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| Nina Irving | May 8 2015, 10:41 AM Post #16 |
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@Bright: Thread is up ^_^ If the post/setting is not okay, just tell me and I'll edit ) |
| Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue | |
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| ♥ Bright | May 8 2015, 01:38 PM Post #17 |
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Looks good to me, I'll try get a post out for you tomorrow! |
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| Nina Irving | May 9 2015, 12:18 AM Post #18 |
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Don't hurry ) |
| Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue | |
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| ♥ Bright | May 9 2015, 04:00 PM Post #19 |
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Posted! Wasn't sure which bit of Osula you were setting it in, so I assumed Old Osula City, if that's okay. |
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| Nina Irving | May 10 2015, 03:34 PM Post #20 |
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That was quite fun/enjoyable to read! Thank you ^_^ I've started working on the reply.
Edited by Nina Irving, May 10 2015, 03:34 PM.
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| Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue | |
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| Clarity | May 10 2015, 05:07 PM Post #21 |
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| Nina Irving | May 11 2015, 04:06 AM Post #22 |
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Great! ) I'm generally the type to reply to posts in order. Although, I assume, my 'official' thread with Nina will take priority. Also, if I am ever unclear in my posts, please feel free to point that out. Clarity is one thing that I'm struggling with when it comes to writing. Edit: I just realized what I posted, and I swear the pun was completely unintentional ^^'''''''''''''' Edited by Nina Irving, May 11 2015, 04:06 AM.
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| Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue | |
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| ♥ Bright | May 20 2015, 03:16 PM Post #23 |
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Posted Nina! Hope you don't mind me taking a few days between posts; I did intend it as a more relaxed thread. Also, if we're talking about clarity (in writing, not the person XD) I will say that you sometimes use pronouns a little too often. Its not a big thing, but in our thread at least you use "he" a lot without actually making clear who "he" is, and it can sometimes be a little confusing which of the several "he's" in the scene are actually talking/doing. Its really not that big an issue, but figured I'd mention since you asked :) |
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| Nina Irving | May 20 2015, 11:03 PM Post #24 |
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That's incredibly helpful! Thank you very much. That's exactly the sort of thing I meant. Feel free to take all the time you need - a relaxed thread is, for me, the best thread. Also...your post...is very delicious. ^_^ |
| Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue | |
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| Nina Irving | May 25 2015, 05:48 AM Post #25 |
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I'm sorry, everyone. My school project is killing me. There's no way I can write for the next two weeks or so. |
| Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue | |
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