester if you want. My LR limbs and restyling tech are one in the same and I'm pretty sure there are others. It stands to reason that if you can shape your hair into hands and control them that you can pretty easily make it straighter, curly, messy, or whatever.

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Well Rayne said in his first post it didn't and when I asked Tengu he backed that. If it actually does branch, that'd be nice and I might be able to afford another tech but I have 2 mods telling me it doesn't while one says it does so???

I'll be revision scooping her in the coming months or so anyway so will deal with that issue later, for now I just want to use Chariot in my sl's.
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Ok so hanged man needs to be rank 20

Jester should be rank 14

Chariot rank 20





















Lol i just fuckin with ya. The branching thing is less a logic issue and more an investment one just for future, its that hair limb techs require you to invest the full cost, not part of it in semi disguise techs and then the rest in limbs etc

Anyways guess who just got approved after who even knows how many months

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Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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