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For the heck of it
Topic Started: May 2 2015, 01:57 AM (398 Views)
Nina Irving
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@Bright: Thread is up ^_^ If the post/setting is not okay, just tell me and I'll edit )
Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue
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Looks good to me, I'll try get a post out for you tomorrow!
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Don't hurry )
Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue
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Posted! Wasn't sure which bit of Osula you were setting it in, so I assumed Old Osula City, if that's okay.
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Nina Irving
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That was quite fun/enjoyable to read! Thank you ^_^ I've started working on the reply.
Edited by Nina Irving, May 10 2015, 03:34 PM.
Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue
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Nina Irving
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Great! ) I'm generally the type to reply to posts in order. Although, I assume, my 'official' thread with Nina will take priority.

Also, if I am ever unclear in my posts, please feel free to point that out. Clarity is one thing that I'm struggling with when it comes to writing.
Edit: I just realized what I posted, and I swear the pun was completely unintentional ^^''''''''''''''
Edited by Nina Irving, May 11 2015, 04:06 AM.
Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue
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Posted Nina! Hope you don't mind me taking a few days between posts; I did intend it as a more relaxed thread.

Also, if we're talking about clarity (in writing, not the person XD) I will say that you sometimes use pronouns a little too often. Its not a big thing, but in our thread at least you use "he" a lot without actually making clear who "he" is, and it can sometimes be a little confusing which of the several "he's" in the scene are actually talking/doing. Its really not that big an issue, but figured I'd mention since you asked :)
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Nina Irving
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That's incredibly helpful! Thank you very much. That's exactly the sort of thing I meant.

Feel free to take all the time you need - a relaxed thread is, for me, the best thread.

Also...your post...is very delicious. ^_^
Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue
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I'm sorry, everyone. My school project is killing me. There's no way I can write for the next two weeks or so.
Nina Irving • Crew Position: None yet • Assassin/Doctor • Pirate Crew: None yet • Bounty: 50,000 • SD Earned: 8 • Beli: 2,080,000 • Location: Dawn Island, East Blue
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