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Topic Started: Apr 14 2015, 11:05 AM (146 Views)
Kaji.Dragon.Jones
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Character: Baxcel Reed
Request: New techniques up for approval
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Tyrant Tackle (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Medium
Stats: N/A
Description: Baxcel rotates his torso to throw his shoulder forward and kicks off the ground with his front leg, performing a dash tackle at full speed capable of carrying him forward. If Baxcel hits an opponent, his momentum is transferred and they are knocked. If Baxcel is wearing his "Sparkles the cat" item, this technique triggers it on impact, and becomes piercing due to the horns on the item.

Dig (14)
Type: Support
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Baxcel burrows through the ground, or through any non-material tier solid substance/obstacle. He is capable of moving through the ground as quickly as he could on foot.

Manticore Blood: Poison Tail (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Baxcel secretes venom from barbs at the end of his spine (end of his tail in zoan forms) that is transferred via contact with an open wound or exposed flesh. This toxin slowly destroys living tissue, but any venom inside of the body rather than on it's surface will lose it's potency over time. Otherwise the effects slowly persist until wiped off.

Flame Burst (14)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Stats: N/A
Description: Baxcel exhales a conical wave of bright orange flames that cover a moderately sized area, sweeping over anything caught in it's range with burning heat.

Edited by Kaji.Dragon.Jones, Apr 27 2015, 07:56 AM.
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Tyrant tackle is fine as a dash tackle with knock back, you can't however have the ratio to determine the distance.

Poison tail - you need to remove the part that determines the damage over time. It would effectively work like a corrosive acid, you spray it on them it burns them as long as it remains.

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Just a nitpick, Tyrant Tackle shouldn't long distance in the description, since it's a short-mid range tech. Won't hold back a flag, but fix that.

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