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Spunky Misunderstood Genius
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Character: "ε†₯ηŽ‹" Hades | Zacharias
Request: Tech approvals. Tech name & Description rewording approval. Please and thank you.
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Hao Han Kami.
(Rank 30)
Type: Support.
Range: Long.
Stats: -24 Acc (5 Targets Max.)
Zack releases his Haoshoku Haki continuously to apply an accuracy debuff, to those select few able to avoid being knocked out outright with a quick burst of Haoshoku Haki, for up to 15 post.
[Initial AE Cost: 72]


Hao Agameru.
(Rank 30)
Type: Support.
Range: Long.
Stats: -24 Str (5 Targets Max.)
Zack releases his Haoshoku Haki continuously to apply strength debuff, to those select few able to avoid being knocked out outright with a quick burst of Haoshoku Haki, for up to 15 post.
[Initial AE Cost: 72]


Buso Hogo.
(Rank 20)
Type: Support.
Range: Self.
Stats: -
Zack utilizes his Busoshoku Haki to create a force similar to an invisible man size bulwark in front of himself to buffer against attacks that would otherwise cause him great harm. A significant force of 40 dmg or more can overcome this defense.
[Initial AE Cost: 42; Persisting AE Cost: 21]


Old Tech Names. -> New Tech Names.
Vulcan. -> Buso Koka.
Primitive. -> Kenbun Kan.
Sixth Sense. -> Kenbun Okoku.

Old Tech Description
Zack can use this technique to sense the life force in a given area with himself at the epicenter or focus this technique to one being to get a vague sense of their strength.

New Tech Description
Zack utilizes his Kenbunshoku Haki to sense the auras in a given area with himself at the epicenter.

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King's haki isn't a toggle debuff as much as i'd like for it to be. So unfortunately that little part about "as long as he wants to pay ae" will have to go and it'll function like it states in the rules.
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Oh gawd, why can I nerf myself for the sake of balance. Edited. Those names may change again but this is ready.
Edited by Spunky Misunderstood Genius, Apr 6 2015, 04:09 AM.

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Can either make the last tech a sensory mapping tech that senses the positions of those around or a tech that focuses on an individual and checks their strength but it shouldn't be doubling up at such a low rank.
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Done.

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Haki sense needs range dropped to close, assuming that's done

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Izuru & Yogi β€’ Crew Position: Captain β€’ Weapon Specialist β€’ Frostbite Pirates β€’ Bounty: 350,000,000 β€’ SD Earned: 1192 β€’ Beli: 345,100,000 β€’ Location: Florian Triangle β€’ Theme:

Kazuki β€’ Crew Position:N/A β€’ Assassin β€’ N/A β€’ Commendations: 88 β€’ SD Earned: 356 β€’ Beli: 165,500,000 β€’ Location: Little Garden

Xavros β€’ Crew Position:Fool β€’ Entertainer β€’ Theme tune β€’ Bounty: 103,000,000 β€’ SD Earned: 406 β€’ Beli: 191,000,000 β€’ Location: Machine Island

Anthrax β€’ Crew Position:N/A β€’ Inventor β€’ N/A β€’ Bounty: 0 β€’ SD Earned: 186 β€’ Beli: 74,000,000 β€’ Location:Gesso Island

Kuma β€’ Crew Position:N/A β€’ Smith β€’ N/A β€’ Threat: 30 β€’ SD Earned: 181 β€’ Beli: 16,900,000 β€’ Location:Custom Island
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